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Jinngerbread Registered: Sep '07	Date Posted: 10/28/08 10:49am Subject: All That Slithers Is Goa'uld (Gate Crashin' Sequel) ~~ New Post! 6/9! More snakehead action! - Date Edited: 6/9 10:20am (9 edits total) Edited By: Jinngerbread
	Title: All That Slithers Is Goa'uld Author(s) Jinngerbread and Lithiniel Characters Qui-Gon, Obi-Wan, OC's, Stargate SG-1 Team Summary: Six months after the events in Gate Crashin' Namtar has solidified his control of the System Lords. Determined to crush all in his way, the now self-proclaimed Goa'uld leader has sinister plans for the Jedi and the entire galaxy. Authors Notes: Hey gang, we're back! Took us long enough, we know, but rest assured we are going to have one exciting adventure! The prologue is a bit of a shorty but rather than keeping you guys waiting longer, we decided to go ahead and post. As always we welcome your feedback and comments! Enjoy! Prologue Namtar had long since moved into the quarters Ba'al had been using; they were far superior even to his own, affording him a brilliant view of the stars and a complete tactical command center. He never needed to be on the Pel'tak, but that was where he spent most of his time. It kept morale up. Today he sat in an ornate throne, his eyes closed in deep concentration. He'd meant to meditate, but thoughts kept interrupting him. Namtar was pleased -- very pleased -- that the System Lords had been wise enough to accept his offer. Not that he'd left them much choice: Yu and Bastet had served as prime examples of why his will should not be thwarted. When they had disappeared, the others fell into line quickly. But there was something else weighing on him. Namtar had been able, through a network of spies, to keep tabs on his host's master, Qui-Gon Jinn. At least until recently. Suddenly, the Jedi Master had dropped altogether from sight, not even using his comm. Qui-Gon had gone dark, and that didn't bode well. If Qui-Gon was involved, one could always bet that would mean trouble. His host's maverick teacher was a sore spot he wasn't sure what to do about, exactly. He needed to bring the Master to him, but thus far, he was not able to locate him, even through the abilities of his host, much to the host's delight and his own annoyance. Still, that did not mean there weren't ways that he could do so. He had his own methods of persuasion just as well as anyone. He smiled. He had all of the hosts memories at his command. He knew Qui-Gon's weaknesses as well as his strengths. He would find the Master. Find him, and take him for his own. -----signature----- Miscellaneous http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/29654978/p1 2009 diary challenge entry All That Slithers is Goa'uld http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/29365461
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Lilith Demodae Registered: Oct '99	Date Posted: 10/28/08 10:57am Subject: RE: All That Slithers Is Goa'uld (Gate Crashin' Sequel)
	Yay, you're back! Boo! Hiss! Evil bad guy! But 6 months? They left poor Obi-Wan there for half a year?! -----signature----- This post is brought to you by: This space for rent
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Lady_Misty Registered: Mar '07	Date Posted: 10/28/08 12:32pm Subject: RE: All That Slithers Is Goa'uld (Gate Crashin' Sequel)
	Man, your quick! May the Goa'uld die painful deaths! Yes I know that such feelings are of the Darkside. -----signature----- Proud big sister to BYU-I student, go Shelly! I sense a disturbance in the Frost. -Get Fuzzy 'King of the funeral!' Hodgins Froggy whent a'courting. A princess of Landover Cad Bane is on my bad side; he destroyed Todo for no good reason! sob
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Seremela Registered: Jul '08	Date Posted: 10/28/08 3:10pm Subject: RE: All That Slithers Is Goa'uld (Gate Crashin' Sequel)
	Oh no! This is SO not good! ( should I say that I love that, or keep it a secret?) It looks like Namtar has been making evil use of Obi-Wan's force powers to become very mighty. And he's after Qui-Gon.... Jinngerbread posted: He needed to bring the Master to him, but thus far, he was not able to locate him, even through the abilities of his host, much to the host's delight and his own annoyance. But it's great that Obi-Wan can still make himself known, yeah for Obi-Wan! More soon??? Please???? -----signature----- Winner of WWTF round 2
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Gkilkenny Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 10/29/08 12:24am Subject: RE: All That Slithers Is Goa'uld (Gate Crashin' Sequel) - Date Edited: 10/29/08 12:27am (1 edits total) Edited By: Gkilkenny
	Excellent. Now I can get my fix of Obi-Wan and stargate. Poor Obi-Wan being smothered by Namtar for six months. Qui-Gon must be frantic. Thanks for the PM. Keep me on it please. Great title for the sequel by the way. -----signature----- Proud Padawan to p_stotts Peace over anger - honour over hate - Strength over fear. Links to Stories in my Bio. Obi-Wan forever.
