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Remembrance (JA: Obi, Qui, Siri, AU) Updated 9/5!
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mujapple-juicey
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7/23 9:32am
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RE: Remembrance (JA: Obi, Qui, Siri, AU) Updated 7/23! Thank you for the noms!!
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7/23 9:36am (2 edits total)
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Second response, early enough for me. This post is AWESOMELY SUPERBLY GOOOOOOOOOD. I have good feelings...
Is Wan remebering everything? Has he? It seems like it...
Quiggy! Teleport or something! Wan needs you! Don't let him go bye- bye!
Mangan is softer than I first thought he was. I guess he is jelly.
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!
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wolf_kenobi
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7/23 12:25pm
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RE: Remembrance (JA: Obi, Qui, Siri, AU) Updated 7/23! Thank you for the noms!!
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Excellent post!
'“So, I’ve heard. Master Yoda is still trying to decide what type of punishment would be suitable for making him crawl through the air ducts.”
“Once Ben is well, he certainly has my permission to deliver whatever punishment that he comes up with.”
“Who said that he was going to punish the boy?” Mace teased.'
 Nice bit of humor in the midst of all this trouble.
Good to know Cordo told Qui-Gon about what happened to his brother. Now the question is; will it help? 
And Obi seems to be having memories of his real time as a Jedi, and calling out for Qui. Yay!... I hope. 
Looking forward to more! Well done! 
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charie
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7/23 1:07pm
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RE: Remembrance (JA: Obi, Qui, Siri, AU) Updated 7/23! Thank you for the noms!!
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Well done! Hurry and get back Qui-gon!!!! Post soon,please. I was on the edge of my seat.
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ratna
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7/23 1:13pm
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RE: Remembrance (JA: Obi, Qui, Siri, AU) Updated 7/23! Thank you for the noms!!
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the turning of the tide...?
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KELIA
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7/23 2:28pm
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RE: Remembrance (JA: Obi, Qui, Siri, AU) Updated 7/23! Thank you for the noms!!
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Oooohhh Obi had a memory dream!
I hope he doesn't think the Jedi planted it in his mind just to trick him.
Glad to see Qui still by his side 
Great update
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DaveSlave1
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7/23 4:14pm
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RE: Remembrance (JA: Obi, Qui, Siri, AU) Updated 7/23! Thank you for the noms!!
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Very interesting update, im wondering could Siri being with Ben while it happened to him be the key to Obi's recovery? because this is sifferant to Ca'li being on his own in the cell. maybe?, possibly? 
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callista_gseran
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7/23 4:41pm
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Please update! I'm loving this.....but i have no fingernails left!
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Gkilkenny
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7/24 12:38am
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RE: Remembrance (JA: Obi, Qui, Siri, AU) Updated 7/23! Thank you for the noms!!
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So the plot thickens and Mangan has offered to help Qui-Gon extract
information out of Darnel. 
I think the chip is important, and I agree with the healer.  After all the chip wasn't in Obi-Wan before he was captured. It must be causing his erratic behavour 
Excellent post
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Ferus-Olin
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7/24 9:11pm
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RE: Remembrance (JA: Obi, Qui, Siri, AU) Updated 7/23! Thank you for the noms!!
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Awesome update, finally some light! Knowing you though, it won't last long
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Jedi_Perigrine
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7/26 10:24am
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I agree with Wolf_Kenobi-- "So, I’ve heard. Master Yoda is still trying to decide what type of punishment would be suitable for making him crawl through the air ducts.”
“Once Ben is well, he certainly has my permission to deliver whatever punishment that he comes up with.”
“Who said that he was going to punish the boy?” Mace teased."
I LOVE those lines. They break up the tension nicely and the made me chuckle unexpectedly. Looks like things are finally going Qui-Gon's way! I just hope they can help Obi before it's too late!
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Bastet
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7/26 1:03pm
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RE: Remembrance (JA: Obi, Qui, Siri, AU) Updated 7/23! Thank you for the noms!!
