Author Topic: Insatiable - (Luke/Mara, angst) Updated 3/12, Chapter 27
RedGold 
Registered: Nov '04
41217_Mara Jade
Date Posted: 10/15/07 12:31pm Subject: RE: Insatiable - (Luke/Mara, angst) Updated 10/15 Chapter 26
You're so evil!

I'm so proud. grin

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Golden_Jedi 
Registered: Jun '05
14707_Han and Leia
Date Posted: 10/15/07 1:13pm Subject: RE: Insatiable - (Luke/Mara, angst) Updated 10/15 Chapter 26
But in the morning she woke up early, packed her things and left his apartment for good.

Ouch! shock

Still, it's sooo nice to see this story updated! happy

 

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Jedi-Roxy 
Registered: Jun '02
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Date Posted: 10/15/07 2:30pm Subject: RE: Insatiable - (Luke/Mara, angst) Updated 10/15 Chapter 26
Wait... she... huh? How could she? WHY did she? What's going on here??? Why do I feel out of the loop? She can't just leave him... that's a step backwards... Fix it! Make it all better again!!!!! Pretty Please???


Phoenix

 

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Handmaiden_Azul 
Registered: Dec '05
46275_Morrigan Corde
Date Posted: 10/15/07 3:11pm Subject: RE: Insatiable - (Luke/Mara, angst) Updated 10/15 Chapter 26
Nasty JL, nasty, tempting me, leading me on like that.

 

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StarFighter5 
Registered: Jul '03
24124_Indiana Jones
Date Posted: 10/15/07 4:05pm Subject: RE: Insatiable - (Luke/Mara, angst) Updated 10/15 Chapter 26
As much as it may be cry that she can't stay with him, Mara needs to be on her own in order to fully heal. I'm happy to see this updated though. Don't take so long with the next one. wink

 

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Master_M_Sky 
Registered: Aug '06
20236_Mara Jade
Date Posted: 10/15/07 4:36pm Subject: RE: Insatiable - (Luke/Mara, angst) Updated 10/15 Chapter 26
Thank you so much for updating!! hugs hugs happy


But why the evil cliffie??? cry cry

Oh well. She's finally told him that she loves him...and she resisted temptation. I'm proud of her. happy

 

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Jade_Pilot 
Registered: Dec '05
46068_Rianna Saren
Date Posted: 10/15/07 5:48pm Subject: RE: Insatiable - (Luke/Mara, angst) Updated 10/15 Chapter 26
But in the morning she woke up early, packed her things and left his apartment for good.

Say what??????????? shock I did NOT see that coming at all! But yay--an update!!! Can't wait for the next, girl!!

Well done! applause

 

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Jade_eyes 
Registered: Aug '04
43737_Marasiah Fel
Date Posted: 10/15/07 6:58pm Subject: RE: Insatiable - (Luke/Mara, angst) Updated 10/15 Chapter 26
My admiration for Mara was over the top in this update. I loved them reestablishing their relationship: their banter, their trust, sweetness. The dance scene, Mara's realization of love, just melted me!!!! The whole yummy thing was so SQUEE! worthy it was absolutely ridiculous.... until: But in the morning she woke up early, packed her things and left his apartment for good.

WHAT????!!!!!!!?????? IS UP WITH THAT??????!!!! shock

Okay, that early part spoiled me!!! I want some more mush!!! Fast!!!

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jade51999 
Registered: Nov '99
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Date Posted: 10/15/07 7:14pm Subject: RE: Insatiable - (Luke/Mara, angst) Updated 10/15 Chapter 26
Oh now that was just...WRONG

But oh so good...

 

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Ariapaige 
Registered: Feb '02
5998_Anakin's Shadow
Date Posted: 10/15/07 7:43pm Subject: RE: Insatiable - (Luke/Mara, angst) Updated 10/15 Chapter 26
so i'm reading and reading, and thinking 'yay, they're gonna be okay.' and then i get to the end and i just sat there staring at the screen in horror.

but why!!?? cry

on the other hand, thanks for the update. it made my night happy

-paige

 

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cggunnersmate 
Registered: Jul '07
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Date Posted: 10/15/07 11:00pm Subject: RE: Insatiable - (Luke/Mara, angst) Updated 10/15 Chapter 26
Jedi-Roxy posted:
Wait... she... huh? How could she? WHY did she? What's going on here??? Why do I feel out of the loop? She can't just leave him... that's a step backwards... Fix it! Make it all better again!!!!! Pretty Please???


Phoenix




Ditto for the most part. Although I can see Mara needing to feel a little independant again. I can only hope that she's just altering the living arrangments and not actually ending the relationship. Great update JL!

 

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PHGS_Weyr 
Registered: Apr '06
6345_Wraith Squadron
Date Posted: 10/16/07 1:04am Subject: RE: Insatiable - (Luke/Mara, angst) Updated 10/15 Chapter 26
That was pure Sith!! I like it!! Great Job as always!

Thanks for the PM!

PHGS Weyr

 

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divapilot 
Registered: Nov '05
46075_Cade Skywalker
Date Posted: 10/16/07 3:01am Subject: RE: Insatiable - (Luke/Mara, angst) Updated 10/15 Chapter 26
Wonderful update! I love how Mara is setting her life on track again. It must have killed her to give Aves the business, but she knows he will take care of it (and Ghent) for her. It would have been much worse to give it over to someone who didn't know Talon.

Mara left, huh? I wonder if this is a parallel to her testing her limits in the spice dens. If that was her testing herself to see if she can make it on her own without the addiction to spice, perhaps leaving Luke is her way of testing to see if she can make it on her own without the addiction to Luke.

Luke has to be incredibly patient. Mara looks and acts better, but she is still not well.

 

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ccp 
Registered: Apr '05
23950_Han Solo<br>Glactic Heroes
Date Posted: 10/16/07 3:03am Subject: RE: Insatiable - (Luke/Mara, angst) Updated 10/15 Chapter 26
Great couple of updates!

Looks like Luke will have to learn to trust her again.

 

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Blue_Milkshake 
Registered: Nov '05
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Date Posted: 10/16/07 4:16am Subject: RE: Insatiable - (Luke/Mara, angst) Updated 10/15 Chapter 26
Whaaaaaat?!?!?!? shock
So they love each other...and she leaves? What are you up to here? thinking

 

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