Chilla posted:I wonder, have you learned German and how did you get the "ä"? American and English keyboards don't have "ä", "ö" and "ü". (Do they have "ß"?) But Gärtner really doesn't fit.
Chilla posted:Wow! Great chapter. Rache is really nice, but it's getting very dangerous for Jaina. Is he in the appartment to protect her? If you want a good dictionary, you could try leo. It's very good, has even colloquial speech.
Lola64 posted:I'm officially addicted to this fic... Thanks a lot. "And you confuse me, little Jedi. Oh, how you confuse me." Maybe she can redeem him yet. I loved that she envisioned killing him as he talked and then hurt him. And he took it like a man. Great update. And you're moving along here. I love that too. Can't wait to see her finally submit. Imagine that, me looking forward to K/J romance.. Just because you're writing it mind you.
princess_melissa posted:Ohhh wow, two in one day ...(Jaina)entertained herself with visions of strangling Rache with his cape. It was a thought that brought a smile to her face... Jaina moved on in her fantasy to smothering him with his pillow...Meat grinder. Feet first. laugh I just about died What was it that Rache was frightened of, that he would willingly arm her when he'd had the chance to disarm? Pellaeon's voice echoed in her mind suddenly. "Does Jade know that you've got a paramour?" And Rache's response, holding depth she hadn't realised in her ire. "She knows I have a bedwarmer, but I'd prefer her to think that's all it is." It was a long time before Jaina fell asleep again, finding she was watching for shadows on the walls, and wondering when the attack would come. I knew that was going to happen. Can I call it or what?
Agent_Jaid posted:The banter. THE BANTER!!! Most especially.. the meat grinder!!!! *glows to you on AIM*
princess_of_naboo posted:Wonderful update!
MJade posted:Wonderful update, Dana! Loved the banter, and the ball (and the length of time you spent on the ball was perfect. You played it just right) Still loving to hate evil Kyppie (you're writing him SO well!) and it seems both he and Jaina (his Little Jedi indeed hee hee) are falling hard. Very intense! Can't wait for more. I think you can count one more reader addicted to this fic. Great job.
Grand Admiral Wettengel posted:And if you want to see some more of this sort of "nice" Sithy Kyp, I just updated one of my 'fics.
Flowerlady posted:I couldn't stop laughing through this. I loved her thoughts as Kyp was talking to Pellaeon. Great! FL
Jade_Max posted:Great updates DAna! I adore how Jaina doesn't trust Kyp and isn't afraid to show it with the devider in the middle of the bed *giggle* And the dress... hmmm... interesting. Like other before me, I believe you spent just the right amount of time on the ball scene... but Kyp and Mara?! That I hadn't thought of - Kyp obviously knows there are people to fear beyond other Sith *chuckle* and got entangled with the wrong woman lol! Little Jedi Hehehehe... I love it. Great job!
Daughterofflame posted:*is torn between laughing and pondering* I, too, am confused. At this point, I'm not really sure whether to hope Jaina slices off key points of Rache, or falls in love with him instead. ¡Ay! Dana, can't you just make him good OR bad??? As in one being all-exclusive of the other?? (Great banter, btw) I shall patiently await more! *grins* ~*~Austyn