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Revan's Ramblings - KotOR-era Drabbles for the UDC 4 - Completed 8/23 - Week 20: In The End
KotORBF2Female_Revan
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Date Posted:
4/11 7:05am
Subject:
Revan's Ramblings - KotOR-era Drabbles for the UDC 4 - Completed 8/23 - Week 20: In The End
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Date Edited:
8/23 9:39am
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Edited By:
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Title: Revan's Ramblings
Author: KotORBF2Female_Revan
Era: Mandalorian Wars - Post-KotOR 2
Characters: OCs, with a few occaisional appereances from Canon characters
Genres: A little of everything
PM list (OMG someone likes my stories!):
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Week 1 - Lana Syo
1. Flash In The Pan
Javiena Avor and her troops sat around a campfire, guarding the Republic base. Lana Syo, one of the medics, concentrated on cooking the meal for the other soldiers.
As Jade Ledene walked by, she commented, “The food looks…uh…good.” The padawan continued walking by, a look of disgust on her face.
Jade sat herself down by her master Javiena.
Suddenly a miniature explosion sounded. When this happened, Jade noticed a flash in the pan Lana was using to cook with.
Seconds later, Javiena hit herself in the face with her palm.
“I
knew
we shouldn’t have let Lana cook this time.”
2. Out On A Limb
Lana stared at her military commander while she debated with her troops about whether or not they would use the newly-built Mass Shadow Generator for the upcoming attack on Malachor V. Most of the soldiers were agreeing that they shouldn’t use it, but Lana had a different view.
“I, for one, think we should use it.”
“But Lana, it would…”
Javiena was interrupted by the beeping of her comlink. “One moment please…”
“Javiena, this is Revan. I am sending General Galein, as she can be more trusted in this battle than you.”
“Looks like we won’t be going after all.”
3. Out Of The Blue
Lana sat in the mess hall with her new friend, Izilo. She ate carefully, trying to avoid getting food on her new Jedi robes. Everything at the table seemed quiet…too quiet.
Out of the blue, Lana blurted out, “Do these robes make me look fat?”
Izilo replied, “Why would you ask me that? You know you’re perfectly fine.”
In an almost angry tone, Lana said, “Izilo, tell me the truth. Do these robes make me look fat?”
Izilo replied, “No, Lana. No they don’t.”
Lana felt so relieved, she hugged Izilo and then kissed him on the cheek.
Izilo blushed.
4. Wet Behind The Ears
Lana concentrated on the person in front of her. Trying to heal the woman, she reached out through the Force and channeled to the patient.
However, rather than having the effect she thought it would, it caused an explosion, which only deepened the woman’s pain.
“I’m sorry,” she said to the woman’s brother. “There’s nothing I can do.”
The man walked out, holding the body of his dying sister in his arms. When the door closed, Lana said to her master
Vrook Lamar, “I failed, didn’t I?”
Vrook replied, “No, you’re just a bit wet behind the ears, that’s all.”
5. Heat Of The Moment
Lana’s lekku twitched with anger.
“Izilo! How could you do this to me?! I thought you loved me!”
Izilo replied, “I thought you were dead! I joined the dark side because I couldn‘t live without you!”
Hearing this, Lana couldn’t bring herself to strike him down.
“Izilo! Quick! We can escape here and I could take you back to the Jedi!”
“Lana, I can’t,” Izilo replied. “I’ve fallen too far down to be redeemed.”
“No, Izilo. Nobody is without a chance of redemption.”
And as she heard Darth Derriphan, Izilo’s Sith master, scream at him to kill her, she left.
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Revan's Ramblings - KotOR-era Drabbles for the UDC 4 - Week 1 - Lana Syo (OC)
These were wonderful!
“I failed, didn’t I?”
Loosing a patient is never an easy thing...and rarely the healer's fault.
I enjoyed these and I look forward to more
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Revan's Ramblings - KotOR-era Drabbles for the UDC 4 - Week 1 - Lana Syo (OC)
A great set of drabbles!
