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Starlan Registered: Dec '04	Date Posted: 1/19/05 12:57pm Subject: Forever (J/J) After TUF * 6/06/06 I have returned* - Date Edited: 6/6/06 10:58am (21 edits total) Edited By: Starlan
	Story: Forever Author: Starlan Timeframe: After TUF Main Characters: Jag and Chak Fel, Jaina Solo, some others Disclaimer: I don't own Star Wars, its characters, etc., etc. You all know how the drill goes. This is my first fanfic, and I'm nervous, so bark all you want, just please don't bite. And now, without further ado, here is my attempt at entertainment. Chapter 1 Colonel Jagged Fel stood stiffly in front of his father’s desk, his gaze fixed on the wall above the Baron’s head as was proper. The way Jag stood reminded General Baron Soontir Fel of a different office on a different frozen planet. There were several distinct differences, however. This time, his son wasn’t arguing for permission to go back to the Known Regions. Instead, he was reporting back to the so-called Unknown Regions. Jag seemed distracted, his mind parsecs away from his body, not focused on what was happening around him as he normally was. “I would like to know why you stayed in the Known Regions long after you should have reported back as ordered, Colonel,” the Baron said. “I felt my presence was needed more there, in the fight against the Yuuzhan Vong, than here, denying that they where ever a threat to the Chiss,” Jag said, then amended silently, And I couldn’t stand to be here and not know what was happening to Jaina. Baron Fel noted his son’s use of “the Chiss”. Before he had left, Jag would have said “us”. “Why do you think that your presence was needed there?” To keep Jaina from getting herself killed, because trouble seems to find her far too easily. Jag thought. Instead of saying that, however, he said “I believed that any damage done to the Vong there was damage the Vong couldn’t do when they finally came here.” The elder Fel regarded his son quietly. While he was certain that the young Colonel was telling the truth, he had a feeling that there was more to it. Unfortunately, he doubted his son was likely to tell him what that more was. He suppressed a sigh. Soontir could tell that Jag had spent a lot of his time with Wedge Antilles and the Solos. He was not only distracted, he was also becoming adept at ommitting the truth. “Very well. Dismissed , Colonel,” he said. An exchange of salutes later and Soontir Fel was left alone to ponder the changes in his son and wonder just what the full reason for his long absence was. -----signature----- My J/J fanfic, Forever http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/18105711/p1 May it rest in peace. Until I get back to it. someday. "I was at woodstock. Fed off a flower person and spent the next six hours watching my hand move." -Spike, BtVS ep
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TKeira_Lea Registered: Oct '02	Date Posted: 1/19/05 1:28pm Subject: RE: Forever (J/J) After TUF
	Nice start, Starlan! Keep up the good work. ~Make sure you submit your story to the J/J Index so all the Jag fans know to check out your thread.~ -----signature----- http://www.lominalecantina.com Do you ever talk to yourself? Worry when you answer back. current fanfic ~ Return to Bolis Island http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/29571370/p1/?19
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LukesTheMan Registered: Apr '04	Date Posted: 1/19/05 1:49pm Subject: RE: Forever (J/J) After TUF
	Good start! I hope there will be an update soon. -----signature----- Of Metal and Flesh http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/19859245 Empty Vessel http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/19744934 Proud Master to Annika_Skywalker
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Canadian_Maple_Leaf Registered: May '04	Date Posted: 1/19/05 2:29pm Subject: RE: Forever (J/J) After TUF - Date Edited: 1/19/05 2:31pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Canadian_Maple_Leaf
	Looks Good Post again soon please To keep Jaina from getting herself killed, because trouble seems to find her far too easily. Thats funny : )
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dragonmaster627 Registered: Jan '05	Date Posted: 1/19/05 3:18pm Subject: RE: Forever (J/J) After TUF
	Interesting so far, can't wait for you to post more. -----signature----- Forget Lord of the Rings, you should read Lord of the Fings You gotta love them typos. Red means stop, Green means go, Yellow means floor it. Don't Piss Me Off, I'm running out of places to hide the bodies!!
