princess_melissa posted:Awsome update! After I finish reading each chapter I'm always wishing for more and when I recieve a PM saying it's been updated I'm almost literilly bouncing off the wall from excitement. Great Job so far and can't wait for the next part.
princess_of_naboo posted:Very interesting timeline.
Golden_Jedi posted:dm1 posted:Jaina wore a belt with her father's blaster hanging at her hip.Somehow, that line had me almost in tears, poor Han! Me too! More than that, I had this flash-image of Jaina adapting the belt to her size after Han's death... it sent shivers down my spine. Excellent update, Dana, although I have a bad feeling about the fate of this new brown-haired, brown-eyed girl.
dm1 posted:Jaina wore a belt with her father's blaster hanging at her hip.Somehow, that line had me almost in tears, poor Han!
MiaTieska posted:Yay update! Of course, I've been replying over on kajsu, so... I just wanted to read other people's replies here. Sorry I didn't get this back to you last night, I had to make sure I'd fully read the earlier chapters, and wow that did clear up a few things. You can't keep Han dead. Bring Luke back as a Force ghostie, fine, but there's no one for him to be with! Cause Mara's evil. Please bring back Han too! ....Somehow! Love Anakin. Love the banter. I'm not usually one for AU's, especially dark AU's, but you've got me with this one. -Mia, who has way too much to catch up with on the boards...
MJade posted:Dana, Yea, you've filed Chapter 11! Sorry, had to do it. Wonderful update. That sneaky Rache. Hiring seemingly sweet and naive Ailana as a decoy for the Empress herself (and loved the milady btw - Padme would love it). Only the Sith. You know, it's rare to find a character you know is evil and you can't trust at all, yet is so... appealing you can't deny him/her anything. Your defenses just melt away. That seems to be the way Rache is going. I think we're in for quite the ride. Can't wait for more of the great story.
Jade_Max posted:Jaina wore a belt with her father's blaster hanging at her hip *sniffle* such a simple line, and yet very indicative of Jaina's character. I can just see her taking the blaster, belt and all, and - even if it's outdated - using it because it makes her feel safe and keeps her father close *sniff* So sweet! And I adore the new "decoy" for Jaina. *laughs* you had me thinking TPM for a minute and wondering if they'd been sent back in time *chuckle* I think Jacen and Kyp have met their match - though I wanted to smack Jacen when he told his siter not to expect loyalty. *sighs* stupid, stubborn Sith! As for my reaction to the Kyp/Mara thing - I did catch the reference, I was only hoping I was wrong *laughs* it's just... wrong somehow Wonderful Update, Dana, can't wait for more
Chilla posted:[quote=princess_melissa]Awsome update! After I finish reading each chapter I'm always wishing for more and when I recieve a PM saying it's been updated I'm almost literilly bouncing off the wall from excitement. Great Job so far and can't wait for the next part.
DantanaSkywalker posted:Well, I talked things over with MiaTieska last night over IHOP pancakes, and I think there are some surprises in store.
DantanaSkywalker posted:And Anakin will be back. Probably fairly soon.
DantanaSkywalker posted:The next update will hopefully be soon. Have to write it and get it to my beta.
MiaTieska posted:DantanaSkywalker posted:Well, I talked things over with MiaTieska last night over IHOP pancakes, and I think there are some surprises in store. Hehehe!! Yes there are. I realllly hope you make the next chapter as amusing as we made it sound while we were hyper at 1 am at IHOP. DantanaSkywalker posted:And Anakin will be back. Probably fairly soon. Yay! The awesome power of the beta's suggestion, and begging. Next time I'll use even more desserts... DantanaSkywalker posted:The next update will hopefully be soon. Have to write it and get it to my beta. Ooh yay!! -Mia
Kit_Kat posted:this is really good! more soon please!
princess_of_naboo posted:Yay, an update! Wonderful, as always, Dana. Jaina sighed. "Would you stop doing that?" "Doing what?" "The eye thing." He just looked at her. She sighed again, and followed him out. "That's one more condition. No creepy eye thing when we're in private." "Can we discuss this later?" "No." "I'm beginning to regret this arrangement." "Good." Loved that part.
Kit_Kat posted:oh, wow! love it!!!! Jaina almost gave in? make her give in candybar
Grand Admiral Wettengel posted:Kyp was so calm and rather tender right there. The "eye thing" is priceless, as is the "I think we're under attack." If Kyp wants to remain in one piece, Mara is off-limits, not that he'd want to touch her anyway. The things Kyp will do to "gracefully" bow out of a relationship. Why not simply kill Jade? But then he wouldn't have been able to get this delicious arrangement. And is he going to do anything truly dispicable? Right now he's very no-carb-cola of evil.