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obaona Registered: Jun '02	Date Posted: 1/3/04 8:59pm Subject: RE: It's Not the Heat, It's the Humidity (L/M viggie; yep, again - one of the Temperature series)
	Upsy just in case. -----signature----- MS Word is designed by sadists with masochists in mind. - teh atty my recent Atton (KOTOR2) fic: http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/30335989
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Bellyup Registered: Jun '02	Date Posted: 1/16/04 4:56pm Subject: RE: It's Not the Heat, It's the Humidity (L/M viggie; yep, again - one of the Temperature series)
	I had no clue that you wrote two more!! No-one told me!! Better late than never, I suppose... This was a very nice, quiet moment between the two of them. Not too mushy, but very emotional. Some really unique thoughts in this piece. “What is with Skywalker and remote locations?” I’m a farmboy, as you love to keep reminding me.” Hehe...these two are really cute together! “Anakin,” Luke instantly corrected. “But yes. Today is the day –” “He died,” I murmured. Yes...this was very unique! It never entered my mind that Luke would mourn for his Father, and yet, it makes complete sense. How...mixed up...he must feel. You portrayed his feelings very well. She sees how things were and are, and I guess . . . I guess I see what could have been. Okay...(I'm walking on glass here!) I am not critisizing you at all--it's just that Luke is a very difficult character to write. But all throughout this series, however extraordinarily well they have been written, Luke hasn't been very Lukeish... blushes to think that she is bashing Oba's fics But this vignette, and specifically, the portions where he talks about Anakin and ESPECIALLY the above quote, he was SO LUKE! Wonderful job! I can COMPLETELY imagine him saying the above line. I'm on to read the last one!! -----signature----- "He gave His life, what more could He give? Oh how He loves you and me!" My reaction to RotK: Rohirrim... -- SAM!!-- Pippin!!-- Denethor-- EVERYTHING! Spoiler Free Til Episode Three...mostly...
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Benjor45 Registered: Aug '03	Date Posted: 1/18/04 11:38am Subject: RE: It's Not the Heat, It's the Humidity (L/M viggie; yep, again - one of the Temperature series) - Date Edited: 1/18/04 11:40am (1 edits total) Edited By: Benjor45
	Hey, Oba! Great stuff as always. It's great to see the emotional growth of Mara in your series. Go and take a look at The Blanket Incident and compare how she was there with how she's here. Then there's my favorite, Warming up where she's still insecure and Luke is there for her. Now in this one she's there for teh Kid, understanding and suporting him. You've jumped all over the timeline in your vignette series, but the evolution of Mara's relationship and opening up to Luke is perfect and realistic. I bow to you, your Obaness, the Ona and only Cool Lady of the Temperature Series.
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EmilieDarklighter Registered: Jan '02	Date Posted: 2/15/04 8:22pm Subject: RE: It's Not the Heat, It's the Humidity (L/M viggie; yep, again - one of the Temperature series)
	offers chocolate and roses! Belated Valentine's Day UP! -----signature----- Master of Jedi_Emeritus Former Padawan of Gabri_Jade Little sister to Gabri_Jade and LadyPadme 25 Rules for Successful Writing http://boards.theforce.net/fan_fiction_resource/b10304/28400222/p1/?2
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LaYa_ Registered: Jul '03	Date Posted: 2/16/04 1:49pm Subject: RE: It's Not the Heat, It's the Humidity (L/M viggie; yep, again - one of the Temperature series)
	Awww... this was great!!! -----signature----- The last enemy that shall be destroyed is death.
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