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DantanaSkywalker Title: Manager Emeritus Registered: Apr '02	Date Posted: 12/10/05 4:59pm Subject: "Like The Deserts Miss The Rain" (DN AU, dark K/J) Art posted 24 Dec 2007! - Date Edited: 1/1 6:22pm (22 edits total) Edited By: DantanaSkywalker
	Title: Like The Deserts Miss The Rain Author: DantanaSkywalker Timeframe: AU, post-NJO Characters: Jaina Solo, Leia Solo, Anakin Solo, others Genre: adventure, angst, romance Keywords: character death, angst, romance Summary: Alternate Universe. The galaxy is split between the Empire and the Republic. Jaina Solo must make a pact with a Sith Lord to stop the Empire's conquest of the rest of the galaxy. Author Notes: I'm just playing in the world, I don't own it. Nothing's used with permission and anything weird is entirely the fault of my brain. Mucho, beaucoup thankies to EBrooklynW for all the help, especially with naming the Sith! Also, thanks to my beta, MiaTieska. --Dramatis Personae-- The Jedi Jaina Solo, Jedi Knight (female human) Anakin Solo, Jedi Knight (male human) Leia Organa Solo, Jedi Master (female human) Zekk, Jedi Knight (male human) Tenel Ka, Jedi Knight & Princess of Hapes (female human) Kam Solusar, Jedi Master (male human) Cilghal, Jedi Master (female Mon Calamari) The Sith Darth Rache, Sith Lord (male human) Darth Reiniger, Sith apprentice (male human) Zaliyn Penta (female Endesh) The Empire Empress Mara Jade (female human) Gilad Pellaeon, Grand Admiral (male human) Soontir Fel, Baron-Administrator (male human) Jagged Fel, Colonel (male human) People I've got down for PMs are: Chilla ccp princess_melissa Jade_Max Lola64 Golden_Jedi princess_of_naboo Jaina_Solo_16 Darth_Intangable JediBettyBug18 Durroness SWpants666 dm1 skywalkerlover00 PRINCESSCAMBRIA Lonewolf89 ZekksGoddess Ceillean Rosa-Belle Alkibiades (Please let me know if you're on this list by mistake, or if you'd like to be added.) I'm walking down your street again Past your door But you don't live there anymore It's years since you've been there And now you've disappeared somewhere Like outer space You've found some better place And I miss you Like the deserts miss the rain -- Everything But The Girl, "Missing" --Chapter One-- Yavin IV 34 ABY The orb of the gas giant Yavin was sliding past the horizon when Jaina Solo strode into the audience chamber of the Great Temple. Her dark hair swung behind her in a braid that fell to her thighs. A lightsaber hung at her hip, its casing worn and scarred. There were nine seats on the dias, the centre seat empty as it had been ever since she could remember. The other eight seats were filled; the Council was waiting for her. "You are late, Knight Solo," Jedi Master Kam Solusar said. His face was lined, his hair white. He'd been a child at the time of the Purge, and was the oldest member of the Council. He sat to the immediate left of the empty chair, his sand-coloured robes draped around him. Jaina bowed her head. "My apologies, Master Solusar. What does the council wish of me?" Leia Organa Solo, seated to the right of the empty chair, leaned forward. Hers was the only chair not carved of stone; it was a repulsor-chair, made to allow her movement after the loss of the lower portion of her legs some years before. "We have received reports from the Republic," she began, "that the Empire is trying to expand its borders." Jaina frowned. "They've already got most of the Core, from the Colonies to the Unknown Regions. That's at least half the galaxy. Why do they need to expand? They got Coruscant back." Tionne Solusar, seated next to her husband, spoke. "The Empire is merely biding its time until it can reclaim everything the Rebellion took from them. They've already taken advantage of our weakness once." The young woman before them sighed. "I know. I fought at the Battle of Coruscant." "You led the Battle of Coruscant," Master Kyle Katarn corrected. She sighed again. "I'd prefer to forget that, Master, considering the Empire used the battle to take Coruscant from us while we were focusing on the Vong." Leia waved that away. "As we've discussed, we could not have anticipated the Empire's betrayal, especially not after the treaty that was signed by President Fey'lya. What's past is past. We would like you to investigate these rumours. We don't entirely trust the