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RevaDurron Registered: Jan '05	Date Posted: 11/4/05 11:13am Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 11/4 - Date Edited: 11/4/05 8:19pm (1 edits total) Edited By: RevaDurron
	Wow! Nice to see you. Great update and thanks for the PM. Sheesh, Zekk is taking it kind of hard. I like the way you developed his feelings on her turn to the darkside though. Good job. -----signature----- Sarcasm is almost as important as laughter.
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Goddess_Jaya Registered: Jun '02	Date Posted: 11/4/05 11:37am Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 11/4
	A little birdy told me there was a new post to read, and there was! Now that is how you write Zekk. It's been a while since I've picked up Dark Journey, but his actions make much more sense how you've written them. It was great to read his inner monologue - the self-doubt and guilt he was dealing with as far back as when he and Jaina first met. And of course Jaina had to show up in the end. I could tell the whole post was building up to that, and my smile just kept getting wider and wider until the moment came. When it did, the contrast between Zekk's thoughts and her mostly normal actions was striking. I mean, when was the last time we saw her smile normally and conversing with Jedi peacefully? Of course, the last line brought Zekk's thoughts full circle. She is still so dark and only getting worse. cheers Wonderful post, and well worth the wait. -----signature----- "Is every third human in this galaxy named Solo?" * Every night a star is born. * Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.
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AngelofDarkness Registered: Aug '02	Date Posted: 11/4/05 12:17pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 11/4
	I had a feeling Jaina would be running into those three Nice look at Jaina's fall through Zekk's eyes- her first "love", ex-best friend and someone who knows all too well what the dark side does... it gives a depth to the Jedi outlook on her fall. And I am anxious to see what happens now.. does Kyp come? Does Jacen get there? Will the Jedi let Jaina leave without trying to stop her? -----signature----- "I worry about Anakin. He has a talent for chaos." "One of the things I like about him." -Obi and Quinlan, Republic 70
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flowerbee Registered: Apr '04	Date Posted: 11/4/05 3:35pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 11/4
	Oh dear. That was very... enlightening. Poor Zekk. Glad to see yuo back. Thanks muchly for the PM.
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333 Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 11/4/05 5:17pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 11/4
	awesome this is way better than dark journey
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Grand Admiral Wettengel Registered: Jan '00	Date Posted: 11/4/05 6:41pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 11/4
	Of course. This is the realism that the NJO desperately attempted to capture. -----signature----- http://boards.theforce.net/Beyond_the_Saga/b10477/18526131 -- Seed of Darkness -- NJO AU Updated 12/22/05 http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=20836886 -- Star Wars Destinies NJO AU - NO Vong, stupid living planets and stupidity in general
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Trickster_Goddess Registered: Jun '03	Date Posted: 11/4/05 8:24pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 11/4
	Nice to see this up again Zekk is right to be so wary of Jaina, and I am on the edge of my seat wondering what she's going to do next so I can only imagine how he feels More soon? Pllleeeasssee... we can beg, if you like -----signature----- "I am a Jedi... like my father before me."
