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A Christmas Carol – Star Wars Style (K/J post NJO - completed)
DantanaSkywalker
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Manager Emeritus
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Apr '02
Date Posted:
12/18/04 8:58pm
Subject:
RE: A Christmas Carol – Star Wars Style (K/J post NJO - Part 8 is up 12/18)
... darkness slowly crapping over the galaxy ...
Erm. *lips twitch* You might wanna change that to "creeping".
Interesting, I wasn't expecting Exar Kun!
Dana
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Congrats, babe. Hope you're still laughing, wherever you are.
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Jesina_Dreis
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Nov '04
Date Posted:
12/18/04 9:39pm
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RE: A Christmas Carol – Star Wars Style (K/J post NJO - Part 8 is up 12/18)
oooh...Very nice, Mag
Didn't expect Kun...
that's rather evil of you.
Jes
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Maggy
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Oct '04
Date Posted:
12/19/04 4:20am
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RE: A Christmas Carol – Star Wars Style (K/J post NJO - Part 8 is up 12/18)
Kat
Somehow I didn’t saw your review yesterday
He he he you guys are crazy.
Ha ha you catch up fast on that *laugh*
Crazy is nice insane is better and beyond it is best
Thanks for reading
LadyAngelic
Oh didn't expect Kun...Good Job!
Nobody did when I look to the other reviews
Thank you
Sam
Hello Honey *hugs*
Yub again the bad word fantasy
but whom am I telling that? *grin*
Barefoot
Well let's see how I did...
*lol*
I was right about Miko...
yub very right about it
Anakin Solo I was wrong about, but he probably would have been as effective as Chewbacca. That's just my opinion.
but wasn’t mine while I wrote it
Dorsk 81... I was dead wrong. Exar Kun was much better and easily more influential on Kyp's life. He was also far better when portraying the grim possible futures. Bringing Kun in was nothing short of brilliant. I wouldn't have thought of it in a million years.
*bows*
Thank you very much
Great job Maggy
THX
Dana
Interesting, I wasn't expecting Exar Kun!
nobody did
Thanks
i edited the mistake thanks for pointing out
Jes
oooh...Very nice, Mag
thank you
Didn't expect Kun...
look above nobody did *grin*
that's rather evil of you.
Ha ha and that from the FIEND
and Elu thanks
I need that *laugh*
Thanks for reading
next post should be up in the evening (for me)
Mag
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Anastasia_Fel
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Sep '04
Date Posted:
12/19/04 4:24am
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RE: A Christmas Carol – Star Wars Style (K/J post NJO - Part 8 is up 12/18)
Yeah, I"m here!!!!!!!!!!!
*opens some wine*
Shall we enjoy the celebration old chap?
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Maggy
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Date Posted:
12/19/04 8:02am
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RE: A Christmas Carol – Star Wars Style (K/J post NJO - Part 8 is up 12/18)
Hello
Sam
*hugs*
*opens some wine*
sounds good as long as the wine is red
Shall we enjoy the celebration old chap?
Celebration is always good
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Ackyuna
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Oct '04
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12/19/04 11:11am
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RE: A Christmas Carol ¨C Star Wars Style (K/J post NJO - Part 8 is up 12/18)
Ha! I knew it would be Exar Kun! W00t! I'm right!
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Maggy
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12/19/04 11:22am
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RE: A Christmas Carol – Star Wars Style (K/J post NJO - Part 8 is up 12/18)
Ha! I knew it would be Exar Kun! W00t! I'm right!
Nice for you
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Never-Alone
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Dec '04
Date Posted:
12/19/04 1:29pm
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RE: A Christmas Carol – Star Wars Style (K/J post NJO - Part 8 is up 12/18)
Great posts! I'm sorry I missed them, been gone awhile.
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Darth_Elu
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Jan '03
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12/19/04 1:41pm
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RE: A Christmas Carol – Star Wars Style (K/J post NJO - Part 8 is up 12/18)
*watches silently*
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Brittnee
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Maggy
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Date Posted:
12/19/04 2:31pm
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RE: A Christmas Carol – Star Wars Style (K/J post NJO - Part 8 is up 12/18)
Never-Alone
thank you and welcome back
Elu
hello dear
my I join you
*huddles besides Elu on sofa*
Mag
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Darth_Elu
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12/19/04 2:33pm
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RE: A Christmas Carol – Star Wars Style (K/J post NJO - Part 8 is up 12/18)
Of course, of course. *huddles with Maggy on the sofa*
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Maggy
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12/19/04 2:37pm
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RE: A Christmas Carol – Star Wars Style (K/J post NJO - Part 8 is up 12/18)
*huddles with Elu on the sofa and watches her readers*
Second Part
He fell on his bunk in heap. His heart rate slowed down after some deep and calming breaths.
`From where did that come? Jaina loves me. She loves me the way I am! I must be going insane!´
He stood up again. `What happened tonight? Would the events he had seen come to pass?´
It was all so strange. No, strange is an understatement. Unbelievable comes closer! Not that Exar Kun had shown up in his room, that was plausible, but that he really believed Jaina loves him, that and she was his happiest memory.
