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DathomiranAuthor
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1/21/05 7:44pm
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Planetary Traditions: Deleted and Locked--SEE A/N
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Disclaimer: I do not own anything from Star Wars or the Young Jedi Knights series or any of the other SW books. I'm not making any money, either.
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IMPORTANT A/N: I have decided to delete and lock this fanfic for personal reasons.
I truly appreciate all the great feedback you guys have given me.
I understand that this action is rather unprecedented, and those readers who do return are likely to be infuriated with me. I only ask that you please try to understand.
Finally, I want to give a huge THANK YOU to each and every reader and reviewer. It means a lot to me that you guys have enjoyed my writing. 
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edit: editing the story(1), editing subject(too many times to count)
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flowerbee
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1/21/05 8:27pm
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RE: Planetary Traditions--yjk, J/TK, J/Z, Solo twins are 18, (au because non-njo) Hapes and Corellia
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Cute.  You've got a few ackward sentence structures, nothing too major.
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Jedi_Bubbles
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1/21/05 10:38pm
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RE: Planetary Traditions--yjk, J/TK, J/Z, Solo twins are 18, (au because non-njo) Hapes and Corellia
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I like it! It's pretty dang good! I'm looking forward to more.
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Cobranaconda
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1/22/05 1:33am
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RE: Planetary Traditions--yjk, J/TK, J/Z, Solo twins are 18, (au because non-njo) Hapes and Corellia
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Thats brilliant!
The descriptive techniques used are pushed to the most extreme extent I've ever seen!
Well done!
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Kazzy
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1/22/05 3:34am
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RE: Planetary Traditions--yjk, J/TK, J/Z, Solo twins are 18, (au because non-njo) Hapes and Corellia
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I like it! So you're setting ti up for J/Z and J/TK. Nothing better. I love J/Z! There's nothing better.
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SilSolo
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1/23/05 2:52pm
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RE: Planetary Traditions--yjk, J/TK, J/Z, Solo twins are 18, (au because non-njo) Hapes and Corellia
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Good to see you've started posting this here.
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Lusa_Thul
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1/23/05 3:49pm
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RE: Planetary Traditions--yjk, J/TK, J/Z, Solo twins are 18, (au because non-njo) Hapes and Corellia
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Good start! I'm likein' it!
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DathomiranAuthor
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1/23/05 7:27pm
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RE: Planetary Traditions--yjk, J/TK, J/Z, Solo twins are 18, (au because non-njo) Hapes and Corellia
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3/24/05 7:11pm (1 edits total)
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Thanks to everyone for their comments! I actually have people reading! Yeah! I'm busy now so I have to go, but the next post will be Friday or Saturday with Jaina and Zekk. My apologies for being so slow. Thank you again!
EDIT: I realized I never properly replied!
flowerbee: Cute. You've got a few ackward sentence structures, nothing too major.
Thanks for the tip!
Jedi_Bubbles: I like it! It's pretty dang good! I'm looking forward to more.
Thank you!
Cobranaconda: Thats brilliant!
The descriptive techniques used are pushed to the most extreme extent I've ever seen!
Well done!
Really? Wow! Thank you!
Kazzy: I like it! So you're setting ti up for J/Z and J/TK. Nothing better. I love J/Z! There's nothing better.
Thanks! And yes, J/Z and J/TK rock!
SilSolo: Good to see you've started posting this here.
Hi SilSolo! Thanks for pointing the boards out to me!
Lusa_Thul: Good start! I'm likein' it!
Thanks, Lusa!
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DathomiranAuthor
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1/24/05 2:18pm
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RE: Planetary Traditions--YJK, J/TK, J/Z, Solo twins are 18, (AU because non-njo) Hapes and Corellia
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NenYim
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1/24/05 2:56pm
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RE: Ch.2 Planetary Traditions--yjk, J/TK, J/Z, Solo twins are 18, (au because non-njo), Hapes & Core
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I like this fic. There are a few grammatical errors, nothing serious. I wonder what they'll find on Corellia...
Keep going!
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DathomiranAuthor
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1/25/05 2:16pm
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RE: Ch.2 Planetary Traditions--yjk, J/TK, J/Z, Solo twins are 18, (au because non-njo), Hapes & Core
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Thank you to all!
NenYim- Thanks! Ah! Grammar! If you find any more errors, let me know what they are and I'll be sure to fix them.
I will post again on Friday afternoon.
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Lusa_Thul
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1/25/05 4:33pm
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RE: Ch.2 Planetary Traditions--yjk, J/TK, J/Z, Solo twins are 18, (au because non-njo), Hapes & Core
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Nice! I really like how you write Jaina and Zekk! You;ve got thair characterization spot on, IMO! Good job!
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C3P0_R2D2
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1/26/05 3:18pm
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RE: Ch.2 Planetary Traditions--yjk, J/TK, J/Z, Solo twins are 18, (au because non-njo), Hapes & Core
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Yeah, Young Jedi Knights. I was so crushed when I finished the books.
It should be never ending. Those books rocked!
Really good.
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DathomiranAuthor
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Planetary Traditions: YJK, Hapes-J/TK & assassins, Corellia-J/Z & Imperials, non-njo, Post3
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Thank you Lusa! I'm thankful to hear that you thought the characterization was good; it's something I'm constantly watching.
C3PO R2D2: Nice to see another reader. I hope you enjoy my fic as much as the YJK books, even though I cannot possibly hope to recreate that magic. But I'll try my best to make it as close as I can.
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DathomiranAuthor
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1/28/05 7:26pm
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RE: Planetary Traditions: YJK, Hapes-J/TK & assassins, Corellia-J/Z & Imperials, non-njo, Post3
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Valin_Halcyon
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1/28/05 7:54pm
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RE: Planetary Traditions: YJK, Hapes-J/TK & assassins, Corellia-J/Z & Imperials, non-njo, Post 4
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Hehheh. Poor Jacen, wanting to be something more.
Keep up the good work!
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