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Revan's Ramblings - KotOR-era Drabbles for the UDC 4 - Week 1 - Lana Syo (OC)
Awesome drabbles!! I really enjoyed them. Loved the cooking one, really made me laugh.
Can't wait for more!
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You took the Fall and thought of me... Above All. - Jesus is Love.
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Date Posted:
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Revan's Ramblings - KotOR-era Drabbles for the UDC 4 - Week 1 - Lana Syo (OC)
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Date Edited:
5/23 10:25am
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Edited By:
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A/N:
Sorry. It probably won't be as funny as the first week, but there still is some humor.
(I hope you) Enjoy!
Week 2 - Javiena Avor
6. Impossible
Javiena ignited her lightsaber, and ran forward to attack the Mandalorians. She slashed her saber across the Mandos’ armor, but…nothing happened. She continued slashing her saber across the Mandos’ armor, but still nothing happened. Not even a scratch showed up.
“This is impossible!” Javiena muttered. “How would they suddenly be able to have armor that can resist lightsaber attacks?!”
Maybe she wasn’t skilled enough with lightsaber training. Maybe the Mandos were very skilled in melee combat. Maybe the Mando armor was new.
But what she didn’t know was that the Mandalorians were using a special metal for their armor: beskar.
7. Unlikely
Javiena hated the droid Revan had assigned to her. It always wanted to kill and referred to people as “meatbags”. However, she was actually in need of it right now.
“HK! Get over here!”
“Statement: HK-47 ready to serve, meatbag. Would you like something killed?”
“Stop calling me a meatbag!”
“Annoyed statement: Fine, meatbag.”
“Did you hear what I said?”
HK didn’t respond.
Javiena looked at an engineer and said to him, ”Likelihood of the droid stopping calling me a meatbag without reprogramming?”
“Highly unlikely,” he replied.
Javiena shut down the droid and handed it to the engineer for reprogramming.
8. Reasonable
HK-47, a recently reprogrammed droid, walked into the room.
“HK, I need you to do something for me.”
“Query: What would that be, Shishno?”
Javiena looked at the engineer. “Shishno?”
The engineer shrugged. “I thought it was funny.”
“When this mission is over, I want this droid reprogrammed to its normal status.”
“Yes ma’am.”
Javiena turned back to HK. “I need you to assassinate the leader of the Mandalorians.”
HK replied, ”Exclamation: Finally! Time to own some noobs!”
Javiena stared at the engineer. “Next time I have you reprogram a droid, make sure he can actually speak reasonably to me.”
9. Probable
Javiena stared at her friend--and admiral--Revan. “How likely is it we’ll be defeated? I think it‘s probable.”
Revan replied, “I know we’re going to win this time.”
“You want to bet?”
“You’ll be sorry when I get those 100 credits from you.”
“Make it 200, and you got a deal.”
*Hours Later*
Revan held out his palm, and Javiena dropped 200 credits in his hand. The male knight said, “Be more careful when you bet next time, Javiena. Never know when you’re going to lose.”
As Revan walked away, Javiena muttered to herself, “Last time I place bets with
you...”
10. Definite
Javiena watched her friend Revan from a distance. Two people were accompanying him. One was a Jedi, Bastila Shan.
Suddenly, Revan walked up to her.
“Have I met you before? You seem very familiar.”
Javiena replied, “Are you Revan?”
Revan replied, “No, my name is Brogus Organa. Wasn’t Revan killed by the Jedi strike team that Bastila was in?”
Bastila cut into the conversation by saying, “Rev- er, Brogus is right. Revan was killed.”
“No, I can sense he’s Revan.”
Revan said, “Are you delusional?” and walked away.
And Javiena could barely hear Bastila as she said, “She’s definitely delusional.”
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Revan's Ramblings - KotOR-era Drabbles for the UDC 4 -UPDATED 4/15: Week 2 - Javiena Avor (OC)
Likelihood of the droid stopping calling me a meatbag without reprogramming?”
“Highly unlikely,” he replied.
I've always loved HK!
Great update
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UPDATE!!!!
