Author Topic: The Padawan Chronicles [Obi-Wan, JA gang; series of one-shots; humor] - update 7/29!
p_stotts 
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Date Posted: 7/16 9:00am Subject: RE: The Padawan Chronicles (formerly A Tale of Two Padawans) Obi, JA gang; humor - update 7/7
Wow, what a nice set of stories to stumble across. Your humor adds just the right touch too! Great job! applause I love how you portray the initiates pov and how even the simplest challenges can seem so overwhelming to a child. sick I think, as adults, we sometimes forget that, as Master Fitz obviously did in that last vignette. shock I can't wait to read more. If you have a p.m. list, add me to it. I really enjoy your writing style. It puts me right in the midst of the story.

 

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p_stotts 
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Date Posted: 7/16 9:20am Subject: RE: The Padawan Chronicles (formerly A Tale of Two Padawans) Obi, JA gang; humor - update 7/7
I thought I'd read them all, then I found this little jewel. What fun! laugh I guess saving Yoda from making a speech and making his master laugh just might make his punishment a bit less severe. Lovely vignette! applause Don't be a stranger in posting more. These are great.

 

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Nienna_Narmolanya 
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Date Posted: 7/19 3:43pm Subject: RE: The Padawan Chronicles (formerly A Tale of Two Padawans) Obi, JA gang; humor - update 7/7
I fell behind...again silly but here are the replies finally.

dianethx - Garen and Bant always seemed like such opposites to me in the JA books, but they were somehow still friends and I've always wondered how that actually worked out. It's a *very* fun relationship to play with. wink What an entrance. It takes a "special" gift to be that dramatic. tongue I'm glad you enjoyed the story and thanks for reading!

earlybird-obi-wan - duct-crawling, yes, Obi-Wan and ductcrawling and Garen getting him in trouble. That's Obi-Wan. lol! I feel sorry for Obi-Wan now. tongue Thanks for reading!

Gkilkenny - Thank you! grin

jedidas3 - Thank you! I'm having way too much fun writing them. silly Thanks for reading!

Bastet - Garen is really growing on me. Between hair-brained ideas, he has his moments. tongue Glad you liked the story and thanks for reading!

JediLuminaraUnduli - Glad you enjoyed Obi's little spill (though that's kind of a morbid thing to say if you think about it...) wink Thanks for reading! And you've been added to the PM list. happy

p_stotts - Thanks for the kind words! blush I love how you portray the initiates pov and how even the simplest challenges can seem so overwhelming to a child. Having just graduated from high school, I'm not too far removed from those days myself and I drew on my *very* strong fear of talking in front of class for that story. It's something I still haven't gotten over. Thanks for reading! I added you to the PM list. happy


I haven't started writing the next installment yet, but it will probably be up in the next week or so depending on how much time I have. happy

 

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Nienna_Narmolanya 
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Date Posted: 7/29 6:27pm Subject: RE: The Padawan Chronicles (formerly A Tale of Two Padawans) Obi, JA gang; humor - update 7/7
The next installment, as promised. grin


Even while serving punishment, Obi-Wan and his friends manage to find adventure. A sequel of sorts to “Lifeday.”


Ductcrawlers

“This has to be the most disgusting and demented punishment ever thought up in the entire history of the Jedi Order.”

Gently lowering his bucket of cleaning solution to the floor to ease the ache in his arm, Obi-Wan cracked a wry grin at Garen’s none-too-thrilled assessment of their situation.

Bant, her arms wrapped around a bulging canvas bag that practically dwarfed her petite frame, shuffled up beside him and dropped the bag with a relieved sigh. A few rags and sponges spilled over the bag’s open top, but Bant seemed too winded to notice.

“That’s…” She paused to catch her breath. “That’s because our masters worked together to come up with it.”

“And you know what they say about Jedi Masters putting their heads together,” Obi-Wan added, trying to lighten the discouraged mood that had settled over his friends.

Garen didn’t seem to hear; Bant gave him a wan smile, then turned back to the gaping square hole in the wall in front of them.

Following her anxious gaze, his own tenuous smile fled. The light from the training salle penetrated only half a meter into the shaft at best. Total darkness stretched beyond.