`Someone must have toyed with my mind. It must be. Who would be able to? There is Horn ... no not on the planet, Mara ... not that good that she can toy with me that easily, Skywalker ... to noble, Jaina herself ... why should she let me fantasies about her ... but perhaps that is the trick, toying with my mind and driving me insane and she could laugh about my madness.´
Feeling caged within his room, Kyp fled. His feet led him to the roof of the praxeum. Even back at Yavin he felt free on the roof. Above him were only the stars, clouds and the moon.
`Does she really love me?´
“Kyp,” a female voice said behind him, interrupting his roaring thoughts.
He swirled around and saw three illuminated figures standing side by side. An older man and woman who had a young man standing between them, looking much like his older version.
`Now I know I am insane.´
“My dear boy you are not insane,” the voice said again.
“I am. That night did it. Now I am seeing you three. He had already visited me.” Kyp pointed at the man in the middle. “Why? Why are this happening to me?”
“We wanted you to show what you have done and will do with your life when you continue on this path,” the older man said.
The woman said, “It’s Christmas, Kyp. Or have you forgotten? You should be happy and with a family.”
“No, I haven’t forgotten, damn it. How could I forget when everything around reminds me every damn minute. And after this pestering night, how could I?” Kyp nearly screamed.
“My dear son you have misunderstood all of it. They shouldn’t `pestering´ you.”
“Mum, what are you three doing here? What is happening here?” the Jedi Master asked, his nerves lying blank.
His brother answered him instead, “I came with a warning, did I not?”
Kyp only gritted his teeth and nodded.
“I told you that you are on the best way to a lonely death and nobody will miss you.”
Again the Jedi nodded.
“Son, we are sorry that we had to do this to you. It was the only way we could think of which would get through to you,” the older illuminated man said.
“The only way to what, father?” Kyp snapped at him.
“We wanted to show you that Christmas is not always pain. Miko should have reminded you of the past – how enjoying it is to celebrate it with a family, the hope of a safer future, the pain when someone left. Chewie was so friendly and guided you through the present. You are not the only one who get hurt Kyp. Others too. Especially the young woman you desire. And Exar Kun, he is the one who showed you the future. That will happen when you continue to shoot all the people out of your life. You will only become more hurt, you will cause pain if you don’t change and keep acting this way,” his father explained in a calm voice.
“I know what I have seen that night!” Kyp was becoming impatient. He knew all of that but didn’t know what to do about it. “What way?”
“The way you walk around, shutting everybody out, pretending to have no heart. The way you hide yourself in the fear of getting hurt again, you treat all around you like poodoo, snap at everyone and anyone who tries to befriend you, breaking through your barriers. You shut her out. I don’t understand why she still cares but she does. Don’t lose her, you silly boy!”
“Why does she still care? I have nothing done to deserve her love!”
“We know that. Boy do we know that. We are here to show you that you must change if you don’t want to lose the last person who cares for you. Better go. I believe there is a bottle just outside your room. She might share it with you.”
Kyp stared at the three of them. They were surly right. Maybe she would enjoy it with him. His eyes sparkled with a new found hope. He nodded to his parents and appreciated what they had done to save him. It was time for him to let the past be the past and start a new.
“Father, the future… the one I saw when Exar Kun was there ... Is that going to happen?”
His Father smiled and his eyes twinkled. “Not if you don’t want it to be, son.”
Kyp nodded thoughtfully. “Mum, Dad, Zeth,” he said, a smile playing on his lips. “Thank you for showing me and open my eyes to my surroundings. I hope I see you all again. I love you all. If you don’t mind I will go now. I have a young lady to visit.”
“Good bye son. We are always watching over you. Don’t screw up again. We love you too. Always remember that.”
The three apparitions vanished and only the moon lit the roof again. Kyp, still smiling, went down to his room to pick up a certain bottle of `Whyren’s Reserve´.
End Second Part
End Chapter: Horrid Future Christmases
Please Review!
Mag
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Darth_Elu
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Jan '03
Date Posted:
12/19/04 2:43pm
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RE: A Christmas Carol – Star Wars Style (K/J post NJO - Part 9 is up 12/19)
Great job Maggy!
*hugs*
About time that Kyp came around.
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Brittnee
My love, my life
Getting married to spacelady on 8/22/09
"Ichigo! Come out and fight me, you *******!"
The Elu Empire ~ Recruiting! Ask now!
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Smuggler_Shidakis
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Jul '04
Date Posted:
12/19/04 2:43pm
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RE: A Christmas Carol – Star Wars Style (K/J post NJO - Part 9 is up 12/19)
Whoa!
Kyppie's family!
Kyppie not a bitter idiot anymore!
YAY!
(Good postie, Mag)
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flowerbee
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Date Posted:
12/19/04 2:45pm
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*dances* Good boy, Kyppie!!
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