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A Twist of Fate - Kyp/Jaina, Jag (AU , NJO, RD/RS) *~*UPDATED OCT 9, 2007!*~*
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DantanaSkywalker
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Apr '02
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5/4/04 5:11pm
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RE: A Twist of Fate - Kyp's Dream K/J, J ~Jaina saves Kyp instead of Jag~ Updated 5/4 (two posts)
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More! I really like this one.  It's been ages since a story's instantly hooked me like this.
Dana
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http://www.kypandjaina.net "I always liked Kyp Durron better, anyway." -- Han Solo ". . . What the hell is an 'Aluminum Falcon'?" "This is what happens when an unstoppable force meets an immovable object."
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JainaDurron
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5/4/04 5:24pm
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RE: A Twist of Fate - Kyp's Dream K/J, J ~Jaina saves Kyp instead of Jag~ Updated 5/4 (two posts)
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More!  i really like this.
~~Jilly
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Jedi_Jaina_Durron
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5/5/04 4:51am
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RE: A Twist of Fate - Kyp's Dream K/J, J ~Jaina saves Kyp instead of Jag~ Updated 5/4 (two posts)
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“But from what Jag tells me, you’ve already received quite an adequate tongue-lashing from Kyp Durron.”  *giggles hysterically*
Is it too soon to ask for more?
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“Jacen, never stop asking questions." -Luke  "The vaping lines keep moving." - Kyp  "Fiction confronts you with the awesome fact that you are not the only real thing in this world." --Zadie Smith
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LumiKuningatar
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5/5/04 7:34am
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RE: A Twist of Fate - Kyp's Dream K/J, J ~Jaina saves Kyp instead of Jag~ Updated 5/4 (two posts)
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oh the tongue slashing bit sent me into hysterics.. oh my..
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Catapultam habeo. Nisi pecuniam omnem mihi dabis,
ad caput tuum saxum immane mittam.
It's a bird, no wait a plane.. damn.. it IS a b
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Abby
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5/5/04 8:32am
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RE: A Twist of Fate - Kyp's Dream K/J, J ~Jaina saves Kyp instead of Jag~ Updated 5/4 (two posts)
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Wow, people are actually reading this! Yay!
Happy birthday to me today! I'll hopefully have another post up this afternoon or tonight.
~Abby~
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red_rose_knight
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5/5/04 9:42am
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RE: A Twist of Fate - Kyp's Dream K/J, J ~Jaina saves Kyp instead of Jag~ Updated 5/4 (two posts)
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Very nice! I loved their awkward start at conversation over breakfast. Of course, I am still stuck back on the “tongue lashing” comment.
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LumiKuningatar
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5/5/04 11:52am
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RE: A Twist of Fate - Kyp's Dream K/J, J ~Jaina saves Kyp instead of Jag~ Updated 5/4 (two posts)
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Happy birthday to you
Happy Birthday to youuuuu
Happy birthday Abby
Happy birthday to youuuuu..
Hyvää syntymäpäivää
Joyeux aniversaire Abby..
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Tell a man there are 400 billion stars and he'll believe you,
tell a man that a bench is wet and he'll have to touch it...
Catapultam habeo. Nisi pecuniam omnem mihi dabis,
ad caput tuum saxum immane mittam.
It's a bird, no wait a plane.. damn.. it IS a b
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Rowan_Jade
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Nov '03
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5/5/04 12:33pm
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RE: A Twist of Fate - Kyp's Dream K/J, J ~Jaina saves Kyp instead of Jag~ Updated 5/4 (two posts)
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Go Abby! It's your Birthday! Go Abby!
Happy Birthday!!!!!!!!!
What a perfect day for me to find this! And a slap on the wrist to you for not telling me this was here!
Well, I'll get over the rejection! Any way, what a cute fuzzy little plot bunny you found! Take good care of the little bugger cause he's got a good story goin here! And the plot bunny is obviously as prolific as a regular bunny cause he dun be multiplyin like a mad man over here. Keep it goin bunny!!!
~ tongue lashing - HA!!!! HAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAA!!!!!! ROFL :wiping tears of mirth from my eyes:
~ an un-goddess-like gurgling - HEE HEEE HEEEE! giggle, snicker, chuckle
Keep it up Abby! You're doing great!
And I'm not just saying that cause you think I'm insane!
-Ro
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"You're insane you know." -everyone around me
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DantanaSkywalker
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5/5/04 12:44pm
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RE: A Twist of Fate - Kyp's Dream K/J, J ~Jaina saves Kyp instead of Jag~ Updated 5/4 (two posts)
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Gelir edinor an le!
Gelir edinor an le!
Gelir edinor muin Abby!
Gelir edinor an le!
Dana
P.S. That's Sindarin Elvish.
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http://www.kypandjaina.net "I always liked Kyp Durron better, anyway." -- Han Solo ". . . What the hell is an 'Aluminum Falcon'?" "This is what happens when an unstoppable force meets an immovable object."
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AkyeRae
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5/5/04 5:25pm
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RE: A Twist of Fate - Kyp's Dream K/J, J ~Jaina saves Kyp instead of Jag~ Updated 5/4 (two posts)
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Happy Birthday, Abby!! And Happy Cinco de Mayo to everyone. I'm totally intrigued by this story, Abby. You've got me hooked!! Can't wait for more. And in the mean time, where's my green chile....