Obi-Wan suddenly remembered how much he disliked dark, cramped spaces, and his fingers subconsciously brushed the short narrow tube that hung from his belt next to his lightsaber.

Their masters had provided each of them with a luma to adhere to the wall of the shaft while they worked, but despite this one show of mercy, he found he had to agree with Garen. Granted, Qui-Gon hadn’t been too thrilled with the way his padawan’s robe had gone from brown to dusty gray overnight…or, for that matter, his rousing entrance at Yoda’s lifeday party…but this was a little extreme.

Obi-Wan’s fingers still felt numb from the weight of the bucket he’d had to carry and as he shook them out, he watched Garen slowly approach the darkened opening and peer inside. The grate cover, already removed by one of the Temple maintenance staff, leaned against the wall to the left side.

“You know,” Garen said suddenly, his voice thoughtful, “I suspect this was all my master’s idea.”

“Why do you say that?” Bant asked.

“She’s been getting much more creative lately.”

“Maybe because you’ve used up all her ideas,” Obi-Wan remarked innocently.

Garen shot him a disparaging look over his shoulder, and Obi-Wan quickly covered his laughter with a few well-timed coughs.

“So…” The dark-haired boy turned from the opening to face his friends. “…how do we go about doing this exactly?”

“Simple,” Bant replied with feigned cheer, “we crawl in, get our sponges wet, and start scrubbing.”

Garen shot her a pained look. “Very funny. Do you remember how much grime there is in these ducts?” He swept a rubber-gloved hand across the sill and as dust billowed into the air his eyes met Obi-Wan’s.

“When did we determine they cleaned these things last? Didn’t you say it was probably before Master Yoda’s time? This is ridiculous!” he cried, throwing his hands up in the air. A few clots of dust flaked from his gloves at the rapid movement. “How can they possibly expect us to clean all of the air ducts on the training level? It’s impossible! It’ll take weeks!”

The sputters that followed this declaration seemed to indicate that his frustration had reached a level too deep for words, and he started pacing in a circle around a compact dirtstat cleaner that sat in the middle of the floor.

Recognizing that Garen just needed a few minutes to vent, Obi-Wan kept silent and began taking mental inventory of the supplies they’d brought.

Dirtstat cleaner, synth-rubber gloves, metal scrappers, Bant’s sack of rags and sponges…

Movement near the bag caught his eye and Obi-Wan looked up, groaning inwardly.

Bant’s eyes, normally bright and friendly, had narrowed slightly as she took a step toward Garen’s pacing figure, and Obi-Wan watched her uncharacteristic reaction with worried eyes. He’d never known anyone who could bait the normally calm, sweet-natured girl’s temper like Garen Muln in a temper.

“I agree, Garen. It is ridiculous,” she replied, keeping her tone aggravatingly civil, “but I think I remember it being your idea to crash Master Yoda’s lifeday party.”

Obi-Wan chewed on his lip in resignation to the inevitable, knowing that Bant’s impenetrable calm would only irritate Garen further, and Garen confirmed his prediction by rounding on the Mon Calamari girl with arms crossed defiantly.

Bant admirably stood her ground, but had to lean back to meet the taller boy’s stony gaze.

“How was I supposed to know it was Yoda’s lifeday?” Garen shot back. “He doesn’t exactly advertise it! You’re only upset because getting caught jeopardizes your squeaky-clean image. Need I remind you, it was your idea to use the air ducts?”

The retort caught Bant off guard, but she recovered quickly and drew in a breath as if to argue back.

Obi-Wan sighed heavily. The situation didn’t seem likely to improve on its own anytime soon and judging by how the patterns of sunlight on the floor waned, the morning was already half gone.

Stepping forward, he placed his body between his friends as a physical barrier.

“Garen, Bant,” he said, looking at both of them in turn, “let’s just do this and get it over with, all right? I don’t want to go inside those filthy, claustrophobic tunnels again either, but arguing about who got us into this mess isn’t going to get us out of it.”

Garen puffed out a hot breath and turned away, but Bant held Obi-Wan’s gaze. She took a deep cleansing breath and her frown softened, giving way to a somewhat flustered expression.