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Mangan's story about his brother was really sad! 
I really hope Qui-Gon can help Obi-Wan from going that far.
I loved the end with Obi calling for his master, does this mean a break-through of some sort has been made?
Can't wait for more!
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7/28 1:17pm
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RE: Remembrance (JA: Obi, Qui, Siri, AU) Updated 7/23! Thank you for the noms!!
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“Perhaps I can help, then,” the pilot suggested with a devious smile that reached his eyes.
“I’m sure that you can…”
I think Qui-Gon should take Cordo with him when he goes to speak to the Dernal. That would throw the warden off kilter.
“Master,” the boy continued to plead. He needed his Master. “Please hurry, Master. I can’t fight much longer.”
“You don’t have to fight,” the soothing voice encouraged him. “You just have to let us help you.”
I wonder if Mace and Obi-Wan/Ben are speaking of the same thing, or if the padawan is speaking of not being able to hold on much longer due to whatever Dernal did to him. I hope Qui-Gon heard Obi-Wan/Ben's plea for his master to return to his side.
I've said it before and I'll say it again, you are a magnificent writer. My heart aches for what Obi-Wan is going through. I hope there's light at the end of the tunnel.
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mujapple-juicey
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7/28 2:24pm
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RE: Remembrance (JA: Obi, Qui, Siri, AU) Updated 7/23! Thank you for the noms!!
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7/28 2:28pm (1 edits total)
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You can do it Obi!
Obi, you made me think hard!
HARD! HARD! HARD!
Mayde he's remembering... oh, that might be nasty!
Violent! Gorey. (er, I take gorey back.)
Gosh, this has been intense all the way.
Wow!
You can do it Obi!
[and I repeat it, jumping up and down, causing everyone to develop opinions]
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7/28 3:36pm
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RE: Remembrance (JA: Obi, Qui, Siri, AU) Updated 7/23! Thank you for the noms!!
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I'm caught up again! 
Before he knew what was happening, he was surrounded by at least six small children with a dozen more heading straight for him. They began grabbing onto his tunic as their screams of excitement grew louder and louder.
“Obi Nobi is back!” one child gleefully exclaimed.
Aww, how cute...too bad it didn't last.
The Jedi listened intently as Alano explained what had happened in the quarters and the images that the youth refused to acknowledge. “He was telling me that I left him in the middle of a war,” Qui-Gon recalled. “Do you think that he’s remembering Melida/Daan?”
“Is that something significant?” the healer asked.
“Yes, it was something that happened when Ob…Ben became my Padawan.”
Of all the memories to surface, it's unfortunate that it had to be Melida/Daan.
Taking a deep breath, the healer looked the Jedi in the eyes and answered with confidence. “I think we need to remove it…”
Yikes, Obi-Wan has to have brain surgery?
“So, I’ve heard. Master Yoda is still trying to decide what type of punishment would be suitable for making him crawl through the air ducts.”
“Once Ben is well, he certainly has my permission to deliver whatever punishment that he comes up with.”
“Who said that he was going to punish the boy?” Mace teased
Poor Qui...
The man smiled at the boy. “I guess we do have a habit of doing that, don’t we? Perhaps the Council should just start sending a healer with us if they insist on sending us on these dangerous missions.”
“Which healer do you think would volunteer for that duty?”
“I’m sure that any of them would be honored.”
The boy grinned. “I’m sure they would, Master.”
Aww, a memory is coming back!
“Master,” the boy continued to plead. He needed his Master. “Please hurry, Master. I can’t fight much longer.”
“You don’t have to fight,” the soothing voice encouraged him. “You just have to let us help you.”
“Master,” the teen sobbed. “Master…”
Yay! He remembers Qui-Gon!
Wonderful updates!!
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mujapple-juicey
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7/29 8:46am
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You can do it Obi!
You can do it Obi!
Has any of developed a coma or something from me repeating this?
You can do it Obi!
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