Republic's information and we'd like some of our own. We ask that you take your brother with you." "That's it?" Jaina was incredulous. The Council was silent as its members looked at one another. Jaina immediately regretted saying anything. "There is . . . one other thing," Kam said. He looked at her gravely. "As yet, Lord Rache has not aligned himself with the Empire. We'd like to keep it that way." Jaina's mouth opened, but no sound came out. What did they want her to do? Her mother's mouth was pinched, her face drawn, as she said, "The Republic, against our better judgement, has asked us to locate Lord Rache. They would like us to find him and . . . see if we can get him to ally himself with our side." ---------- "They're insane!" "Not really," her brother said . He was lounging in the doorway, watching his sister pace. Jaina stopped. "How are they not insane? They want us to track down a Sith Lord, the one involved in-" She hesitated, still unable sometimes to say the words. "They want me to find him and strike a deal with him? He's a Sith! He's the enemy!" Her brother's blue eyes were serious, as they'd been far too often since the war. He brushed dark hair out of his eyes as he said, "Jaina . . . he could have wiped us out over the years, at any time. He knows exactly where we are. And it was his army that wiped out the Vong. His people that saved the Academy." She sighed and sat on the edge of her bed. "I know, Anakin. I know all this, but still, does it make it right?" She tugged at her braid and looked unseeingly at her workbench, where half a dozen unfinished projects lay strewn across its surface. "He'll never join the Empire. He hates them. But why would the Republic want to have an alliance with a Sith Lord?" "Because he's a Sith Lord?" Anakin guessed. "Also, the enemy of my enemy is my friend." Jaina stared at her little brother. "Why aren't you on the Council yet?" she demanded. "Too young," Anakin said, a twinkle in his eye. "I don't get a shot at that until I'm a Master." She shook her head. "I don't want it. And I don't want this mission, either." "Neither do I, but the Council must be agreeing to the Republic's request for some reason they haven't divulged to us. We'll go and check things out. Who knows if it'll even be possible to find Rache? If we can't find him, we obviously can't negotiate a treaty with him." Jaina smiled at her sibling's logic. "You're right." Then she motioned him out so she could pack. ---------- The hangar under the Temple was one of Jaina's favourite places. It housed the Jedi contingent of starfighters, a disreputable mix of A-wings, E-wings, and a bunch of XJX-wings donated by someone during the war. Jaina had her suspicions about their benefactor, ones she'd never voiced. There were also a few small cargo ships and a very nice ship Jaina hoped to fly some day, one donated by Teneniel Djo, the Queen Mother of Hapes. Jaina thought of her friend, Tenel Ka, who was currently at home, visiting her family for her sister Ialin Tu's lifeday. Anakin was already running through the preflight checks on his X-wing, his astromech, Fiver, in place. Jaina found that he'd also started the preflight on her X-wing, with the assistance of her droid, Cappie. She said hello to the droid, the one she'd had since Duro, after her mother had lost her legs fighting Warmaster Tsavong Lah. Jaina had been injured in a battle shortly before Duro and had lost her previous droid, Sparky. She hadn't been able to help her mother, because Jaina had temporarily lost her eyesight. But that had been years ago, when she was just barely eighteen. She was almost twenty-five now. Twenty-five, and a decorated soldier who'd reached the rank of Colonel before she'd resigned her commission a handful of years before and devoted her life to the Jedi. It was a choice that, unfortunately, that took much of her chance for a "normal" life, like the one Tenel Ka had. Her friend was engaged to be married, to a long-time friend of theirs, Zekk. It also frequently put her in the position of doing things that she really didn't want to, like finding the Sith Lord who had been responsible for the death of Luke Skywalker. Dana -----signature----- http://www.kypandjaina.net "I always liked Kyp Durron better, anyway." -- Han Solo ". . . What the hell is an 'Aluminum Falcon'?"
