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Date Posted: 2/8 7:14pm Subject: Blood Ties - Master/Padawan OCs set circa 4950 BBY - COMPLETE! - Date Edited: 3/20 7:16pm (7 edits total) Edited By: DarthXan318
Title: Blood Ties
Author: DarthXan318
Timeframe: ~4950 BBY
Characters: Calys & Alexia Rivers (OCs)
Genre: Action/Adventure, Mystery, OCs
Summary:
Jedi Master Calys Rivers and her Padawan, Alexia, get sent on a seemingly ordinary investigation, but nothing is ever as it seems - especially since Calys has her own reasons for taking the assignment in the first place.
Notes:
- In this particular setting Jedi are allowed to marry, and Jedi children are not uncommon.
- Calys and Alexia Rivers are both characters from the Dark History: Tears of the Force RPG, and this story takes place just before the events in the game start. That said, you shouldn't need to know anything about the game to follow it - in fact it might work out better if you don't, because that way you won't know how it ends. tongue

Many thanks to Ktala, creator of the RPG these characters came out of; Saintheart, who provided much inspiration for Calys' background and this story; and Trimaj, who very kindly beta'd this monster. grin




The Great Hyperspace Wars are all but won. The Sith Empire is finished, annihilated through a combination of internal strife and the efforts of the Republic and its Jedi, and the galaxy is slowly healing from the horrors of war.

Yet scattered pockets of resistance, be it Sith or those loyal to the dark order, remain to be hunted down and dispatched by teams of Jedi - and for some, the hunt is personal ...


Chapter 1

Twenty Years Ago

"She's beautiful." Keri, the Jedi Healer, smiled down at the infant in Calys' arms. "Have you decided on a name yet?"

"Alexia," Calys said. "'Where I was born, it means 'Guardian'."

Keri nodded thoughtfully. "It's a good name." She hesitated. "Have you - "

"No." Calys voice was abruptly harsh. The child, attuned even now to her mother's mood, squirmed and let out a tiny wail. Calys quickly soothed her daughter, her expression softening, then looked up at Keri again. "It's better this way," she said quietly. "Alexia is
my daughter - no matter who her father is."

Keri evidently didn't agree. It wasn't her decision, but neither could she let it go. "What will you do when she's older?" she said instead. "She's going to start asking about her father, Calys, and you know it."

"Most of the children here don't know their parents - "

"But they know
who their parents are. That's the difference. She's not going to know who her father is - and for that matter, neither are you. What if she turns out to look like him?"

"Then I'll know, won't I?" Calys snapped.

For a moment, the two Jedi glared at one another. In the end Keri sighed, relenting. "She's your daughter," she agreed quietly. "I only hope you know what you're doing."


Padawan Alexia Rivers sat cross-legged, eyes closed, in the middle of the room. It would have been an unremarkable posture if not for the fact that she was also floating approximately a metre off the ground, and that various items and sundry were revolving around her in lazy arcs. A bit like planets orbiting the sun, really. The only catch with that analogy was, of course, that she wasn't glowing. Hm. Perhaps that could be arranged -

"Having fun?" a voice said dryly from the doorway.

Alexia's eyes flew open, but to her credit she didn't fall or send items flying off at strange angles. Instead, a grin blossomed on her face. "Hey, Mom! That was fast."

Her mother smiled indulgently at her. "I see you're using your time productively. Yes, the meeting with the Circle was shorter than expected."

"And?"

An uninformed observer might have interpreted this as rudeness, but Calys took it for what it was: a request for more information. The Master's Circle had summoned Calys a few hours ago, a surprising event in itself, for Jedi Masters - and Calys especially - were usually granted a rather large degree of autonomy, and had not deigned to say what it was about. Naturally, her Padawan was curious.

As Alexia straightened and landed on the ground, settling the things she'd been levitating back in place, the Jedi Master crossed the room and plugged a datacard into the terminal.

"This is Manpha," Calys said, pointing at the screen. "It's a small planet on the Outer Rim, not on any major hyperlanes, but Republic Intelligence has picked up a distress call originating from an outpost there. From what we can tell - the message was rather long and garbled - they've been experiencing some local trouble and are requesting reinforcements."

Interestedly, Alexia peered around her mother at the screen. Manpha was a small planet on the Outer Rim, climate listed as "swamp, warm, humid," had a tiny low-tech indigenous population, was in the middle of nowhere, and had absolutely no significance whatsoever. "Why put an outpost there in the first place?" Alexia wondered aloud.

Her mother shot her a look that was half rebuke, half amusement. "Don't be so sure, Padawan. There may be more there than meets the eye here."

Alexia grinned. "Of course, Master."

"The Circle has asked us to investigate," Calys continued. "We'll be working with a small Republic task force, one of the new patrol cruisers -"

"Do they think the Sith are involved?" Alexia asked, frowning. There were plenty of patrol cruisers available now, with the war done, but they were mostly reserved for assignments where Sith involvement was suspected. Manpha, though, was on the wrong side of the galaxy... "It's a bit far from their territory, isn't it?"

