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Too Deeply Marked (Luke and love - one-shot.)
obaona
Registered:
Jun '02
Date Posted:
5/28/05 9:42pm
Subject:
RE: Too Deeply Marked (Luke and love - one-shot.)
Gabri_Jade
: *giggles madly*
Thank you, and I'll try not to kill Mara.
VaderLVR64
: Thank you!
Emotional punch in the gut - I like that.
I didn't have any
deeply
angstly moments, though ... did I?
academygrad88
: It wasn't as hard as you might think.
Actually, this took me several weeks to write - I started it before my surgery and finished it only half a week or so ago.
Happy reading.
And thank you.
oldjedinurse
: Thank you.
Yeah, I think Luke
knew
what he should be doing - how he should be handling his feelings, but he needed it said to him. And in turn, Callista needed the same thing, in her own way.
I chose Callista for this because for one, she's an established character with something of her
own
to get over. And, as Burkie said in his blog, just because a person you marry isn't exactly the choice God wanted you to make, doesn't mean He wouldn't bless that marriage, or that you couldn't be happy.
Neo-Paladin
: Glad to hear it.
I also think Mara was a better match for Luke, but that doesn't mean I don't think Luke and Callista couldn't have made a marriage work, and even been happy.
Which is what I'm trying to say in this vig, I guess.
Thank you.
JediCallista_1_6_e54
: I'm glad.
Thanks for reading.
Jedi-2B
: It happens quite mysteriously.
(And thank you.
) And hey! No I don't.
Leia
: LMAO.
Yeah, that's what I was going at, with that line. I wanted there to be an awkwardness there, because I think there would have to be.
I agree with you on loss. That's what it's like for me, and it's just - I don't know. I'm not always good at expressing these sorts of things.
I'm glad you sort of liked the story, and I'm going to have thwack that Michele girl.
Thank you.
LadyPadme
: Thank you.
Gentle and sympathetic - I wanted this to feel almost dreamy, not even really stating the issues at hand until the end.
And as Gabri says down below, she didn't know, the poor thing. :p
WynssaStarflare
: Thank you.
academygrad88
: Shhh! :p If you're lucky you might get something mushy (with no dying) soon, but no promises. :p
StarFighter5
: Hehe.
Thank you.
I think with each person it's always going to be different, not just in cases of this kind of loss.
Gabri_Jade
: Ow! *rubs head*
Hey, I never lied. It was torturous. :p
Healer_Leona
: Aww.
Thank you, and good luck in your search. :p
Kaylle
: Thank you - I wanted it to be hopeful.
(And sad. :p ) I don't think Callista would ever turn as psycho as some fanfics have her - she
was
a good person, just not the best one for Luke.
Yeah, scarred by it - that's what it feels like. Even if the pain isn't as sharp as it was, it's still there, and not really lessened, exactly. Just ... muted.
I shall attempt to indulge you, at least somewhat, in the near future. :p :p
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- teh atty
my recent Atton (KOTOR2) fic:
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amidalachick
Registered:
Aug '03
Date Posted:
5/28/05 10:20pm
Subject:
RE: Too Deeply Marked (Luke and love - one-shot.)
Wow. Such a sad, but beautiful, story. Nice job,
obaona
!
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"So I can open my own can of pudding, can I? Shows what you know, Marge!"
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obaona
Registered:
Jun '02
Date Posted:
5/29/05 8:45pm
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RE: Too Deeply Marked (Luke and love - one-shot.)
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obaona
amidalachick
:
Thank you.
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