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princess_of_naboo Registered: Nov '00	Date Posted: 11/4/05 8:45pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 11/4
	I just found this story today. I've only read up to the part where Ta'a Chume dies so far. Amazing story. I found Ta'a Chume's ending rather amusing because (The Unseen Queen spoilers) Jacen 'takes her out' in TUQ. How fitting for Jaina to do it here and Jacen there. You even wrote that part of the story back in 2004. Just wanted to comment before I continued reading. This story is addicting. -----signature----- Reports from the Corellian Conflict - updated 11/22 http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/24309725 Princess of Naboo's Drabbles - Wk 7: Han; Wk 8: Tenel Ka http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/244319
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Grand Admiral Wettengel Registered: Jan '00	Date Posted: 11/4/05 8:47pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 11/4
	It only gets better. Lord Durron hasn't even busted loose yet at that point. -----signature----- http://boards.theforce.net/Beyond_the_Saga/b10477/18526131 -- Seed of Darkness -- NJO AU Updated 12/22/05 http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=20836886 -- Star Wars Destinies NJO AU - NO Vong, stupid living planets and stupidity in general
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ZOOfo-Dyas Title: Former RMFF CR Registered: Oct '04	Date Posted: 11/4/05 9:47pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 11/4
	Jedi-Princess-Solo posted: And so as the Yuuzhan Vong twitched and convulsed, withering and dying in excruciating agony, Zekk watched Jaina as she watched them die. Her smile only grew with each passing second. /still shivering/ Holy Carp, Woman! That was amazing, and down-right unsettling... Nice work! -----signature----- Kilometers for Katie - http://www.km4kt.com Because one person really can make a difference, just like Katie. . Sanity remains defined simply by the ability to cope with insane conditions. -Ana Castillo
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DarthJaina Registered: Aug '02	Date Posted: 11/5/05 2:09pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 11/4
	An update, hurray! So Jaina is in a mineshaft with Zekk, Lowie and Tesar... Kyp and Welk are with three other Jedi, we don't know what the rest of the dark jedi are up to yet... Jacen is trying to get there, Luke and the others are trying to get there... so many possibilities, lol! -----signature----- "Do you want the short answer, or do you need someone to explain it to you with charts and diagrams?" -Jag and Jaina in DJ "You're a major now?" "I'm better than that, I'm a holovid star. Not to mention a goddess." -Jacen and Jaina in DW
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Canadian_Maple_Leaf Registered: May '04	Date Posted: 11/5/05 10:36pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 11/4
	Wow! I love your writing! I wonder what Kyp would think of Zekk being around? Dark journey was the only NJO book I read the whole way through. Then they go and mess it up. Jaina's fall was the perfect thing to make NJO more like Star Wars and they almost totally ignore it for the rest of the series. Thank you so much for writing this! So what happens next?
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GoddessJainaSoloFel Title: FF - Former Montreal Canada CR Registered: Nov '04	Date Posted: 11/6/05 8:26am Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 11/4
	Thank you so much for the PM! I only just had time now to read the update and it certainly was well worth the wait! It was interesting to see Jaina's fall through her friend's eyes and to see how her fall has affected those around her. It'll be interesting to see how they interact with her once the depressurization is finished. I can't wait for the next post! There hasn't been a dull moment in this story! Please continue to PM me with updates! -----signature----- ~Thank You~ J/J/K ~ http://boards.theforce.net/Beyond_the_Saga/b10477/18221402/?80 Dark Lady at the DLC http://www.darklordscouncil.com XO - Kyp's Dozen - NJOFC, LEAD-Twin Suns SAFF Honorary member http://swendirect.com The voice of Star Wars Fandom
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Grand Admiral Wettengel Registered: Jan '00	Date Posted: 11/6/05 9:19am Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 11/4
	But aren't the Vong so much kewler than stupid dark siders? The vong have living snake-staff weapons that spit poison, all dark siders can do is shoot lightning from their fingertips. Heavy sarcasm, obviously. did Jaina even truly turn or was it just her time of the month and she had really, really bad PMS? -----signature----- http://boards.theforce.net/Beyond_the_Saga/b10477/18526131 -- Seed of Darkness -- NJO AU Updated 12/22/05 http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=20836886 -- Star Wars Destinies NJO AU - NO Vong, stupid living planets and stupidity in general
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Jedi_Jaina_Durron Registered: Dec '01	Date Posted: 11/6/05 11:45am Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 11/4
	Grand Admiral Wettengel posted: Heavy sarcasm, obviously. did Jaina even truly turn or was it just her time of the month and she had really, really bad PMS? I think we were all wondering that. Oh, and I think I forgot to say thanks for the PM, so if I did, thanks! -----signature----- “Jacen, never stop asking questions." -Luke "The vaping lines keep moving." - Kyp "Fiction confronts you with the awesome fact that you are not the only real thing in this world." --Zadie Smith
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