Calys' mouth quirked up in an oddly feral half-grin. "Apparently they do. They wouldn't ask for Jedi otherwise." She pulled the datacard out and pocketed it. "Get your things. We'll leave in an hour."

---

Alexia tossed a pack onto her bed and frowned around her room. What did she need?

A change of clothes and her lightsaber repair kit went in first. Lightsabers were a relatively new invention - at least the type that no longer needed external power packs - but the downside was they needed recalibration often. Some old-school Jedi like her mother still favoured swords as a result, but lightsabers were fast replacing swords as the weapon of choice anyway. Small, light, and concealable; the perfect weapon.

She paused over the collection of gadgets that would be illegal if she hadn't obtained them through Republic Intelligence. They were going to the facility as official investigators; would she need the electronic lock pick, the hand scanner? Might as well. Alexia tossed them in the bag on top of her spare robes. The false ID chit was, as always, nestled in her boot next to her vibroblade. It said she was a civilian named Lisa Calrek, but swiping it at a reader would alert Intel to her position for immediate pickup; it was her emergency out.

Not that she anticipated alerting Intel would do her any good there, but Lisa Calrek also had unusually high security clearance for a civilian.

Within minutes, she was packed. Jedi didn't need much - some claimed that a Jedi needed nothing but the Force and a lightsaber, which wasn't entirely true, but nonetheless her pack was as light as she could make it. She spent the remaining time tinkering with her lightsaber, before Calys commed her to say a shuttle had arrived to take them to the ship.

The patrol cruiser they were assigned to was the Outrider, one of the newer models that had been commissioned only half a year ago. It was captained by a tall man named Niko Savanche that looked straight out of a military recruitment holo – Alexia’s first impression was of a knife-creased man who was a stickler for regulations. She tried not to groan. This would be a long assignment if they had to fight their captain every step of the way.

Happily, that turned out to not be the case. Captain Savanche broke protocol from the start by meeting them personally at the Outrider’s main hangar bay. "Welcome aboard, master Jedi," he said, saluting smartly.

"Thank you, Captain." Calys bowed. So did Alexia. No need for introductions; the appropriate files had been sent ahead. And indeed, the Captain only nodded, as if he wasn't expecting one.

He waved forward a junior officer. "Lieutenant Aschel will show you to your quarters and make sure you have everything you need." The deckplates rumbled: they had jumped to hyperspace. Alexia was surprised they had done so without the Captain's presence on the bridge. "And then, if you don't mind, I'd like to hold a mission briefing - I apologise for the rush, but time's of the essence - it's good of you to be available at such short notice."

"Of course," Calys murmured.

During the mission briefing, Savanche proved to be both cooperative and intelligent. In hindsight, she should have expected that; Intelligence didn't usually like the knife-creased regulation-bound ones, especially on joint assignment with Jedi. He deferred easily to Calys' judgement when it came to most details - "You've had much more experience at this than I," - but one thing he insisted on was having the Outrider hold position at high orbit, rather than at the edge of the system as the Jedi Master wanted.

"The point is to escape detection," Calys explained.

Savanche shook his head. "If you run into trouble," he pointed out, "we'll be too far away to help you from all the way out there. And if the insurgents have the sort of scanners that'll pick up a ship in orbit, anyway, they're better-equipped than we thought."

"What sort of reinforcements, exactly, did the Manpha outpost call for?" Alexia asked. She was looking among the documents Intelligence had provided, but couldn't find a copy of the transmission.

"Equipment, supplies, and some more manpower." Savanche passed her the flimsy. "That's what we'll be sending down, anyway, along with the two of you."

Alexia frowned at it. The transmission had been incredibly garbled, even despite Intel's best efforts at cleaning it up - their long-range comm was evidently suffering. But what did get through was - "They're asking for a new tech and a rifle squad to bolster the garrison?"

"Probably overburdened making repairs." Savanche sighed. "Stupid, really ... they're supposed to be reducing their operations, with the war over."

"According to this, they've been having this local trouble for some time," Calys said. She was reviewing their history of requisitions, which Intelligence had thoughtfully included. "They've been requesting increasing amounts of spare parts for several months now." She grimaced, set it aside for another flimsy. "Typical ... they thought they could handle it on their own."

Alexia had flipped to the next page of the transmission. "Huh. Intercepted transmission ... something, something Oberon orders something. The insurgent leader?"

"It's possible." Calys' voice was neutral, uninterested. Alexia glanced up at her - she hadn't looked up from the flimsy she was reading. That was odd, her Master didn't usually dismiss leads out of hand like that...

"No mention of an Oberon anywhere else," Savanche said. "What about their testing operations?"

