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Bastet Registered: Dec '99	Date Posted: 6/2 9:32pm Subject: RE: "Holy Force, Batman!" Crossover/AU, JA, H/C, Qui/Obi-angst (Chp 13 & 14 posted 6/2) - Date Edited: 6/2 9:34pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Bastet
	Ahah! I'm glad I clicked back on this for some reason, and got two posts in one day! “If I didn’t smell so bad already, I’d probably be upset about your puking all over me again,” a voice above him said. Ah, poor Robin! “Try to stay still,” Robin said. “I’ve got you.” After a moment, he added, “Don’t take this the wrong way, but it feels kind of nice to know you’re not all that perfect. Although…,” he paused a second, “…you did get hurt saving my life. Damn! You are perfect! How do you do that?” “Obi-Wan Kenobi; senior Jedi padawan; age 19; apprenticed to the legendary Master Qui-Gon Jinn; winner of the padawan saber competition five years in a row; decorated for bravery seven times…” He snorted. “…drowned in six inches of human excrement.” Oh dear, I hope it doesn't come to that! A white-haired elderly gentleman looked up at them and said in a calm voice, “Are you looking for Obi-Wan Kenobi?” Qui-Gon rarely felt surprised at anything, but this took him back a moment. The Force gave him no warning, so he answered in just as calm a tone, “Yes, we are. Would you happen to know where he is?” What a perfect way to introduce the Jedi to Alfred. With a sigh, Qui-Gon looked up at Yoda, who had his eyes closed and was humming softly to himself. “My goodness,” the old man said with just a hint of startlement. Yoda opened his eyes and looked at the man. “Yoda, I am. Help me you must.” He levitated himself down into the water speeder. “Find Obi-Wan’s attacker we will.” He looked at Qui-Gon. “Find you padawan you must. In need of help he is.” Even the sight of Yoda barely ruffled Alfred, I love it! And now he and Yoda are going after Two-Face together, woohoo! I can't wait for Alfred to see Yoda in action! “Yes… sorry. Was talking with Master Qui-Gon. Uh… he says…” A loud buzzing started in his ears. The tunnel grew even darker. “Stay with me, Obi-Wan!” Robin chaffed his hands over Obi-Wan’s neck and cheeks. “Hold on! You don’t really want that epitaph, now do you? Obi-Wan! Say something!” Oh no! Hurry Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan needs you! I can't wait to read more tomorrow, of course. -----signature----- "Oh yeah. Ooh, aah. That's how it always starts. But then later there's running, then...screaming." --Dr. Ian Malcolm "Okay fine. Go ahead and scream. Then when that tricycloplots attacks you, don't come crying to me." --Paul Kirby
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Lady_Misty Registered: Mar '07	Date Posted: 6/3 3:40am Subject: RE: "Holy Force, Batman!" Crossover/AU, JA, H/C, Qui/Obi-angst (Chp 13 & 14 posted 6/2)
	gasp Earth is being invaded by aliens! Not really. Qui-Gon and Yoda are heading to help Obi-Wan. Yes! How will Dick feel about Obi-Wan after he saved his life? Won't Bruce be surprised to meet Qui-Gon and Yoda! must resit urge to sing 'Yoda' I'm not sure how far back Batman goes on the big screen but his comics go back to at least the 1930a. -----signature----- 'Lumious beings are we, not this crude matter.' Kenneth Cope and Yoda The Clone Wars is wicked good!!!! I got Kenneth Cope's autograph!!!
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Gkilkenny Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 6/3 3:48am Subject: RE: "Holy Force, Batman!" Crossover/AU, JA, H/C, Qui/Obi-angst (Chp 13 & 14 posted 6/2)
	I'm going to post it tonight -- and yes, it's a cliffhanger. So sue me. All your updates are cliffhangers and my nails are getting shorter now that Obi is injured. Bamm! Zapp! Oh no Obi-Wan's been zapped. Qui-Gon to the rescue, hurry up I sense Obi is in a bad way if he is talking epitaph's 100 posts its a good story. -----signature----- Padawan to p_stotts Peace over anger - honour over hate - Strength over fear. Links to Stories in my Bio. Obi-Wan forever.
