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MrScorpion Registered: Jun '04	Date Posted: 6/21/04 8:49am Subject: Star Wars: Doomsday
	Hi! I'm currently writing for a synopisis for my fan fic Doomsday before I will write it ordinary. I will post it here. 16 years after Return of the Jedi. There is a growing peace between the New Republic and the Empire. Everything seems to be happy but in the shadows lurks a new menace... Follow Luke, Leia, Han, Lando and Mara in a adventure that can lead to the destruction of the Jedi. -----signature----- He's a more lizard than a man, he's a Falleen this Mr. Scorpion And you say these stacks are out of order?
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MrScorpion Registered: Jun '04	Date Posted: 6/21/04 1:02pm Subject: RE: Star Wars: Doomsday
	Does it look good? -----signature----- He's a more lizard than a man, he's a Falleen this Mr. Scorpion And you say these stacks are out of order?
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Lady_WinterCelchu Registered: Dec '03	Date Posted: 6/21/04 1:48pm Subject: RE: Star Wars: Doomsday
	Good basis yes. But what we really need MrScorpion is a post. looks around suspiciously Anyone think my hint was too subtle. -----signature----- Doesn't expecting the unexpected make the unexpected expected? Commander of Hitwomen_United. Master to Hans_Highness and EmpressJade
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MrScorpion Registered: Jun '04	Date Posted: 6/22/04 8:11am Subject: RE: Star Wars: Doomsday
	Here's a snippet: Luke fell to the ground. The wound from Sedar's lightsaber was fatal. The pain was breathtaking. Sedar stood above Luke, smiling. "I thought Jedi's were good at fighting," he said and laughed. Luke felt the living force around him, he tried to attach himself to it, he couldn't just die like this. 'Leia' Luke thought, hoping that Leia could hear him, but during this hour Leia was on the other side of the galaxy. Where was Mara, Luke thought. She couldn't just be dead she too. Suddenly Luke felt the force inside his nerves. There was a Jedi approaching. "Hello, there!" Agen Kelsih said and walked towards Sedar. Agen, Agen was Kyle Katarn's padawan and learner. Luke wanted to scream a big 'no' to Agen but he began to feel dizzy, the room around him began to turn black. I can't just die like this, Luke thought and color came to his eyes again. Agen's yellow-bladed lightsaber was on. Luke knew that Agen couldn't win, all he could to was to watch. -----signature----- He's a more lizard than a man, he's a Falleen this Mr. Scorpion And you say these stacks are out of order?
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MrScorpion Registered: Jun '04	Date Posted: 6/26/04 3:48am Subject: RE: Star Wars: Doomsday
	How did the snippet sound. I will soon post first chapter but first I have to finish some things, okay! -----signature----- He's a more lizard than a man, he's a Falleen this Mr. Scorpion And you say these stacks are out of order?
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Lady_WinterCelchu Registered: Dec '03	Date Posted: 6/26/04 1:24pm Subject: RE: Star Wars: Doomsday
	Sounds good so far. Post when you have time though i promise to comeback and read it. -----signature----- Doesn't expecting the unexpected make the unexpected expected? Commander of Hitwomen_United. Master to Hans_Highness and EmpressJade
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