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Rage of the Shadow Warriors: Honor Guard -=- (Mandos vs. Yuuzhan Vong) -=- Oct. 20th, some artworks!
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-DarkScorpion-
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Jun '06
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7/1/06 8:58am
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RE: Honor Guard -=- (Mandalorians vs. Yuuzhan Vong / Action) - !!! It's finished: Chapter 14 !!! - 0
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Ouch the loss of a friend that has got to hurt, i bet he is going to hold a grudge against the scarheads
anyway this post is up to your usual standerds
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hehe never underestamate a fett  
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Antilles2001
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7/1/06 11:14am
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RE: Honor Guard -=- (Mandalorians vs. Yuuzhan Vong / Action) - !!! It's finished: Chapter 14 !!! - 0
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Once again, Dave, it amazes me how well you write despite English beind your second language. Which makes it all the more embarassing that there are those with it as their primary language who, for want of a better term, suck ass.
Keep it up, ner vod. I love endings that are open-ended but still have a sense of closure about them. 
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Roain_Xantos
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7/1/06 12:05pm
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Thanks for the PM. I'll have a review soon. Glad this is still living!
-Roain <><
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DarthReven
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7/1/06 1:51pm
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RE: Honor Guard -=- (Mandalorians vs. Yuuzhan Vong / Action) - !!! It's finished: Chapter 14 !!! - 0
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Well, a satisfiying ending for sure. It sure left a hint of a sequel, so if you do one,please PM.
Anyways, i really enjoyed the extra touches. From the little poem that ronan says(that could be prayer like) to the fact that Fett tries to joke a bit; it all adds nice little pieces of polish to the work. Bravo for a greatly satisfying story arc.
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Corran_Fett
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7/2/06 2:59am
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RE: Honor Guard -=- (Mandalorians vs. Yuuzhan Vong / Action) - !!! It's finished: Chapter 14 !!! - 0
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Ph0enix posted:
Good finish, Corran!
Loved the pyre scene...
Can't wait for the sequel (I'm assuming there will be a sequel, right? )
Vor'e, Ord'ika!  And yup, you assume right. 
-DarkScorpion- posted:
Ouch the loss of a friend that has got to hurt, i bet he is going to hold a grudge against the scarheads
I think you bet quite right, here.
-DarkScorpion- posted:
anyway this post is up to your usual standerds
Thanks you, Scorpion! Glad you enjoyed it.
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"Fett... I didn't expect you to be back on your feet so soon again, sir," he said slightly surprised.
hehe never underestamate a fett
  
Antilles2001 posted:
Once again, Dave, it amazes me how well you write despite English beind your second language. Which makes it all the more embarassing that there are those with it as their primary language who, for want of a better term, suck ass.
Keep it up, ner vod. I love endings that are open-ended but still have a sense of closure about them.
Vor entye, Mig'ika!
Roain_Xantos posted:
Thanks for the PM. I'll have a review soon. Glad this is still living!
-Roain <><
Can't wait!
DarthReven posted:
Well, a satisfiying ending for sure. It sure left a hint of a sequel, so if you do one,please PM.
Thank you, Reven! I'm glad you liked it.
DarthReven posted:
Anyways, i really enjoyed the extra touches. From the little poem that ronan says(that could be prayer like) to the fact that Fett tries to joke a bit; it all adds nice little pieces of polish to the work. Bravo for a greatly satisfying story arc.
Thank you! I'm flattered!
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Matt-Darklighter
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7/2/06 5:24am
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caught up with the story and loved it!!! could you please PM me when you get round to the sequal, thanks
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Corran_Fett
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7/2/06 11:48am
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Matt-Darklighter posted:
caught up with the story and loved it!!! could you please PM me when you get round to the sequal, thanks
Heh. Nice to see a new reader! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and you're sure getting informed on the sequel.
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Corran_Fett
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7/4/06 9:03am
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RE: Honor Guard -=- (Mandalorians vs. Yuuzhan Vong / Action) *** Dramatis Personae added *** 7/04
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Added Dramatis Personae to prepare for the soon Epilogue and post as a pdf...