They continued along that vein for a while, piecing together the contents of the dossier to form a mostly complete picture of the situation. The Manpha outpost, codenamed Blackberry after some local fuel plant, housed an advanced weapons research facility. They had been responsible for many innovations that had been instrumental to the war effort, but in recent months, had been experiencing a pattern of equipment failure, cause unknown, local insurgents suspected.

But what struck Alexia was that there was nothing else: nothing, really, to indicate Sith involvement. Manpha was far from Sith space; an outside force inciting rebellion could be them, but the war had left a lot of desperate people with ships and guns. And 'Oberon' - she had a feeling that was, whatever it was, significant in some way. But it could be anyone.

The rest of the journey passed uneventfully.

---

By the time they arrived at Manpha, they still hadn't got a clear reply from Blackberry. What got through, though, didn't sound particularly panicked, so Calys decided not to deviate from procedure. Shuttles carried the Jedi and the requisitioned supplies and personnel down to the planet, and as agreed the Outrider would be waiting in high orbit in case of trouble. But as for the outpost itself ...

"It doesn't look like much," Alexia said doubtfully, eyeballing it from the viewport of their shuttle. There were precious few knots of indigenous civilization, and the sole Republic presence was the Blackberry facility, a growing silver dot on Manpha's surface. Other than that, it was just a whole load of swamp.

"What have I told you about judging things by their appearance?" Calys said mildly.

Alexia grinned. "Not to."

"Scamp."

"I try, Master."




Comments? Thoughts? Rotten fruit? I welcome any and all feedback from the peanut gallery... grin

 

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Date Posted: 2/8 7:50pm Subject: RE: Blood Ties - Master/Padawan OCs set circa 4950 BBY, just after the Great Hyperspace Wars
i believe you know what i think about this, but i'll reiterate.

very good job xan. i like the characters, and they're very well formed (would expect nothing less from you wink ), and i look forward to finding out more about them.

never said this, but i love the addition of the flashbacks, telling of a story on two levels and such. not a terribly easy thing to do.

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Date Posted: 2/8 8:22pm Subject: RE: Blood Ties - Master/Padawan OCs set circa 4950 BBY, just after the Great Hyperspace Wars
Ya for background information when there's hardly any of that in Dark History with everyone else whistling

Can't wait to see what you may be adding to this! grin Alexia has always been an interesting character and it's nice to have this opportunity to learn a bit more about her! Keep up the good work Xan! peace

 

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Date Posted: 2/8 8:31pm Subject: RE: Blood Ties - Master/Padawan OCs set circa 4950 BBY, just after the Great Hyperspace Wars
Great start, Xan! I'm really enjoying the characters you've created--or flushed out, either one--here. Well done! I really like my initial feel of Alexia...she's someone I'm already cheering for already. Awesome! Please PM me when you update this, if you're doing that sort of thing.

Even though the story is super so far and there's no reason to do so, I've always wanted to do this. Sorry.

<hucks a squishy tomato and runs away>


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Date Posted: 2/9 12:00am Subject: RE: Blood Ties - Master/Padawan OCs set circa 4950 BBY, just after the Great Hyperspace Wars
Great stuff.

Now post more. MORE I SAY! tongue

 

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What he said. tongue

I really enjoyed this, Xan. I love reading fanfics about RPF characters. grin

 

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Date Posted: 2/9 4:38pm Subject: RE: Blood Ties - Master/Padawan OCs set circa 4950 BBY, just after the Great Hyperspace Wars
PM updates: yeah, why not, I'll do those. Anyone who wants on it, just say the word!


Trimaj - Yes, I think I must've made you read three drafts of that chapter or something. tongue Thanks!

Sarge - Haha yeah, we're backstory land in there. whistling I'm glad you like!

Perigrine - *ducks tomato* laugh Thanks! Keep cheering for Alexia, she might need it ... grin

Ramza - Yeah yeah. tongue It's actually all written already, so updates will follow regular-like. wink

Sinre - Thanks! I hope this won't disappoint.. grin


Next update should be, say ... sometime this week. As I said, it's already all written out, so yes... grin

 

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yes. you did. tongue

and the real holdup is me betaing it. trying to make sure she doesn't post the whole thing in one day. tongue

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I wouldn't do that ... blush

 

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Date Posted: 2/11 6:35pm Subject: RE: Blood Ties - Master/Padawan OCs set circa 4950 BBY, just after the Great Hyperspace Wars
Alrighty, next chapter! I'll probably do updates every three or four days or so.

Not much action yet, but we'll get there ...


Chapter 2

Fourteen Years Ago

Calys knelt by her daughter's bed, her expression pensive. Alexia was sleeping, finally - the child had far too much energy, even after attending classes with the rest of the younglings all day and then excitedly describing it to her mother in the evenings. Calys suspected that Alexia sometimes felt as if she didn't quite belong with the others - none of those in her class were children of Jedi. At least, not children of living Jedi - Ariana's boy was Alexia's age, but her old friend was long dead, and he lived in the creche with the rest of the younglings. More and more Jedi were involving themselves in the war effort, an occupation which left little time for children.