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PonyTricks Registered: Jul '03	Date Posted: 12/10/05 5:09pm Subject: RE: "Like The Deserts Miss The Rain" (post-NJO AU)
	Luke's dead? Leia's in a hoverchair? Where is Han?? Why do I get a BAD feeling about who this SITH LORD who KILLED LUKE is? looks around for a certain Force-strong twin, that seems to be missing, yet everyone wants to bring into the Republic -----signature----- Brain: Now, Pinky, if by any chance you are captured during this mission, remember you are Gunther Heindriksen from Appenzell. You moved to Grindelwald to drive the cog train to Murren. Can you repeat that? Pinky: Mmmm, no, Brain, don't think I can.
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cleveland1000 Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 12/10/05 5:23pm Subject: RE: "Like The Deserts Miss The Rain" (post-NJO AU)
	good post Dana can't wait to see more -----signature----- "There is no emotion there is peace. There is no ignorance there is knowledge. There is no passion there is serenity. There is no death there is the force." fanfic Open Your Eyes http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=20335319&start=20614766
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Saber_Girl_Jaina Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 12/10/05 5:43pm Subject: RE: "Like The Deserts Miss The Rain" (post-NJO AU)
	First off, great start Dantana! I'd especially like to thank you for being the first to respond to our challenge (check the third page of the Extreme AU-er thread, or relevent thread in any time period board if you want more info, folks.). It's great to know it didn't go unheard, and even better to see this degree of subtlty used in implementing it. -----signature----- "Do or do not, there is no spoon." http://www.fanfiction.net/~sabergirls Please feed the mutant plot bunnies! Padawan of WynssaStareflare Extreme AUer: http://boards.theforce.net/fan_fiction_resource/b10304/22534388/p1
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DantanaSkywalker Title: Manager Emeritus Registered: Apr '02	Date Posted: 12/10/05 5:53pm Subject: RE: "Like The Deserts Miss The Rain" (post-NJO AU) Cover art added - Date Edited: 12/10/05 6:13pm (1 edits total) Edited By: DantanaSkywalker
	PonyTricks - Luke's dead? shock shock Yup. Leia's in a hoverchair? shock shock Yup. Where is Han?? worried You'll find out soon enough. Why do I get a BAD feeling about who this SITH LORD who KILLED LUKE is? looks around for a certain Force-strong twin, that seems to be missing, yet everyone wants to bring into the Republic* mischief* You'll see that soon, too. cleveland1000 - good post Dana can't wait to see more Thanks. Saber_Girl_Jaina - First off, great start Dantana! I'd especially like to thank you for being the first to respond to our challenge (check the third page of the Extreme AU-er thread, or relevent thread in any time period board if you want more info, folks.). It's great to know it didn't go unheard, and even better to see this degree of subtlty used in implementing it. Thank you. I've definitely had fun with what I've written so far with this, and I was really happy to see a challenge I actually felt like answering. Dana -----signature----- http://www.kypandjaina.net "I always liked Kyp Durron better, anyway." -- Han Solo ". . . What the hell is an 'Aluminum Falcon'?"
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Healer_Leona Registered: Jul '00	Date Posted: 12/10/05 5:56pm Subject: RE: "Like The Deserts Miss The Rain" (post-NJO AU) Cover art added
	Oh my goodness, such a different world. Can't help but wonder what the Sith has up his sleeve? I can't believe he'd help save the Jedi without some plan already in mind. -----signature----- So to my friends that even call but I don't call back I want you deep inside my heart upon a hill It seems to hide sometimes and run away and wonder I'm really sick of saying sorry but I will
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DantanaSkywalker Title: Manager Emeritus Registered: Apr '02	Date Posted: 12/10/05 6:14pm Subject: RE: "Like The Deserts Miss The Rain" (post-NJO AU) Cover art added
	Healer_Leona - Oh my goodness, such a different world. Can't help but wonder what the Sith has up his sleeve? I can't believe he'd help save the Jedi without some plan already in mind. Oh, he's definitely got something up his sleeve. We'll find out in the next couple chapters what at least part of it is. Dana -----signature----- http://www.kypandjaina.net "I always liked Kyp Durron better, anyway." -- Han Solo ". . . What the hell is an 'Aluminum Falcon'?"