-Akye
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Abby
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Date Posted:
5/5/04 9:41pm
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RE: A Twist of Fate - Kyp's Dream K/J, J ~Jaina saves Kyp instead of Jag~ Updated 5/5
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DantanaSkywalker - Wow, thanks! I hope I can keep you hooked!
JainaDurron -
Jedi_Jaina_Durron - I'm glad that made you laugh. I just had to  .
LumiKuningatar - yay for hysterics!
Red_rose_knight - Wow, I hooked a mod! Thanks for reading...and replying!
Rowan_Jade - YAY Ro's here! *does happy dance* insanity, be free!!!!! And yes, it's getting hard to walk around in here with all the baby plot bunnies.
AkyeRae - welcome to my story, hope to keep you hooked for some time yet!
EVERYONE Thank you for the happy birthdays! And for your kindness...next post to follow!
~Abby~
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Abby
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5/5/04 9:43pm
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RE: A Twist of Fate - Kyp's Dream K/J, J ~Jaina saves Kyp instead of Jag~ Updated 5/5
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5/5/04 9:47pm (2 edits total)
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Part VI
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Jaina lifted her eyes from the soggy lump of mush that was her breakfast to glance around the table. Jag was ignoring her, or at least trying to, by scooping up spoonfuls of his cereal and watching them fall back into the bowl. Kyp, whose own eyes had been intently studying his plate of sausages, looked up to meet Jaina’s as she scanned. They exchanged a small smile, and Jag dropped his spoon.
The three of them had never been so uncomfortable in each other’s presence. What little conversation that existed was limited to closed-ended questions that required one word answers or simple gestures. All efforts to initiate worthwhile discussion had ended as they had begun – pitifully.
Jag rose from the table without warning, looking not at Kyp or Jaina, but the wall behind them. “If you will excuse me,” he said, formally. “I have, uh, things to take care of.”
“Right,” Kyp replied.
Jaina offered him a smile. “See you later, Jag.”
“Yes,” Jag replied, and then hurried away, leaving his breakfast uneaten on the table.
Kyp snorted. “Things to take care of.”
“Like getting away from us,” Jaina added. She glanced at the cold gelatinous blob in her bowl, then looked back at Kyp. “You want to go?”
Kyp dropped the sausage he’d been nibbling at and grinned roguishly. “Thought you’d never ask.”
Kyp stood, his cape billowing majestically behind him, and extended his hand toward her. Jaina accepted the hand, and he pulled her to her feet. He released her hand reluctantly, and gestured toward the door.
“After you, Goddess.”
Jaina led the way through the rows of tables toward the door, Kyp following as closely behind her as he could without drawing attention to them. When they reached the wider hallway outside the mess hall, Kyp moved to walk beside her.
“So…talking,” Jaina said, glancing up at him.
“Yes,” Kyp agreed.
“Where can we go?”
Kyp grinned wickedly. “Well–”
“Talking, Durron.” Jaina interrupted, raising her eyebrow and trying to look menacing.
Kyp choked back a laugh. “Right. On the roof? We’re not likely to be overheard up there.”
“Okay.”
*~*
Jag Fel lay on his back on the floor of the maintenance bay, looking up at the underside of his clawcraft, hydrospanner in hand, listening to the sounds of the techs and mechanics around him, and doing absolutely nothing. Nothing on his fighter was in need of maintenance; he had forgone a night of laying awake in an uncomfortable bunk to work on the ship, and it was now in perfect working order. He was back now, after a few broken hours of sleep, because he needed an escape, someplace to go and think where interruptions would be minimal. His quarters, his first choice, had been far too quiet. So he had come here, to the maintenance bay, to lay beneath a well-maintained fighter and think.
Jaina, he thought, with a sigh, studying the tidy seems on the underside of the TIE pod. If things had been different, would I have even had a chance? The son of a TIE pilot and the daughter of Rebel heroes? I’m no Jedi – Kyp’s a Jedi – the Force unnerves me…but you don’t Jaina, you…you – Jagged, you fool, none of this even matters now!
Frustrated, Jag bashed the hydrospanner into the hull of the clawcraft, first cursing himself for the irrational action and the dent it made in the ship, then swearing again as the rogue spanner landed heavily on his forehead.
What is this girl doing to me? he mused, tossing the hydrospanner in the toolkit. If father could see me now…
Shaking his head at himself, and at the galaxy in general, Jag crawled out from under his ship.
Maybe he would try and get some sleep after all. Thinking was proving to be entirely too dangerous.
*~*
I know, I'm evil, but you're just gonna have to wait for the talking scene until next time .
Let me know what you think,
~Abby~
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JainaDurron
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Date Posted:
5/5/04 10:04pm
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Wonderful!
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DantanaSkywalker
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Date Posted:
5/5/04 10:09pm
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RE: A Twist of Fate - Kyp's Dream K/J, J ~Jaina saves Kyp instead of Jag~ Updated 5/5
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Good hydrospanner! *pats it*
Just kidding!
Great post, as always. You are definitely keeping me hooked.
Dana
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http://www.kypandjaina.net "I always liked Kyp Durron better, anyway." -- Han Solo ". . . What the hell is an 'Aluminum Falcon'?" "This is what happens when an unstoppable force meets an immovable object."
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Ars_longa
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Date Posted:
5/6/04 8:40am
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This is really good. Keep the work going, please.
A.
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