A/N:
Uhm...yeah...this probably won't be as funny as the first 2 drabble week things. But oh well, read anyway!
Week 3 - Arla Ordo
11. Truth
Arla - formerly Zeison Sha Galien - walked into the Anchorhead cantina.
This place is disgusting
, she thought. Normally she wouldn’t enter cantinas like this one, but she had some unfinished business.
Walking to the table where Revan was sitting, she tapped a Twi’lek on the shoulder.
“What do you want?” she replied.
“Revenge.”
“What did I ever do?”
“You killed my friend’s sister.”
“I didn’t kill anyone!”
“Don’t lie, Lana. I know what you did.”
“You’re insane! My name‘s Mission, and I‘m not a murderer, and that‘s the truth!”
“You’re traveling with Revan. That makes you one…”
“What?!”
“Nothing!”
12. Trust
“Arla, how do I know I can trust you?” Atin asked angrily. “You failed me.”
“I’m sorry, Atin, but I just couldn’t find Lana Syo! How is that a failure?”
“You couldn’t find her, and you’re force-sensitive! Wouldn’t you have been able to sense her at least?”
“Well, sorry, but I’m not a Jedi hunter anymore!”
“Maybe you should be one again!”
“Maybe I don’t want to!”
“I’m your friend, I think you should be one!”
“Then you’re not my friend and I don’t love you anymore!” As Arla said this, she stood up, walked out and slammed
the door.
13. Honor
“I’m sorry, Arla! I didn’t mean to be so rude the other day!”
“You look like such a
di’kut
right now, Atin. You’re standing outside my house, trying to apologize, but I know you’re not sorry.”
“Arla, I am truly sorry! And I‘m not lying!”
“You dishonorable, lying, son of a…”
“What did you just call me?!” Atin stomped into Arla’s house, a crushgaunt - wearing fist raised up, preparing to
punch her.
“I’m sorry! I didn‘t mean that!”
“It’s too late for you to apologize now…”
“You dishonorable son of a…”
Atin punched Arla before she could finish speaking.
14. Loyalty
Arla awoke in a hospital, and saw the face of the man who injured her, Atin. She screamed.
“Atin, what are you doing here?!”
“I’m here to apologize.”
“For what? Last time you apologized to me, you got me in here!”
“But I’m truly sorry this time.” Atin kissed Arla on the cheek.
Arla slapped him. “Don’t think you can act that way just because you’re apologizing.”
“But I’m really sorry!”
“Sure you are,
At‘ika
. Sure you are.”
“And my loyalty is with you,
cyar‘ika
.”
“Sure it is,
At‘ika
. Sure it is.“ Arla smiled, closed her eyes, and fell asleep.
15. Love
“Atin, I have to go on another mission. See you later,
At’ika.
”
“Arla, I…just be careful.”
“What were you going to say?”
“Arla, I love you. And…” Atin handed her a small box. “Open this.”
Arla opened the box, and in it she found a ring with a Lava crystal. Stuck on the ring was a note that read: “
Ni kar’tayli gar darasuum.
” Arla definitely knew what
that
meant.
“Of course I’ll marry you.” Arla put the ring on, and kissed Atin on the lips. Walking out of the room, Arla said
with a wink, “I’ll see
you
later, Atin.”
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Date Posted:
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Revan's Ramblings - KotOR-era Drabbles for the UDC 4 -UPDATED 4/22: Week 3 - Arla Ordo (Another OC.)
I'm not sure if marrying Atin is such a good idea until he learns to control his temper.
But, at least he apologized.
Great update
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Revan's Ramblings - KotOR-era Drabbles for the UDC 4 -UPDATED 4/22: Week 3 - Arla Ordo (Another OC.)
UPDATE!!!!!
This week's drabbles are so romantic, they're...squishy. *squish squish*
Anyway, enjoy!
Note:
Izilo is the Nautolan lover of Lana Syo. (Anyone see a reference?)
Week 4 - Izilo
16. Gaze
Izilo looked over at the new girl who was sitting alone. With a melancholy look on her face, the Twi’lek glanced back at him. Their gazes locked, and somehow Izilo saw the emotion she felt in her eyes.
