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-RebelScum- Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 3/25/04 4:27pm Subject: Jaina's First Date
	(note: this is set 5 years after NJO) Episode Lunch, gone wrong "O Jag its so nice of you to invite me to lunch" Jaina says. "Dont mention is" Jagged Fell replies. "In fact ive been looking forward to it all week. "R-Realy?" Jaina replys going weak to her knees. "I- I mean..." Jains stammer just as the waiter arives. "What will you have gentles?" the waiter asks in plesently accented basic. "Well I suppose I will have a nerf steak" replys Jag, "And I suppose ill take a Ithorian salad" chimes in Jaina. Sudennly there is a loud noise and Jaina trips and fall into someone table spilling Lomin Ale all over herself. Oh No! Jaina thinks trying to wipe off the blue liquor, just then there waiter walks by and trip dropping Jag's nerf steak on her making a even bigger mess. "Oh Jag!" Im so sorry Jaina wales. "Its ok Jaina realy it-" Jag is cut off as Jaina runs out of the TapCaf To Be Continued... -----signature----- Fantasy Keeps Me Sane.
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-RebelScum- Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 3/25/04 4:28pm Subject: RE: Jaina's First Date
	I realy enjoy input so feel free to critisize -----signature----- Fantasy Keeps Me Sane.
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-RebelScum- Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 3/25/04 4:29pm Subject: RE: Jaina's First Date
	hmm shorter then it looked when I wrote it.. -----signature----- Fantasy Keeps Me Sane.
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tenelfan14 Registered: Apr '03	Date Posted: 3/28/04 10:26am Subject: RE: Jaina's First Date
	Saved from 6th page!! everyone cheers lol, j/k I really like it! seems very interesesting. -----signature----- "No one worth posessing can be quite possesed."-Sara Teasdale "I am strong, I will not drown in my sorrows. I am me." Tahiri Veila from "Mystery Deep" Comming Clean: http://boards.theforce.net/Beyond_the_Saga/b10477/14728249/?20
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Jedi_Whispers Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 3/28/04 10:45am Subject: RE: Jaina's First Date
	It was cute...try putting spaces in between paragraphs, not only does it make it look longer, but it's easier for your readers. ~Whisper~ -----signature----- ~Whispers of the darkside call to me Evade them I must For only then I will be free~ Ab uno disce omnes. Absit invidia. Dum vivimus vivamus From one learn to judge all. May there be no envy or malice. Let us live while we have life.
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Lady_WinterCelchu Registered: Dec '03	Date Posted: 3/29/04 6:07am Subject: RE: Jaina's First Date
	Interesting start. :] -----signature----- Doesn't expecting the unexpected make the unexpected expected? Commander of Hitwomen_United. Master to Hans_Highness and EmpressJade
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