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Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 3/4/08
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jedi-solo-fel
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Jul '02
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8/16/04 9:59pm
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RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 8/16
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Awesome post, JPS! I loved Jaina's raw emotion... the way she's not quite aware of just how far she is falling, how fast... and there was quite a bit of foreshadowing to the dark future on her horizon, he he- I like, I like
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Trickster_Goddess
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Jun '03
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8/17/04 6:52am
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RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 8/16
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Another great post! Wow, I think I've got a bit of goosebumps reading that- Jaina's pain was beautifully depicted A wonderful update, nice work
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AngelofDarkness
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8/17/04 2:19pm
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RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 8/16
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8/17/04 2:22pm (1 edits total)
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Don't ask me why, but this one paragraph just made me get all weepy-eyed... poor Jaina!
If it was the last thing she ever did, Jaina was going to see to it that every single Yuuzhan Vong in existence understood the kind of heart-wrenching, unbearable pain that they had inflicted on her, the kind of pain that you couldn't go on with, that made you desperate for release that was always just beyond the reach of your fingertips.
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JainaSoloSkywalker
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8/18/04 7:12am
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RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 8/16
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Wow, made me feel horrible for Jaina and yet gave me the shivers at the same time... dark times are approaching, me thinks. He he, and it was also nice to get a glimpse into Jaina's obsession with destroying the Vong- be afraid Tsavong, be very afraid
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JainaSoloSkywalker
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8/18/04 12:39pm
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RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 8/16
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Just a quick UP to let you know that I sent you a question via PM, JPS- whenever you have time to send me a reply is fine, so take your time, lawschool girl
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8/18/04 6:47pm
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RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 8/16
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other then The Old Master viggie thats the closest ive ever come to crying in a fic
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DarthIshtar
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8/18/04 6:51pm
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RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 8/16
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so...more?
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Jedi-Jaina-Solo-Fel
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8/19/04 2:53pm
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RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 8/16
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Wow, that was very moving... I wish they'd done more introspective bits in DJ, it would have been nice to really see just how lost and unbalanced Jaina was without her brothers. IMO, that's why she is never the same, throughout the rest of the series even when Jacen returns. Take out one of the three, and the other two are can't go back to what they were
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Grand Admiral Wettengel
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8/20/04 6:54am
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RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 8/16
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This has a lot of potential.
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Jaina-Solo-Fel
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8/21/04 11:07am
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RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 8/16
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Aww, poor Jaina! Good thing Kyp is around to make it all better... or worse, considering the plot of this story, lol! Still, loving it, as always, can't wait for a new post
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Goddess-of-Trickery
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8/21/04 5:10pm
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RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 8/16
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Beautiful depiction of Jaina's anguish, can't imagine how terrible those weeks on Hapes had to be for her, thinking both of her brothers were dead... no wonder she ran about frying people with Force lightning, eh?
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JediPrincess83
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8/22/04 7:55am
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RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 8/16
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Very nice post- poor Jaina, but I am hoping we get to see emotion of some kind at the funeral since Elaine Cummings jipped us on that aspect! Keep this story going, it's really good so far
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Jedi_Jaina_Fel
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8/23/04 10:09am
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RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 8/16
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All I have to say is... Beautiful depiction of the despair poor girl's going through.
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8/23/04 4:43pm
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RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 8/16
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update sooon [Face_Hopefull]
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Vaders_Granddaughter
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Date Posted:
8/23/04 8:41pm
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RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 8/16
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This looks very promising- I love the way you worked your way into both Kyp and Jaina's psyches. Is there a new post coming soon?
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