The Jedi Master let out a soft sigh, reaching out to stroke the child's hair. Alexia stirred slightly, but didn't wake.


She's going to start asking about her father, and you know it.

Calys had not expected to have that conversation so soon. Then again, it wasn't entirely unexpected - some of the younglings in Alexia's class had come into the Order late enough to remember their parents, and they would swap stories. Alexia had always been bright; she had undoubtedly realized fairly quickly that the rest of the children had fathers.

Unlike her.

So, like the innocent six-year-old she was, she had asked her mother.

Taken by surprise, Calys hadn't handled it well. The memory of the pain was still too fresh - and it didn't help that Alexia was very persistent as only a small child could be. She had snapped at her daughter, and for the first time Alexia had looked truly afraid -

No, not her proudest moment. Calys grimaced. She had regretted it almost instantly, of course, and apologised - but that still didn't make it right. To lose her temper like that had been decidedly un-Jedi-like of her ... but more than that, it had been wrong, and she knew it.

And the right thing to do was to find out. Find out, and tell him, she owed them both that much ... or not, depending on the result.

Yet - Calys still couldn't bring herself to do it. Alexia's face, peaceful in sleep, gave her no hint about which of the two it could be - she was a spitting image of Calys at that age, a likeness so close it was startling.
My daughter.

No, she would not run the test. Could not.


The shuttles touched down on the facility's tiny landing field. Master and Padawan were the last to disembark, and were immediately assaulted by the swamp's heat and humidity. Alexia wrinkled her nose as they walked down the ramp; Calys didn't turn, but nonetheless managed to convey a strong sense of Stop that to her Padawan through the Force.

A tall, thin man was overseeing the unloading, but upon noticing the two Jedi, hurried over to greet them. His uniform held a commander's insignia, but he didn't look much like a officer; more like a scientist. "Master Jedi, thank you for arriving so quickly. We weren't expecting aid to arrive for a few days yet. I'm Commander Miles Karrer, head of this facility."

Calys bowed her head courteously in greeting; a heartbeat later, Alexia followed suit. "The Republic has not forgotten you, Commander," she assured him. "I am Jedi Master Calys Rivers and this is my Padawan, Alexia."

The man hesitated for a brief moment, his gaze flickering between the two - a not uncommon reaction, for the pair looked very alike. Alexia was a few centimetres shorter and had the traditional Padawan braid off one side, but the pair had the same dark hair, blue-grey eyes and slender build. The relationship between them was unmistakable, really, even though they introduced themselves as master and apprentice rather than mother and daughter.

Alexia hid a grin.

To his credit, Karrer recovered quickly. "Charmed, charmed - now please, this way, let's get out of this infernal heat -"

Inside the facility, the air was blessedly cool and dry. The man kept up a steady monologue as they walked and Calys interjected now and then with questions or comments, which left Alexia free to observe - both with her eyes and the Force.

"I'm afraid we can't tell you very much about the situation," the man was saying now. "The guerrillas - they do hit-and-run raids - generally just to steal food and supplies or destroy as much equipment as they can, always in and out before we can do anything about it. As for why - we've no idea. The locals used to just ignore us, until suddenly they - didn't."

"What about your garrison?" Calys asked.

"They're, ah -" He winced. "It's not a very large garrison, Master Jedi. Most of our personnel are scientists. We've just a token defence, a flight of four starfighters and a half squad of troopers, and they're not very good for ground security. Even when we keep a fighter on standby at all times, the guerrillas get away before we can scramble. It's almost as if they know exactly when we're coming."

And that was the crux of the problem - such consistent evasion could point at Sith involvement. Meanwhile, Alexia had fanned out her senses to encompass the complex - the usual mix of sentients - beyond - nothing. Of course, a Sith would be adept at hiding as well.

Calys turned to her expectantly. "Nothing definite, Master," Alexia admitted.

"Mm." The Jedi Master turned away without comment. Alexia frowned at her. Calys had been preoccupied ever since they embarked... curiously so. This wasn't like her.

"Perhaps a tour of the facility?" Karrer suggested, rubbing his hands together nervously. "Or some refreshment - I'm afraid we've only got the basics, but -"

"I'd like to have a look around, actually," Alexia interjected. There was something niggling at the back of her head, something she was missing...

Calys shot her a quick glance, but only said, "Alright. Commander, why don't you show me your records - sensor logs, history of repairs ... they might show a pattern."

Karrer paused. "I'm not sure - some areas are restricted -"

"I won't break anything," Alexia assured him with a smile.

"My Padawan will be fine," Calys said firmly. "Those logs, Captain?"

---

Of course, there was no way Karrer would have refused the Jedi Master, no matter what he thought of letting an outsider go unchaperoned. Calys definitely had a way with people.