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GoddessJainaSoloFel Title: FF - Former Montreal Canada CR Registered: Nov '04	Date Posted: 1/19/05 4:02pm Subject: RE: Forever (J/J) After TUF
	It's a good start! I'm interested in seeing how Jag will talk his way into going back to the Known Regions and Jaina or if she's going to end up going to Chiss Space They can't be alone for too long! I look forward to your next post! ~Goddess Jaina~ -----signature----- ~Thank You~ J/J/K ~ http://boards.theforce.net/Beyond_the_Saga/b10477/18221402/?80 Dark Lady at the DLC http://www.darklordscouncil.com XO - Kyp's Dozen - NJOFC, LEAD-Twin Suns SAFF Honorary member http://swendirect.com The voice of Star Wars Fandom
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Starlan Registered: Dec '04	Date Posted: 1/19/05 6:25pm Subject: RE: Forever (J/J) After TUF
	Right now, my internet is acting funny, and I can't see all the replies. So, if I don't reply to you, blame it on aol. TKL Thsnks! I'll submit my story as soon as i am able to PM. Goddess Thank you, as well! I'm interested in seeing how Jag will talk his way into going back to the Known Regions and Jaina or if she's going to end up going to Chiss Space They can't be alone for too long! lol. You're right, they can't be alone for too long. As to who goes where we'll see. The next post will either be up within two hours or it will be up at 3:00 am board time(6, my time). Thanks to all who have read it so far, even if the internet won't let me see what you said. -----signature----- My J/J fanfic, Forever http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/18105711/p1 May it rest in peace. Until I get back to it. someday. "I was at woodstock. Fed off a flower person and spent the next six hours watching my hand move." -Spike, BtVS ep
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Anastasia_Fel Registered: Sep '04	Date Posted: 1/19/05 6:32pm Subject: RE: Forever (J/J) After TUF
	This looks good, Can't wait until tonight Confrontations are good too Sam -----signature----- If you are reading this, your thread has just been: Destroyed and most possibly Spammed Now is the time to bow down before me By the way, this is all just a figment of your imagination
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JediJainaSoloFel Registered: Jun '04	Date Posted: 1/19/05 8:19pm Subject: RE: Forever (J/J) After TUF
	You are off to a good start. -----signature----- "I am convinced that life is 10% what happens to me and 90% how I react to it."-Charles Swindoll "Stress, it's a killer" -Bartok from Anastasia
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Starlan Registered: Dec '04	Date Posted: 1/19/05 11:32pm Subject: New really early morning post: Forever: (J/J) - Date Edited: 2/7/05 7:46pm (3 edits total) Edited By: Starlan
	First, I can see everyone now, so here are the extended replies: LukesTheMan Thanks!! As for more, look down. Canadian_Maple_Leaf Thank you! That’s funny lol, yep but it’s the truth dragonmaster Gracias! Since you won’t show me more of you’re fanfic at school, you don’t get to see more of my fanfic or my original fic until I post them, either. So ha. Anastasia_Fel Thank you! Confrontations are good Why, yes, they are. They are very fun too. JediJainaSoloFel Thanks! Second Authors Note: In DJ, we learn that Jag’s deceased siblings names are Cherith and Davin. In FH: II we are introduced to his younger sister, Wyn, and the name Cem is mentioned, which we assume is the fifth of the five siblings. However, in Timothy Zahn’s latest book, we meet Commander Chak Fel. I have chosen to pretend that Cem was never mentioned. So, in my little world that is this fic, Jag had two older brothers And last, but not least, the post. Chapter 2 Jag sat in his quarters, silently staring at the hologram of the brown haired young woman who, to him was the most beautiful woman in the galaxy. She meant more to him than he could possibly say. He hadn’t even realized just how much he missed her until they were both halfway across the galaxy from each other. I miss you, Jaina, he thought. I wish you were here, or that I was there. I don’t care where. I just want to be with you, to be able to look into your beautiful brown eyes, to hold you, to run my fingers through your long brown hair. I want to kiss you, to… The door to his quarters slid open, jolting him out of his thoughts. Jag realized that someone had been knocking on it for quite some time. Just outside the doorway stood Commander Chak Fel, Jag’s only surviving brother, who he had not seen since before Ithor. “Come in, Commander,” Jag said tiredly. “Do they ignore people at the door out there in the Known Regions, Colonel?” Chak asked with a slight smile as he stepped through the door. He was slightly shorter than Jag, with broad shoulders, and his hair