Walking away from the table he was sitting at, Izilo told his friends, “I’m going to go talk to the new girl.”
Sitting down next to the new girl, Izilo said, “Hi. My name’s Izilo. What‘s yours?”
Blushing, the girl replied, “My name’s Lana. Lana Syo.”
“It’s nice to meet you, Lana.”
“Nice to meet you too, Izilo,” Lana said in return.
17. Wink
Izilo awoke with a headache and saw the face of Lana Syo looking at him.
“Hi, Lana.”
“Hi, Izilo.”
Lana turned to one of the other healers who were with her. “It looks like he’s awake.”
She turned back to Izilo.
“What happened to me, Lana?”
“You were sparring with Mezzo Binir, and he cut you up pretty bad.”
“Mezzo? How would he be able to hurt me in a fight?! He’s an apprentice!”
Lana’s comlink rang.
“Lana,” the voice said, “we need you in med bay 4118.”
Before Lana walked out, she winked out Izilo. “I’ll see
you
later.”
18. Distance
Izilo lay on his bed, staring at the ceiling.
Why couldn’t they have sent me on that suicide mission instead of Lana? After all, I’m the one who’s trained for combat, not her.
Suddenly, one of the Jedi masters walked in.
“Izilo, we are sending you to the planet Rhen Var to aid in the mission we have sent Lana Syo and other Jedi."
The master walked out of the room and left Izilo feeling happier but depressed.
I'm probably going to die
, he thought.
At least Lana and I are now no longer going to be separated by distance.
19. Cold as Ice
Izilo arrived at the Republic base on Rhen Var. When he saw Lana, Izilo ran forward and hugged the girl he loved.
"Izilo, it’s so good to see you!"
"Lana, you must be freezing out here. We should go inside."
The two walked into the base.
After they conversed a little, Izilo left Lana at her quarters.
Hours later, Izilo returned to Lana’s room, and found the Twi’lek lying on the floor. Izilo put his hand on her arm, and it felt as cold as ice.
“Lana!” Izilo picked her up off the floor and held her in his arms.
20. Eternal Flame
Tears streamed out of Izilo’s eyes as he helplessly watched Darth Revan torture Lana in an interrogation.
“Where is the Jedi enclave?” the Sith would insist.
“I’ll never tell you!” Because Lana replied this way, she would be electrocuted.
“If you won’t tell us, then will you join us?”
“I’ll never join you!”
“Then you will die,” Revan said. “Atton!”
The Sith Lady’s Jedi-killer walked into the room.
“Kill her,” Darth Revan commanded him.
Atton opened a lightsaber, and began to attack Lana.
Izilo squeezed his eyes shut.
Will the death of the one I love end the eternal flame?
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I hope, somehow, that isn't the end for Lana and Izilo
“Mezzo? How would he be able to hurt me in a fight?! He’s an apprentice!”
Loved that!
You should never underestimate an apprentice
Great update
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UPDATE!
Why is it
KELIA
is the only one who seems to read my drabbles? But I shouldn't be complainin', cuz without her my drabbles would be unread >.<
Uh...anyway...
A/N:
I know the OC's name sounds like Jorak Uln.
Week 5 - Vorak Juln
21. Steps
Vorak Juln stares at his older brother, Atesu Juln, duel his sister, Sorase Juln.
“You see, Vorak, we train in small steps,” Atesu explains through gritted teeth of determination. “The funny part is when the noobs beat the guys who’ve been here the since the Mando wars.”
After Atesu speaks, Sorase knocks the sword out of his grip, causing it to skid across the floor.
Unable to contain his laughter, Vorak giggles (like a MAN, by the way) and soon he rolls on the floor laughing.
“Looks like
somebody
needs to go through those steps again,” Vorak says between laughs.
22. Stride
Vorak strides to the Republic base, when he hears a voice shriek, “Kysa, no!”
Vorak runs, trying to find where the sound is coming from. He can tell the woman is at the top of the building he is standing in front of. He stares at the sky and sees…something. It comes closer to him, and what he sees turns out to be…a little girl?
