LilyRose posted: Wow Draconarius this sounds great!!!! I can't wait for the next post!!!!! LR
JDH3 posted:Oh, this looks like it's going to be really fun. "Good. Now that I don't have you keeping me up, maybe I can get some sleep, too." I like Miry. The dramatis personae as a whole looks quite interesting. And Anakin's nerves before his wedding were smile inducing. Great start, Draconarius. JD.
JDH3 posted: Oh, I liked that. I didn't think there was anything wrong with Anakin and Tahiri's vows. Very sweet, and very in-character for both, IMHO.
JDH3 posted: "Everything will be fine, little brother. Just make sure you remember to say 'I do'." Typical big brother advice. And nice to see Jacen and Tenel Ka together. I liked how you portrayed Jacen here.
JDH3 posted: Luke's exasperation with A/T as they kissed cracked me up. Good stuff.
JDH3 posted: That Sith Lord sounds like a formidable enemy, which is very Liked the imagery of him aboard his ship as well.
JDH3 posted: Very enjoyable chapter, Draconarius. JD.
LilyRose posted:WHOOHOO , That was great Draco!!!! I liked Anakin's and Tahiri's vows. Luke's response was really funny. Sorry I hadn't replied earlier, I was on vacation at the beach (North Carolina has the BESTEST beaches in the whole wide world sorry I'm bias cuz I live there. Can't wait for the next one Draco!!!! LR
The_Slilent_One posted:Wow. That last scene was cute. Cant wait for more p.s. Luke's response to the kiss cracked me up