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Jagged Edge of a Broken Heart (j/j break up one-shot song-fic)
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JainaJediQueen
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Date Posted:
3/31/03 10:01am
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Jagged Edge of a Broken Heart (j/j break up one-shot song-fic)
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This is set to a song by Bering Strait which I expect none of you have heard of but anyway, tell me what you think...
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“Jag!” she squealed throwing her arms around his neck before the door could even shut them into her quarters. Noticing he wasn’t returning her embrace, she slowly pulled her body away from his.
Walking on pins and needles
Ever since you left me darling
I feel the jagged edge of a broken heart
“Jaina, we need to talk,” he said pulling completely out of her grasp and moving deeper into her room. “I think it’d be better for both of us if we saw other people.”
Well I saw you today
I just turned away
Don’t want to see you
Don’t want to see you so soon
Cause I’ve tried to pretend
That we were never more than friends
I’ve been trying to keep from crying
“Are you breaking up with me?” She asked trying to keep the tears at bay.
“It doesn’t take a Jedi to figure that out. The truth is, I’ve met someone else.”
And I’ve been walking on pins and needles
Ever since you left me darling
I feel the jagged edge of a broken heart
Walking on pins and needles
Never gonna hold you darling
I feel the jagged edge of a broken heart
Without another word he brushed past her and out the door, leaving her completely alone in her tiny living space. Without warning, she sank to her knees sobbing at the uncontrollable emotional pain that swept over her.
So now I’m on my own
Learning how to live alone
And every night another shade of blue
Even now I see your eyes
Smiling as you told your lies
There’s no use trying
I can’t stop crying
About you
Without you
She spent the next few weeks hiding herself in the darkness of her room, not allowing anyone or anything to come near her. When she did go out she kept to herself, eating in the lonely corners of the mess hall, avoiding the fellow pilots that had once flown with them. The ones had known they were together.
Walking on pins and needles
Ever since you left me darling
I feel the jagged edge of a broken heart
Now I’m afraid to walk in places
Seeing those familiar faces
Knowing that you could be there with them
So afraid that you’d see I’ve been
Walking on pins and needles
Ever since you left me darling
I feel the jagged edge of a broken heart
Walking on pins and needles
Never gonna hold you darling
I feel the jagged edge of a broken heart
Walking on pins and needles
Ever since you left me darling
I feel the jagged edge of a broke heart
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Love? Hate? Approprate song?
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NYCitygurl
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3/31/03 12:30pm
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SAD!! But yes, very approprate song.
NYC
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Eowyn_Jade
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3/31/03 12:32pm
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Oh so sad!!!
EJ
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JainaJediQueen
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Thanx guys, but do you know what's even more sad? It's based on a true story....
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JainaJag00
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oh! thats so sad.... nice fic tho....
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JainaJediQueen
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thank you....
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Trickster_Jaina_Fel
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  very sad trish...very angsty (course we all know how i feel about angst...  )
i take it this was the viggie i was supposed to help you with?  well, the song fit perfectly so obviously you didn't need my opinion 
great job
~TJF
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JainaJediQueen
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Yes, that was the one that you were suppose to help with, or more correctly, ML was suppose to help with. But now I feel liberated from the emotional weight of that awful break up after writing about it, in fact, this was better than writing in my journal or even the poem I wrote about it... I'm gonna stop ranting now....
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AERYN_SUN
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this is the first time i've read anything by you, queen. what i'm wandering is, who did jag meet that prompted him to leave jaina?
~aeryn
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JainaJediQueen
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I'm not sure...any one know who Jaina's best friend is?
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Trickster_Jaina_Fel
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kyp and lowie, at this point but other than that...um...tenel ka, i guess...Jaina doesn't have a lot of (living) close girl friends anymore...Lusa's dead, Anja's...um, Anja (though you COULD use her with jag except...uh...can you say opposites? ), and tenel ka's the queen mother of hapes...you'd probably have to make an OC if you wanted to do her best friend
~TJF
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JainaJediQueen
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4/1/03 7:28am
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ok, TJF, read the subject 'one-shot' meaning I'm not doing anymore here. This was part of my healing process, and I think it should be Tenel Ka, don't ask, she just fits the persona of the evil witch that...never mind...
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Trickster_Jaina_Fel
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i know, i was just saying if you wanted to say anything specific
~TJF
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angsty, yet great! nice job!
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man JJQ i so could relate to that. Its good to rant really it is . . . i did that with Because I Could . . .
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JainaJediQueen
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Glad you guys liked it...wait a minute, Inryi hasn't reviewed yet...*dashes off to find another GF*
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