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DantanaSkywalker Title: Manager Emeritus Registered: Apr '02	Date Posted: 12/10/05 7:12pm Subject: RE: "Like The Deserts Miss The Rain" (post-NJO AU) Cover art added
	Couldn't resist posting more. --Chapter Two-- Jaina didn't think she'd spent four consecutive days in the cockpit of an X-wing since she was twenty years old. It wasn't exactly comfortable, and she was looking forward to stopping anywhere and having a shower, as well as sleeping horizontally. Decent food would be good, as well. Rumour had it that Darth Rache didn't have any particular world as his base. Instead, he had a ship. A very big ship. A flying fortress as a testiment to his power. At least, that was what they'd heard in the last few systems they'd been in. Jaina at least knew the name of the ship, which was something most didn't. She'd also once upon a time heard the voice of its commander, the shadowy Sith Lord with a reputation at least as large as Darth Vader's. They'd made their way along the border for the last week, stopping just long enough at systems to inquire about Imperial activity and sightings of Rache's ship. A lot of beings imagined they'd seen the Eradicator, but she doubted that few actually had. No one really knew what Darth Rache was up to. After a brief rampage against the Empire twenty years before, he'd virtually disappeared, popping up every few years in a big, flashy gesture--usually when he could embarrass either the Republic or the Empire the most, like saving the galaxy from the Vong--and then promptly vanish, once more, into the dark places between the stars. The search had brought them here, to the Outer Rim, near the Bespin system. She had her theories as to why they were out this way, but again, they weren't things she voiced aloud. Inquiries at Cloud City sent them further rimward. Jaina decided to try to sleep, hoping against hope they found nothing. But her gut feeling didn't agree with her head. ---------- A shudder and a bone-jarring wrench woke Jaina as the X-wings abruptly dropped out of hyperspace. The diagnostics were wailing. Jaina's fingers moved over the controls as she looked up to see why they'd been yanked out. "Holy Force," she breathed. Somehow, she hadn't remembered Rache's ship being quite so . . . large. Or scary. She'd seen it only once before, at the Battle of Coruscant eight years ago. Time had dimmed it in her mind. It appeared to have once been a Super-class Star Destroyer, but twenty years of modification had changed it into something even more sinister. It almost looked like parts of a Hapan Battle Dragon had been attached to the sides toward the back of the ship, like wings. She'd been an unwilling guest of the Shadow Academy as a teenager; it looked like Rache had appropriated it and attached it to his ship, the spiky ring-shaped structure forming a hump on the top of the Destroyer through which the control tower of the Destroyer rose. The whole thing was massive and intimidating, bristling with weaponry, the outer hull painted black. At first, Jaina thought that Rache had taken the gravity-well generator from an Interdictor-class Destroyer and attached it in front of the ring, but at second glance, she realised the entire Interdictor had been welded to the ship below it. This was what had pulled them out, and Jaina could see why people had been frightened when they'd spoken of it. Of course, the fleet around it wasn't shabby, either. Jaina had no idea what make the ships were, but they were at least the size of Imperial Star Destroyers. "You think he's compensating for anything?" Anakin asked laconically. Jaina laughed. "Possibly." She opened a channel to hail. "Eradicator, this is Jaina Solo of the Republic, requesting contact." Only a moment passed before a voice crackled over the comm. "Republic fighters, stand down and wait for escort." She switched over to the private channel. "You think they were expecting us?" "We've only been asking at every system if anyone's seen them; Rache was bound to get word two Jedi were looking for him. He's probably very curious." "Great." Jaina knew her brother was right, as he usually was. A watery planet hung behind the Eradicator, and against the blue and white backdrop, Jaina could see small black flecks moving towards them, long before they reached scanner range. These she was more familiar with; she'd fought alongside these sleek black fighters in several battles and wasn't likely to soon forget the needle-like shape. She and Anakin let the squadron lead her toward the Eradicator. Jaina was surprised when a bay on the circular portion opened to admit them, rather than one of the