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Author Topic: All the Correct Things - Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan - one-post - Monday Mush!!
Glenstorm 
Registered: Mar '06
18921_Obi-Wan Kenobi
Date Posted: 5/6 2:26pm Subject: RE: All the Correct Things - Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan - one-post - Monday Mush!!
Sheer perfection. applause

I've just dicovered this viggie and I love it. I think the way you've portrayed the characters and the relationship between them is simply spot on. Tender and touching without being over the top, like it's so easy to do.

I liked the way Qui-Gon told Obi-Wan he could heal his own arm. Showing compassion whilst teaching his Padawan to stand on his own two feet. Just like I imagine a Jedi would.

Absolutly brilliant writing as always. Thank you so much for sharing hugs

 

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ardavenport 
Registered: Dec '04
22348_Luke Skywalker
Date Posted: 9/9 7:19pm Subject: RE: All the Correct Things - Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan - one-post - Monday Mush!!
Thanks very much! The teacher-student relationship is a good source of mush. grin It's particularly emotional because it's a one-to-one relationship and they get into life-and-death situations fairly regularly. So, they can't help but be close.

 

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Ara-gon 
Registered: Dec '05
41992_Lightsaber
Date Posted: 9/11 12:28pm Subject: RE: All the Correct Things - Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan - one-post - Monday Mush!!
A lovely bit of storytelling. I liked how you revealed the conflict in the conversation and let us as readers focus on the relationship between Obi and Qui. Very deft.

 

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p_stotts 
Registered: Jan '01
41217_Mara Jade
Date Posted: 9/11 1:15pm Subject: RE: All the Correct Things - Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan - one-post - Monday Mush!!
I loved that. Mush without being 'mushy,' if you know what I mean. wink Very well done, and I loved how you explained how the Force worked.

 

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