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ZaraValinor Registered: May '02	Date Posted: 6/3 8:41am Subject: RE: "Holy Force, Batman!" Crossover/AU, JA, H/C, Qui/Obi-angst (Chp 13 & 14 posted 6/2)
	I was expecting Zucco, but then I remember that the movie is different from the comics. Uh-oh, Obi's in trouble. That boy is a magnet for it. Great job. -----signature----- Proud Master to Meredith_Kenobi & Lolly_Tolly "He full-on Obi-Wan'd me!" Dean Winchester - Supernatural
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bek Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 6/3 9:24am Subject: RE: "Holy Force, Batman!" Crossover/AU, JA, H/C, Qui/Obi-angst (Chp 13 & 14 posted 6/2)
	“Obi-Wan?” Robin said in a louder, concerned voice. “You still with me?” “Yes… sorry. Was talking with Master Qui-Gon. Uh… he says…” A loud buzzing started in his ears. The tunnel grew even darker. “Stay with me, Obi-Wan!” Robin chaffed his hands over Obi-Wan’s neck and cheeks. “Hold on! You don’t really want that epitaph, now do you? Obi-Wan! Say something!” They're so close to helping him. Evil authors and cliff hangers go hand in hand. -----signature----- Update 10/2/08- Chap. 40- Life Beyond the Code (Obi-Wan/Anakin) - http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/20820324 Update 9/3/08- Chap. 26 - Not Myself - (Obi-Wan/Qui-Gon/Oc's) - Before the Saga Update 9/3/08 - Part 6 - Strength to Begin Anew
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p_stotts Registered: Jan '01	Date Posted: 6/3 11:55am Subject: RE: "Holy Force, Batman!" Crossover/AU, JA, H/C, Qui/Obi-angst (Chp 13 & 14 posted 6/2)
	Bwahahaha! I'd better get to writing. Been so busy all day, I haven't had time to even look at the next chapter. I'll be at a workshop tomorrow and Thursday so, sorry, no posts then. I'll try my best to get chp 15 done today. -----signature----- If you want to make God laugh, tell him your plans for your life. Proud master to Gkilkenny! Stories in my bio. 9/19/2008 is National Talk Like A Pirate day in the U.S. Everyone else join in too! Arr! Avast ye landlubbers!
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p_stotts Registered: Jan '01	Date Posted: 6/3 1:55pm Subject: RE: "Holy Force, Batman!" Crossover/AU, JA, H/C, Qui/Obi-angst (Chp 15 posted 6/3) - Date Edited: 6/6 8:10am (2 edits total) Edited By: p_stotts
	This chapter is a bit short, but I didn't have a whole lot of time to write today. As I said before, I probably won't be able to post again until Friday. Until then, enjoy! Chapter 15 – All Together Now “Come on, man! Don’t do this!” Robin shouted. Obi-Wan coughed and drew in a ragged breath. Robin blew out a sigh of relief. “You scared me there for a minute.” Splashing footsteps echoed behind them – heavy splashing footsteps. Robin turned his head, but couldn’t see a thing in the darkened tunnel. “Batman?” No answer. “This just keeps getting better and better.” He wanted to stand and face whoever was coming, but if he let go of Obi-Wan, the other man would drown. “I just hope Two-Face didn't decide to come back and finish the job. Whoever said, 'I’d rather die on my feet than live on my knees' obviously never encountered this situation.” Whoever was coming, rounded the last curve in the tunnel. A flash of green ignited their surroundings just long enough for Robin to get a glimpse of a large man in a cloak, with shoulder-length dark hair and a beard. “Who the hell are you?” He really needed to work on that diplomacy thing. He heard more than saw the man kneel down in the muck beside them. “Funny, I was just about to ask you the same thing,” a cultured voice spoke in the dark. “Man, talk about déjà vu.” Robin shook his head. “You’ve got to be Obi-Wan’s master.” “I am.” The green light flared to life again. It looked like some type of colored laser sword. Robin recognized the hilt as something similar to what hung from Obi-Wan’s belt. “Here.” He handed the weapon to Robin. “Hold it straight up just like this.” The man placed his hands on either side of Obi-Wan’s face and closed his eyes. Robin