What the?
The girl falls into his arms, and helps her stand up again.
The child’s mother runs over, and thanks Vorak.
“My name’s Arla,” the woman says to the rescuer. “Thanks for saving Kysa.”
23. Stumble
As Vorak trails behind his squad, he stumbles as his foot hits what appears to be a rock. Suddenly, hears a ticking noise, meaning he activated a bomb.
“There’s a bomb!” one of the squad members, Vorak’s cousin Vaton Walu, yells. “Everyone, run!”
“Wait!” Vorak yells in response. “I can dismantle it!”
“We have no time for dismantling! We have to get out of here!”
“You just go without me then!”
“Ok.” Vaton leads the 2 remaining squad members as they escape the Sith base.
Vorak reads the screen.
[3…2…1…]
“Oh no.”
The bomb explodes, destroying part of Vorak’s brain.
24. Leap
Vorak’s back in training, even though he was already on a mission.
He looks at Atesu, who is training him. “Why am I training again?”
“It’s because on your last mission, that bomb blew out part of your brain!” Atesu says. “Anyway, we‘re gonna start out our training with lightsaber duels.”
“WHAT?!”
“It’s to help us prepare to fight Sith lords.”
The brothers grab their lightsabers, and ignite them. They begin dueling.
Atesu strikes at Vorak’s hand, and cuts it off. As the lightsaber falls, it amputates Vorak‘s leg.
“Atesu, what was that for?!”
“I thought those were training sabers!”
25. Fall
Vorak found himself staring face-to-face with Dark Lord of the Sith, Darth Derriphan. “Where is Sorase?” he growls.
The Rattataki Sith lady responds by attacking him with her sabers. Vorak kicks one of the Sith saber out of her hand and catches it as it falls to the ground. He then ignites the saber, and defends himself from the Sith’s force-assisted attacks.
Eventually, Darth Derriphan becomes tired of fighting, so she decides to influence the man into bringing his own loss upon him.
She says, “You will jump off this building.”
Vorak walks to the edge and begins his fall.
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Aw come on, no readers? Oh well.
Here's the update for this week.
Week 6 - Sorase Juln
26. Gallant
Sorase shyly looked at the soldiers who were formerly her enemies, but now her allies.
“Men and Jade, this is Sorase,” the captain said. Turning himself to face Sorase, the general told her, “Sorase, meet your new adversaries.”
“Hello,” the oldest of the soldiers said. “Name’s Neko Voda.”
“My name’s Jade,” the red-head said. “Jade Ledene.”
“Yo,” the youngest soldier said. “Name’s Talo Vroten. When the captain told us we were getting a new recruit, I didn‘t think they would be as good-lookin‘ as you.”
“Don’t listen to him, Sorase…he may look like a gallant, but he’s really a psychopath.”
27. Filial
As Sorase lay in her tent alone, flashes of events in the past came into her mind as lightning flickered across the sky.
Flash.
Sorase stares at her parents telling her to join the army.
“We want you to make sure your brother doesn’t turn to the Sith while in the army,” her mother had said.
Flash.
She and her brother tell their parents the final goodbye before joining the Republic army.
She fell into a deep, troubled sleep.
The next morning, she awoke and realized the theme of the flashbacks.
“
I
must
return to my filial duties
,” Sorase thought.
28. Vexation
In the night, Sorase stuffed her possessions into her small bag, hoping to run away from the camp.
Just as she completed packing, Talo Vroten walked into her tent.
“Sorase, what are you doing?”
“I’m leaving the army.”
“Why?”
“Because…”
“What, you don’t love me anymore?”
“Dammit, Talo, I joined the army to watch over Vorak, not fall in love with you!” Sorase snapped in vexation.
“But you gotta admit, fallin’ for me was one of the great parts of it.”
Sorase glared at Talo as if to say,
"I’m gonna kick your butt and feed on your flesh.”
“Leaving!”
29. Sublime
Sorase loaded her gun with ammo.
There’ll be a time where I’ll can be sublime, but it isn’t now.
