Author Topic: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 3/4/08
Grand Admiral Wettengel 
Registered: Jan '00
6833_Kyp Durron
Date Posted: 9/24/04 7:45pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/24
Very nice.

 

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DantanaSkywalker 
Title: Manager Emeritus
Registered: Apr '02
22182_Kyp and Jaina
Date Posted: 9/24/04 7:52pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/24
This is fantastic! I love how you expand on things, like Jaina filling Kyp in. But you're killin' me, Smalls! Where's the K/J mushy stuff?! tongue


Dana

 

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Goddess-of-Trickery 
Registered: Aug '02
41215_Slave Leia
Date Posted: 9/24/04 8:01pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/24
Lol, I get the feeling that Ta'a Chume isn't the only one Jaina is playing games with tongue Great post, poor Kyp is definitely in over his head.

 

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Jedi-Princess-Solo 
Registered: Apr '02
8173_Jaina Solo
Date Posted: 9/24/04 8:14pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/24 - Date Edited: 9/24/04 8:15pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Jedi-Princess-Solo
YHLJ: He he, see above tongue wink

JSS: Oh, I think it's safe to say there will be plenty of tension on that ship soon enough... devil tongue

GAW: Thank you grin

DS: Don't worry, I can guarantee some nice K/J mush in the next post wink

GoT: And you would probably be guessing right happy

~JPS~

 

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DarthJaina 
Registered: Aug '02
7717_Padmé (Evil)
Date Posted: 9/24/04 8:48pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/24
He he, great post, I love how things are progressing, Kyp is making concessions he shouldn't be, and I doubt he even realizes it.

 

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Grand Admiral Wettengel 
Registered: Jan '00
6833_Kyp Durron
Date Posted: 9/24/04 9:47pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/24
And the sad thing is that Kyp is only thinking what's best for Jaina--he really is being very noble. Also, its his own past coming back to suck him back into the way he was. Really, I find it so ironic that Kyp's fall is going to be because he's going to be attempting to redeem Jaina, which is something that would give him a great boost to his psyche--perhaps enough to help him move beyond being on this mission of perpetual atonement--but in so getting this boost, he's going to take a big fall.

But at least we won't be miserable and alone. He'll have Jaina and hopefully the two of them will find a level of hapiness they'll be satisfied with.

 

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Grand Admiral Wettengel 
Registered: Jan '00
6833_Kyp Durron
Date Posted: 9/25/04 7:41am Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/24 - Date Edited: 9/25/04 7:54am (1 edits total) Edited By: Grand Admiral Wettengel
I want moooore. happy

 

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Jaina-Solo-Fel 
Registered: Jul '02
18916_Barriss Offee
Date Posted: 9/25/04 8:01am Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/24
Lol, Jaina's using Ta'a Chume all right, the only question is to what end? tongue That always bugged me in DJ where they had her aware that she was being used by the former queen, but she didn't want to believe it.

Missed the last post until now, but it was great, as well- Luke's going to be even more stressed as things get more complicated, I imagine wink

 

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JediPrincess83 
Registered: Jan '03
17453_Aubrie
Date Posted: 9/25/04 8:29am Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/24
I agree with Dantana- bring on the mush grin Keep up the awesome work, this is my favorite story right now, he he.

 

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DantanaSkywalker 
Title: Manager Emeritus
Registered: Apr '02
22182_Kyp and Jaina
Date Posted: 9/25/04 9:00am Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/24
DS: Don't worry, I can guarantee some nice K/J mush in the next post

[Homer]Woohoo![/Homer]

I need some good K/J mush, I've been feeling hideously depressed.


Dana

 

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Vaders_Granddaughter 
Registered: Jun '03
7449_Bastila
Date Posted: 9/25/04 9:14am Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/24
"Stop calling my ship a 'hunk of rock'." You tell him, Jaya tongue More soon? I am dying for more of this one, lol.

 

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Jedi_Jaina_Fel 
Registered: Jun '02
24096_Padme
Date Posted: 9/25/04 9:29am Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/24
I have never liked Ta'a Chume, she makes me want someone to just smack her, but I was amused that she thinks she's superior to Kyp, and to Jaina. Doesn't she realize that two of the most powerful Jedi in the galaxy aren't going to take kindly to her trying to use them as pawns? Poor, deranged old woman... delusions of grandeur, that's what it is wink

 

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Trickster_Goddess 
Registered: Jun '03
13771_Padme Concept
Date Posted: 9/25/04 9:56am Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/24
He he, loved the opening bit about 'it was only one day', lol! Kyp, you should know that our Jaina is a resourceful girl- she can get all sorts of mischief done in a single day tongue wink

 

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Sword-of_the-Jedi 
Registered: Jun '03
23520_Lightsaber
Date Posted: 9/25/04 10:48am Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/24
Excellent post! grin Can we get another soon? Please? Pretty please? [face_pleading]

SWORD

 

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Jedi_Jaina_Durron 
Registered: Dec '01
43721_Kyp Durron
Date Posted: 9/25/04 11:13am Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/24
Wow. Everytime you put up a new post, I'm just so impressed. We get to see all the stuff that was going on below the surface that was only hinted at in DJ. This is truly wonderful; very, very skillfully written.

I loved the last line or two, especially! grin

Brilliant!

Is it too soon to ask for more?

 

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