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TheCrazyRodian Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 11/29/04 12:32am Subject: RE: Good Like This (L/M viggie - second person, mush if anything)
	Obaona... so hot right now -----signature----- My body wears a green scent, as on the verge Between green laughter and green sorrow I have walked all day Until my legs have gone lame, and still the spring seems spirited away. --Yi Sanghwa
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Bri_Windstar Registered: May '02	Date Posted: 11/29/04 9:15am Subject: RE: Good Like This (L/M viggie - second person, mush if anything)
	Oba, i love you I love little snippets like this. It really is a "slice of life." It's just the two of them (with Ben ), in the moment, enjoying it for what it is. Haaa, the last part is the best And yay for second person! Everyone should try it at least once, because its fun and something different. Even if the actual writing of it feels a bit... weird. At least i think so. -----signature----- Mediocrity- it takes a lot less time and most people won't notice the difference before it's too late. * OMG! SO RIDICULOUSLY AND AGGRAVATINGLY PERFECT!- Gabri * 11010110101000101011
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obaona Registered: Jun '02	Date Posted: 11/30/04 1:36am Subject: RE: Good Like This (L/M viggie - second person, mush if anything)
	TheCrazyRodian: Dare I ask what you mean by that? Bri_Windstar: I love you too. Aye, that's exactly what it is. It's nice. We don't get much of this in the EU (and none in second person ), but it's not - ambitious, I almost want to say. Hehe, the last part is cute. I've written in second person before, but I think this is the first SW thing in second person I've done. And it does feel weird at first. I'm glad you liked, Bri. Thank you! -----signature----- MS Word is designed by sadists with masochists in mind. - teh atty my recent Atton (KOTOR2) fic: http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/30335989
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academygrad88 Registered: Apr '04	Date Posted: 11/30/04 2:11am Subject: RE: Good Like This (L/M viggie - second person, mush if anything)
	Great job! I can never get enough L/M mush! -----signature----- I love my Bomb Disposal Expert Winner of more Golden Ewoks™ than you can possibly imagine! Check out the pictures I made: http://ag88.deviantart.com/ ! You will Kriff Luke Skywalker!~ The Real last Command http://swff.bpweb.net/forum/viewtopic.php?t=4
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obaona Registered: Jun '02	Date Posted: 12/4/04 3:17pm Subject: RE: Good Like This (L/M viggie - second person, mush if anything)
	academygrad88: Thank you! And aye, well, who can? -----signature----- MS Word is designed by sadists with masochists in mind. - teh atty my recent Atton (KOTOR2) fic: http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/30335989
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Leia Registered: Aug '98	Date Posted: 12/8/04 12:22pm Subject: RE: Good Like This (L/M viggie - second person, mush if anything)
	This is a great vignette, obaona! It really was relaxing...which I definitely need with finals coming up. I love the second person. I've been on quite the looooooooong hiatus from Star Wars--been a little busy with other fandoms, where second person is used a lot more frequently. I find it absolutely fascinating. You've done an excellent job with it. And while I'm gushing ...since I've recently returned to the forums, I've been reading a bunch of your fanfic, and I adore it! Thanks for sharing your talent with us! Keep it up! -----signature----- Those who don't believe in magic will never find it. (Roald Dahl)
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obaona Registered: Jun '02	Date Posted: 12/13/04 1:58pm Subject: RE: Good Like This (L/M viggie - second person, mush if anything)
	Leia: I sympathize. My finals were all on one day. Fortunately, the method is here is to only have finals during normal class-time or make it take-home. Second-person is underrated. It's a little tricky, I think, and that it 'tells the reader what to feel' can be a valid point, which you have to avoid, even though it's second person. If that makes any sense. I'm glad you like! And wow, thank you. Thanks! I'm glad you've enjoyed. I'll keep it up! -----signature----- MS Word is designed by sadists with masochists in mind. - teh atty my recent Atton (KOTOR2) fic: http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/30335989
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Knight_Aragorn Registered: Jun '03	Date Posted: 1/3/05 4:41pm Subject: RE: Good Like This (L/M viggie - second person, mush if anything)
	I'm slow... Don't know how I missed this when it was posted. It's an interesting fic - I like the way you've used second person. You've really gotten into Mara's head in terms of her thoughts regarding Luke, and their life together. I really liked the interchange between them about dying in bed (or otherwise) and that last bit - Also it was great to see Luke and Ben together like that. Wonderful job!
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RebelMom Title: TFF Secretary Registered: Apr '00	Date Posted: 1/3/05 5:12pm Subject: RE: Good Like This (L/M viggie - second person, mush if anything)
	I missed this too. It was sweet and relaxing and I needed that. -----signature----- Short Story: Pressure Point http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/26961243/p1/?7 Jacen Solo and Anakin Skywalker - as it should have been. TFF: Cheryl
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Gina Registered: Jun '03	Date Posted: 1/5/05 6:45am Subject: RE: Good Like This (L/M viggie - second person, mush if anything)
	Awww! sigh That was so beautiful! -----signature----- A long time ago in a house far away, there was a mother who was strong in the ways of the Force. She "forced" her sons to clean their room, she "forced" her sons to behave. - Part of a story written by my 9 yr. old sons I found while cleaning their desks
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WhosScruffyLooking Registered: Nov '04	Date Posted: 1/5/05 7:38am Subject: RE: Good Like This (L/M viggie - second person, mush if anything)
	Beautiful! I loved it.
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VaderLVR64 Title: Manager Emeritus Registered: Feb '04	Date Posted: 1/5/05 7:41am Subject: RE: Good Like This (L/M viggie - second person, mush if anything)
	I don't know how I missed this earlier, but I love it! -----signature----- R.I.P John, Alex, Jason, and Christian Never forgotten Soldiers' Angels http://soldiersangels.org/ 2114 soldiers waiting for someone to care
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obaona Registered: Jun '02	Date Posted: 1/5/05 11:11pm Subject: RE: Good Like This (L/M viggie - second person, mush if anything)
	Knight_Aragorn: I don't know either. It's always interesting trying to get into the head of a character, when all the while I'm saying 'you' feel this and do that. The bit about dying in bed - I don't know. This story was supposed to be serious and philosophical, but it just wouldn't do it. I love Luke and Ben together - I love seeing Luke as a father. Thank you , I'm glad you liked. RebelMom: Relaxing fics are nice sometimes. I have certain ones I reread to calm myself down if I'm upset about something. Thank you. Gina: Thank you. WhosScruffyLooking: Thank you! VaderLVR64: I thought people were turned off by it being second person ... Thank you! -----signature----- MS Word is designed by sadists with masochists in mind. - teh atty my recent Atton (KOTOR2) fic: http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/30335989
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