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val solo
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4/1/03 3:59pm
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RE: ~*Deluge*~-- Kyp/Danni fic-- 2 parts up!
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Yes, Kyp has brown eyes... just check the New Essential Guide to Characters. Enough of this green eye crap!
And Keanu Reeves could never be Kyp!!! Never! Ever! End of story! Yuck! How dare someone even make such a blasphemous suggestion!!! It's sacrilege, I tell you!
And Danny, I caught that little remark about me you kind of slipped in there. Beware, my friend. You have no idea what I'm capable of! 
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NarundiJedi
Title: FF Chapter Rep Albany, NY
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4/1/03 4:33pm
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OWLC, I think the female opinion is against you.
*pokes val* MORE! 
Jae Angel
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Obi_Wans_love_child
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Date Posted:
4/1/03 7:57pm
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RE: ~*Deluge*~-- Kyp/Danni fic-- 2 parts up!
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It happens NJ. I know all about the female opinion. I get one every night and yet I persevere.
And who would you have Val?
OWLC
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NarundiJedi
Title: FF Chapter Rep Albany, NY
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4/1/03 8:05pm
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Female opinion is healthy for men.  Yeah, who do ya love, val? Tell me who do you love?
Jae Angel
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rogue11lovesjag
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4/1/03 8:30pm
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Wonderful job! More please?
~Rogue
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Danny_Quee
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4/1/03 9:38pm
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And Danny, I caught that little remark about me you kind of slipped in there. Beware, my friend. You have no idea what I'm capable of!
Uh-oh...am I in for it now? [face_shocked]
But I didn't mean to "slip" that remark in there, it just kinda ended up that way. Sometimes it's hard for posts not to end up caught in the conversational crossfire between NJ and OWLC.
Believe it or not it took me that long to think of a response to your earlier comment. I'm afriad I'm not as skilled as others around here when it comes to banter. 
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val solo
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Date Posted:
4/2/03 3:06pm
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Hang around long enough and you'll catch on, Danny. LOL! 
I showed two of my picks for Kyp back on pages one and two of this very thread. It definitely needs to be someone with attitude and charm. I'm not too tied to the 'angular' thing. Like NJ said, he's a big boy now! But definitely NO Keanu, and Orlando, while great as Legolas, doesn't strike me as Kyp.
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NarundiJedi
Title: FF Chapter Rep Albany, NY
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4/2/03 3:27pm
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Orlando strikes me as too much of a sissy boy for Kyp. 
And sorry about that, Danny. Didn't mean to scare you with all the chatter! It's always a bar brawl with us around.
Jae Angel
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Obi_Wans_love_child
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4/2/03 5:35pm
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Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm @ brawling with NJ and Val.
I was doing some thinking today as I helped walk a patient. I keep thinking of acting chops. I kept falling back to Billy Crudup. His character in Almost Famous struck me as very Kypesque. At times full of himself and yet at the same time very true to what he believed was right. And Billy Crudup nailed that role.
If not him perhaps Eric Bana. His character from Blackhawk Down was Kypesque.
OWLC
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NarundiJedi
Title: FF Chapter Rep Albany, NY
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4/2/03 6:16pm
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ReaperFett agrees with you on Eric Bana.
And I agree with you on Billy Crudup, I think. I mistook him for Skeet Ulrich, but I still think he was good in whatever I saw that had him in it.
Jae Angel
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val solo
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4/4/03 1:05pm
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Greetings, all!
Here is a short post, and I am trying to finish this one up as early as later tonight. I hope!
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He maneuvered her over to the bed and set her down gently.
“Now, let’s see what we have here,” he said as he sat down next to her and held the lamp closer to her back. Her shirt was ripped and bloodstained, and it was hard to tell how deep the cut went. As carefully as he could, he examined the wound trying not to cause her anymore pain. She had already surprised him by not bursting into tears like he expected.
“How bad is it?” she asked softly, looking back over her shoulder.
“It’s hard to tell,” he replied honestly. The lack of decent lighting and the condition of her clothing was making it difficult to diagnose the severity of her injury. “You’re going to need to get out of that shirt so I can really see what shape you’re in.”
Danni jerked around and glared at him. “I don’t think so!”
Kyp shook his head. “This isn’t a time for modesty, Danni. You’re injured, and as long as you stay in those wet clothes, I’m not going to be able to tell how badly you’re hurt.”
