JAGSGURL15 posted:WOW! Great job!
oldj Excellent work, Trepidation! You've really brought all these characters to life. They just leap off the screen as I read this fic. I love the banter, and particularly the way you write about Jag's transformation from "rigid Chiss" to a "Rebel type". The 3-year-old "recruits" are also so funny and touching. Interesting storyline as well. I do wonder what's going on, and I'm sure you'll do a beautiful job of telling us. Well done!
Zetta: Just finished reading this and the prequel, and wanted to let you know I'm impressed. Sha is an interesting OC, and while I have to agree with the wunderkind comment someone made in the prequel, I'm still enjoying it and it doesn't bother me as much in the sequel. Loved the early scenes with just the family, and the interaction between the girls and their parents. Also enjoyed the reunions and just the whole way the characters are interacting in this. I'll be on the look out for the next update.