docking bays in the belly. "Considering we were looking for all of a week, this feels like a set-up," Anakin said over the comm. "I'd have to agree," Jaina responded. Her fighter settled on the polished black surface of the landing bay. The doors slide closed behind them, the other fighters, twelve of them, coming to rest in a group behind the two X-wings. As Jaina descended from her cockpit, she looked at Anakin. "Cordial welcome," she murmured. "I'm getting the impression we're not going to find it easy to leave." Anakin shook his head. The twelve other pilots, in black uniforms and opaque black helmets, formed two lines that the two Jedi had to walk between to get to the door, where someone of higher rank was waiting for them. "I think someone got a discount on bulk purchases of black material," Jaina quipped. "Even the Empire has more variety in their uniforms." Her eyes fell on a unique vessel, one that looked like a demented mind had got hold of a TIE fighter and given it claws instead of the panels. She hadn't seen a Chiss clawcraft since the war; they were allied with the Empire, she recalled. Jaina nudged Anakin. "Looks like the Empire's already here." He nodded, but remained silent. The uniformed woman at the door gave them an icy stare. She was tall, with white hair and purple eyes. The entirity of the eye was purple, not just her iris; Jaina actually couldn't see any iris. "I am Captain Zyras Penta," she said. "Lord Rache would like to see you immediately. Follow me." "Why do I have a bad feeling about this?" Anakin asked. Jaina shushed him as they followed Captain Penta. She could barely keep track of the twists and turns of the corridors, or the number of turbolifts they took. She got the impression they were purposely being taken an unnecessary direction just so they couldn't find their way back easily. Penta stopped in front of a door and pressed the entry pad. after a moment, the door slid open and the trio walked into fairly small room, apparently some sort of tactical command centre. There was a large holographic map occupying the right side of the room, displaying the galaxy. Half of it was in red, denoting the Empire's space, the other in Republic blue. Jaina's eyes went to the throne at the far end of the room. A man lounged there, dressed in black leggings, black boots, black gloves, a black cloak, and a vibrant, blood-red shirt. He had black hair long enough to be pulled back. A cloaked, motionless figure stood beside the throne. Before the throne stood a man in his late twenties, with close-cropped black hair, also dressed in black, an Imperial-style uniform with red trim. He looked annoyed at their presence. "Ah, right on time, the emissaries from the Republic," the man on the throne drawled. "Jedi no less. I'm honoured. As you can see, the Empire only sent me one of their pilots." Both Solos stopped, taking in the scene. "You may go, Captain Penta," Darth Rache said, gesturing with a gloved hand to the door. "May the Force be with us," Anakin murmured to Jaina as the captain closed the door behind her, and they found themselves alone in a room full of enemies. Dana -----signature----- http://www.kypandjaina.net "I always liked Kyp Durron better, anyway." -- Han Solo ". . . What the hell is an 'Aluminum Falcon'?"
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cleveland1000 Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 12/10/05 7:41pm Subject: RE: "Like The Deserts Miss The Rain" (post-NJO AU) Chapters 1 & 2 10 Dec - Date Edited: 12/10/05 7:50pm (2 edits total) Edited By: cleveland1000
	ooooo Very nice job Dana, can't wait to read the next chapter. and wow, that is one screwy sounding ship. You'd think with such a style for star fighters he'd have more taste in uniform, tsk tsk. -----signature----- "There is no emotion there is peace. There is no ignorance there is knowledge. There is no passion there is serenity. There is no death there is the force." fanfic Open Your Eyes http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=20335319&start=20614766
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Layren Registered: Oct '03	Date Posted: 12/10/05 7:55pm Subject: RE: "Like The Deserts Miss The Rain" (post-NJO AU) Chapters 1 & 2 10 Dec
	Ooooooooooh you've got me interested in this one -- yes I'm posting on Beyond Your eyes aren't deceiving you -- or are they? Great to see you posting again! -----signature----- Proud Master to Ara-gon The Triad Chronicles http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/25934993/p1/?177 (OC's) Into Another Day http://boards.theforce.net/before_the_saga/b10475/27926050/p1/?0 2008 Dear Diary Challenge I am Jinngerbread.