looked at the slabs of concrete piled on top Obi-Wan’s legs and lower torso. He winced in sympathy. By the looks of it, his right hand had been crushed as well. “This should have been me, but he pushed me out of the way.” “That sounds like something Obi-Wan would do.” The older man opened his eyes and looked at him. “He’s unconscious and has lost a great deal of blood.” He shrugged out of a canvas pack and placed it behind them, near the tunnel wall where it would stay dry. “I’m going to ease him into a healing trance, so he won’t feel the pain when I shift this debris. Just keep supporting his head and shoulders like that.” “Okay.” Robin’s communicator beeped in his ear. With all that had happened, he’d completely forgotten he had the thing with him. He tapped the device. “That you, Batman?” “Robin! Are you all right? Where are you? Your tracking device isn’t functioning.” “Yeah, I’m fine. I followed Two-Face to a sewage tunnel that comes out under pier 19. He threw a hand grenade that caused the tunnel to collapse. He got away, and Obi-Wan is hurt pretty bad. You better alert Doc.” “Batgirl and I are at the tunnel’s entrance now. What’s Obi-Wan doing with you? And how bad is he?” “I don’t know where he came from. He just showed up behind me and pulled me away from the grenade. It exploded and brought down half the tunnel on top of him. His master’s here with us now and trying to help him.” “Ar you sure he's Obi-Wan's master?" Robin recalled the greeting he and Qui-Gon had just exchanged. "Yeah, I'm sure." "We’re at a tee in the tunnel…” “Turn right. We’re just around the bend.” A light shown from around the curve, followed shortly by Batman and Batgirl. “Obi-Wan!” Batgirl gasped. She knelt down beside Robin, while Batman knelt opposite Obi-Wan’s master. The master straightened up from his bent-over position and glanced at the new arrivals. “I’m Qui-Gon Jinn, Obi-Wan’s master.” He took his weapon back from Robin. The green laser retracted back into the hilt before Qui-Gon hooked it back onto his belt. He then turned and grabbed the canvas pack, handing it to Batgirl. “Would you hold this, please?” He opened it and pulled out what looked like a syringe of some type, only without a needle. “I’m going to give him some pain medicine to reinforce the healing trance, then we need to move this debris and get him out of here.” Batman nodded and started carefully clearing the rubble off Obi-Wan’s torso and legs. After a moment, Qui-Gon helped him. Some of pieces looked way too heavy for them to move, even with the two men working together, but somehow they moved it, as if it weighed next to nothing. Batman looked at Qui-Gon. “Telekinesis?” “Force manipulation,” the Jedi master replied, pushing away the last slab of concrete. He then eased his arms under Obi-Wan and started to lift him. “Hold on,” Batman said. “You can’t just move him like that. His spine could have sustained damage.” “I can use the same Force manipulation to lift Obi-Wan as I used on the debris. Believe me, his neck and spine will have ample support, as will the rest of him. Our transport is located just outside the entrance to this tunnel and has a fully equipped medical bay.” “I saw no transport,” Batman said. “All the same, it is there.” Slowly, he eased Obi-Wan into his arms and then stood. Batman led the way out of the tunnel with his flashlight. Robin walked beside Qui-Gon, keeping an eye on Obi-Wan. The Jedi master glanced at him and smiled. “You and Obi-Wan have become friends. I sense how worried you are about him.” Robin started to rub the back of his head, but stopped just in time when he remembered what coated his hand. “Yeah, well, I didn’t exactly act like much of a friend until this happened. To tell you the truth, I was kind of jealous of him.” He snorted. “He seems so perfectly in control of himself, even when he’s hurt like this.” Qui-Gon nodded. “You are not the first to have that misconception. My padawan has his faults, like anyone else.” A small grin teased his lips. “He hides them well.” He glanced down at the unconscious man in his