Author Topic: Healing Hearts (The Force Evolution Series, Post-DW AU, J/J) - Author Replies 12/6/07
TKeira_Lea 
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Date Posted: 1/5/06 8:28pm Subject: Healing Hearts (The Force Evolution Series, Post-DW AU, J/J) - Author Replies 12/6/07 - Date Edited: 12/6/07 8:40am (18 edits total) Edited By: TKeira_Lea
Title: Healing Hearts
Author: T’Keira Lea
Timeframe: Post-Destiny’s Way AU
Characters: Jagged Fel, Jaina Solo, Kyp Durron, Zekk, Keira Fel, Jacen Solo, Tahiri Veila Fel, Rane Fel, Fee Carolé, Valin Horn, Kyta Kale, Briaun Fel, Han Solo, Leia Organa Solo, Soontir Fel, Syal Antilles, Luke Skywalker, Mara Jade Skywalker, Ben Skywalker, Liadan Skywalker, Wedge Antilles, Tycho Celchu, Kell Tainer, Tyria Tainer, Jellica J’am’in, Tanner Kale
Genre: Alternate Universe
Keywords: Jaina, Jag, Force Evolution
Notes: Updated on Fridays
Summary: Can love heal the very heart it has broken?



Disclaimer: Lucasfilm owns all the rights to Star Wars. I don’t. No infringement is intended or profit to be made by me.

Healing Hearts - love has no greater power than to heal a wounded heart

Welcome to the third installment in the Force Evolution Trilogy. Healing Hearts is the stunning conclusion to Echoes of the Past and Legacy.

If you are new to my writing, this novel completes the trilogy started with my award-winning Echoes of the Past and Legacy. If you are curious, but are not sure if you want to invest the time try either Dreams of the Future or All Angles, a series of vignettes based on these characters as I have developed them. If you would prefer to dive in, I have posted short summaries of the two previous novels.

I will initially post on Fridays , plus occasional bonus posts. My intention is to post twice a week once I have killed a few plot bunnies the Wraiths have infected me with. (And yes, Scoundrel, I am going to continue to blame you guys tongue ) There is a tendency to run a couple pages between posts in my stories so I will put links from one post to the next in order to make it easier to read. As always, if you want the Word file emailed to you so you can catch up, please PM me. All my readers know that I am more than willing to accommodate vacations and send the next chapter out early by PM, provided you keep the contents a secret, and I am always open to plot suggestions, questions, and I-just-have-to-know-what-happens PMs. Send them my way.

If you’re wondering about all these people with callsigns, the Wraiths are a scheming bunch of fans. They appear wild (some possibly even crazed, dazed and demented), but they don't bite. In addition, we have the Lomin Ale Cantina, where the fans hang out, find teasers, shamelessly plug their stories, scheme and do all those things that can get them slapped on the wrist by a moderator over at TFN. Everyone is welcome. Inside the Cantina you will find Jaina/Jag pictures, fan art and cover art posted as well as numerous polls and threads on various subjects from Star Wars to Alias.

Again, thanks ahead of time to Darth_Lex for betaing this massive epic and to my many fans whose enthusiasm has kept the candle burning. I’d suggest you take out a towel, plop down on the banks of DeNile and cross fingers with the rest of the fanatics who believe with all their hearts that somehow I will make things right.


(cover art courtesy of Lt_Jaina_Solo)

Without further ado...



 

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Date Posted: 1/5/06 8:29pm Subject: Teaser Trailer
The Fox Logo appears and fades. The Lucasfilm Logo appears and fades. The haunting melody of “Princess Leia’s Theme” begins as a series of images appears simultaneously with spoken words.

Announcer (voiceover): This summer, the producers of the Force Evolution series …
Kyp Durron stalks across a bustling hangar and steps in front of Valin Horn. Neither man is happy to see the other.

Announcer (voiceover): … give you the final installment in their award-winning trilogy.
Jacen Solo sprints across an open courtyard, with most of Twin Suns following. Bystanders leap out of their way.

Announcer (voiceover): Join us as we take you back to Naboo …
Twelve clawcraft descend over a blue and white sphere, then dive into the atmosphere.

Announcer (voiceover): … for a journey of discovery that finally reveals …
A dark haired woman slips into a crowd, winding among the mass of people. Right before she can escape into an alley a hand grabs her shoulder. A blaster in hand, she turns. Kyta shoots.

Announcer (voiceover): … the one truth not even fate can deny.
Jaina picks up Keira and kisses the top of her head.

The music transitions seamlessly to the tragic tones of “Padmé’s Ruminations,” now without spoken words.

Jacen walks away from Fee and punches a padded wall, then buries his face in his hands. Fee walks over and puts a hand on his shoulder.