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SpiritofEowyn Registered: Mar '05	Date Posted: 12/10/05 9:38pm Subject: RE: "Like The Deserts Miss The Rain" (post-NJO AU) Chapters 1 & 2 10 Dec
	Would the empire have sent Jag? Hmm. I know you're not a J/J shipper, so hmmmmm.. -----signature----- Suddenly Single Other Half: Force Twins Index : http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=22314061 "Stop the Skywalker Stupidity Cycle"
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Saber_Girl_Jaina Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 12/10/05 10:10pm Subject: RE: "Like The Deserts Miss The Rain" (post-NJO AU) Chapters 1 & 2 10 Dec
	I'm telling you folks, read the challenge if you want to know what's going on.[/shameless plug] -----signature----- "Do or do not, there is no spoon." http://www.fanfiction.net/~sabergirls Please feed the mutant plot bunnies! Padawan of WynssaStareflare Extreme AUer: http://boards.theforce.net/fan_fiction_resource/b10304/22534388/p1
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CodeName_Targeter Registered: Nov '03	Date Posted: 12/10/05 10:45pm Subject: RE: "Like The Deserts Miss The Rain" (post-NJO AU) Chapters 1 & 2 10 Dec
	Oye... I have a few suspicions about this.... And they involve Captain Cardboard and Kyp.... and I wanna know where the heck is Jacen! Love the fic so far, btw. -----signature----- XWFC: Wraith Leader and Senator - Starfighter Draft Winner Ravenclaw ftw! Doppleganger of Suzuki_Akira and Vod'ika to Valin_Halcyon Dragged back to the forums for the SFD by Jello. Look out!
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princess_melissa Registered: Mar '05	Date Posted: 12/11/05 4:47am Subject: RE: "Like The Deserts Miss The Rain" (post-NJO AU) Chapters 1 & 2 10 Dec
	Awsome start! I can't wait to see where this one is going. -----signature----- Knighted by Zonoma Twich's Twisted Sisters! My FanArt - Updated 12/14 http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=21750870 My Drabbles - http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=24379801&brd=10477&start=24379808 Twins Suns 5
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AvenKiel Registered: Oct '03	Date Posted: 12/11/05 10:21pm Subject: RE: "Like The Deserts Miss The Rain" (post-NJO AU) Chapters 1 & 2 10 Dec
	Wait Wait Wait, hold up. Just a moment. Tenel Ka and Zekk? The rest I can handle. But Tenel Ka and Zekk? I'd really like to see how you put them together, that seems like such an odd pairing. Great story, can't wait for more! -----signature----- I'm a naughty little Kitty... Meow! Grilled Cheese..... mmmmmmmmm..... http://www.livejournal.com/~jediliz/ I don't know what I'd do if I couldn't dance , sing and hop around all day, I'd probably die. Death from fidgeting!
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DantanaSkywalker Title: Manager Emeritus Registered: Apr '02	Date Posted: 12/12/05 1:16am Subject: RE: "Like The Deserts Miss The Rain" (post-NJO AU) Chapters 1 & 2 10 Dec
	cleveland1000 - ooooo Very nice job Dana, can't wait to read the next chapter. and wow, that is one screwy sounding ship. You'd think with such a style for star fighters he'd have more taste in uniform, tsk tsk. I don't think he worries much about the particular style as long as they're black. :-P Layren - Ooooooooooh you've got me interested in this one -- yes I'm posting on Beyond tongue Your eyes aren't deceiving you -- or are they? tongue LOL! Great to see you posting again! Thanks. SpiritofEowyn - Would the empire have sent Jag? Hmm. I know you're not a J/J shipper, so hmmmmm.. We'll find out soon. Saber_Girl_Jaina - I'm telling you folks, read the challenge if you want to know what's going on.[/shameless plug] Hmm . . . Maybe, and maybe not. This story's rather complicated. CodeName_Targeter - Oye... I have a few suspicions about this.... And they involve Captain Cardboard and Kyp.... and I wanna know where the heck is Jacen! We'll see soon. I know, I know, I'm being cryptic and annoying. Love the fic so far, btw. tongue happy Thanks! princess_melissa - Awsome start! I can't wait to see where this one is going. Thank you. AvenKiel - Wait Wait Wait, hold up. Just a moment. Tenel Ka and Zekk? The rest I can handle. But Tenel Ka and Zekk? I'd really like to see how you put them together, that seems like such an odd pairing. Well, they're not going to be in the early part of this, maybe more towards the end of it . . . but it will be explained. I think. Great story, can't wait for more! Thanks. More coming right up. Dana -----signature----- http://www.kypandjaina.net "I always liked Kyp Durron better, anyway." -- Han Solo ". . . What the hell is an 'Aluminum Falcon'?"
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