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'E CHU TA!' (post-NJO one poster; Solo twins, TK, Jag, Zekk, Kyp, Tahiri, etc. - cute little fun :D)
-Tenel-Ka-
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Apr '02
Date Posted:
1/30/04 1:59pm
Subject:
'E CHU TA!' (post-NJO one poster; Solo twins, TK, Jag, Zekk, Kyp, Tahiri, etc. - cute little fun :D)
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Date Edited:
1/30/04 2:56pm
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-Tenel-Ka-
Hey everyone.
Alright, this has NOTHING to do with the story I'm in the middle of right now --- and since
'Urbania's Void'
is at a depressing part right now... I needed to cheer myself up and write something unrelated. Heheh~
This might as well be AU from UV too. Because things might be different by the time UV is done.
But anyways... I got this idea while I was thinking of Star Wars curse words. Hehehehee. I was thinking of the protocol droid in ESB that says "E CHU TA" to C3PO... my sister and I always think that's like the equivalent of something really bad. So you'll see where the word comes into play... but yeah. O_o
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E CHU TA!
The sound of their breathing was the only thing that was letting it's presence be known as the the two--- no... three ran down the long durasteel corridor.
"Come on, sweetheart." The man turned and ran backwards, in front of his wife who despite her condition, was doing a damn fine job of keeping up. The two were dashing down the hallway, one in front of the other. The man held a blaster high in his left hand and he hovered his right hand over his belt, where his lightsaber hung, clipped on his leather belt. His eyes were wide and alert, ready for anything that might show itself.
The abandoned wreckage of one of the old rebel bases was now home to a group of vicious smugglers and they were on the 'mission' to stop them. Basically a peacekeeping mission that was never planned; they were on vacation to escape the troublesome toils of everyday work, politics and boredom. They wanted to go away and relax.
And they did.
...until they found out about the smuggler's base near their vacation site. His wife was told there might be some danger so she probably should stay back at the Inn... but she knew how mischievous her husband was, and how easily the big lug got into trouble. He was just like his father.
"Stop!" He hissed, as he halted at a corner.
She came to a stop behind him as he peeked his head around the corner, and she followed suit by leaning over his back and peering around the durasteel.
The hanger.
A few of the ships the group had brought to the planet on their vacation had been stolen and held in that hanger.
Now it's time to fix that.
The man smiled as his comlink went off and switching his blaster for it, he grabbed it up off of his belt. He heard a smooth voice with a twinge of a Hapan accent.
"Hey foolish mortal."
"Where are you?"
"A corridor somewhere, looking out to the hanger. I can sense you across the way... in front of the
Rock Dragon
." The voice paused. "How's Tenna?"
The man held the comlink up to his wife's face, her expression contorting into one of surprise at the sudden need to respond.
"I am fine. A bit tired."
"You?! Tired? Corellian Hells... we
have
to get back to our vacation. You need rest!"
The man smiled and pulled the comlink back to his own face, "You talk to Lowie and Zekk?"
"All done, I spoke to Jaina and Kyp too. They're setting some pretty nasty traps for the ringleader. And Jag, Tahiri and Tesar are in the next hallway over from me and Alema."
"So we're ready?"
"Ready as we'll ever be, Solo."
"Then let's get the kriff out of here." Snapping his comlink off, he shot a glance back to his wife before letting a lopsided grin cross his face. "Ready, love?"
"Ready, Master Solo."
Leaning back again the durasteel, he crossed his arms over his chest and placed the bottom of one foot against the wall behind him. "'Master' Solo, I like the sound of that." He began waggling his eyebrows.
She took her right hand and planted it firmly into his arm, giving him a playful shove. "I meant it in the Jedi sense, since you are a Master now."
"I'm sure you did, Tenna." He nodded, the sarcasm dancing in his mahogany eyes.
With a sterling eyeroll, the former Queen Mother of Hapes smirked and yanked the T-21 repeating blaster off of her husband's belt. Her husband had matured since the very first time they had met. Both now in their late twenties, they were married and ready to settle down. Tenel Ka knew full well though, that would never happen.
She was married to a Solo.
"I told you that you should've brought your lightsaber with you." Jacen Solo bit his lip and trailed his eyes to his wife, who was a few inches shorter than him.
"And I am telling you that I shall be perfectly fine with this." Holding up the dull metallic blaster, a sly smile tugged at the corners of her lips. The weapon contrasted with her new set of scaled armor that she was now clad in.
"Then let's go." The grin never left Jacen's face as he leaned forward and planted a small kiss on her lips. He then brought his hand up to his mouth and kissed his fingertips, lightly placing them on her belly, which was starting to grow.
"Be careful," he whispered, over the hum of the generators.
"I always am."
Jacen closed his eyes and gathered everyone into a Force meld, before giving them the signal to go.
And the smuggler's were taken by surprise.
