Author Topic: Shattered Silence - A J/K poem
SoloDurron 
Registered: Mar '04
21787_Tenel Ka
Date Posted: 7/9/04 2:20pm Subject: Shattered Silence - A J/K poem - Date Edited: 7/10/04 12:16am (4 edits total) Edited By: SoloDurron
Disclaimer: I don't own SW and I'm not making money of this. This is just a creative mind at work.

Title: Shattered Silence
Characters: Kyp and Jaina
Genre: Poem
Notes: I imagined this somewhere after Dark Journey and during Rebel Dream. Of course there's no Jag in this picture.






Shattered Silence


When I’ve lost my balance
When my sanctuaries are destroyed
When I've lost all I ever was
I will still be there holding on


When my world has collapsed
The walls I’ve built broken down
I know the answer lies
At the end of a tunnel where shadows darken


When death has gone on a raging rampage
When all I ever loved is gone
When time seems eternal
I will still be there trying


When my soul is shattered
And my purpose in life missing
I will still try to remember
What I once was and what I am now


When all is vanished in a misted uncertainty
There is one thing ringing clear in my mind

At the end of my journey when all lights have gone out
You’ll still be there burning brightly


FIN

 

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DantanaSkywalker  6594 posts
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Registered: Apr '02
22182_Jaina and Kyp
Date Posted: 7/9/04 2:23pm Subject: RE: Shattered Silence - A J/K poem
That gave me chills. Very cool!


Dana

 

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Deneveon  3714 posts
Registered: Jun '02
44095_Princess Leia Slave
Date Posted: 7/9/04 2:26pm Subject: RE: Shattered Silence - A J/K poem
*applauds*

Bravissimo. Excellent poetry.

--Den

 

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Flaming_Sword  406 posts
Registered: Dec '03
18188_Jaina and Kyp
Date Posted: 7/9/04 2:32pm Subject: RE: Shattered Silence - A J/K poem
Beautiful!!A world without jag....boggles the mind! Loved it!
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Eowyn_Jade  2033 posts
Registered: Jan '03
43743_Mara Jade
Date Posted: 7/9/04 3:00pm Subject: RE: Shattered Silence - A J/K poem - Date Edited: 7/9/04 3:00pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Eowyn_Jade
very excellent..I never could wirte good poetry, I just hang around and read poetry that talented people like you write tongue Anyway, it fits perfectly, just at Jaina and Kyp's relationship level. grin (or what we want to be their relationship level silly )

EJ

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Fireyforce  1618 posts
Registered: Jul '03
40224_Jaina Solo
Date Posted: 7/9/04 6:23pm Subject: RE: Shattered Silence - A J/K poem
Very nice SoloDurron. You're a very talented poet, this shows that. Can we expect more poetry from you in the near future?

Fireyforce

 

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YodaKenobi  11646 posts
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Registered: May '03
49382_Anakin Solo (1005091)
Date Posted: 7/9/04 10:10pm Subject: RE: Shattered Silence - A J/K poem
That was beautiful happy

 

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The_Jedi_Ambyr-Rose  1839 posts
Registered: Jun '03
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Date Posted: 7/10/04 2:05pm Subject: RE: Shattered Silence - A J/K poem
Awesome job! I loved this!

 

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Abby  1019 posts
Registered: Jan '04
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Date Posted: 7/10/04 3:32pm Subject: RE: Shattered Silence - A J/K poem
Wow...I loved it. *sighs and wishes she could write good poetry*

Looking forward to more of your K/J poetry...or just poetry in general.

Very nice.

~Abby~

 

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SoloDurron 
Registered: Mar '04
21787_Tenel Ka
Date Posted: 7/11/04 2:46pm Subject: RE: Shattered Silence - A J/K poem
DantanaSkywalker: Thanks. Good chills or bad chills?

Deneveon: happy nice word wink thanks, I'm glad you like it!

Flaming Sword: LOL not a Jag person ey. Can't blame you!

Eowyn Jade: heheh, I'm not that talented. I'll tell you a little secret...I was very drunk and depressed when I wrote this, hence the edits. It's not that hard to write poems!

Fireyforce: Thanks! And you know me as Elfsheen! I sometimes post under this sock simply because I like the name.

YodaKenobi: my most loyal reader! wink Thanks!

The_Jedi_Ambyr-Rose: thank you! happy

Abby: Thanks to you too. I have some more Kyp / Jaina poetry...I just have to get it out of my head tongue

 

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JainaDurron  3889 posts
Registered: Aug '02
22182_Jaina and Kyp
Date Posted: 7/11/04 5:48pm Subject: RE: Shattered Silence - A J/K poem
Very nice. I liked.

~~Jilly

 

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SoloDurron 
Registered: Mar '04
21787_Tenel Ka
Date Posted: 7/12/04 8:06am Subject: RE: Shattered Silence - A J/K poem
Thanks! happy

 

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