was a very dark brown. “My apologies. I was…thinking,” Jag replied. Chak let the subject drop and glanced around the room. His gaze stopped on the hologram. “Who is she?” he asked, walking over to the desk to get a better look at it. “She is Jaina Solo.” Chak jerked to look at his brother upon hearing the note of sadness and longing in his voice. He observed the way Jag’s eyes fastened on the hologram, and the way his face softened slightly from its normal unemotional set. “So, you go to the Known Regions to fight the Yuuzhan Vong, and somewhere along the way you fall for a Solo?” “What did you come here for, Chak?” Jag asked, his voice discouraging further delving into his personal life. Chak briefly debated pushing Jag for an answer, but the look on Jag’s face said he wouldn’t get very far. “Mother wanted to know if you’d be coming home for dinner this evening.” “Tell her I’ll be there. If that’s all, Commander, I would appreciate being left alone now.” Chak nodded and then retraced his steps back out the door, leaving Jag to stare forlornly at the holo of Jaina Solo and let thoughts of her engulf him. -----signature----- My J/J fanfic, Forever http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/18105711/p1 May it rest in peace. Until I get back to it. someday. "I was at woodstock. Fed off a flower person and spent the next six hours watching my hand move." -Spike, BtVS ep
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Starlan Registered: Dec '04	Date Posted: 1/20/05 3:27am Subject: RE: Forever (J/J) After TUF
	Here you all go, Something to wake you up in the morning. Off to school I go (yuck!) Where I shall be writing more. -----signature----- My J/J fanfic, Forever http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/18105711/p1 May it rest in peace. Until I get back to it. someday. "I was at woodstock. Fed off a flower person and spent the next six hours watching my hand move." -Spike, BtVS ep
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dragonmaster627 Registered: Jan '05	Date Posted: 1/20/05 2:42pm Subject: RE: Forever (J/J) After TUF
	how rude starlan. lol. but hey, the next chapter hasn't been writen. and i don't want anyone to find out who said it. -----signature----- Forget Lord of the Rings, you should read Lord of the Fings You gotta love them typos. Red means stop, Green means go, Yellow means floor it. Don't Piss Me Off, I'm running out of places to hide the bodies!!
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Exploded-Girl Registered: Oct '04	Date Posted: 1/20/05 3:05pm Subject: RE: Forever (J/J) After TUF
	This is good, Starlan!! Can't wait for more! -----signature----- Kiss me, I'm Irish!! http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=17511001&replies=2 ---- Never Forgotten http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28104683/p1/?0 ---- Goodnight My Friend
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Starlan Registered: Dec '04	Date Posted: 1/20/05 6:13pm Subject: RE: Forever (J/J) After TUF
	dragonmaster lol. Exploded-Girl blushes ahh, thanks. More shall come tomorrow after school, I think. I have the next two chapters written, and part of chapter five written. So, assuming darth writer's block doesn't attack, I'll keep getting posts up. -----signature----- My J/J fanfic, Forever http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/18105711/p1 May it rest in peace. Until I get back to it. someday. "I was at woodstock. Fed off a flower person and spent the next six hours watching my hand move." -Spike, BtVS ep
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JAGSGURL15 Registered: Jul '03	Date Posted: 1/20/05 6:33pm Subject: RE: Forever (J/J) After TUF
	awesome job! Could u please send ur story information to Jaina_Jag_Index as soon as possible? Title: Link to story: Link to your user profile: Co-Authors: (If applicable) And their user profiles Timeframe: (post NJO, post-Ruin, etc.) Characters: Genre: (romance, action, etc.) Keywords: Summary: Notes: (WIP, Complete, Vignette, etc., Awards it's won) -----signature----- Mush Queen of TKL's LOMIN ALE WRAITHS Living In DE'NILE i <3 JJ REDICK ~&NY YANKEES&~ (((DUKE BLUE DEVILS)))
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Starlan Registered: Dec '04	Date Posted: 1/20/05 7:13pm Subject: RE: Forever (J/J) After TUF
	JAGSCURL15 Thanks! I just now sent the info to the J/J index. I'm sorry if I didn't get the links right. I haven't quite got the hang of all the markup codes yet. -----signature----- My J/J fanfic, Forever http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/18105711/p1 May it rest in peace. Until I get back to it. someday. "I was at woodstock. Fed off a flower person and spent the next six hours watching my hand move." -Spike, BtVS ep
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