Author Topic: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 3/4/08
Daughterofflame 
Registered: Sep '03
18590_Vima Sunrider
Date Posted: 9/6/04 10:11pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/6
grin (*hides shy smile*) I liked it. grin Can I have more soon? (*ducks out of thread timidly*)

~*~Austyn

 

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Darth_Kinwon 
Registered: Sep '04
22669_Anakin Skywalker
Date Posted: 9/6/04 10:18pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/6
Loved the newest update! Man, you can feel the tension, can't you? Before long, those two are going to be having lightsaber duels... and then their duels will turn into... duels of another nature tongue wink

 

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Abby 
Registered: Jan '04
7447_Han and Leia
Date Posted: 9/6/04 11:31pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/6
Gah! I missed two posts!

Both of which were excellent, by the way.

The funeral scene, similar and yet different, was exceptional. I love how you get right into the way people are feeling, like you did with Jaina here. Even with her shields up.

And the second post was just as brilliant. The interaction betwee Kyp and Jaina (the wonderful bantering), was great. Perfectly Kyp and Jaina, especially her feeling like she wants to do it again.

Nice nice nice grin

~Abby~

 

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JediPrincess83 
Registered: Jan '03
17453_Aubrie
Date Posted: 9/7/04 9:07am Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/6
Another great post for this story grin I am really enjoying the way it's playing out, lol- Jaina and Kyp have always, even in the books where she's all lovey with Jag, had a chemistry that was just full of repressed tension and emotions, and you brought that to the forefront here. He he, can I be impatient and go ahead and ask when the next post will go up? tongue

 

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Trickster_Goddess 
Registered: Jun '03
13771_Padme Concept
Date Posted: 9/7/04 1:39pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/6
Lol, those need to get a room, huh? tongue wink Nicely done, JPS... every post just keeps on getting better, if that is possible grin

 

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JainaSoloSkywalker 
Registered: Jul '02
24182_Padme Art
Date Posted: 9/7/04 5:12pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/6
LOL! If Lowie hadn't shown up, I think they might have started to Force-kick each other after a few more minutes of that tongue wink Great stuff, keep it coming!

 

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jedi-solo-fel 
Registered: Jul '02
42775_Leia Solo
Date Posted: 9/8/04 9:58am Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/6
This story just keeps getting better grin He he, I don't know who I feel sorrier for here... Kyp, for having such a sharp-tongued temptress who'll end up corrupting him... Jaina, for being so overwhelmed with grief and pain that she doesn't seem aware of the fact that she's fallen so far... or Lowbacca, who has to listen to them tongue wink

 

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DarthJaina 
Registered: Aug '02
7717_Padmé (Evil)
Date Posted: 9/8/04 6:13pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/6
UP we go! wink

 

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Jedi_Jaina_Fel 
Registered: Jun '02
24096_Padme
Date Posted: 9/9/04 12:44pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/6
Great, as always, my friend- I know others have said it, but really, the tension was just awesome between them! love Update again soon, pour favor wink

 

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DantanaSkywalker 
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Registered: Apr '02
22182_Kyp and Jaina
Date Posted: 9/9/04 3:49pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/6
Woooo! Nice tension, JPS! happy More soon?


Dana

 

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AngelofDarkness 
Registered: Aug '02
6970_Sarris
Date Posted: 9/9/04 5:53pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/6
Lol, those two... tongue This is prime example of why I was a bit disappointed they went w/ the J/J direction (as much as I love Jag- Kyp is better suited for Jaina, and they kind of hinted at that in TUF, IMO)... Kyp and Jaina deserve each other, lol wink

 

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Sword-of_the-Jedi 
Registered: Jun '03
23520_Lightsaber
Date Posted: 9/9/04 7:48pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/6
He he, I know it's repetitive, but I'm too sleepy to be original at this point, especially when the tension between them is what made this post just a dynamite read tongue When can we expect the next post? grin

 

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Vaders_Granddaughter 
Registered: Jun '03
7449_Bastila
Date Posted: 9/10/04 8:33am Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/6
Great post- we need another one soon tongue wink

 

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Goddess-of-Trickery 
Registered: Aug '02
41215_Slave Leia
Date Posted: 9/10/04 3:32pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/6
LOL! The shower talk... priceless! laugh Poor Kyp, she really took a shot at his male ego w/ that one tongue

 

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DarthJaina 
Registered: Aug '02
7717_Padmé (Evil)
Date Posted: 9/10/04 4:24pm Subject: RE: Fallen from Grace (Post-SbS, AU dark side K/J); Updated 9/6
You promised me a new post tonight, missy.... do I have to resort to hitting you w/ the gimmer stick? devil tongue I know, I know, you're probably just getting home from work or class, so I will shut up now wink

 

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