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earlybird-obi-wan  5852 posts
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Date Posted: 1/1 8:17am Subject: Diary of Kaagi Adin , 2009 challenge 31-10 a lost diary and an undercover mission - Date Edited: 10/31 7:49am (25 edits total) Edited By: earlybird-obi-wan
Title: Diary of Kaagi Adin
Author: Earlybird-obi-wan
Timeframe: before JA about 120 b.b.y.
Characters: Kaagi Adin
Genre: diary
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Summary: Kaagi Adin writes in his diary
Disclaimer: Star Wars belongs to George Lucas.

Entry 1 by me

I am Kaagi Adin and an initiate of the Jedi-temple. I have celebrated my 7th birthday a week ago and got this diary from master Yoda.

Master Yoda has written the first 100 entries in my diary and they are funny to read.
He began my diary when I was 2 and found on my home planet Moniron. These were the first two entries:

First entry done by master Yoda
“We are beings of light.”
Kaagi Adin, little being of light he is.
Dark raven black hair and silver shining eyes.
Found by padawan Aaqu Maerhin and Master Gli-Ra-Ond on Moniron.
Taken to Jeditemple to be trained after getting permission from authorities.

Second entry by master Yoda
Kaagi is becoming friends with padawan Aaqu after week in temple.
Wetted me with plastiform syringe he did.
Got that from padawan Aaqu, he should know better giving kids those toys.
Masters not safe no more. All wetted in restaurants and hallways.
Initiates trouble they give.
But fun it is to see Yaddle wet.


Yes his writing is the same as his speech but he is very nice.
With this diary he gave me a fountain pen and said “new it was when begun this diary I did. Your heritage it is young Kaagi.”
I will continue soon. Now it is time for lessons by master Yoda.

 

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KELIA  10907 posts
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Date Posted: 1/1 10:50am Subject: RE: Diary of Kaagi Adin , 2009 challenge
Masters not safe no more. All wetted in restaurants and hallways.

laugh laugh laugh laugh

But there's nothing wrong with having a little fun!

What a lovely start to Kaagi's diary.

Please PM me when you update

Looking forward to more

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AzureAngel2  9808 posts
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Date Posted: 1/1 2:20pm Subject: RE: Diary of Kaagi Adin , 2009 challenge
First entry done by master Yoda
“We are beings of light.”
Kaagi Adin, little being of light he is.
Dark raven black hair and silver shining eyes.


Sweeeeeeeeet! rose

 

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Valairy_Scot  4039 posts
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Date Posted: 1/1 3:42pm Subject: RE: Diary of Kaagi Adin , 2009 challenge
But fun it is to see Yaddle wet.

I'd have liked to see Yoda and Yaddle a few centuries or so prior. Hint hint.

 

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NYCitygurl  28184 posts
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Date Posted: 1/1 7:42pm Subject: RE: Diary of Kaagi Adin , 2009 challenge
Aww, this is really cute!! Love Yoda's entries happy

 

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MeleanaKenobi  408 posts
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Date Posted: 1/4 8:46pm Subject: RE: Diary of Kaagi Adin , 2009 challenge
But fun it is to see Yaddle wet.

Lol! What's going on in Yoda's head!

 

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earlybird-obi-wan  5852 posts
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Date Posted: 1/10 7:02am Subject: RE: Diary of Kaagi Adin , 2009 challenge what to do with a crying baby? mini challenge
KELIA posted:
Masters not safe no more. All wetted in restaurants and hallways.

laugh laugh laugh laugh

But there's nothing wrong with having a little fun!

What a lovely start to Kaagi's diary.

Please PM me when you update

Looking forward to more

applause applause applause applause


AzureAngel2 posted:
Sweeeeeeeeet!


Valairy_Scot posted:
I'd have liked to see Yoda and Yaddle a few centuries or so prior. Hint hint.


NYCitygurl posted:
Aww, this is really cute!! Love Yoda's entries

More are coming.


You will see a lot of Yoda and Yaddle in this diary.

MeleanaKenobi posted:
But fun it is to see Yaddle wet.

Lol! What's going on in Yoda's head!


he is having fun.

Thanks all for reading and here is the next entry with the mini challenge for January

Entry 2

Lessons, yes I have to follow a lot of them and that way not much time to write in my diary. But today they were interrupted when Master Yoda sped on his hoverpad to the crèche and he said “follow young Kaagi.”

I followed him and there was my friend Aaqu Maerhin carrying a little crying baby.

Master Yoda wrote in the great book where all new arrivals were logged:
Rian Solma, homeworld Bor-Rhimmol, orphaned at 4 months old, species humanoid with lifespan of 250 years.

Master Yoda asked me to help with the new arrival and I did.

Little Rian quietened down soon.
And that was because I smelled something and that something was his diaper. I got a new diaper and gave it to Master Yoda. He changed the diaper and that solved our little problem of a crying Rian.

Master Yoda asked if I wanted to help with feeding and I sat down in a chair. He put Rian in my lap and a bottle in my hand and there I was feeding little Rian. When he was burping some of the milk came on my tunics but I didn’t care.

Aaqu Maerhin told me that the people on Bor Rhimmol saw Rian as a bad omen because he was Force sensitive. They even accused him of causing the flood disaster that killed his parents and many more. And Aaqu has given him a new name because Fabria Slooma sounded like a girls name and that would have given laughters even here in the crèche.