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JediMaster_Horn Registered: Jan '02	Date Posted: 10/29/08 2:23am Subject: RE: All That Slithers Is Goa'uld (Gate Crashin' Sequel)
	Good start! Add me to your PM list, if you will. -----signature----- "Embrace the pain, scarhead."-- Alema Rar Jacen: "You're a fraction of the man your father is." Valin: "Funny. That's what I was going to say to you." Congratulations to the 44th President of the United States, Barack Obama!
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p_stotts Registered: Jan '01	Date Posted: 10/29/08 5:40am Subject: RE: All That Slithers Is Goa'uld (Gate Crashin' Sequel)
	Yes! Thanks for the PM on the sequel. I think Obi's host is overlooking one huge factor. Obi-Wan is not familiar with all Qui-Gon's tricks. After all, a master has to have a few secrets from his padawan. My big question is, how does the host (can't remember his name off hand) mean to have Qui-Gon for his own. Will he leave Obi-Wan and implant himself in Qui-Gon? If so, he may have an even greater battle on his hands. Qui-Gon's will and his connection to the living Force are much stronger than Obi-Wan's. Maybe this host's arrogance will be his downfall. Now... where is SG1? Have they traveled to Coruscant yet? Can't wait for more. Please PM me with updates. Right now my email isn't receiving any notifications for some unknown reason. -----signature----- How many of you believe in psycho-kinesis? Raise my hand. - Larry the Cable Guy Proud master to Gkilkenny! Stories in my bio.
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Alexis_Wingstar Registered: Sep '06	Date Posted: 10/29/08 5:44am Subject: RE: All That Slithers Is Goa'uld (Gate Crashin' Sequel)
	Hmph, Namtar had so much trouble dealing with a lowly padawan, and he thinks he can take on a master? Huh, he's gotten a bit too cocky. I hope. -----signature----- 3rd time NaNoWriMo Participant 3rd time's the charm, right? RIGHT?
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JediMasterAmanda Registered: Sep '05	Date Posted: 10/30/08 9:11am Subject: RE: All That Slithers Is Goa'uld (Gate Crashin' Sequel)
	yay sequel!!!! Obi better be saved in this one. anyway interesting start. keep me posted on updates please? -----signature----- "Be faithful until death, and I will give you the crown of life." Rev. 2:10 "Love thy neighbor as thyself." somewhere in the Bible Future Tamaskan Owner Jesus Saves.
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brodiew Registered: Oct '05	Date Posted: 10/31/08 8:41am Subject: RE: All That Slithers Is Goa'uld (Gate Crashin' Sequel)
	oK, I thought Ba'al was arrogant and narcissitic. Namtar takes the cake. At least Ba'al had a certain devious coolness. Namtar is just a mean SOB. Like all Goa'uld, Namtar talks too much and overestimates his abilities. Qui-Gon has a plan! -----signature----- “You were right about one thing, Master. The negotiations were short.”
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Bastet Registered: Dec '99	Date Posted: 10/31/08 2:59pm Subject: RE: All That Slithers Is Goa'uld (Gate Crashin' Sequel)
	Six months?! Poor Obi-Wan. Where is Qui-Gon and SG1? Yu and Bastet had served as prime examples of why his will should not be thwarted. When they had disappeared, the others fell into line quickly. Should I be worried? Can't wait for more! And Happy Halloween! -----signature----- "Oh yeah. Ooh, aah. That's how it always starts. But then later there's running, then...screaming." --Dr. Ian Malcolm "Okay fine. Go ahead and scream. Then when that tricycloplots attacks you, don't come crying to me." --Paul Kirby
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Sabriel_Orion Registered: Mar '08	Date Posted: 11/1/08 3:50pm Subject: RE: All That Slithers Is Goa'uld (Gate Crashin' Sequel)
	YAY! You continued it. I'm looking forward to reading it. -----signature----- "Does the Walker choose the Path, or the Path the Walker?" from Sabriel, by Garth Nix Sabriel: http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v409/sabriel_orion/PadawanSabrielOrionColored.png
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wolf_kenobi Registered: Nov '07	Date Posted: 11/11/08 2:00pm Subject: RE: All That Slithers Is Goa'uld (Gate Crashin' Sequel)
	Ack! Sorry about the late reply- DRL has been keeping me busy. Yay! The sequel is up! And it looks like Namtar is up to typical Goa'uld nastiness... poor Obi. I hope SG1 and Qui-Gon are on their way to rescue him. Looking forward to more!! -----signature----- Is God willing to prevent evil but not able? Then he is not omnipotent. Is he able but not willing? Then he is malevolent. Is he both able and willing? Then whence cometh evil? Is he neither able nor willing? Then why call him God. -Epicurus Proud Vegan
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Magier Registered: Jul '07	Date Posted: 11/16/08 10:14pm Subject: RE: All That Slithers Is Goa'uld (Gate Crashin' Sequel)
	Poor Obi-Wan. This has to be so horrible for him, trapped and being aware of all he is being used to do. -----signature----- No Legacy So Rich : Xan,OC, Obi, Qui (12/19) Seekers, Not Saints: SW/TB crossover (8/12)
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verd_beskar_prudii Registered: Sep '08	Date Posted: 11/18/08 4:32pm Subject: RE: All That Slithers Is Goa'uld (Gate Crashin' Sequel)
	MORE! MORE! MORE!!! -----signature----- Ke nu jurkad sha Mando'ade- Dont mess with Mandos- General Kenobi! How the heck does it go-bie? I hope right you are, or predicate shall i put again before subject and gibberish shall i spout.
