Author Topic: The Blue Side of the Force: Luminosity (pre-KOTOR OCs, Carth, Karath, Squint UPDATE 6/7!)
Thumper09  1058 posts
Registered: Dec '01
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Date Posted: 6/14/08 10:07am Subject: RE: The Blue Side of the Force: Luminosity (pre-KOTOR OCs, Carth, Karath, Squint UPDATE 6/7!)
Skye's stomach sank as she realized her mouth had just fired off without her explicit permission.

LOL. I love this line. grin


Always hit dinner at the beginning.

...although getting there late means you get the really good food once you get past the cafeteria bouncer. wink Carter's kinda cool. I have a feeling we'll be seeing him again.

It looks like Alyse is beginning to form her own opinions of the war instead of just following along. It seems like that's a good thing now, but I hope the second-guessing won't get her into trouble later on.

Simple plans are good. I hope Murphy doesn't interfere on Borleias.

The network ops group remains cool. tongue

Great update, and I'm looking forward to more! applause

-Thumper

 

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Rogue_Pilot_2347  1148 posts
Registered: May '05
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Date Posted: 7/6/08 9:32am Subject: RE: The Blue Side of the Force: Luminosity (pre-KOTOR OCs, Carth, Karath, Squint UPDATE 6/7!)
Well, now that I've finally found my way over here....

Great chapter. I like the chef.

So, Carth actually knew Kylan before he met Leiraya? why didn't he say something?

I haven't time for more right now, but I really liked the chapter. Sorry I took so long to get to it....

 

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Jedi_Drizzt  231 posts
Registered: Nov '06
14385_Drizzt<br>by RA Salvatore  (A&A)
Date Posted: 7/22/08 5:49am Subject: RE: The Blue Side of the Force: Luminosity (pre-KOTOR OCs, Carth, Karath, Squint UPDATE 6/7!)
Very cool fic! grin Strange I didn't notice it beforre. thinking Anyway, please add me to the PM list!


P.S. Carth's very cool! wink

 

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SoA  279 posts
Registered: Apr '08
48539_Nomi Sunrider (50209)
Date Posted: 8/26/08 2:04pm Subject: RE: The Blue Side of the Force: Luminosity (pre-KOTOR OCs, Carth, Karath, Squint UPDATE 6/7!)
Lots of fun so far. I am looking forward to further encounters between Skye and the cook.

And what exactly does YotA stand for? happy

 

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