Hapan Admiral Gadell Vessau and the twi'lek Jedi Knight Alema Rar emerged from an opening directly across the hanger from them, lightsabers blazing, blaster bolts ricocheting. Both had expressions of steely seriousness across their faces as they fought through guard after guard towards Gadell's Hapan Cruiser, the
Glass Dance
.
Chiss Pilot Jagged Fel, along with the spunky Jedi Tahiri Veila and the barabel Jedi, Tesar Sebatyne landed on the ground casually, after jumping off of the stack of metal shipping crates they were perched atop. Jag didn't have the Force, so he wasn't included in the battle meld. But he knew everyone he was with so well that he could guess their actions almost exactly. They followed Gadell and Alema to the Hapan Admiral's cruiser, since Jag's ship wasn't one of the ones that the smuggler's swiped.
Sending a thumbs up to Jaina Solo, Jag effortlessly stood between Tahiri and Tesar who were busy blocking blaster fighter being shot at the pilot, while he picked off the guards one by one. Their side of the hanger was clear. Alema was starting up the
Glass Dance
while Tesar entered the ship and followed the narrow hallway up to the cockpit to join her. Jag shot off some blaster fire towards the other side of the hanger in an attempt to lure some of the guards off of the rest of the group's back. He was hunched down on the landing ramp, with Gadell standing behind him.
Tahiri was out in front, still blocking blaster fire with her bright blue lightsaber.
Yelling over the din of the battle, Gadell lightly kicked Jag's shoulder, "Get on the ship! We're getting out of here!"
Nodding, Jag holstered his blaster and dodged a bolt on the way into the safe haven of the interior.
"Tahiri!"
Tahiri just kept on waving her lightsaber, as if she was in a trance, blocking bolt after bolt.
"TAHIRI!"
"Hmm?" Turning her head, her guard went down for one second, giving a stray bolt enough time to graze her arm. Falling backwards, she tumbled to the ground, her blonde hair waving wildly as she crashed.
"Kriff!" Gadell bolted down the ramp to her, noting that all the blaster fire was concentrated on the other half of the group now. "Tahiri?" He stood over her, peering down to her serene face.
Green eyes shot open and a giggle erupted from her system as she stared up to the Admiral. "I was almost a goner there, wasn't I?"
Joining in her laughter, Gadell helped her off of the ground and they both fled up the ramp into the ship, cackling and playfully shoving each other all the way.
In the cockpit, Alema stared down at the the remaining members who were warding off guards, trying to make it to their respective ships. Kyp, Jaina, Zekk and Lowie were all blasting their way to the
Millenium Falcon
, while Jacen and Tenel Ka were opening the hatch to the
Rock Dragon
.
"Should we help 'em?" The twi'lek inquired.
"They'll be fine." Jag let one of his rare grins cross his face as he patted Tesar's shoulder, "We should start the ship up."
The barabel nodded as he flipped a few switches here and there, "Done."
Back in the dilapidated hanger, Zekk and Tenel Ka managed to get the hatches of their ships open at roughly the same time.
Grabbing the blaster out of her teeth with her right hand, Tenel Ka spun around and managed to clip off a few more guards before Jacen grabbed the laces on the back of her armor and pulled her into the ship.
Lowie was the first into the cockpit of the
Falcon
and he started the ship up. Han Solo had let them borrow it for their vacation.
"No scratches!" He had said.
"How would you know if we scratched it anyways, Dad? It's dinged up enough as it is!" His only daughter had replied.
Han had shrugged and laughed, clapping his kids on the back.
"No scratches? What was Dad thinking?!" Jaina climbed into the cockpit beside Lowie, as Kyp and Zekk cleaned up more of the smugglers that were being called into the hanger by the general alarm. "This is Jaina Solo we're talking about!"
Kyp called up to the cockpit from the back, "Everyone's ready! Go! GO!"
Lowie growled a chuckle and Jaina joined his glee as they pulled the ship off of the ground and turned it towards the large opening, towards the sunlight and the vast expanse of green fields.
All three ships lifted off of the ground at the same time, and as their altitudes slowly grew, Zekk grabbed onto the sides of the open hatch and leaned out, yelling a curse to the smugglers, a curse that reached every world, one that everyone knew.
"E CHU TA!!!" And cackling he shut the hatch.
The
Falcon
filled with laughter, as did the
Glass Dance
and the
Rock Dragon
.
Skating over the fields back towards the quaint towns, behind their two sister ships, the
Rock Dragon
was the calmest of the bunch.
Jacen Solo relaxed in the pilot's chair as he casually stared at his wife, who watched the fields ahead.
"Stealing ships back, cursing, blasting our way through legions of bad guys..." Jacen leaned forward and placed his left hand over his wife's abdomen. Tenel Ka looked down to her husband, a questionable expression showing, until she realized he was speaking to their child.
"...you're gonna have lots of fun in the Solo clan."