So Alexia wandered around the facility, intent on exploring. Blackberry seemed like the usual prefab Republic outpost: all grey plasteel walls and modular rooms. There were two mess halls, one for the scientists (of which Karrer was one; Alexia realised belatedly that he had had the tech patch underneath his insignia) and one for the small garrison. One kitchen. A couple of rec rooms. But other than the garrison's ready room, next to the entrance, it was mostly living quarters on the ground level; Alexia was puzzled for a while before she saw the stairwell leading down, with "Danger: Authorised Personnel Only" marked prominently on the door.

Ah. That made sense. It also explained why the facility looked so tiny from above, if the bulk of their research operations were housed underground. Alexia pushed at the door: locked.

She got her civilian ID out of her boot and swiped it at the lock. The door opened, and she went down.

The lower level looked much the same as the one above, except it was somehow ... quieter. Alexia's footsteps seemed to echo loudly as she walked, peering into one room after another. For a weapons research facility, they didn't have much security ... or many scientists, for that matter. She hadn't seen a single one since going downstairs.

She pushed open a door marked "Laboratory 2A" and went inside. An array of machinery lined the walls; screens hooked up to various things displayed readouts of some kind. In the middle was something that looked like the guts of a starfighter. Interested, Alexia prowled carefully around it -

Focused as she was, she nearly missed hearing the door open. Alexia started half-guiltily and turned to see a young man in a lab coat enter the room. He was tall and broad-shouldered, with dark hair that decidedly pushed at the limits of length regulations ... and was frowning in her direction. "Hey," he said suspiciously, striding over. "Get away from that. You don't have clearance -"

"I'm a Jedi Padawan," Alexia said, stepping away and holding her hands up in a peaceable gesture. "I arrived today with my Master; we're here to investigate that trouble you've been having. Commander Karrer authorised me to look around."

If anything, his frown deepened. "Really? 'Cause that's got nothing to do with the research." He bent over one of the readouts. "This is really sensitive stuff -"

"I know." Alexia said. "I just -"

"Better not have touched anything," he muttered.

"Well, I didn't." Alexia tried not to be annoyed as he checked this readout and that. He clearly didn't believe she knew better than to touch things ... but he was just doing his job, after all. Best let him do it.

In a couple of moments, he straightened. "Sorry," he said, a little sheepishly. "It's just that these things - they take ages to set up properly, with the right controls and everything."

"It's alright," Alexia said. Now that he wasn't being a prig, she felt a little abashed herself - what if she had disrupted something? This really wasn't related to the investigation at all; she was just indulging her curiosity. "Listen - I think we got off on the wrong foot there," she said. "I'm Alexia - and I really am here to help -"

"Darien," he said. Alexia shook the hand he extended. "I'm a junior scientist here - technically an officer too, we all are, but down here we just go around in lab coats. I've been working on this prototype for some time now, that's why I was worried - I didn't mean anything by it." He gave her an apologetic smile, and Alexia found herself smiling back.

---

Alexia reported back to Calys some time later, having found nothing out of the ordinary. Once she described what she was doing, Darien had been most helpful - he had been willing to show her around and describe the various projects that were ongoing in the facility, providing insights beyond what Alexia could figure out by looking. But there was still nothing, really, that they were doing in any of the levels that seemed to be a reason for the locals to suddenly attack.

Darien had said that there was another site, a couple of minutes out, that they used to test prototypes, but it did seem likely now that someone was behind the insurgents. Who, though, remained unclear; Alexia still had the odd feeling at the back of her head, but she had combed the facility from top to bottom without finding anything.

"Well," Calys said, once she was done, "no help for that. The sensor records weren't any use; it turns out they've got their eyes pointed at the sky, in anticipation for an external attack, and not at the ground. The insurgents just slip under them, so by the time visuals pick them up, it's too late to do anything about it."

Alexia grimaced. "That doesn't sound smart."

"It does make sense given the war, but someone seriously underestimated the locals." Calys sighed. "Naturally, it's come back to haunt them now."

"What about the other logs?" Alexia asked, sitting down on a couch. Their assigned quarters were strangely spacious for a small facility in the middle of nowhere, complete with a lounge and dining area.

"About what we expected. The attacks started approximately four months ago, starting with minor stuff - petty vandalism - and quickly escalated to armed raids targeting specific equipment. No pattern, nothing."

"Targeting? So they always know what they're after?"

"Yes; they go in, destroy some property, and get out. It's also telling that they always aim for destruction, not theft."

Alexia frowned. "Are they sure about that? Could've missed something, in the confusion."

"Apparently they found enough parts, and serial numbers on those parts, to indicate nothing had been actually stolen." Calys shrugged. "Karrer had a long, detailed explanation on their cleanup procedures, but I won't bore you with the details."

"What about -"

"Enough!" Calys looked amused and exasperated; Alexia grinned sheepishly. "If there's anything here, we're not seeing it. In any case, Karrer has agreed to take us out to their testing grounds tomorrow; we might find something there."