“You’re right,” she whispered, her salmon cheeks blushing magenta as she dropped her eyes. “And I’m sorry, Obi. We shouldn’t fight like that. I know it hurts you.”

Caught off guard as usual by her perceptiveness, Obi-Wan failed to come up with a sufficient reply before Garen re-joined them, the dirtstat tube slung over his shoulder.

The boy’s lips were set in a thin line, clear indication that he still wasn’t pleased with their punishment, but a light punch to Obi-Wan’s shoulder let him know that the worst of Garen’s temper had run its course.

“Let’s do this, shall we?” Garen said then, allowing the faintest hint of a smile to soften his features. Arranging the dirtstat tube into a more secure position around his body, he lifted the machine with one hand and with the other gripped the suction nozzle like the hilt of a lightsaber, holding it out in front of him as he walked toward the shaft. He used one leg to leverage his body up onto the sill, then paused and looked back, placing a hand on his chest.

“In case I don’t come out alive, let it be known that it was your idea to use the air ducts, Bant. I don’t think my master believed me.” He gazed off into space, as if replaying the instance in his mind. “In fact, she sort of laughed at the idea.”

As Garen disappeared into the shaft, Bant threw Obi-Wan a bemused look. “I think my image is safe,” she murmured as she loaded her tunic pockets with sponges, rags, and metal scrapers for use on tough residue.

“Care to share your secret?” Obi-Wan asked, and he almost wished she would as he checked for his luma once more, slipped on a pair of gloves, and stooped to collect a few “weapons” of his own. I guess the cleaning solution is going to be my job, he thought with a resigned sigh as he reached for the heavy bucket.

“Here, let me help you with that.” Bant’s hand slipped in next to his on the handle.

Obi-Wan gave her a grateful smile and together they lifted the bucket into the shaft.

“You know,” Bant said, her expression suddenly thoughtful as she pulled herself up onto the ledge, “if I really cared about my image, I’d stop going along on bantha-brained adventures with the two of you.”

Cracking a smile, she scurried down the shaft before Obi-Wan could reply.

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“Does anyone know what time it is?” Garen called from around a bend in the air duct. “My stomach’s telling me it’s almost time for lunch.”

“I thought that was Reeft’s job,” Obi-Wan called back, garnering a half-hearted laugh from his friend who was just as familiar as he was with Reeft’s food obsession.

Settling back against the shaft wall, he winced as every muscle in his neck protested the change of position. Maybe a break wouldn’t be such a bad idea after all. After hours of scraping, scrubbing, and wiping, his arms felt more like liquefied rubber than flesh or bone, yet a simple glance down the shaft revealed that the three padawans had barely made a dent in the filth coating the metal surfaces. The only thing that kept the job from becoming a living hell was the steady stream of cool air piping through the ducts.

Qui-Gon will never hear the end of this, he vowed silently.

The steady whirring of the dirtstat ceased and Bant crawled out of a shaft that branched off to Obi-Wan’s right. By the glow from his luma, he spied a large ball of dust balanced on top of her head.

“Let’s finish this shaft, then we’ll take a break and eat lunch,” she suggested.

“If I don’t perish first,” came Garen’s retort from around the bend, but Obi-Wan could tell by the sound of renewed scrubbing that he agreed.

Rolling his neck as best as he could in the cramped space, Obi-Wan sighed, dunked his rag in the bucket of solution, and resumed wiping down the walls. Bant had already vacuumed this section, ridding it of the worst of the dust, but it was his job to clean up the residue that wouldn’t come off so easily. He tried not to look very closely at what he was wiping away, already having come across dozens of dead and decaying insects and other things less identifiable.

“Cleaning is for droids,” he muttered as he battled a particularly sticky insect web.

“Not when the masters have able-bodied labor like us,” Garen called back, obviously having overheard. A few minutes later he groaned in disgust.

“What is it?”

“I just stuck my hand in something… Ugh, and it’s slimy!” Muffled rubbing sounds ensued. “You know, I’m really glad our masters let us have these gloves.”

“Me too,” Obi-Wan replied. “Now if only they’d given us full body suits…”

“Obi!” It was Bant’s voice, echoing from far down the branching shaft. “Come here a second. I’ve found something…strange.”

