Author Topic: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 3/4/08
JediPrincess83  167 posts
Registered: Jan '03
17453_Aubrie Wyn
Date Posted: 9/13/04 5:59pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/13
I know you shock

That is a shiver-inducing line, eh? tongue You know, I have read that short story like 3 times, and I only just now realized that Sinsor Khal was pretty much a dark Jedi scientist blush Lol, guess you just miss some things sometimes, huh? Very nicely done.

 

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Daughterofflame  1098 posts
Registered: Sep '03
18590_Vima Sunrider
Date Posted: 9/13/04 7:28pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/13
There's very little doubt about it now, is there? Jaina's falling, and no one's going to stop her. (*sniffs*) How sad. sad

Now that we've established this fact (albeit, much more eloquently) can we get to the mush??! grin 'Cause I know there's gonna be some. You just can't have K/J story without it. Even if the main point of the fic is the two of them falling to the dark side. grin Trust me, there will be mush...

Ok, enough of my addicted ranting. Off to my Nyquil (*curses plague afflicting her*) Adios. Me da mas pronto??! happy grin

~*~Austyn

 

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Abby  1019 posts
Registered: Jan '04
7447_Han and Leia
Date Posted: 9/13/04 9:19pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/13
Both these last two posts were great. This most recent one...wow...Jaina's completely falling. It was chilling when she looked on the fallen guards and her first thought was, "Who did it, you or me?" Not "what happened!" or something to that effect.

And that last line, where she's going to erase Lowie's memory...

~Abby~

 

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DarthJaina  226 posts
Registered: Aug '02
7717_Padme
Date Posted: 9/14/04 5:52am Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/13
Spectacular! shock I hadn't read "Rogue Apprentice", but maybe I will try to track down a copy of that Gamer issues if it's not sold out- everything in DJ makes more sense when you put that piece of the puzzle into it tongue I felt like shivering reading that post, just because of the total lack of concern Jaina had for her actions- she just shrugged them off.

 

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Goddess-of-Trickery  177 posts
Registered: Aug '02
41215_Leia Organa
Date Posted: 9/14/04 10:51am Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/13
Well, there's no going back now, is there? tongue Jaina's hurling Force lightning, nearly killing a few guards, allowing the pirate to be tested to near death... she is her grandfather's granddaughter, lol.

 

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Jedi_Jaina_Fel  440 posts
Registered: Jun '02
24096_Padme
Date Posted: 9/14/04 3:31pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/13
An UP in the hopes that we might get a new post again sometime soon... I should be patient, I know, but it's just too dang hard tongue wink

 

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JainaSoloSkywalker  302 posts
Registered: Jul '02
24182_Padme Art
Date Posted: 9/14/04 7:00pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/13
Is it wrong that I feel sorry for Jaina? tongue She's lost her brothers and it messed her up so badly she doesn't even care about what happens to herself or anyone else these days- except for maybe Kyp, she might care about that wink And the parents, uncle and aunt and little cousin dude, of course... tongue More please! grin

 

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AngelofDarkness  295 posts
Registered: Aug '02
6970_Sariss
Date Posted: 9/14/04 8:29pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/13
Very chilling post shock

I, too, loved how Jaina didn't go "what happened?" but rather "who did it, you or me?" when she saw the guards- a subtle way of showing that she's beyond the point of caring, lol. Poor Kyp, he's got his hands full w/ that one- Miko was nothing compared to his new 'apprentice', huh?

 

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Sword-of_the-Jedi  156 posts
Registered: Jun '03
23520_Lightsaber
Date Posted: 9/15/04 1:42pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/13
Very intense post- it was cool to see it through Jaina's eyes rather than Kyp's, because we got to see firsthand how she's numb to everything around her, even her own actions. Probably how Vader felt eventually, just indifferent and detached from the things he did, lol, so maybe it's genetic tongue

 

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Jaina-Solo-Fel  176 posts
Registered: Jul '02
18916_Barriss Offee
Date Posted: 9/15/04 4:38pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/13
Wow, that must have been one hell of a day for poor Kyp- he's in over his head, isn't he? The harder he tries to pull Jaina back, the farther she'll fall from his reach.

What an inglorious way for a Jedi to die, she thought in disgust. Drowning in coolant fluid.

Her brothers would have been so disappointed.
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LOL, I know that was a very serious, somber, chilling kind of post, but that one line just made me crack up. Leave it to Jaina to be drowning in coolant and thinking that Anakin and Jacen would have been disappointed! tongue

 

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Trickster_Goddess  173 posts
Registered: Jun '03
13771_Padme Concept
Date Posted: 9/15/04 7:34pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/13
Jaina's really gone off the deep end, huh?

How long until Kyp ends up taking the plunge after her, I wonder? wink

 

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Jedi-Jaina-Solo-Fel  201 posts
Registered: Jul '02
41083_Jaina and Jag
Date Posted: 9/15/04 9:16pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/13
They are both heading down a very dark path- and I don't think either of them realizes it yet. Letting her do those things makes Kyp an accesory, and I think that will be part of what turns him... he keeps helping her with things he convinces himself are justifiable, and then one day he'll wake up and wham! he's so deep into the dark side, he's stunned.

 

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Grand Admiral Wettengel  3077 posts
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Date Posted: 9/15/04 9:52pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/13
Must have more.

 

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Vaders_Granddaughter  118 posts
Registered: Jun '03
7449_Bastila
Date Posted: 9/16/04 6:04am Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/13
Okay, now I'm going to be glued to my computer checking back for an update all day after that tongue Oh well, I'll just have to suffer through some how, right? wink Loved the last post, very intense!

 

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LadyPadme  5235 posts
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Registered: Sep '02
48533_Padme (602091)
Date Posted: 9/16/04 10:44am Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/13


Quite an intriguing start. I always did have a sneaking sympathy for Jaina and Kyp. And a dark Jaina and Kyp...wow. shock

Great job.

 

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