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Date Posted: 2/12 11:17am Subject: RE: Blood Ties - Master/Padawan OCs set circa 4950 BBY - Updated 12 Feb
Very nice update! You have a great pair of characters here, and an interesting mystery that I want to get to the bottom of. Keep up the awesome work!

 

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Date Posted: 2/12 5:03pm Subject: RE: Blood Ties - Master/Padawan OCs set circa 4950 BBY - Updated 12 Feb
i'm with JP up there. awesome pair of characters, and i'm glad i'm getting to read about them before anyone else. grin

good update on this, and most definitely look forward to seeing where you take this mystery, i must admit.

She had snapped at her daughter, and for the first time Alexia had looked truly afraid -

i remember reading that the first time and being a bit surprised, honestly. definitely wanna know why that is such a sore spot for calys. seems rather abnormal for her to react that way at all.

"Enough!" Calys looked amused and exasperated; Alexia grinned sheepishly.

yes, alexia is indeed someone who would be considered... exasperating. great job overall xan. very true to the characters, and excellent job bringing them to life. i expect nothing less from you, actually.

and yes, i know you wouldn't. wink

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Date Posted: 2/12 7:50pm Subject: RE: Blood Ties - Master/Padawan OCs set circa 4950 BBY - Updated 12 Feb
Peregrine - Whew, I was worried that the mystery buildup would get a bit draggy. Thanks! grin

Trimaj - Hahaha, yes on both counts. Alexia can be stubborn. And Calys has good reason for that to be a sore spot, as you'll see. wink

Actually, what did you think the reason was when you read it? I'm most curious if anyone has theories regarding the mystery (or mysteries).

 

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Date Posted: 2/14 12:33pm Subject: RE: Blood Ties - Master/Padawan OCs set circa 4950 BBY - Updated 12 Feb
well, i figured either she'd been raped by someone, had a relationship with someone she didn't want to have it with or something along those lines, and the result of that was that her other lover (who she actually wanted) was not terribly pleased and THAT had a falling out as well. either that, or she was extremely promiscuous, but that wouldn't explain the issues with knowing terribly well.

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Date Posted: 2/15 11:16pm Subject: RE: Blood Ties - Master/Padawan OCs set circa 4950 BBY - Updated 12 Feb
...I liked it. tongue

You've got a good, solid way of writing that drew me in. It's just got that sort of heft to it, if that makes any sense. Not an overwhelming way of writing, but it's not minimalistic; just right would be the way I'd put it.

 

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Date Posted: 2/16 9:22pm Subject: RE: Blood Ties - Master/Padawan OCs set circa 4950 BBY - Updated 12 Feb - Date Edited: 2/18 7:54am (2 edits total) Edited By: DarthXan318
Trimaj - Something along one of those lines, yep... mischief

Peng - Thanks! grin


And ... Chapter 3! Danger approacheth ...



Chapter 3

Eight Years Ago

Alexia glared at the offending remote, lightsaber angled defensively. Calys, watching from the sidelines, suppressed a smile. The remote exercise was not one of Alexia's strengths, and as a result, was the one she was forced to practice the most. Privately, Calys thought she had the potential to do a lot better if she focused, but she had a tendency to let her mind wander -

Like now.
The remote spun, darted, fired. Alexia, caught off guard, swung her blade down an instant too late. The bolt caught her on her thigh. She cursed in Bothan.

"Language," Calys said mildly, stopping the remote with a wave of her hand. Alexia glared at her too. Calys' return gaze was serene; no need to say anything, they both knew why she had let it through. And she had already discovered silent disapproval worked far better than scolding when it came to her daughter.

"None of the other initiates practice this much," Alexia complained.

"The ones that can't last fifteen minutes against a remote are," Calys said pointedly.

Alexia grimaced. "I could stop the remote with the Force," she challenged.

Calys was amused. It would be well within her abilities, true ... though not the point of the exercise. "Yes, you could," she agreed. "But can you stop three, or four - or a shooter at twenty paces?"

Alexia scowled rebelliously, but her expression soon turned thoughtful. "If you used three or four remotes, wouldn't they just crash into each other?"

Laughing, Calys reactivated the remote. "You would think of that. Come on - again - "

Alexia brought her lightsaber back up with a sigh.


That night, Alexia dreamed ...

At the top of a dark tower, a man and woman dueled with lightsabers. The man was laughing; the woman stabbed high, low, then whipped her blade around and slashed down - a manoeuvre that was blindingly fast, and somehow familiar. But he was fast too - her blade only caught the edge of his dark robes. His laughter died. Now they were talking -

Flash. Fighting again, faster than the eye could follow, their blades a blur of light.

Flash. The man was down. The woman went for the kill - he lunged forward, shoulder-charging - she staggered back, a knife hilt protruding from her side.