Grateful for any excuse to stop scrubbing, Obi-Wan tossed his rag aside, grabbed his luma from where he’d stuck it to the ceiling, and set off down the shaft. Reverberating thumps from behind let him know that Garen was following.

He used the glow from Bant’s luma as his guide and reached her position within a few minutes. She’d pushed the dirtstat to the side and as he drew up behind her, she plucked her luma from the ceiling and held it close to the floor.

“Look at that,” she breathed. “What do you think could have made them?”

As he added his own light to Bant’s, Obi-Wan sucked in his breath. Small prints like those of an animal ran in a straight line down the shaft and out of the ring of light.

“I don’t know, but they’re much too big to have been made by any kind of insect I know of.”

“A pet then.” Garen had come up behind them. “What about your master’s latest rescued lifeform, Obi? The one from the waste receptacle outside Astri’s Diner. I remember you telling me it escaped. It could have gotten into the air ducts somehow.”

“No, I don’t think so,” he replied with a frown and a shake of his head. “It was too small to have climbed up into the shafts, and how would it have gotten the grate off?”

Neither of his friends answered. Bant leaned forward to study the tracks more closely.

“Besides, these tracks seem very recent,” he added. “See how the airflow hasn’t blown any dust over them yet? They’re too recent. We found Fiddlesticks weeks ago.”

Fiddlesticks?” Garen’s face turned an odd shade of purple-red as he bit back laughter. “Where did you find him?”

“Master Windu found him actually…in his apartment.”

“What was he doing there?”

“Chewing on his hairbrush.”

Garen made a strange choking sound. “Master Windu has a hairbrush?!”

“Boys,” Bant said seriously, interrupting their laughter. “These tracks couldn’t have come from Fiddlesticks. He’s a canine.”

She paused to let realization sink in and sighed when the boys exchanged blank looks.

“Canines have paws. These prints look more like…claw marks.”

“Claw marks!” Garen exclaimed.

Obi-Wan sat back heavily, almost knocking Garen over in the process. Very few Jedi kept pets besides his master and of all of the animals he’d seen around the Temple, none of them had claws.

Could there be some kind of creature no one knew about actually living in the air ducts? Considering that no one had been inside them to clean for many years, it was a distinct possibility, and the thought sent a shiver down Obi-Wan’s spine.

“Umm, guys?” Garen’s voice sounded uncharacteristically shaky and Obi-Wan guessed he’d come to the same theory. “Maybe we should go get that lunch sooner rather than later.”

Bant nodded absently, still gazing down at the prints. “That might be a good—”

“Wait!” Obi-Wan hissed suddenly, freezing both of his friends in place. “I thought I heard something.”

Utter silence fell over the duct, reminding Obi-Wan of the eerie calm that usually preceded a storm.

He quickly tried to shake that particular thought.

Seconds passed, but the padawans heard nothing but the constant hum of cool air blowing past and the sound of their own breathing.

Obi-Wan glanced at his friends, noting their confused expressions. Maybe I just imagined it…

There it was again, and this time he knew he hadn’t imagined it.

A rapid tapping sound.

Like little claws brushing metal.

“It’s in the shaft,” Obi-Wan breathed. “Behind us.”

Garen looked up with wide eyes. “And getting closer.”

“On three.” Obi-Wan met his friend’s eyes and they nodded in agreement.

The metal tapping grew louder. At this point though, it sounded less like tapping and more like…

Scurrying.

Obi-Wan tried to shake that thought too, but with much less success.

“One… Two…

“Three!”

As one, the padawans whirled around, holding their lumas high.

Bant shrieked. Obi-Wan fell back into her.

Not two meters away, on the fringe of the light, floated two bulbous yellow eyes.

A cry rose in Obi-Wan’s throat.

Then quite unexpectedly someone spoke.

A very disgruntled someone.

“Shine that light in my eyes, you should not!”

His luma trembling in his hand, Obi-Wan blinked in disbelief at the unmistakable voice. Studying the disembodied eyes more closely, he saw that they were attached to the murky outline of a face with familiar bat-like ears.

“Master…Y-Yoda?”