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Lithiniel Registered: Jun '06	Date Posted: 11/25/08 10:51am Subject: RE: All That Slithers Is Goa'uld (Gate Crashin' Sequel)
	Lilith Demodae: We have returned, indeed! Hopefully this next update will reveal enough as to why it's been so very long.... Lady_Misty: It's probably ok to unleash your inner Dark Side, at least a little bit. The Goa'uld are rather nasty indeed. Don't worry, they'll all get what they deserve. Eventually. Seremela: We're glad you love the not-good, 'cause I'm sure there's more of it to come. Yes, Namtar is a little overly ambitious, but what Goa'uld isn't? Fret not, there's more.... Gkilkenny: Another fix for you, but no Obi-Wan this time. Another favorite makes a brief appearance, though, if that's any consolation. JediMaster_Horn: Glad you like it so far! If The Lady of the PM has not already added you, I will remind her posthaste... p_stotts: Ah, loyal and faithful reader.... You are quite correct. While Qui has taught Obi everything Obi knows, he has not necessarily taught Obi everything he himself knows. As to Namtar, well... He probably hasn't thought his plan for taking Qui-Gon all the way through just yet. Alexis_Wingstar: Very cocky indeed! Unless he's formulating a plan as we speak.... Which he probably is. Still, ambition must be equal to skill if one is to achieve it. We'll have to see just how skilled ol' Namtar is. JediMasterAmanda: Glad you're excited to see the sequel. We will do our very best to keep up with PM's. brodiew: Yeah, we wanted someone who made Ba'al look like a kitten, and we got him! And yes, Qui-Gon does indeed have a plan. As to how well-advised that plan is, well, we'll see... Bastet: The cavalry is coming... as soon as they can unravel Namtar's deviousness. As to being worried, well.... Let's just say that a few of the System Lords put up quite a lot of opposition to Namtar's assumption of control, and something had to be done with them.... Man, I can't believe we haven't updated this since before Halloween.... Sabriel_Orion: We're glad you're looking forward to it! Sorry to have kept you waiting so long! wolf_kenobi: Never fear! SG-1 and Qui-Gon will make their appearances in due time. And more is coming, I promise! Magier: Ah, a new reader! Yes, Obi-Wan isn't very happy with this situation. Alas, once a Goa'uld has hold of you, there's not really a way to get rid of it without a lot of help. verd_beskar_prudii: Your wish is my command. Dear Faithful Readers: We do apologize for the very long delay. Between Darth Real Life, Darth Writer's Block, and now the Holiday season being in full swing, it has been difficult to update. Large amounts of the previous fic were written before we even started posting, but when we did some revising, and realized we needed to take the story in a slightly different direction, we were forced to scrap a lot of things and start over. That being said, I have a massive update for your viewing pleasure. This has not been approved yet by Jinngerbread in any way but concept, so it may be edited at some point in the future. However, I think the delay has been so long that y'all deserve something for your patience. Unfortunately, I do not have the PM list myself, and therefore, will not be sending PMs this round, except for those of you who specifically requested in your most recent replies to do so. Perhaps Jinngerbread will be kind enough upon her return to do so. And now, without further ado, I will submit the update in the very next post. -----signature----- Padawan to Master Layren My Ghost Rider Fanfic: http://boards.theforce.net/non_star_wars_fan_fiction/b10808/29492424/p1/?1
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