Sorase was determined to leave the Sith army, and her desertion started now.
As Sorase quietly pushed the bristly bushes surrounding the camp out of her way, she held her rifle in case she would need to blast someone’s head off.
As the light of the campfire slowly faded out of her sight, Sorase felt…free. Turning around, Sorase came face-to-face with Talo Vroten.
“Talo?!”
Pointing his pistol at Sorase, Talo said, “Go back to the camp, or die.”
Sorase willingly surrendered.
30. Superficial
I need to escape this place, and heal this wound inside me. This injury of duty, pride, family, and all that crap.
I betrayed my relatives, my friends, the army…hell, I betrayed the whole damn Republic.
And for what?
So
I
could survive. Me, the one who joined the army and vowed to die to protect the Republic. Me, the one who’s so superficial I’d sell my soul to live. Me, the one who…possibly killed everyone I loved.
No, not
loved.
Love. Present tense.
But I wonder:
If I come back to them, are
they
still going to love
me?
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I have never seen things written like that, but they were all either amusing, hilarious, witty, or worried me, and I always wanted more! Going to check back next week for sure.
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“Dammit, Talo, I joined the army to watch over Vorak, not fall in love with you!”
Unfortunately, fate usually has other things in mind.
Loved Sublime, though it did send a chill down my spine.
Great updates
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Yay! Tyvm for the comments. Hope to get some readers this week too.
Also, I'm thinking of starting a PM list, so tell me if you wanna be on it!
Here's my awesome update of d00m (
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Week 7 - Jade Ledene
31. No Turning Back
I used to be a Jedi, but I’m now a Sith.
It feels weird to think I’m fighting the very people I used to be friends with.
After all, Javiena could very well be alive.
She
is.
But it’s like…I’m dead. But I’m alive. I can almost sense she feels the same way about herself.
…
To think all the hope is gone is like saying our galaxy is gone. I mean, I can sense Javiena’s presence. I know she’s still alive, which means I have hope of being--
--what is your problem, Jade? You
know
there’s no turning back.
32. No Backing Down
I remember the last battle I fought on her side. We were trying to avoid being captured by Revan, but we failed.
It was
that
failure that caused me to be where I am right now. It was that failure that caused me to be…what I am today.
A Sith. My own worst enemy. I am one.
I need to quit. I mean, Sorase has tried before--
--but she failed.
But you’re a Jedi, Jade. You can’t fail, you have the Force!
But in order to emerge victorious, I must acknowledge that once I start, there is no backing down.
33. Nowhere To Run
I remember that battle. Everyday I look in the mirror and stare back at the mistakes I’ve made. They show up in my eyes every morning. I hate myself everyday, but I won’t let me get me. After all, I don’t
really
hate myself. I just…
…that makes
no
sense, Jade. I mean, that can’t be possible. After all, you’ve told yourself you’re tired of being your own friend--
--I told myself that
before
Sorase joined the Sith.
Not like it matters anyway. I shoulda just run.
How stupid are you, Jade? You know there would’ve been nowhere to run.
34. No One To Trust
I am a Sith. And a very new one, at that.
I think this is stupid. I should be flying around the galaxy with a blaster and kill Sith.
I guess I just have no control over my life. It’s like the Force does not know what it wants from me. First, I am a Jedi who’s fighting evil all around the galaxy, the next moment I am my own worst enemy.
Next thing I know, I am gonna be my only best friend. I don’t want that to happen.
But it will. All because there’s no one to trust.
35. No Place To Hide
Don’t know how I became a Sith
Don’t know where it went wrong
I know my life as a Jedi is over
And that my life as a Sith has begun
I should be running around with a blaster
Helping those with whom I used to be friends
Not hangin’ with these Sith
And meeting a different end
Gotta remember life is just a game
Played by the Force everyday
And resisting is futile
Cause it wastes my life away
I can try to run
but there’s no place to hide
There’s no way except death
to escape my life
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If I had to, I would put myself right beside you
So let me ask: would you like that, would you like that?
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Loved this last set and the last one was a poem
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