“That I have been for many years, Padawan Kenobi. Now lower your light, you will.”

Obi-Wan’s hand dropped to his lap.

“Wh-wha-” Pulling her legs out from under Obi-Wan, Bant tried to speak, but her voice didn’t seem to want to cooperate.

Yoda’s eyes focused on her. “All right are you, Padawan Eerin? Pale you look.”

“I’m…” She shook her head as if to physically knock her voice back into submission. “What are you doing here, Master?” she demanded in a rush.

Yoda’s ears tilted back. “Earned the right to go where I wish in the Temple have I not, hmm, young padawan?” He chuckled softly as Bant’s cheeks flushed bright pink. “Like to talk further I would, young ones, but excuse me you must. Late for a Council meeting I am.”

The three padawans moved wordlessly aside as the ancient Jedi master swiftly crawled between them and on down the shaft, leaving small claw-shaped imprints in the dust as he passed.

Obi-Wan looked up at his friends, his mouth open in disbelief.

“That’s it!” Bant exclaimed suddenly, her hand slapping the metal floor of the shaft. “I’m never going anywhere with the two of you again. Even normal things can’t be normal.”

“She has a point,” Obi-Wan noted to no one in particular.

“Would you have it any other way?” Garen asked her, flashing his most rakish smile. The effect was somewhat lost though due to a long black smear across his cheek.

Bant leveled him with a pinched frown. “Yes.”

“Ah.” Garen sat back as Bant turned away to gather up the dirtstat tube. Then he looked to Obi-Wan, who merely shrugged in response.

“So…” Fiddling with his luma, Garen leaned back against the wall. “What do you think Reeft will say when we tell him about finding Master Yoda’s secret shortcut?”

Obi-Wan copied Garen’s relaxed posture, except settling on the opposite side of the shaft so that his feet rested against the wall near the boy’s shoulder. “He’ll probably be upset he missed all the excitement.”

The dirtstat revved a few times. “Yes, excitement,” Bant remarked dryly. “And if you tell anyone else, they’ll probably think all of the dust you stirred up went straight to your brain.”

Garen smiled thinly. “Has anyone ever told you how charming you are, Bant?”

“As a matter of fact, yes.”

Rolling his eyes, Garen turned to Obi-Wan.

“You left yourself open to that one,” he replied, grinning in spite of Garen’s pained grimace.

Bant smiled, her silver eyes gleaming.

“Don’t I know it,” Garen muttered. He sat up from the wall. “So, before I lose the last traces of my pride…let’s go eat lunch.”

“Are you sure you’re not hiding a clone of Reeft in there somewhere?” Obi-Wan asked, giving the boy’s shoulder a gentle nudge with his foot.

Although Garen turned down the corners of his mouth as if wounded, Obi-Wan had no doubt his friend would survive.

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Valairy_Scot 
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Date Posted: 7/29 7:52pm Subject: RE: The Padawan Chronicles [Obi-Wan, JA gang; series of one-shots; humor] - update 7/29!
“That’s it!” Bant exclaimed suddenly, her hand slapping the metal floor of the shaft. “I’m never going anywhere with the two of you again. Even normal things can’t be normal.”

“She has a point,” Obi-Wan noted to no one in particular.


Just like all your stories, this is just wonderful! love


 

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Date Posted: 7/29 9:10pm Subject: RE: The Padawan Chronicles [Obi-Wan, JA gang; series of one-shots; humor] - update 7/29!
Loved it, ductcrawling and now cleaning and seeing those footprints. laugh laugh

 

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Date Posted: 7/30 5:14am Subject: RE: The Padawan Chronicles [Obi-Wan, JA gang; series of one-shots; humor] - update 7/29!
Wonderful! I love the three friends together...you are doing an outstanding job capturing their friendship! applause

 

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p_stotts 
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Date Posted: 7/30 5:28am Subject: RE: The Padawan Chronicles [Obi-Wan, JA gang; series of one-shots; humor] - update 7/29!
laugh laugh What a hoot! Thanks so much for the morning laugh and the PM. Master Yoda using the ducts as a shortcut was the last thing I expected, and so, that much more funny. Great job. applause

 

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Date Posted: 7/30 11:59pm Subject: RE: The Padawan Chronicles [Obi-Wan, JA gang; series of one-shots; humor] - update 7/29!
Oops! I forgot to reply to the previous post. blush But I loved it! And this one, too. I'm so glad you've decided to include Garen. He's always a fun addition.

