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Those Eyes! [re: 2008 Dear Diary Challenge; OC; Romance; Angst;Drama] Update 6/25
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earlybird-obi-wan
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4/5 11:06am
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RE: Those Eyes! [re: 2008 Dear Diary Challenge; OC; Romance; Angst;Drama] Update 3/23
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she is in love 
Nice update
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slow_dawn
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4/6 9:18pm
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RE: Those Eyes! [re: 2008 Dear Diary Challenge; OC; Romance; Angst;Drama] Update 3/23
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Ooh, I wonder what Undar could be up to?
I'm quite interested to see how this love triangle pans out.
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VaderLVR64
Title: Fan Fic Who Runs w/ Scissors
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4/7 6:42am
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RE: Those Eyes! [re: 2008 Dear Diary Challenge; OC; Romance; Angst;Drama] Update 3/23
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Ah love! The most effective diet in the galaxy! 
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Alexis_Wingstar
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4/20 8:15pm
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RE: Those Eyes! [re: 2008 Dear Diary Challenge; OC; Romance; Angst;Drama] Update 3/23
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earlybird-obi-wan posted:
she is in love
Nice update
Thank you. 
slow_dawn posted:
Ooh, I wonder what Undar could be up to?
I'm quite interested to see how this love triangle pans out.
Actually, it was a false alarm
VaderLVR64 posted:
Ah love! The most effective diet in the galaxy!
Especially for teenagers.
Entry 11:
Well, Meb and daddy came home, and Meb was in a strange mood. I'd asked him how things went, and he just shrugged and said, "Ok, I guess." Then he said he didn't really want to talk about it and he went to his room.
That's when I realized his hair looked funny... frowning, I turned to daddy and asked what Undar did.
Daddy just laughed and told me Undar was actually very quiet at lunch and didn't do anything. That was doubly strange, because I just knew Undar had been planning something.
"Well, what happened to his hair?" I asked.
Daddy grinned. "Oh, Meb got it into his silly head that his hair was too shaggy and tried cutting it himself. Then we didn't have time to make it look better before we had to meet Undar and Glens."
Ok, so it appears Undar actually behaved himself... but why was Meb so upset?
Sometimes I just don't understand guys.
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earlybird-obi-wan
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4/20 8:58pm
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RE: Those Eyes! [re: 2008 Dear Diary Challenge; OC; Romance; Angst;Drama] Update 4/20
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go and ask him Asta. Meb is real nice.
Nice update
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VaderLVR64
Title: Fan Fic Who Runs w/ Scissors
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4/21 8:09am
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RE: Those Eyes! [re: 2008 Dear Diary Challenge; OC; Romance; Angst;Drama] Update 4/20
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Sometimes I just don't understand guys.
And you never WILL! But at least they're just as confused by you.
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slow_dawn
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4/25 9:51pm
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RE: Those Eyes! [re: 2008 Dear Diary Challenge; OC; Romance; Angst;Drama] Update 4/20
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I hope she goes and talks to him!
Good update!
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Alexis_Wingstar
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Date Posted:
5/4 8:38pm
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RE: Those Eyes! [re: 2008 Dear Diary Challenge; OC; Romance; Angst;Drama] Update 4/20
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5/5 2:56pm (1 edits total)
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earlybird-obi-wan posted:
go and ask him Asta. Meb is real nice.
Nice update
That's just it, she can't because he just said he didn't want to talk about it right then.
VaderLVR64 posted:
Sometimes I just don't understand guys.
And you never WILL! But at least they're just as confused by you.
Yeah, and the confusion is what makes it interesting. Well that and a couple of other things that would be a TOS violations 
slow_dawn posted:
I hope she goes and talks to him!
Good update!
Well, perhaps he doesn't need to talk to her right now....
Entry 12:
Diary, I am so very happy right now! My two boys are getting along!
Ok, I'm getting ahead of the story... well, after I spoke to daddy, I went to my room to sulk. I wanted to talk to Meb, but since he said he didn't want to talk well, I had to respect his wishes. I had a good mind to go talk to Undar, but somehow I was afraid I'd make things worse. So I sat in my room hoping that Meb would eventually come talk to me. I put my favorite band, Floater Rift and the Star Rays, and listened as I lay on my bed.