She kept staring at him in silence, a frown etched on her pretty face. It almost made him laugh out loud.
“What?” Kyp said, feeling a bit self-conscious under her stern gaze. “Oh, come on! It’s not like I’m trying to pull some sleazy move on you or something. I’m just trying to help.” Nothing but more silence answered him, so he tried again. “Believe me, I have better lines than ‘take off your shirt’. Give me a little credit!”
Finally, Danni sighed and conceded to his instructions. “Okay, but turn your head.”
Kyp rolled his eyes but did as she said. He could sense her struggling and heard her whimper in pain a couple of times. For a minute, he thought to turn around and offer his assistance, but he stopped himself, sure she’d never accept.
So he waited.
“Um, Kyp?” she muttered after a few more tries.
“Yeah,” he answered.
“I, uh…,” she paused, “I can’t seem to get it off. My shoulder hurts too bad.”
He heard the embarrassment in her voice and struggled not to make a smart-alec remark. Now was definitely not the time. Setting the glowlamp down on the floor by his feet, he turned back to help her.
Leaning down by her ear he questioned, “You have another shirt in your bag, right?”
“Uh-huh.”
“Good,” he stated. She felt him grab the back of her shirt by the collar, then felt and heard the fabric rip as he jerked his hands in opposite directions. Danni gasped when she realized what he had done and modestly clutched the front of the garment to her chest.
“Well, that took care of that problem,” Kyp announced. “Now let me take another look at that cut.”
He moved the lamp up on the bed beside them to better examine his patient. The wound itself was not too severe and had luckily already stopped bleeding. No doubt it would hurt for a while, though. Using a bacta patch, he made quick work of tending Danni’s shoulder, but let his hand linger for a few extra seconds on the soft, warm skin of her back.
“Are you finished?” she asked looking over her shoulder. Some of her long blond hair had escaped from its damp braid and was hanging in loose tendrils along her cheeks and neck. With only the limited light, her face was shrouded in shadows, and Kyp was suddenly overcome with desire for her. He quickly jerked his hand away and stood up, embarrassed by the depth of his feelings. Attributing it to the excitement of the evening, he dismissed any thought of what he had just been fantasizing about.
“Um, yeah… all done,” he said shyly turning away.
“Thank you,” she offered with a smile. “It feels better already. Bacta is a wonderful thing.”
Kyp hastily gathered up the leftover supplies and put them back into the medkit. “You were lucky. It wasn’t as bad as it could have been.”
“It wasn’t luck,” she argued causing him to stop and look at her. “It was you. You saved my life, Kyp.”
He was speechless for a moment. Her face was wearing an expression which had never been directed at him before. It was a combination of gratitude, respect, and something else he couldn’t quite put a finger on.
“Hey, no big deal,” he said nonchalantly with a smirk. “It’s what I do.”
Danni laughed out loud and another wave of desire washed over him. This was getting out of hand, he told himself. He had to quit thinking such thoughts.
She finally stood and faced him. “I’m going to clean up and get a new shirt.”
He blushed. “Sorry about that. I guess I owe you one.”
“That’s okay,” she replied with a twinkle in her eye. “I’ve seen your taste in clothes and I think I’ll pass.”
His eyebrows shot up in astonishment as he studied her grinning face. Her smirk told him she was just teasing, and that gleam in her eyes was enough to make him want to kiss her--- hard and long.
With one hand carefully holding the remains of her top in place and the other holding their only light source, Danni headed for the tiny refresher leaving Kyp completely in the dark.
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Danny_Quee
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4/4/03 2:11pm
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Yay! Another fun post, Val!
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NarundiJedi
Title: FF Chapter Rep Albany, NY
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Date Posted:
4/4/03 2:29pm
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Ah, gotta love Kyp when he's got those kind of desires! It makes me want to ravage him! This is why I am a Kyp fan! Jag cannot do that for me, because he's not sneaky or primal enough. Too refined.
Jae Angel
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val solo
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4/4/03 2:31pm
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Mmmmm... primal... I like that word, NJ!
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4/4/03 3:22pm
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FUN FUN FUN! I have a half day of school AND a postie from you! And a wonderful one it was! Love Kyp's reaction to Danni and Danni's reaction to Kyp!
Is it too soon to ask for more?
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