Crimson_Sabre posted:Wow, they really made it easy to use color, highlight and the list functions now when posting... I like the story, especially because the plot is so much different than the usual plot, kinda like that singer from Linkin Park's voice... that guy's crazy. By the way, you might want to change the title to say updated on the 30th because you could be missing out on some readers. I know Utah is behind the east cost but it must've really drifted west for it to be 10 days behind us. Chris
Golden_Jedi posted:Yeah, yeah, gotta love the "eyes" thing...
DarthIshtar posted:"What, is the big, bad Sith Lord afraid of my mother?" "We're not even married and you're foisting a mother-in-law on me!" he said. Mia seems to be a great beta for you. There were several parts in the last two chapters that had me groaning from the pain of snorting Sprite up my nose. The quoted one is my favorite. I think Rache is in for it!
princess_melissa posted:Awsome update! I loved the whole conversation of Jaina's Terms. I was laughing the whole time. Can't wait til the next post
Chilla posted:Dana, you are great! Loved this chapter! Didn't know either Jaina loves chocolate so much.........Have I missed something in the books or do all fanfic authors have the same idea?
Flowerlady posted:Can't wait to see want happens next. Jaina sure gave him alot of conditions. Loved the line about foisting a mother-in-law on him already. FL
ccp posted:"Can we discuss this later?" "No." "I'm beginning to regret this arrangement." "Good." I loved that part. Great update.
Lola64 posted:great update. Can't believe Kyp's giving in to her demands. I liked it better when he was calling all the shots and making her wear what she wanted. This is surely the beginning of his undoing.
CodeName_Targeter posted:Woohoo, all caught up!! Shiny cover, btw. Note to self: Snorting with laughter around a piece of pizza over Jaina's conditions so does not work.
MJade posted:Dana, Great update. Love that Jaina's taking charge, and the mother-in-law line is absolutely hilarious. Still loving this story, and can't wait for more of Rache (especially if the mother-in-law visits).
JayaMioneDurron posted:WOW. that is al i can say. WOW. gimmie a week to recover and then maybe ill have a bigger vocab
dm1 posted:Loved the mother-in-law line (although my mother-in-law was a wonderful woman)and the comment about the eye thing! Keep this coming! Wonder what those space pirates want...
Kit_Kat posted:luv the additional coverart! *camps by computer til next post* UP! Please!
Ars_longa posted:I just stumbled upon this. I assume it's an old joke, but I found it to be very appropriate. Especially the point about superweapons. A.