Tahiri lies in a bed, holding a child in her arms. Rane crosses the room and sits next to them.

A woman leans forward in the shadows to dampen a cloth in a small washbasin. Moonlight reflects off her violet eyes.

The music shifts abruptly to the driving beat of “Battle of the Heroes.”

Kyp Durron (voiceover): Don’t you trust me?
Jaina hangs from a ledge, stretching for Keira, who is just beyond her reach. Suddenly Keira falls and Jaina releases her hold on the ledge.

Tahiri Fel (voiceover): They can’t take you from me now!
Inside a clawcraft cockpit, Rane frantically checks over his shoulder as laser fire rips past his canopy.

Jaina Solo-Fel (voiceover): I never knew.
In the pouring rain, at dusk, the outline of a man and a woman stands at the rim of a waterfall. The woman pulls the man to her.

Fee Carolé (voiceover): You deserve to die.
In a raging windstorm, Jacen whips his lightsaber, deflecting bolt after bolt.

Kyp Durron (voiceover): You have to, Jaina. No one else can.
The Amidala’s Legacy spins through an asteroid field, taking a direct hit on the starboard wing.

Zekk (voiceover): At long last, you’re mine.
Jaina runs down a narrow hallway, then skids to a halt after rounding a corner. Her eyes widen in shock and she falls backwards, scrambling frantically away.

Jaina Solo-Fel (voiceover): It should have been me.
Zekk and Kyp hurl Force energy at each other until they are both repelled in opposite directions from a violent blast.

The music flows into the melodic tones of “Across the Stars.”

Announcer (voiceover): There was once a love echoing past loves…
Jag stands before Jaina, who is dressed in a formal white dress. Behind them stretches an endless sea shimmering in the moonlight.

Announcer (voiceover): …meant to be a legacy for the future.
Jag is propped against a tree in a meadow, while Jaina lies with her head in his lap. They look into each other’s eyes and smile as a dark-haired child dances past.

Announcer (voiceover): Darkness ended it all too quickly.
A tall figure hooded in a billowing black cloak strides purposefully into an enclosed power generation facility. The light from snapping arms of electricity barely catches the face beneath the cowl – Zekk’s.

Announcer (voiceover): But some loves transcend even death.
A planet appears in the vastness of space. As its sun rises behind it, the field of asteroids surrounding the planet is lit by the powerful rays of light.

As “Across the Stars” soars to conclusion, white text on a black background appears.

STAR WARS AU: THE FORCE EVOLUTION SERIES
HEALING HEARTS


Announcer (voiceover): Rated PG. Starts immediately on the Beyond the Saga board.


 

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Date Posted: 1/5/06 8:31pm Subject: Force Evolution Series Summary
Force Evolution Series Summary


Timeline*

28.07 Echoes of the Past begins
28.08 Peace Brigade plot; Jaina Solo marries Jagged Fel
28.08 Battle of Bimmisaari
29.04 Battle of Naboo; Yuuzhan Vong war ends
29.05 Keira Winter Fel is born on Csilla
29.08 Legacy begins
31.08 Twin Suns infiltrates the Circle of Retribution at Fondor
31.09 Jedi Praxeum destroyed on Naboo, Fondor Four explodes
32.04 Senate Investigative Hearings on the Fondor Incident
32.05 Zekk strikes on Naboo; Synjon Chak Fel is born and dies
34.05 Healing Hearts begins


Echoes of the Past

Shortly after the Battle of Ebaq, Twin Suns Squadron is ambushed by the Yuuzhan Vong. Jaina crashes on an uncharted planet and encounters a spirit from her past. The planet is Naboo; the spirit is Padmé Amidala. After her rescue by Jag, Jaina returns to Mon Calamari to share the news of her grandmother with her family.

When the Yuuzhan Vong declare a holy war on the Trickster, Kyp assumes the role of Jaina’s personal protector and joins Twin Suns. He knows his love for Jaina will never be reciprocated. Zekk, on the other hand, has returned to Jaina’s life seeking to restart their relationship. Her rebuff of his advances is not received well. After almost losing Jaina to a Peace Brigade plot, Jag asks Jaina to marry him and she accepts. They immediately wed in secret, then depart for one of the biggest battles of the war.

During the Battle of Bimmisaari Jaina rescues Jag’s brother Rane from his crashed fighter and crosses paths with Nom Anor. The Yuuzhan Vong instigator injects Jaina with a bioweapon before he escapes. The toxin renders her birth control useless and she becomes pregnant. The pregnancy turns out to be a blessing because the unborn child can detect the Yuuzhan Vong disease. For this reason alone the Jedi healer Cilghal is able to recognize Jaina’s illness early enough and slow the pace of its debilitating effects.