arms. “Sometimes too well.” They came to the opening of the tunnel, where Batman turned back toward Qui-Gon. “How do we get him up onto the pier? You obviously can’t carry him and climb a ladder.” “That won’t be a problem.” He approached the tunnel entrance. “Excuse me.” Batman backed away to give him room. Qui-Gon stood at the edge, looked up at the pier, then levitated upward, carrying Obi-Wan with him. Robin shook his head and grinned at Batman and Batgirl. “Nothing these guys do could surprise me any more.” One by one, they climbed the ladder to the pier. "Ah, I'm happy to see all of you in one piece." Robin turned to find Alfred strolling onto the pier ahead of a disheveled-looking Two-Face, his hands handcuffed behind his back. Beside Two-Face floated a small, green, gnome-looking creature with long ears and tufts of white hair sticking out all over his head. He was dressed similarly to Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan, right down to a miniature laser sword on his belt. "Scratch that," Robin said. "They do have a few surprises left." TBC See, I was nice and didn't leave you with a cliffhanger. Well, except maybe what will happen with Obi-Wan. Next chapter - Yoda's confrontation with Two-Face. -----signature----- If you want to make God laugh, tell him your plans for your life. Proud master to Gkilkenny! Stories in my bio. 9/19/2008 is National Talk Like A Pirate day in the U.S. Everyone else join in too! Arr! Avast ye landlubbers!
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ZaraValinor Registered: May '02	Date Posted: 6/3 2:07pm Subject: RE: "Holy Force, Batman!" Crossover/AU, JA, H/C, Qui/Obi-angst (Chp 15 posted 6/3)
	Thank goodness that Qui-Gon came in time. Poor Obi-Wan. He's such a martyr. -----signature----- Proud Master to Meredith_Kenobi & Lolly_Tolly "He full-on Obi-Wan'd me!" Dean Winchester - Supernatural
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Bastet Registered: Dec '99	Date Posted: 6/3 4:40pm Subject: RE: "Holy Force, Batman!" Crossover/AU, JA, H/C, Qui/Obi-angst (Chp 15 posted 6/3)
	“Who the hell are you?” He really needed to work on that diplomacy thing. He heard more than saw the man kneel down in the muck beside them. “Funny, I was just about to ask you the same thing,” a cultured voice spoke in the dark. “Man, talk about déjà vu.” Robin shook his head. “You’ve got to be Obi-Wan’s master.” Robin walked beside Qui-Gon, keeping an eye on Obi-Wan. The Jedi master glanced at him and smiled. “You and Obi-Wan have become friends. I sense how worried you are about him.” Robin started to rub the back of his head, but stopped just in time when he remembered what coated his hand. “Yeah, well, I didn’t exactly act like much of a friend until this happened. To tell you the truth, I was kind of jealous of him.” He snorted. “He seems so perfectly in control of himself, even when he’s hurt like this.” Qui-Gon nodded. “You are not the first to have that misconception. My padawan has his faults, like anyone else.” A small grin teased his lips. “He hides them well.” He glanced down at the unconscious man in his arms. “Sometimes too well.” That's our Obi. And I'm glad Dick finally came around, I don't think anyone can dislike Obi for long. Robin turned to find Alfred strolling onto the pier ahead of a disheveled-looking Two-Face, his hands handcuffed behind his back. Beside Two-Face floated a small, green, gnome-looking creature with long ears and tufts of white hair sticking out all over his head. He was dressed similarly to Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan, right down to a miniature laser sword on his belt. "Scratch that," Robin said. "They do have a few surprises left." I'm excited to see Yoda in action! But I'm also worried about poor Obi, I hope he's going to be okay! -----signature----- "Oh yeah. Ooh, aah. That's how it always starts. But then later there's running, then...screaming." --Dr. Ian Malcolm "Okay fine. Go ahead and scream. Then when that tricycloplots attacks you, don't come crying to me." --Paul Kirby
