Author Topic: Insatiable - (Luke/Mara, angst) Updated 9/13, Chapter 28
Golden_Jedi 
Registered: Jun '05
14707_Han and Leia
Date Posted: 6/16/07 6:34pm Subject: RE: Insatiable - (Luke/Mara, angst) Updated again 6/16! Chapter 25
But a part of him kept thinking about what Lando had said, and he wondered...

Just don't get your hopes up too high, Luke... *sigh*

 

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StarFighter5 
Registered: Jul '03
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Date Posted: 6/16/07 9:12pm Subject: RE: Insatiable - (Luke/Mara, angst) Updated again 6/16! Chapter 25
Will Mara ever admit her feelings, even with her newfound openess? There are so many issues that need to be resolved between them first.

 

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PHGS_Weyr 
Registered: Apr '06
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Date Posted: 6/17/07 11:01am Subject: RE: Insatiable - (Luke/Mara, angst) Updated again 6/16! Chapter 25
that was lovely.... silly lando... Wedge!!!

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MirandaFair 
Registered: Jun '05
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Date Posted: 6/17/07 12:39pm Subject: RE: Insatiable - (Luke/Mara, angst) Updated again 6/16! Chapter 25
Lovely riches! hugs Two updates and I'm one happy lady. Awesome job showing the difficulty Mara had at expressing herself and past, and her with other men... That had to have been beyond hard but I give her credit for going through with it - even if she thought it would hurt Luke. She's being honest and that's a great change for her to start healing.

But a part of him kept thinking about what Lando had said, and he wondered...

Wonder away, Luke! There IS something there between you and Mara. Go after it and find what it really is!

P.S. - I'm wondering what Mara shared with Luke about her memories with Talon thinking ... The healing for our girl has begun! hugs

Excellent updates, again. grin

 

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Master_M_Sky 
Registered: Aug '06
20236_Mara Jade
Date Posted: 6/17/07 1:08pm Subject: RE: Insatiable - (Luke/Mara, angst) Updated again 6/16! Chapter 25 - Date Edited: 8/16/07 3:13am (1 edits total) Edited By: Master_M_Sky
Great update. Hmm, I wonder if that was true, what Lando said about Mara and Luke. Hmmm....

Update soon!


Great chapter.

 

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academygrad88 
Registered: Apr '04
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Date Posted: 6/17/07 4:26pm Subject: RE: Insatiable - (Luke/Mara, angst) Updated again 6/16! Chapter 25
Great update. Luke is such a great guy. If Mara doesn't want him I will take him. wink

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jade51999 
Registered: Nov '99
14707_Han and Leia
Date Posted: 6/17/07 5:58pm Subject: RE: Insatiable - (Luke/Mara, angst) Updated again 6/16! Chapter 25
Another post so soon!

That was a great talk--and Luke needing some respite was great too.

I'm also always happy to see Wedge happy

 

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maramijade 
Registered: Feb '00
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Date Posted: 6/17/07 6:08pm Subject: RE: Insatiable - (Luke/Mara, angst) Updated again 6/16! Chapter 25
wonderful exchange!

 

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Registered: Dec '99
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Date Posted: 6/20/07 7:00pm Subject: RE: Insatiable - (Luke/Mara, angst) Updated again 6/16! Chapter 25

Ch. 24

EEEEK!! That was intense! Fantastic chapter, with all the suspense and high emotion…I got chills, lady. Chills! applause


She had never given up. Talon – the real Talon, would not have wanted her to give up, even if it meant giving him up

Ah, the moment of clarity. My favorite book in the world is A Wrinkle in Time and that part reminded me of the wonderful scene when IT made its 'fatal mistake'. Well done! rose


She would sleep, but for the first time in many weeks, she realised that this time, she actually wanted to wake up.


Beautiful!


Ch. 25

“I suppose I wanted to know if I was... different.”

“But you weren’t, Luke.” She pulled away from his comforting hands and leant back against the back of the cushions. “I made all the same mistakes in new ways.”


I love the way you phrased that. And I’m so glad to see Mara getting back on her feet, though I laughed aloud at:

“Gods I hate lucidity.”

Awesome updates! hugs


 

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___Sithspawn___ 
Registered: Aug '04
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Date Posted: 6/21/07 6:27pm Subject: RE: Insatiable - (Luke/Mara, angst) Updated again 6/16! Chapter 25
I just caught up with this again, and still find it wonderful.

Poor Mara with voices in her head...She really is tragic, isn't she? I'm pretty sure I've said this before, but you write her well.

Despite the crappy love life, Luke's a forgiving guy, it's just a matter of time before he lets her in. I wonder how, though...

Keep writing wink


 

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JEDIFLYSWATTER 
Registered: Dec '04
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Date Posted: 6/22/07 7:38pm Subject: RE: Insatiable - (Luke/Mara, angst) Updated again 6/16! Chapter 25
Poor Luke. He should always beware of the answer if you ask the question. Wonderful post and thanks. rose

 

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Jaira 
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Registered: May '05
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Date Posted: 6/24/07 11:00am Subject: RE: Insatiable - (Luke/Mara, angst) Updated again 6/16! Chapter 25
ginchy posted:
Since Mara doesn't seem to want them, I'll take both Luke and Lando. They'll look great fetching me cool drinks and feeding me grapes. laugh


laugh I'm picturing it, and it's hilarious!!!

Great couple of chapters here. Luke is different, Luke is different!!! Wonder why? wink

 

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PHGS_Weyr 
Registered: Apr '06
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Date Posted: 7/4/07 8:44am Subject: RE: Insatiable - (Luke/Mara, angst) Updated again 6/16! Chapter 25
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Jade_Naberrie 
Registered: Jul '07
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Date Posted: 7/11/07 12:11am Subject: RE: Insatiable - (Luke/Mara, angst) Updated again 6/16! Chapter 25
Oh, wow.

I just marathon-read this fic. I absolutely love it. Wonderful portrayal of Mara- I can completely imagine her facing a situation like this. applause Brilliant fic.

Plese update soon. I am really enjoying this.

 

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DarthRaptor82 
Registered: Jun '07
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Date Posted: 7/11/07 3:27am Subject: RE: Insatiable - (Luke/Mara, angst) Updated again 6/16! Chapter 25
Well it is now 6:30 in the AM here on the east coast and I have just read this fic from page one till now let me just say you write mara very well Please add me to your PM list and I look forward to reading more of the story

 

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