 

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AzureAngel2  9808 posts
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Date Posted: 1/11 10:35am Subject: RE: Diary of Kaagi Adin , 2009 challenge what to do with a crying baby? mini challenge
Master Yoda, linking people as well.

Master Yoda wrote in the great book where all new arrivals were logged:
‘Rian Solma, homeworld Bor-Rhimmol, orphaned at 4 months old, species humanoid with lifespan of 250 years.’

 

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KELIA  10907 posts
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Date Posted: 1/11 2:04pm Subject: RE: Diary of Kaagi Adin , 2009 challenge what to do with a crying baby? mini challenge
Awww...how sweet of Kaagi to help with the baby!

And poor little Rian! I can't imagine anyone blaming a helpless little baby for anything frustrated frustrated frustrated

Good thing the Jedi rescued him.

Great update

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Date Posted: 1/14 2:06am Subject: RE: Diary of Kaagi Adin , 2009 challenge what to do with a crying baby? mini challenge
Awwww...so cute!! love love

 

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earlybird-obi-wan  5852 posts
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Date Posted: 1/21 10:47am Subject: RE: Diary of Kaagi Adin , 2009 challenge 21-1 a new room mate
AzureAngel2 posted:
Master Yoda, linking people as well.

He is wink

KELIA posted:
Awww...how sweet of Kaagi to help with the baby!

And poor little Rian! I can't imagine anyone blaming a helpless little baby for anything frustrated frustrated frustrated

Good thing the Jedi rescued him.

Great update

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yes some people blame innocent babies for their misfortune. But Rian is now quite safe.

Qui-Gon_Reborn thanks for reading.

Entry 3

I have a new room mate and he is a human boy and found by master Arin on Brentaal. He was given as a baby to be raised a Jedi and his parents insisted that he kept his name.

Jemboo giggled when he introduced himself as Aenoeala Jemboola Daeaala.

I started to say welcome Aeno but he interupted me and said call me Jemboo. My people’s entire names are a mouth full and no stranger can pronounce them the way it should be.

Jemboo it is and he is funny.
He is quite adept at anything having to do with mechanicals and computers.

 

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AzureAngel2  9808 posts
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Date Posted: 1/21 4:38pm Subject: RE: Diary of Kaagi Adin , 2009 challenge 21-1 a new room mate with a difficult name
So there are more people as gifted as Ani used to:

Jemboo it is and he is funny.
He is quite adept at anything having to do with mechanicals and computers.


Can´t wait to see more friendships forming.

 

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KELIA  10907 posts
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Date Posted: 1/22 3:51am Subject: RE: Diary of Kaagi Adin , 2009 challenge 21-1 a new room mate with a difficult name
He is quite adept at anything having to do with mechanicals and computers

I'm sure that will come in very handy!

Jemboo giggled when he introduced himself as Aenoeala Jemboola Daeaala.

That is a mouthful!

Good thing he is happy being called by the much easier to pronounce Jemboola

Great update

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Date Posted: 2/1 8:01am Subject: RE: Diary of Kaagi Adin , 2009 challenge 1-2 another heart of the temple
AzureAngel2 posted:
So there are more people as gifted as Ani used to:

Jemboo it is and he is funny.
He is quite adept at anything having to do with mechanicals and computers.


Can´t wait to see more friendships forming.


You will see more of Jemboo

KELIA posted:
He is quite adept at anything having to do with mechanicals and computers

I'm sure that will come in very handy!

Jemboo giggled when he introduced himself as Aenoeala Jemboola Daeaala.

That is a mouthful!

Good thing he is happy being called by the much easier to pronounce Jemboola

Great update

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Thank you and Jemboo is in the next post, trouble for Kaagi and a heart of the temple.
The last part about the spider is from one of our instructors at the fire department.

Entry 4
Seno Fien is one of our teachers and he gave us lessons how to program computers. I already know I want to become a healer like Aaqu Maerhin and Master Gli-Ra-Ond and paid little or no attention to his teachings.
My room mate Jemboo helped me with the programming and that got us ‘the looks’ from teacher Seno Fien.

The looks, yes he can appear quite intimidating and what we had done was ‘not done’ because his computer crashed. What was the case? Jemboo wrote a virus-program to knock out personal files and loaded that in one of the student workstations.
Not the average workstation but the one connected to the Master’s and I was scheduled to use ‘that station’ because Seno Fien wanted to rehearse and I was the first on his list.

And after that disaster I had an extra lesson from Seno Fien and no; it isn’t computer programming. He had taken me to the room where the heart of technology for the entire Jeditemple is.

Yes the mainframes.

I could see them, walk around them, hear their humming and their beeps. And what was my work?

I had to clean the ducts.

Seno Fien smiled when I showed him a large spiderweb with little crumbs and flies caught in it. “They are the first web-designers” he told me.

 

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Date Posted: 2/1 2:01pm Subject: RE: Diary of Kaagi Adin , 2009 challenge 1-2 another heart of the temple
what was my work?

I had to clean the ducts.


Aw, and it wasn't even his fault! Well, not entirely.

Oh well, at least he got a valuable lesson out of it.

Great update

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Date Posted: 2/4 12:33pm Subject: RE: Diary of Kaagi Adin , 2009 challenge 1-2 another heart of the temple
I hope so, too.

Sometimes students learn something... rolling_eyes ... sometimes they don´t!

 

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