Flash. Talking again. Alexia couldn't hear, but she knew it was disturbing, highly disturbing, and it concerned her.

Alexia. Alexia.

"Alexia!"

She woke with a start. It took a moment for her to remember where she was - on Manpha, on a standard-issue military bunk, with her mother's face looking worriedly down at her.

"Are you alright?" Calys was sitting on the edge of the bunk. "You were calling out in your sleep."

"Uh." Alexia sat up, running a hand over her face. "Yeah. Had a - a bad dream - but it's okay."

Something flickered across her mother's expression. "Just a dream?"

Alexia grimaced. The Jedi Order as a whole didn't hold that much stock in dreams as visions of the future, but Calys for some reason always seemed inclined to believe in them. And follow them. Visions of the future are signposts and snares. "Just a dream," Alexia assured her.

Calys smiled crookedly. "Well then." She patted Alexia's knee and rose. "Get up; it's early, but the sooner we get going, the better."

---

Karrer met them at the entrance. Darien was with him; he grinned at Alexia from behind Karrer's shoulder, and tossed her a wink and a casual salute.

"What are you doing here?" Alexia said, surprised.

"Ah..." Karrer glanced from her to Darien. "I see you've met. Er, Lieutenant Varn is far more knowledgeable than I am when it comes to our testing processes, so he's accompanying us to answer any questions you might have." That speech had the flavour of one memorised from a handbook somewhere.

Calys' expression betrayed no surprise, although Alexia hadn't mentioned Darien beyond 'a tech showed me around'. "Certainly. A pleasure to meet you, Lieutenant."

"If you'll follow me -" Karrer led the way out.

They took a landspeeder out to the testing facility. "We test our weapons a couple of klicks away," Karrer explained on the way there. "It's safer that way. Don't want to risk a misfire and a chain reaction taking out the whole facility." Darien stirred, but he said nothing.

The testing facility was a tiny little ferrocrete bunker in the middle of a circle of burnt vegetation. "I see what you mean about safety," Calys commented dryly. Alexia agreed wholeheartedly; as they drew closer, she could see the scorch marks on the bunker.

"It's perfectly safe in there," Karrer assured her brightly. "It's one of our creations, as well - a protective blast casing that can withstand everything we throw at it."

"The control chamber itself is several metres underground," Darien offered. "We hook sensors and the weapons up to the outside, there -" Once he pointed them out, Alexia could see the ports nestled in the walls close to the ground. "We've actually only had one misfire - the missile's fusing was faulty, and it detonated right after launch - so the sensors usually survive."

"Do you usually aim your weapons so close to the bunker?" Alexia asked. She was eyeing the circle of burnt vegetation a little warily.

"No, no," Karrer said absently. He was entering a code into the keypad; a section of bunker wall slid open. "We aim them rather far away. Usually we've got a spotter as well, one of the starfighters - the pilot runs with shields up and reports in. Those scorches are all from the missile blast Varn mentioned."

That wasn't reassuring.

Karrer motioned them inside, still talking. "We test all our prototypes from here - most of ours are weapons for heavy cruisers, but we've got some starfighter tech too, like Varn's work." That was what Alexia had stumbled upon yesterday. Karrer palmed open the inner door, revealing a turbolift. "In here, please -"

A short turbolift ride later and the four of them were in a surprisingly large control room. Consoles and flatscreens lined the walls, surrounding a large holoprojector in the centre. "This is the control chamber," Karrer said unnecessarily. He flicked some switches; the screens came to life. He pointed at them in turn. "Recent tests, current schedule, sensor readouts, comm and data links to the main facility - everything we need."

There was a definite tone of enthusiasm in his voice that hadn't been there before. Evidently the outpost commander was a scientist first, officer distant second.

"Do you have anything scheduled?" Alexia asked.

Karrer shook his head. "No - the prototype we were going to test was destroyed in the last raid. We're rebuilding it, but it will take time."

Interesting. So the insurgents were very lucky - or had enough knowledge on the inner workings of the facility to know what to destroy.

"Well," Calys said briskly, "suppose we work through your records. Lieutenant, pull up the last test, and we'll work backwards from there."

---

Here again Darien proved to be a major help: he knew the control room backwards and forwards, and it turned out he was usually the one in charge of running the tests. Karrer had delegated that particular duty to him a few months ago. But there was nothing in these records either.

Alexia swiped a hand over her face and sighed. They had been at it for several hours now, going through the sensor records - they had quickly realised that the test records contained the only possibly useful sensor records available, for they recorded tests a lot more thoroughly than they monitored their defensive perimeter. But there was nothing; not even a hint of a blip at the edge of the recordings.

The holos were fascinating, but that wasn't the point here. The point was, the insurgents never approached when the prototypes were being tested, almost as if they knew when the sensors would be up ... but the sensors weren't supposed to be up now ...

"Can you turn on the sensors?" Alexia asked without thinking.

