Antilles2001 posted:Very nice, Dave. Keep it up.
Antilles2001 posted:My favorite part is when a squadron is sent, but it just cuts to them sending another due to the destruction of the original one.
Antilles2001 posted:Mandalorians kicking ass is always cool.
RK_Striker_JK_5 posted:I almost feel sorry for the scarheads... Almost, but not quite.
RK_Striker_JK_5 posted:Awesome fic, Corran_Fett. Can't wait to read more.
Corran_Fett posted:The blue stripes became single white stars and the ships of the Mandalorian task force Final Uprising came out of hyperspace, close to Lando’s Folly, the asteroid belt of Destrillion and Dubrillion.
Corran_Fett posted:“Show those Scarheads what Mandalorians are!” Boba Fett’s harsh voice came out of Ronan Barec’s helmet com-link. He switched the channel and spoke to the landing forces:
Corran_Fett posted:“You heard him. Let’s do this clean and quick.”
Corran_Fett posted:The fourteen double-comm-klicks that came back as an affirmation sounded like one.
Corran_Fett posted:“Sir, we have lost contact to the coralskippers,” the communications officer said half an hour later.
Corran_Fett posted:But it was already too late. He smelled ozone behind him and quickly turned around. The last thing he saw was a slightly glowing dot that approached in near light speed to a point between his eyes. Then there was only darkness and pain. Incredibly terrible pain.
Quiet_Mandalorian posted:Corran_Fett posted:The blue stripes became single white stars and the ships of the Mandalorian task force Final Uprising came out of hyperspace, close to Lando’s Folly, the asteroid belt of Destrillion and Dubrillion.I like the description of sliding out hyperspace, and especially the name Lando's Folly.
Quiet_Mandalorian posted:Corran_Fett posted:“Show those Scarheads what Mandalorians are!” Boba Fett’s harsh voice came out of Ronan Barec’s helmet com-link. He switched the channel and spoke to the landing forces:That's Boba to a T.
Quiet_Mandalorian posted:Corran_Fett posted:“You heard him. Let’s do this clean and quick.”As all good Mando'ade would.
Quiet_Mandalorian posted:[quote=Corran_Fett]The fourteen double-comm-klicks that came back as an affirmation sounded like one.
Quiet_Mandalorian posted:[quote=Corran_Fett]“Sir, we have lost contact to the coralskippers,” the communications officer said half an hour later.
Quiet_Mandalorian posted:[quote=Corran_Fett]But it was already too late. He smelled ozone behind him and quickly turned around. The last thing he saw was a slightly glowing dot that approached in near light speed to a point between his eyes. Then there was only darkness and pain. Incredibly terrible pain.
Corran_Fett posted:Thx. Actually, that name (Lando's Folly) already showed up in Vector Prime. I just did some research on Dubrillion and Destrillion, y'know *g*[/quoteDrat, I had a feeling that was the case. Oh well. [quote=Corran_Fett]Well, I don't really know what excatly you mean, lad.
Corran_Fett posted:Well... sorry that I copied a bit in that chapter from your fic Rage of the Shadow Warriors (a fic that I can only highly recommend to my readers and Mando fans ). I hope it doesn't matter too much
Corran_Fett posted:Glad you like it. Especially from you, this comment is very worthy for me. Thank you, ner vod
Quiet_Mandalorian posted:It's an English-language expression meaning to capture the character of somone perfectly.
Quiet_Mandalorian posted:Hey, not at all. I din't mean to say you were copying me. I probably should have chosen some other smiley than the smirking one to help get across what I meant though.
Quiet_Mandalorian posted:Well, that certainly makes me feel special. Thanks again, Corran.