Meanwhile, Jag returns from Chiss space with a new fleet of clawcraft. Zekk launches a surprise attack on his former flame’s husband. After a brief space battle, Jag shoots down Zekk’s snubfighter, sending him plummeting to his death.

Learning from her baby’s ability to detect the Yuuzhan Vong, Jaina helps lead the Galactic Alliance in its boldest move against their enemy: luring the Supreme Overlord into a direct attack on Naboo. With the help of Jacen, Kyp, and her new apprentice, Valin Horn, she defeats Shimrra in personal combat. The war ends, yet Jaina may have paid the ultimate price.

Overcome by the bioweapon, Jaina collapses. Fearing he will lose his wife and child, Jag flees with Jaina to Csilla. He hopes that between Jacen, Danni, and the Chiss scientists who created Alpha Red, a cure can be developed in time. With Jaina hovering between life and death, Jag agrees to treat her with an untested drug. It works, and Jaina recovers to deliver a baby girl, Keira Winter Fel.

At the end of the story, Jaina and Jag learn that the experimental treatment had an unexpected side effect. Their daughter will live the rest of her life in darkness; Keira is blind.



Legacy

On their one year anniversary, Jag decides that it is time to return to the Galactic Alliance. Unexpectedly, the entire Fel family accompanies them, leaving their life among the Chiss behind. Shortly after they arrive on Naboo, however, the Alliance is rocked by galaxy-wide attacks from a group called the Circle of Retribution.

A lone girl, similar in appearance to Jaina, is found among the wreckage of one of the attacks. Kyta bears a message from Zekk – he is alive and part of the Circle. The delivery of the message marks Jaina’s right hand with a scar signifying Zekk’s dark obsession. Knowing the Alliance needs all the help it can get in fighting the Circle, Jaina revives Twin Suns; Jag is given command of Rogue Squadron.

Two years of limited success against the Circle have passed when Jaina and Jag finally succeeds in conceiving a second child. She decides to lead Twin Suns on one last mission to pursue a critical lead locating the Circle’s base on the fourth moon of Fondor. The lead is actually a trap set by Lomi, however, and the Twin Suns team falls right into it. Lomi attempts to kill Jaina, but Zekk intervenes and kills his mentor, giving Jag and Kyp the opportunity escape with Jaina. In the aftermath of the battle the moon explodes, killing millions and leaving Fondor shrouded under an impenetrable field of asteroids.

A short time later, the Circle, now controlled by Zekk, launches a sabotage attack at the Jedi Praxeum on Naboo. Although only a small number of Jedi are killed, the increasing threat posed by Zekk is unmistakable.

Back home on Naboo, Jaina is told to rest or lose her baby. Times are difficult for Jaina and Jag as they struggle with a Senate investigation of the Fondor incident. Jag takes much of the family burden upon himself, raising a blind two-year-old daughter, and keeping a watchful eye on his wife, while still commanding the Rogues. Even with the help of Kyta, who has become part of the Solo-Fel household, the stress begins to take its toll on his relationship with Jaina.

At a party hosted by Jaina, Jag learns the truth behind many of his wife’s mysterious secrets. She has been helping his brother Rane arrange the perfect moment to propose to Tahiri Veila. Finally beginning to mend their relationship, Jaina and Jag take Keira on a visit to a familiar Naboo meadow. There Zekk makes his move. By the end of the day Jag is critically wounded and Jaina delivers her baby Synjon, who dies minutes out of the womb.

Enraged by his loss, Jag lashes out at everyone, including Jaina. He commandeers Rogue Squadron to accompany him back to Fondor to kill Zekk. Twin Suns pursues, broadcasting Jaina’s desperate recorded plea begging Jag to reconsider his motives and return home. No one is sure whether Jaina’s words make a difference; Zekk uses the Force to trap Jag’s X-wing between two asteroids, and the final image of Jagged Fel is his snubfighter erupting in a ball of flame.

Devastated by the loss of her son and husband, Jaina withdraws from her family. Hours after Jag’s funeral, Kyp finds her hiding in the Naboo wilderness. She is angry and full of hate. Not even the Jedi Master could have foreseen her next decision. Jaina severs herself from the Force and, in her last defiant act, steals away from Naboo in the night, never to be heard from again.



Footnote:

* Years are counted from the Battle of Yavin, and noted first on the date stamps. The standard GFFA calendar has ten months in a year, ranging from 35 days to 40 days. Months are noted second on the date stamp. For example 28.08 would depict the 28th year after the Battle of Yavin in its 8th month.