Suddenly, I heard Undar shouting and I rushed out of my room and saw him standing in Meb's doorway. I went over to see Meb on the floor! "What's going on? Why are you fighting?"
Undar pointed at Meb. "Ask him, he started it!" At least I think that's what he said.
Anyway, Meb had taken offense at Undar cutting his hair in the same choppy way he had earlier today... can't say I blame him. It did look like Undar was trying to make fun of him. But Undar was totally flumoxed... he did it to break the ice... well, they made up, Telma cut their hair so that they didn't look so ridiculous, and now they're joking with and ribbing each other.
I am so relieved!
I love them both so much. Undar is my dearest friend, and Meb... yeah... he's Meb
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earlybird-obi-wan
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5/4 8:50pm
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RE: Those Eyes! [re: 2008 Dear Diary Challenge; OC; Romance; Angst;Drama] Update 5/4
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And now she loves both
Love to see those three together.
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VaderLVR64
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5/5 6:44am
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RE: Those Eyes! [re: 2008 Dear Diary Challenge; OC; Romance; Angst;Drama] Update 5/4
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I love them both so much. Undar is my dearest friend, and Meb... yeah... he's Meb
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slow_dawn
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5/5 12:50pm
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RE: Those Eyes! [re: 2008 Dear Diary Challenge; OC; Romance; Angst;Drama] Update 5/4
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Floater Rift and the Star Rays--nice GFFA band name!
Nice update!
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Alexis_Wingstar
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earlybird-obi-wan posted:
And now she loves both
Love to see those three together.
She loves both, but in different ways. Undar she loves as a good friend and brother-figure... she just got confused briefly with silly hormones. It's Meb who makes her heart speed up.
VaderLVR64 posted:
I love them both so much. Undar is my dearest friend, and Meb... yeah... he's Meb
slow_dawn posted:
Floater Rift and the Star Rays--nice GFFA band name!
Nice update!
Thanks, I looked all through the Wookiepedia band names and couldn't quite find an appropriate one for the timeframe in which this takes place so made it up. 
This next entry is for the Mother's Day Challenge.
Entry 13:
Well, Meb left with Undar and Glens today. I miss him already... especially with who showed up at the spaceport while daddy and I were seeing him off
Meb and I were hugging... I feel so safe and warm in his arms, and he smells so nice - kinda like a combination of fresh bread and spices... when I heard a the fake-cheery voice of her.
"Well, look who we have here!" She laughed, and I felt my teeth grinding.
"Rina, what are you doing here," my daddy asked with a big goofy grin on his face. I can't stand the fact that he obviously loves her after she left us.
They hugged.
And they kissed.
Passionately.
I felt like puking my guts out.
When they finally pulled away, she finally noticed the rest of us. She tried to hug me like all was nice and cozy between us, but I wasn't having it. Then daddy introduced her to Meb. Undar had put a hand on Meb's shoulder and said, "Yeah, he's my baby brother."
She acted all surprised and overjoyed... like she actually cared. Like I hadn't heard the many arguments she had with my father before she split.
Mother sure knows how to ruin a fond farewell. Glens, Undar and Mel soon left, leaving daddy and I alone with the mynock.
She explained to daddy that she came so we... her and I... could be reaquainted with each other before I go to live with her when it came time for me to go to the university.
Yippee.
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5/11 1:26pm
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RE: Those Eyes! [re: 2008 DDC; OC; Romance; Angst;Drama;Mother'sDayChallenge] Update 5/11
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uh oh, a mother returning and now she has to stay with her?
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5/11 1:40pm
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Oh no, I hope its not tooo rough between her and her mother.
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RE: Those Eyes! [re: 2008 DDC; OC; Romance; Angst;Drama;Mother'sDayChallenge] Update 5/11
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Mother sure knows how to ruin a fond farewell. Glens, Undar and Mel soon left, leaving daddy and I alone with the mynock.
She explained to daddy that she came so we... her and I... could be reaquainted with each other before I go to live with her when it came time for me to go to the university.
Yippee.
Well, this could get awkward. 
Loved it.
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