Karrer blinked. "Why? They're only on when we're testing -"

"Yes, I know, but that doesn't mean you can't switch them on now."

Darien gave her an unreadable look. Calys looked thoughtful. "A hunch?" the Jedi Master asked.

Alexia tried not to squirm. For all that Jedi were supposed to trust the Force, following vague inexplicable instincts was generally frowned upon - a holdover from reckless Jedi endangering lives during the war. "A feeling, Master."

"They won't be here now," Karrer said. "They're never here when we test - and we were supposed to have one now -"

"Which makes this a perfect opportunity for them, if they knew that," Alexia said. The itchy feeling at the back of her mind was growing; she could not ignore it. "Turn on the sensors."

Karrer sighed. "Do it, Lieutenant."

Darien hesitated, then crossed over to the sensor console. He began flipping switches; something hummed -

"Forget the checklist," Calys interjected. It was Alexia's turn to give her a thoughtful look - how had she known that? "Just turn it on."

Darien didn't quite mutter, but it was a close thing. He flicked all the switches up at once and pressed a couple of buttons; the display in front of him sprang to life. "Sensors active," he reported. "Panning around ... looks clean."

Alexia had crossed the room to stand behind him. "Go back a bit," she murmured, leaning in. She pointed at the display. "Right there - there. What is that?"

Darien squinted. "It's just a little blip - a wrinkle, even. Could be an animal - there are some rather large lizards here. Besides, it's right at the edge, which means it's too far -"

"Not quite," Calys said. "These are short-range sensors, correct?"

"Well, yes." Darien's gaze flickered up and back at the Jedi Master. "But -"

"Don't you have long-range sensors as well?"

"Only at the main facility - the perimeter monitoring -"

Calys turned to Karrer. "Comm the main facility and get them to patch the main sensor readouts over here. It's right at the edge on these, meaning it'll be midrange for them."

Karrer looked at the three of them. "I - yes, of course, Master Jedi." He picked up the comm headset and spoke quickly to the watch officer... and whatever the watch officer said, Karrer's face grew ashen. "Ah - we're having a glitch in our main sensor system. They expect it will be fixed soon -"

But not soon enough. Now Alexia was definitely sure something was up.

"You say you usually run with a spotter," Calys said, her voice dangerously even. Alexia knew what that tone meant, even if they didn't. "Scramble a spotter."

"Right away." Karrer was no fool. He spoke rapidly into the headset.

"Then I think we should get back to the main building," Calys continued, still in the same calm tone. "We aren't needed here, and you will want to organise defensive measures if it comes to that, Commander - let's go -"

Karrer seemed to deflate. Alexia felt sorry for him; he was really a scientist, not a commanding officer. Darien quickly patched the sensors through to the main facility, and they left.

---

"Sir!" A lieutenant accosted them as soon as they entered the main compound. He had the look of a career soldier and no tech patch underneath the insignia. "The spotter reports anomalous sensor readings to the north - a lot of them. She says the trees are preventing her from getting a clear sensor reading, but it seems clear that the insurgents are here in force. This isn't just a raiding party."

Karrer stared. "I - are you sure, Serat? But they never - we never catch them in the act -"

"Yes, sir, but thanks to your advice -" Serat's gaze flickered over to the two Jedi "- we have this time."

"How long until they're here?" Alexia asked.

"An hour. Maybe less. What are your orders?"

Karrer's mouth opened and closed a couple of times. He looked lost. Alexia tried not to wince: he was in no shape to command the defence. How he'd managed to hold things together this long, she had no idea. But now they had to figure out how to beat back the rebels without letting him get in the way or setting themselves up for legal trouble later. The Republic military, after the war, was a little touchy about Jedi forcibly overruling the officer in charge.

Calys began, "Commander, under the circumstances -"

Karrer looked at her, relief in his expression. "You've got an idea, Master Jedi?"

"Indeed," Calys said. "I would advise you to scramble the rest of the starfighters. Have your garrison form a defensive perimeter, and lock down any external equipment against sabotage. And signal the Outrider; we may need backup -"

Lieutenant Serat visibly winced. "Ah - our comm tower's offline. It's been acting up recently, so it was taken down for repairs last night."

So they were on their own. Alexia didn't voice what her Master must be thinking as well: what an inexpressibly stupid idea that had been. A faulty comm tower was better than no comm tower.

But that meant - the insurgents' timing was perfect. Too perfect, even if they had a Sith. With the comm tower down and the sensors off, they would have been caught completely off guard and unable to call for help. There was something she was missing, Alexia was sure ... something she wasn't thinking of ... something really obvious. What was it?

"We'll manage without," Calys said briskly. "Commander?"

"Yes, yes," Karrer said. "Um. Do - I -" He took a deep breath. "Do it, then. Take - do whatever you need to keep this facility safe."

That was permission enough. Calys nodded and turned to Serat, who immediately gestured down the corridor. "This way, Master Jedi."



 

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