Author Topic: Drive You Mild (L/M, massive AU -- {Updated March 4!} Complete.)
Mira_Jade  1446 posts
Registered: Jun '04
50015_H623: Phantom
Date Posted: 1/11/05 8:28am Subject: RE: Drive You Mild (L/M, massive AU -- political intrigue, romance, drama -- {UPDATED Jan. 11!})
The best thing about snow days is being able to sit at home and read all day. grin

I lovet his story so far. It's so nice to see them start to fall for each other. love

*goes back and reads post over and over again*

 

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VaderLVR64  30945 posts
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Registered: Feb '04
49060_Obi-Wan Kenobi (811092)
Date Posted: 1/11/05 9:00am Subject: RE: Drive You Mild (L/M, massive AU -- political intrigue, romance, drama -- {UPDATED Jan. 11!})
I was enthralled from the first word of that chapter to the last! grin I'm a very happy reader right now. Luke as the Emperor is amazing, complex and very different, but the core of LUKE is still there. Mara is very much the Mara I remember from Canon, but thrust into a completely different situation! Interesting!


“Do you think you scare people?” Mara asked at last.

“Only the sensible ones,” Skywalker replied. Mara shot him a surprised look. “Are you sensible?” he asked, looking directly into Mara’s eyes.

Mara didn’t flinch. She smiled. “Guess not.”

Skywalker smiled. It was a considering smile – a smile that showed intelligent pleasure. “Good,” he said simply.


Loved this exchange! And the Noghri? Hooray!

 

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Jedi_BMK  983 posts
Registered: Sep '04
43710_Dr. Cox Kenobi
Date Posted: 1/11/05 9:43am Subject: RE: Drive You Mild (L/M, massive AU -- political intrigue, romance, drama -- {UPDATED Jan. 11!})
Hmmm...what could Luke be having nightmares about?

Looks like Leia will be entering the scene shortly. I wonder how long it will take Luke to realize who she is...if he doesn't know already. Never know what he could be hiding.

Luke's appears to be spreading disinformation through Mara. He has one big plan, that's for sure. I can't wait to see what it is. The question is whether he'll avoid revealing personal things like he did in this go around.

And Luke got the Noghri bodyguards. This is going to be a fun read, that's for sure. Keep up the good work.

 

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AnakinsHeir  905 posts
Registered: May '04
24206_Anakin
Date Posted: 1/11/05 10:18am Subject: RE: Drive You Mild (L/M, massive AU -- political intrigue, romance, drama -- {UPDATED Jan. 11!})

Eventually, his breathing evened out. He had nightmares in cycles – one every night for a week, and then nothing for at least three months. As such, he wasn’t surprised by having been awakened. His staff wouldn’t be surprised either – he would be cranky for the next week. He had already noticed with some amusement them preparing for it.

I thought that was amusing. He recognizes many of his own weaknesses. This story is amazing, I don't know what else to say about it. Except perhaps, MORE?

 

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Jedi-2B  3751 posts
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42320_Luke Skywalker
Date Posted: 1/11/05 10:32am Subject: RE: Drive You Mild (L/M, massive AU -- political intrigue, romance, drama -- {UPDATED Jan. 11!})
Tuesday and Friday -- my new favorite days. grin

Loved the beginning, with the insights into Luke -- how he apparently had been beaten as a child, how he secretly cried in the shower after the nightmare. Also we find out where Leia is, that Alderaan is still there, and that few people know how Vader got hold of Luke.

The interaction of Luke and Mara was great; each surprising the other. And Luke's conversation with Kejal showed how Luke is certainly not soft, considering the Vaderians, and how far-reaching his calculating is, with how he has planned out what info he is telling Mara. I love this 'cool, calculating, but deep-down not-so-bad' version of Luke. applause

 

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Jesina_Dreis  3351 posts
Registered: Nov '04
40103_Mirax Terrik
Date Posted: 1/11/05 10:40am Subject: RE: Drive You Mild (L/M, massive AU -- political intrigue, romance, drama -- {UPDATED Jan. 11!})
and Luke - well.
Liking the image I'm getting doesn't mean I like him...just that, well, I like the image...he strikes me as intelligent, devious, cunning...none of this whininess that pervades his character in a lot of the books.

Skywalker was making everything difficult – he retained enough total control that doing anything he did not wish was nearly impossible to accomplish, and yet he gave enough freedom that people were willing to believe more would come. Moreover, he endeared his people to him.
At this point, it seems like he has all of the Emperor's strengths and few of his failings

Only Bail, Yoda and Obi-Wan knew the truth
Is Obi-Wan still alive?

And is Leia going to be trained as Luke was in ESB?

Mara folded her arms and shot Mauwel a dirty look with a sweet smile
I really like how you're writing Mara...a Jedi with a distinct edge about her

Skywalker looked at her, expression still mild, and raised an eyebrow
I get the feeling there's more to Mauwel than we see...
And come on, Luke, did you really expect her not to ask any questions?

“Only the sensible ones,” Skywalker replied. Mara shot him a surprised look. “Are you sensible?” he asked, looking directly into Mara’s eyes.

Mara didn’t flinch. She smiled. “Guess not.”

I loved this exchange

We already got a warrant
The Empire takes time to get a search warrant? Never would have thought

She puts me off balance, and I can’t figure out how she does it.
Glad to see she's getting her feet back under her.

Jes

 

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Smuggler_Shidakis  2760 posts
Registered: Jul '04
19061_Mara Jade
Date Posted: 1/11/05 11:28am Subject: RE: Drive You Mild (L/M, massive AU -- political intrigue, romance, drama -- {UPDATED Jan. 11!})
Ah... so we know where Leia is. Where is Han, I wonder?

I absolutely love the Luke/Mara interactions. They keep surprising one another... and Luke's plotting and planning is awesome.