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greencat336 Title: Secretary & Treasurer Pittsburgh FanForce Registered: Jan '01	Date Posted: 6/3 6:05pm Subject: RE: "Holy Force, Batman!" Crossover/AU, JA, H/C, Qui/Obi-angst (Chp 15 posted 6/3)
	Gotham's newest superhero: Yoda -----signature----- Star Wars Association of Pittsburgh http://www.pittsburghfanforce.com Former Master to Knight Stina-Cri Go watch our horrible fanfilm http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zS9NK2vHC2Y
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Valairy_Scot Title: PT Rewrite Winner Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 6/3 6:36pm Subject: RE: "Holy Force, Batman!" Crossover/AU, JA, H/C, Qui/Obi-angst (Chp 15 posted 6/3)
	The Jedi master glanced at him and smiled. “You and Obi-Wan have become friends. I sense how worried you are about him.” Robin started to rub the back of his head, but stopped just in time when he remembered what coated his hand. “Yeah, well, I didn’t exactly act like much of a friend until this happened. To tell you the truth, I was kind of jealous of him.” He snorted. “He seems so perfectly in control of himself, even when he’s hurt like this.” Qui-Gon nodded. “You are not the first to have that misconception. My padawan has his faults, like anyone else.” A small grin teased his lips. “He hides them well.” He glanced down at the unconscious man in his arms. “Sometimes too well.” Do dish, Qui. Aw, right, Robin/Dick - you're man enough to admit it. -----signature----- http://boards.theforce.net/fan_fiction_resource/b10304/25405090/p3/?52 Prolific Author thread: list & links there. Muse fueled by coffee. Often AWOL despite frequent sipping. Writes on inspiration, not a schedule. Proud master of several padawans
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earlybird-obi-wan Registered: Aug '06	Date Posted: 6/3 8:46pm Subject: RE: "Holy Force, Batman!" Crossover/AU, JA, H/C, Qui/Obi-angst (Chp 15 posted 6/3)
	Yes, another great chapter and now Yoda in action. I hope Obi-Wan will be safe but with Qui-Gon around he should. -----signature----- writer and Star Wars fan FANART [link=http://boards.theforce.net/fan_art/b10020/25793899]fanart[/link] stories in my bio
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PadawanKitara Registered: Dec '01	Date Posted: 6/3 11:22pm Subject: RE: "Holy Force, Batman!" Crossover/AU, JA, H/C, Qui/Obi-angst (Chp 15 posted 6/3)
	Scratch that," Robin said. "They do have a few surprises left Either he is learning how to control his emotions or nothing is going to shock him anymore. I loved Alfred's reaction (or lack thereof) to Yoda- it was so...Alfred. -----signature----- Courtier of the Royal Order of Shambling Dufi We are Dufi...Resistance is Futile! UCLA BRUINS
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Gkilkenny Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 6/3 11:50pm Subject: RE: "Holy Force, Batman!" Crossover/AU, JA, H/C, Qui/Obi-angst (Chp 15 posted 6/3)
	It is nice to know that Qui-Gon knows his padawan very well. Qui-Gon nodded. “You are not the first to have that misconception. My padawan has his faults, like anyone else.” A small grin teased his lips. “He hides them well.” He glanced down at the unconscious man in his arms. “Sometimes too well.” Alfred is such a gem I have always liked him. Another great post -----signature----- Padawan to p_stotts Peace over anger - honour over hate - Strength over fear. Links to Stories in my Bio. Obi-Wan forever.
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p_stotts Registered: Jan '01	Date Posted: 6/6 4:50am Subject: RE: "Holy Force, Batman!" Crossover/AU, JA, H/C, Qui/Obi-angst (Chp 15 posted 6/3)
	Hi all! I'm baaack! I'm working on the next chapter and will post sometime today, so check back. -----signature----- If you want to make God laugh, tell him your plans for your life. Proud master to Gkilkenny! Stories in my bio. 9/19/2008 is National Talk Like A Pirate day in the U.S. Everyone else join in too! Arr! Avast ye landlubbers!
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