Author Topic: The Lives of Dreaming (L/M vignette - sequel to "Just Dreaming")
AnakinsHeir  905 posts
Registered: May '04
24206_Anakin
Date Posted: 9/7/04 10:39am Subject: RE: The Lives of Dreaming (L/M vignette - sequel to "Just Dreaming")
Lovely, lovely work. I'm a sucker for anything Mara and Luke.

 

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Daughterofflame  1098 posts
Registered: Sep '03
18590_Vima Sunrider
Date Posted: 9/7/04 4:03pm Subject: RE: The Lives of Dreaming (L/M vignette - sequel to "Just Dreaming")
Smoothe, coherent, effective. Very well done. happy I enjoyed looking at one of my favorite ships in a different light. happy Nice job!
~*~Austyn

 

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obaona  4725 posts
Registered: Jun '02
24174_Padme
Date Posted: 9/10/04 1:02am Subject: RE: The Lives of Dreaming (L/M vignette - sequel to "Just Dreaming")
green_eyes: Thank you. grin The idea of them being divorced came from all the feedback of 'if only this had happened earlier'. And I thought, maybe there's a reason it took so much time. tongue I'm glad you liked it - and I love writing hope. I nearly always try to leave hope. happy

Gabri: Really? wink I knew it'd raise the angst factor, but I was worried about it being too cliche. tongue I'm glad you liked it, heart-wrenching and all. hugs And yes, I'm writing L/M again. wink It's practice for DYM, of sorts. silly Thank you! grin

Jedi-2B: I love hope. Hope is so important, and it's something sorely underestimated. wink I'm glad you liked the pacing, I wanted it to be slow and careful, and I worried I was rushing it anyway. tongue Thank you! grin

kayladie97: hugs Hello! grin It's wonderful to see you here. happy

What can I say? tongue I love body language. And Lando? If I may channel Mara for a moment, over my dead body. tongue That pairing sounds too weird for me, regardless of Lando's feelings. Her and Karrde, I can see. tongue I'm glad you thought Dayk interesting, I did want to give some info on him so he wouldn't be so much of a plot device. tongue

You're absolutely right - Mara is stubborn, but not generally in a stupid fashion. I had Luke ask that question because Mara had taken a step, and I wanted Luke to take one too - that ties into the hope at the end, because they're both taking steps. happy I think you're right about what Mara was thinking, too.

I'm glad you liked the hug. grin Awkward and sweet - I love you said that, that's what I wanted it to be. Thank you! grin

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AnakinsHeir: LOL, that's not a bad thing. wink Thank you. grin

Daughterofflame: Thank you. grin I like different lights. They're interesting. thinking tongue

 

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