Author Topic: Lest Ye Be Judged--Vader war crimes trial--Voted Best All-Around, thanks!
Siaynoqsbride 
Registered: May '05
24200_Anakin and Padme
Date Posted: 6/21/05 9:36am Subject: RE: Lest Ye Be Judged--post-ROTJ AU--post-Ep3 rewrite--3/? on 6/21
Ooh, this post was really powerful. Leia's reaction was perfect. Having their conversation from before intercut in there was great. Will Luke allow them to just mount a team against his father? Update soon!

 

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DarthIshtar 
Title: Former CR
Registered: Mar '01
44373_Fan Films - Pink Five
Date Posted: 6/21/05 9:48am Subject: RE: Lest Ye Be Judged--post-ROTJ AU--post-Ep3 rewrite--3/? on 6/21
Siaynoqsbride posted:
Ooh, this post was really powerful. Leia's reaction was perfect. Having their conversation from before intercut in there was great. Will Luke allow them to just mount a team against his father? Update soon!


I'm glad you liked the part with the conversation from before. That's an entirely new thing, but I thought it would set the stage for what she is about to do very nicely. I'll update this evening.

 

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GreatOne 
Registered: May '03
6297_Millenium Falcon
Date Posted: 6/21/05 9:58am Subject: RE: Lest Ye Be Judged--post-ROTJ AU--post-Ep3 rewrite--3/? on 6/21
Awwww. Leia thinking about how Han saved her just by holding her! Poor Leia. And Luke sure could have warned his sister a bit. Talk about a shockeroonie!

 

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DarthIshtar 
Title: Former CR
Registered: Mar '01
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Date Posted: 6/21/05 11:11am Subject: RE: Lest Ye Be Judged--post-ROTJ AU--post-Ep3 rewrite--3/? on 6/21
LOL, yes, what a shockeroonie. And I sometimes have a slightly Romanticized idea of the H/L romance, just because otherwise, I can't figure out how they survived the 3 or so years before they got married.

 

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ThePariah 
Registered: Jan '03
40064_Luke Skywalker
Date Posted: 6/21/05 11:36am Subject: RE: Lest Ye Be Judged--post-ROTJ AU--post-Ep3 rewrite--3/? on 6/21
I'm greatly amused by the fact that nearly everyone reading this now is new to LYBJ. Where did all the old fans go? tongue

 

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DarthIshtar 
Title: Former CR
Registered: Mar '01
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Date Posted: 6/21/05 11:38am Subject: RE: Lest Ye Be Judged--post-ROTJ AU--post-Ep3 rewrite--3/? on 6/21
Maybe they figure it won't be any different. Or they decided to disown me, like you threatened.

 

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GreatOne 
Registered: May '03
6297_Millenium Falcon
Date Posted: 6/21/05 1:36pm Subject: RE: Lest Ye Be Judged--post-ROTJ AU--post-Ep3 rewrite--3/? on 6/21
I can't figure out how they survived the 3 or so years before they got married.- That is one reason we have fanfic! Because the 'official EU' is officially insane! tongue hypnotized silly

 

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DarthIshtar 
Title: Former CR
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Date Posted: 6/21/05 1:39pm Subject: RE: Lest Ye Be Judged--post-ROTJ AU--post-Ep3 rewrite--3/? on 6/21
LOL, yes, and Dave Wolverton's book is even more so!

 

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amidalachick 
Registered: Aug '03
23036_Padme
Date Posted: 6/21/05 1:48pm Subject: RE: Lest Ye Be Judged--post-ROTJ AU--post-Ep3 rewrite--3/? on 6/21
I just read this, and wow! I'll be sticking around! grin

 

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DarthIshtar 
Title: Former CR
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Date Posted: 6/21/05 1:51pm Subject: RE: Lest Ye Be Judged--post-ROTJ AU--post-Ep3 rewrite--3/? on 6/21
Thanks, chick!

 

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NYCitygurl 
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Registered: Jul '02
Date Posted: 6/21/05 4:00pm Subject: RE: Lest Ye Be Judged--post-ROTJ AU--post-Ep3 rewrite--3/? on 6/21
I’ve trusted you since the moment a vertically challenged stormtrooper told me “I’m Luke Skywalker. I’m here to rescue you.” Why should I stop now?

Vertically challenged stormtrooper laugh

That was a great post!! I love the emotion, especally when Leia thinks that Luke betrayed her. The flashback moment was perfect happy

He sighed dramatically. “A go-blow-up-another-Death-Star favor or the extra pair of socks variety?”


laugh

 

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RebelMom 
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44413_Luke Skywalker
Date Posted: 6/21/05 4:57pm Subject: RE: Lest Ye Be Judged--post-ROTJ AU--post-Ep3 rewrite--3/? on 6/21
I'm back. So it's not all noobies. I read the post this morning but didn't have time to reply. ONce again, I enjoy the L/L interaction.

 

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DarthIshtar 
Title: Former CR
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Date Posted: 6/21/05 5:02pm Subject: RE: Lest Ye Be Judged--post-ROTJ AU--post-Ep3 rewrite--3/? on 6/21
NYCitygurl--I’ve trusted you since the moment a vertically challenged stormtrooper told me “I’m Luke Skywalker. I’m here to rescue you.” Why should I stop now?

Vertically challenged stormtrooper


LOL. I always like euphemisms for short because I am short! And hope whoever it was that commented on this line in the old fic liked its use here.

That was a great post!! I love the emotion, especally when Leia thinks that Luke betrayed her. The flashback moment was perfect

He sighed dramatically. “A go-blow-up-another-Death-Star favor or the extra pair of socks variety?”


LOL, I liked the extra pair of socks thing. :-D And the chance for betrayal adds such an element of suspense that I like.

RebelMom--I'm back. So it's not all noobies. I read the post this morning but didn't have time to reply. ONce again, I enjoy the L/L interaction.

Yay, an oldbie. ::Hugs and hearts.:: I'm glad you liked the L/L stuff.

 

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Juliet316 
Registered: Apr '05
23585_Natalie Portman
Date Posted: 6/21/05 6:55pm Subject: RE: Lest Ye Be Judged--post-ROTJ AU--post-Ep3 rewrite--3/? on 6/21
Nice, can't wait for what happens when the team gets there? Will Han have an itchy trigger finger?

More?

 

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DarthIshtar 
Title: Former CR
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Date Posted: 6/21/05 6:58pm Subject: RE: Lest Ye Be Judged--post-ROTJ AU--post-Ep3 rewrite--3/? on 6/21
lol, good question.

 

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