A smile appeared on Tenel Ka's face as she ran her right hand through Jacen's shaggy mop of brown hair. She knew that the 'Solo clan' meant everyone. Not just their immediate family.
Looking back to the ships ahead of them, she felt a sense of togetherness and pride.
What am I saying? This
is
a family...
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I know it's sort of rushed and such. But I wrote it to help me get rid of my writer's block... hopefully it worked! *goes back to writing UV*
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trianiigirl
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Date Posted:
1/30/04 2:11pm
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RE: 'E CHU TA!' (post-NJO one poster; Solo twins, TK, Jag, Zekk, Kyp, Tahiri, etc. - cute little fun
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awww! There's gonna be a baby Ka!!
*cuddles the little G/T bit*
Nice little bit o' fun with the UV gang. <33333
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I liked the characterizations a lot in this vignette. It was fun to read.
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That was so cute!
Soon to be daddy Jacen is sweet.
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_3MD_PsychoSniper
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Date Posted:
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RE: 'E CHU TA!' (post-NJO one poster; Solo twins, TK, Jag, Zekk, Kyp, Tahiri, etc. - cute little fun
Well, you TOLD me you were doing a one poster, and I wasnt disapointed.
Good job Heather.
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OHHH that was sooo CUTEEE
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Last UV post ended on a downer, and this helped things substantially.
Let's get a w00t for Zekk cursing out the smugglers! XD
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Date Posted:
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that was really good
liked the action, and the idea of a little solo baby is always cute
BTW, "E CHU TA", is a Twi'lek phrase. If you play the video game, Knights of the Old Republic, you talk to a whole bunch of aliens who speak their natice languages. Every Twi'lek first says "E CHU TA". If I had to guess, it means something close to "excuse me". *takes off nerd hat and runs away from thread*
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Nope.
The silver droid sais E CHU TA to 3PO on cloud city, and 3PO said HOW RUDE. He wouldnt sa that to excuse me.
And if you've read Tales of the Bounty Hunters, you know that IG-88 infected lots of droids with a sentince program, and that silver droid happend to become rude because of it, which is yet more proof that it cussed at 3P) by saying E CHU TA.
and ESB and a short stroy by Kevin J. Anderson are a WHOLE lot more cannon that a game.
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NJO sucks worse than anything before it, even Planet of Twilight.
NJO should be flamed from existence
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AWW! i loved it! TK's pretty fit for being pregnant. But then again, it's
Tenel Ka
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Thank you for reading everyone!
TG:
I
KNEW
you would like the Tahiri & Gadell bit.
And yes, baby Ka!!
DarthIshtar:
Thank you!! I wanted to work more with the characterizations... but I didn't want to make it too long. >_< I'm glad they came out the way they did though!
J&J:
Thank you~! If Jacen ever becomes a dad, he's probably going to spoil his children, just cause he wants the best for them. Heheh~
3MD:
I'm glad you liked it!! Thank ya!
JAGSGURL:
Thank you! I'm glad when things come out the way I wanted them too.
Zekkxy:
Yeah; after I left UV like that, I needed something to cheer everyone up. Hopefully this accomplished that. ^_~ And I knew you would like the part where Zekk curses.
YodaKenobi:
I'm glad the action came across well. I've NEVER been good at writing action. And I'll have to go back and play KotOR again! Hearing E CHU TA always makes me laugh when I watch ESB. And don't worry about thinking that you're a nerd.
I'm a HUGE nerd.
tenelfan14:
I think TK will always be in shape NO MATTER WHAT. Hehehehe~ And thank you!
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This was fanastic Heather.
I love how the only clear couple was Jacen/Tenel Ka and it was more open ended for some of us with different tastes.
~~Jilly
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That was cute! And a baby on the way...aww.
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JainaDurron:
Thank you! And yeah, I kind of like to leave Jaina's relationships open so anyone reading can put her with who they want to.
Hehe~
Striker:
Thank you~! A baby! As TG would say, Baby KA! (J/TK would have the cutest children~)
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I agree with Jilly's love of the open-ended Jaina... but this was just very well written in general, also. I enjoyed seeing them having fun doing this. Any chance for random continuations or connected one-posters in this vein?
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Date Posted:
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RE: 'E CHU TA!' (post-NJO one poster; Solo twins, TK, Jag, Zekk, Kyp, Tahiri, etc. - cute little fun
Y'all, I'm announcing ANOTHER -Tenel-Ka- Fic
The following people are all working on a new Round Robin that gets TF.N fanfic writers in the GFFA, check it out
Round Robin story
that has some TF.N fanfic writers getting into the GFFA. The following writers are in it.
_3MD-PsychoSniper
-Tenel-Ka-
RK_Striker_JK_5
Wild_Phoenix
JainaPadmeJade
anyway, I thought I'd advertise it since its gona be quite funny.
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