I'm currently going through the whole fic, editing tids and bits I don't quite like here and there, and then will post the whole thing as a pdf, with the Epilogue exclusively being in the pdf.
aaand... where are my other readers? 
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Peagis
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7/5/06 10:52am
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I'm here great chapter Corran I liked how you included Mando speak very nice
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Corran_Fett
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7/6/06 10:51am
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Thank you, Peagis!
MAJOR ANNOUNCEMENT!!!! MUST READ!!! - Honor Guard is DONE!!!
Alright, everybody. After finishing the epilogue a few days ago, I have gone through the whole fiction in the last few days, editing minor details, typos, weird grammar and so on. And, I edited a few more or less important things:
renamed the Slave V to Gauntlet
renamed the Tracinya to Nemesis
re-wrote most of the final battle Ronan Barec vs. Ny'ong Yutt (Chapter 13)
re-wrote the scene where Ronan meets Kir Kanos (reference on Ronan's father)
ADDED AN EPILOGUE, with reference to Q_M's RotSW: Wrath of the Mandalore (see below)
Then, I uploaded all as a 60 pages (Verdana, 10pt) PDF here:
http://www.daves-sw-rogues.de/RotSW-Honor_Guard.pdf - (Click Right --> Save target as...)
The Epilogue is exclusivly in the PDF... I won't post it 'ere. Also, I won't edit the posts with the 'Special Edition'
Yet another ANNOUNCEMENT:
I added to overtitle "Rage of the Shadow Warriors", because I want all my Mando stories to have a common title, as they are all related. Credit and kudos goes to Quiet_Mandalorian for allowing me to use this title, as it was the title of one of his original viggies. It will probably even go so far, that we will share characters in upcoming fics.
Here a list of the current fics under the banner Rage of the Shadow Warriors, chronologically ordered
Rage of the Shadow Warriors: Pariah, by Corran_Fett
Rage of the Shadow Warriors: Honor Guard, by Corran_Fett
Rage of the Shadow Warriors: Wrath of the Mandalore, by Quiet_Mandalorian
Rage of the Shadow Warriors: Runner, by Corran_Fett
Alright, this is it! You don't need to read the whole fic again, but it'd be cool! But be sure to check out the Epilogue
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7/6/06 11:52am
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Read the epilogue, Corran. Nice to see Nas Choka's reaction there. Interesting analysis of the Mandalorians.
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Great stuff, Corran!
It's nice to have the fic all in one PDF...
Can't wait for the next installment
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7/7/06 12:45am
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Impressive...most impressive.
I like the ending thoughts of Nas Choka and the unspoken "To be continued..."
Good stuff! Our new "subaltern" will be appearing again, I think. An anti-Mandalorian...well, he should be cleaned up rather quickly. You don't mess with Mando'ade unless you are particularly skilled Jetiise.
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7/7/06 5:15am
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Now I can't wait for the sequal!!!
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Corran_Fett
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7/7/06 7:31am
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Rage of the Shadow Warriors: Honor Guard -=- (Mandos vs. Yuuzhan Vong) - FINISHED STORY!!! 07/06
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RK_Striker_JK_5 posted:
Read the epilogue, Corran. Nice to see Nas Choka's reaction there. Interesting analysis of the Mandalorians.
Thank you! Glad you liked it.
Ph0enix posted:
Great stuff, Corran!
It's nice to have the fic all in one PDF...
Can't wait for the next installment
Vor'e, Ordo! Glad to see interest in more!
Kudzu posted:
Impressive...most impressive.
Aww... thanks!
Kudzu posted:
I like the ending thoughts of Nas Choka and the unspoken "To be continued..."
Heh... glad you liked it, and yeah, you've discovered the "To be continued..." pretty well.
Kudzu posted:
Good stuff! Our new "subaltern" will be appearing again, I think. An anti-Mandalorian...well, he should be cleaned up rather quickly. You don't mess with Mando'ade unless you are particularly skilled Jetiise.
Thank you, Kudzu!
And you're 100 % correct... Rulaak Tsun will be somehow featured in the sequel. Will see about latter, tho... 
Peagis posted:
Now I can't wait for the sequal!!!
Thanks!
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