I also like the distinctions between Luke, Vader, and Palpy.

 

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The_Good_Twin  295 posts
Registered: Jun '03
7722_Ysanne Isard
Date Posted: 1/11/05 12:06pm Subject: RE: Drive You Mild (L/M, massive AU -- political intrigue, romance, drama -- {UPDATED Jan. 11!})
He had nightmares in cycles – one every night for a week, and then nothing for at least three months. - Poor Luke. sad

“As Your Highness may or may not know, I have a daughter there which I have not seen for quite some time,” Bail said.

Skywalker’s eyes narrowed. “Ah, yes. Leia Organa. One of the New Republic’s people,” he said casually.
shock So, Leia is alive. Is she a Jedi, too?

“I want to see him,” Mara said, emphasizing each word, carefully bringing out each syllable. - Mara is in love love , Mara is in love love love love .... silly tongue


“But you are still troubled.”

“I told her something true, Kejal. Yes, this time I used it – but next time?” Luke said fiercely
- shock Oh Force, how could you tell something which is true, Luke?! shame_on_you silly

Perhaps she should be more carefully watched,” Kejal suggested.

Luke paused. “Put two Noghri on her.”
- I wonder when Mara will realize that she is being watched by the Noghris. thinking She won't be happy about it. devil Oh, but I like Noghris! grin

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academygrad88  5723 posts
Registered: Apr '04
13884_Luke and Mara
Date Posted: 1/11/05 12:18pm Subject: RE: Drive You Mild (L/M, massive AU -- political intrigue, romance, drama -- {UPDATED Jan. 11!})
applause Great post!!

Your portrayal of Luke is fantastic. Of course, I have always liked the bad boys. wink

I definitely prefered Luke in "Dark Empire"than his portrayal in the other novels. Maybe it was just the tight leather pants. wink

Great job. I cannot wait for the next post. Thanks for giving us the posting schedule. This way I don't go crazy checking for updates all the time.

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StarFighter5  1129 posts
Registered: Jul '03
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Date Posted: 1/11/05 12:47pm Subject: RE: Drive You Mild (L/M, massive AU -- political intrigue, romance, drama -- {UPDATED Jan. 11!})
I wonder how long they will play cat and mouse.

 

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LaYa_  8908 posts
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Date Posted: 1/11/05 1:11pm Subject: RE: Drive You Mild (L/M, massive AU -- political intrigue, romance, drama -- {UPDATED Jan. 11!})
Hmm so Leia is alive... thinking Interesting that it seems that Luke doesn't know that she is his sister... However... thinking I bet he knows !


I loved the interaction between Mara and Luke love Very well done! grin

 

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HandofSkywalker86  1971 posts
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6503_Luke Skywalker
Date Posted: 1/11/05 1:12pm Subject: RE: Drive You Mild (L/M, massive AU -- political intrigue, romance, drama -- {UPDATED Jan. 11!})
Great post.

Once again you had me spellbound. I liked the way Mara was able to get a little info out of Luke then, his devious plotting afterwards. Methinks Luke's dreams are going to be very important later on 'cause "Jedi don't dream".

I wonder if those scars are battle scars or hints of the masochism of the Sith.

Luke seems to have the strengths of the previous Emperor's with much different faults.

Luke has Noghri's hanging around, I wonder if he has any Blue skinned aliens or scoundrels hanging aroung?

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Leia  338 posts
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Date Posted: 1/11/05 1:56pm Subject: RE: Drive You Mild (L/M, massive AU -- political intrigue, romance, drama -- {UPDATED Jan. 11!})
Sheets that stay cool? I'd pay a trillion dollars for some of those in the middle of summer! tongue

Mara folded her arms and shot Mauwel a dirty look with a sweet smile.

LOL, only Mara could pull that off. *tries to do it and fails miserably* silly

I like that you've used the Noghri. It's a nice touch that somehow makes the story that much more believable. happy Also, I love the way you reveal information about the characters and the AU storyline. You have to pay attention to catch it all.

So Luke is playing Mara...he should be very careful. When she finds out, she is going to be so mad. wink

Nice post, obaona. And yay for posting schedules! dancing

 

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Happy_Hobbit_Padawan  1692 posts
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Date Posted: 1/11/05 2:00pm Subject: RE: Drive You Mild (L/M, massive AU -- political intrigue, romance, drama -- {UPDATED Jan. 11!})
Absolutely intriguing, oba.

Are you sure you can't post more often? praying grin

 

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vader_incarnate  1380 posts
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Date Posted: 1/11/05 2:52pm Subject: RE: Drive You Mild (L/M, massive AU -- political intrigue, romance, drama -- {UPDATED Jan. 11!}) - Date Edited: 1/11/05 4:51pm (1 edits total) Edited By: vader_incarnate
*snort* Okay, I'll be the sane Vaderian who gets off-planet by disguising herself as ... I dunno, a giant green hamster off to give a birthday party on Alderaan. o.O And yes, I am perfectly aware of how contradictory that single sentence is. hugs

Interesting look into Luke's dreams, his personal life. Seems as if all is not quite as it seems with the galaxy's favorite Emperor. wink And stars, if there's one flavor I like more than evil!Luke, it's tormented!Luke ... this should be rather entertaining. kiss

Other question would be whether or not Luke had taken an apprentice, with the two-Sith-rule thing. thinking That'd be rather interesting.

By the stars, I'd almost forgotten about Obi-Wan, with my focus on the younger OT characters -- is he alive, then?? *shall need to pay attention, she supposes* And though we know where Leia is, where's Han ... eh, we'll find out sooner or later, with this story in your capable hands. wink

Sorry this is kinda short, but Physics final tomorrow. blush Off to PM you with random nothingness again ...

 

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