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A New Start (Post NJO, J/J then split, J/TK, Shocks included)
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Jaina_and_Jag
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Apr '03
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Date Posted:
8/3/04 4:52am
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RE: A New Start (Post NJO, J/J then split, J/TK, Shocks included)
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Give people time to wade through it all. I'm sure that somebody's reading!  I know I am. 
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Cobranaconda
Title: Ex-FF-UK: South CR
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Mar '04
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Date Posted:
8/4/04 11:18am
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RE: A New Start (Post NJO, J/J then split, J/TK, Shocks included)
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Thank you for saving me!
I know it's a lot, but I couldn't help it.
But I couldn't stand having wrote all of that to have no one read it, so thank you!
And you've changed your avatar, the new one's cool!
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TokyoBlade
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Mar '04
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Date Posted:
8/6/04 10:40am
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RE: A New Start (Post NJO, J/J then split, J/TK, Shocks included)
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Flippin hell Cobra, ONE chapter at a time. Post ONE chapter and let people comment on it instead of giving them buckets of text. Just slow down, don't post anymore until people have read it and commented.
And how do you get the cool smilies???
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Cobranaconda
Title: Ex-FF-UK: South CR
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Mar '04
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Date Posted:
8/8/04 5:43am
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RE: A New Start (Post NJO, J/J then split, J/TK, Shocks included)
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First off, it's finished now.
Second, Faces.
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Jedi_Master_Mouf
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May '04
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9/13/04 9:48pm
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RE: A New Start (Post NJO, J/J then split, J/TK, Shocks included)
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okay i just read that whole story . ..in the last 45 minutes so. . . . .its was really good very well done. FIANLY someone who put jacen and tenal ka together
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Cobranaconda
Title: Ex-FF-UK: South CR
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Mar '04
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Date Posted:
9/15/04 4:54am
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RE: A New Start (Post NJO, J/J then split, J/TK, Shocks included)
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Whoah! Someone who managed to read it all without getting bored. Next time I'll try and do it at intervals.
But I'm glad you liked it.
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Jaina_Solo_59
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9/15/04 8:36pm
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RE: A New Start (Post NJO, J/J then split, J/TK, Shocks included)
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did you take the part where tenel ka gave birth from the last command?
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Cobranaconda
Title: Ex-FF-UK: South CR
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Mar '04
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Date Posted:
9/16/04 5:02am
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RE: A New Start (Post NJO, J/J then split, J/TK, Shocks included)
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Yeah, I did say before the post, but I changed quite a bit word wise.
But the authors always knick other peoples stuff and just adapt the circumstances, as did I.
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PunkRockRebelTKDjo
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Jul '04
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Date Posted:
9/28/04 5:24pm
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RE: A New Start (Post NJO, J/J then split, J/TK, Shocks included)
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9/28/04 5:28pm (1 edits total)
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If you don't mind a little bit of constructive criticism, I think the characterization was a little off, especially Ta'a Chume. In your story, she was absolutely ecstatic that Tenel Ka and Jacen were expecting and getting married. I haven't read all of the YJK books, but I did read CoPL, and I think Ta'a Chume would be very openly against their marriage. There were a couple others, but that was the one that stuck out for me.
Also, the Last Command birth part, I don't think you changed enough of it to make it original. IMHO, the wording was almost exactly the same, and lacked creativity. Please don't hate me, I've only got one fic posted myself so I'm definitely no expert.
~Punk
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SilSolo
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Mar '04
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Date Posted:
10/14/04 10:02am
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RE: A New Start (Post NJO, J/J then split, J/TK, Shocks included)
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What PRRTKDjo said and the way Tenel Ka talked. She's supposed to be serious and she rarely uses contractions. Other than that, great J/TK.
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Cobranaconda
Title: Ex-FF-UK: South CR
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Mar '04
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Date Posted:
10/14/04 12:16pm
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RE: A New Start (Post NJO, J/J then split, J/TK, Shocks included)
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I don't mind constructive criticism.
This is my first proper long one, so I'm glad that people are marginally happy with it.
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Ylesly
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Oct '04
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Date Posted:
10/14/04 7:28pm
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RE: A New Start (Post NJO, J/J then split, J/TK, Shocks included)
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its pretty good so far,in a good way.
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Cobranaconda
Title: Ex-FF-UK: South CR
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Mar '04
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Date Posted:
10/15/04 2:57am
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RE: A New Start (Post NJO, J/J then split, J/TK, Shocks included)
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Its finished!
Oh, your still reading it.
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SilSolo
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Date Posted:
10/15/04 10:17am
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RE: A New Start (Post NJO, J/J then split, J/TK, Shocks included)
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Based on your fic, I think you might like this place: http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=14959352&start=17138828 and http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=14045088&start=17011619
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Ylesly
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Date Posted:
10/15/04 7:34pm
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RE: A New Start (Post NJO, J/J then split, J/TK, Shocks included)
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after reading your story i have to say that its really good
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