“In case I don’t come out alive, let it be known that it was your idea to use the air ducts, Bant. I don’t think my master believed me.” He gazed off into space, as if replaying the instance in his mind. “In fact, she sort of laughed at the idea.”


Ah, so dramatic. Garen missed his calling to the theater. laugh

Obi-Wan and his friends seem to just attract adventures. Bant's probably right, though--no one will believe the venerable Master Yoda scurries through the air ducts when late to appointments!

Thanks for sharing this great addition to your series.

 

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Bastet 
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Date Posted: 8/2 11:26am Subject: RE: The Padawan Chronicles [Obi-Wan, JA gang; series of one-shots; humor] - update 7/29!
I loved it! love grin

I love reading about Obi, Bant and Garen together. love

I had a feeling it was Yoda making those claw-marks, now the padawans know his secret shortcut! laugh

Just wonderful! applause love

 

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dianethx 
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Date Posted: 8/3 8:52am Subject: RE: The Padawan Chronicles [Obi-Wan, JA gang; series of one-shots; humor] - update 7/29!
LOL with Master Yoda using the ducts as a shortcut. Well, for him it isn't that short! The masters are getting creative with their punishments. The three of them better watch out!

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Date Posted: 8/3 5:31pm Subject: RE: The Padawan Chronicles [Obi-Wan, JA gang; series of one-shots; humor] - update 7/29!
Garen smiled thinly. “Has anyone ever told you how charming you are, Bant?”

“As a matter of fact, yes.”


That was hilarious! laugh

Great job! applause Tres bien! Did I say that right? French was never my best subject...

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Date Posted: 8/7 8:27pm Subject: RE: The Padawan Chronicles [Obi-Wan, JA gang; series of one-shots; humor] - update 7/29!
Valairy_Scot - Thank you! grin And thanks for reading!

earlybird-obi-wan - Like Bant said, their lives just can't be normal. wink Thanks for reading!

jedidas3 - I'm glad you think so. happy They're certainly fun to write anyway. wink

p_stotts - I'm not exactly sure where I came up with the idea of Yoda using the ducts. I guess it was just the next logical step for my warped mind. tongue Or that scene from RotS when he's crawling through a narrow shaft to escape the Senate chamber might've had something to do with it. lol. His movements there seemed oddly practiced... Thanks for reading!

nada_smith - lol! I love the idea of Garen getting into theater. In fact, you may have just provided me with a new plot bunny... mischief And I'm sure Master Yoda has more strange habits we could only guess at... Better yet, let's not. tongue Thanks for reading!

Bastet - The secret's out! Poor Yoda, he'll have to go back to using that hoverchair. wink I wonder how fast that thing goes... lol. Thanks for reading!

dianethx - The distance might not be much shorter, but I imagine he could pick up some speed in those shafts since his body is so compact and low to the ground and he doesn't have to contend with the regular foot traffic in the hallways. At least that's how I rationalize it. wink lol about the creative punishments. Yes, our young friends had better watch themselves... mischief Thanks for reading!

JediLuminaraUnduli - Glad you liked it! grin And yes, you said that right. Luckily I took two years of French. wink

 

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Kestrel_Kenobi 
Registered: Sep '05
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Date Posted: 9/8 2:07pm Subject: RE: The Padawan Chronicles [Obi-Wan, JA gang; series of one-shots; humor] - update 7/29!
Nienna!!!!!!! Ah, it's been ages. I've almost forgotten how to post! So much to catch up on!

Lovely little fics. Ah, I just love how you write Obi and Bant...and now Garen as well grin ...I can't wait for more. Don't forget those pms!

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JediKaren 
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Date Posted: 9/8 3:59pm Subject: RE: The Padawan Chronicles [Obi-Wan, JA gang; series of one-shots; humor] - update 7/29!
lol yeah that was great! Do keep going!

 

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