 

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Date Posted: 1/5/06 8:33pm Subject: Dramatis Personae
DRAMATIS PERSONAE

The Solo-Fel Family

Jaina Solo-Fel, expatriate (female human from Coruscant)
Jagged Fel, deceased (male human from Corellia)
Keira Winter Fel, child (female human from Naboo)
Synjon Chak Fel, deceased child (male human from Naboo)
Kyta Kale, expatriate (female human from Corellia)
Trick, astromech droid, Amidala’s Legacy

Leia Organa Solo, Governor of Naboo (female human from Alderaan)
Han Solo, captain, Millenium Falcon (male human from Corellia)
Jacen Solo, Jedi Master, Twin Suns Leader (male human from Coruscant)

Luke Skywalker, Jedi Master (male human from Tatooine)
Mara Jade Skywalker, Jedi Master (female human from Coruscant)
Ben Skywalker, child (male human from Naboo)
Liadan Skywalker, child (female human from Naboo)

Soontir Fel, General, CEDF liaison to Galactic Alliance (male human from Corellia)
Syal Antilles Fel, holostar and co-founder of Glacier Productions (female human from Corellia)
Rane Fel, Lieutenant Colonel, Spike Squadron Leader (male human from Csilla)
Briaun Fel, Ensign, Naboo Defense Force (female human from Csilla)
Tahiri Veila Fel, Jedi Knight (female human from Tatooine)


The Galactic Alliance

Wedge Antilles, former General, Starfighter Command (male human from Corellia)
Iella Antilles, Director, Galactic Alliance Intelligence, Twin Suns Advisory Council (female human from Corellia)
Syal Antilles, child (female human from Corellia)
Myri Antilles, child (female human from Corellia)
Bi, astromech droid, Dozen Lead
Tycho Celchu, General, Naboo Defense Force, Twin Suns Advisory Council (male human from Alderaan)
Kyp Durron, Jedi Master, Dozen Leader (male human from Carida)
Kirt Fongren, Lieutenant Colonel, Rogue Leader (male human from Adumar)
Drue Glentaw, Executive Officer, The Dozen (female human from Thyferra)
Corran Horn, Jedi Master, Jedi Intelligence, Twin Suns Advisory Council (male human from Corellia)
Jysella Horn, Jedi apprentice (female human from Corellia)
Valin Horn, Jedi Knight, Twin Suns Nine (male human from Corellia)
Itop Lawaad, Master Shaper, Praxeum (male Yuuzhan Vong)
Face Loran, holostar and co-founder of Glacier Productions, Twin Suns Advisory Council (male human from Pantolomin)
Cal Omas, Chief of State (male human from Alderaan)
Adelae Redalia, Senator (human female from Datooine)
Fyor Rodan, Senator (male human from Coruscant)
Stren Trajs, Senator, Twin Suns Advisory Council (male Bothan from Bothawui)


Twin Suns Squadron

Two: Fee Carolé, Major, Jedi apprentice (female human from Coruscant)
Three: Wakyr, Major (male Wookiee from Kashyyyk)
Four: Jennalyn Sollar, Major, Jedi Healer (female Bothan from Bothawui)
Five: Kell Tainer, Colonel (male human from Sluis Van)
Six: Tyria Tainer, Lieutenant Colonel, Jedi Knight (female human from Toprawa)
Seven: Dale Winsten, Major, Jedi Knight (male human from Kuat)
Eight: Yon Imodo, Major (male Chiss from Csilla)
Ten: Brance Wartrue, Lieutenant Colonel (male human from Bakura)
Eleven: Tanner Kale, Colonel (male human from Corellia)
Twelve: Alema Rar, Major, Jedi Knight (female Twi’lek from Ryloth)


The Circle of Retribution

Zekk, Dark Jedi (male human from Ennth)


The Resistance

Chanson Prask, leader (male human from Trajor Prime)
Jellica J’am’in, second-in-command (female human)
Faloh Rolan, affiliate (female Falleen)
Brys Towdais, affiliate, empath (male humanoid)

 

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Date Posted: 1/5/06 8:35pm Subject: Prologue - Date Edited: 1/13/06 4:11am (2 edits total) Edited By: TKeira_Lea
Love echoes from the past, resounds as a legacy to the future, and ultimately heals the wounded hearts.


HEALING HEARTS


Prologue

A long time ago. In a galaxy far, far away…

Shielded and protected, hidden in blinding darkness, is the center of a tempest, a storm of unending reserves. Ferocious power drives the winds and fuels the heavens. Eclipsed from the light but surrounded by white, there is only one possibility – a blizzard.

This is the life of a lone entity. One among billions, maybe trillions, maybe countless. One at a time, on random and varied trajectories, they fall. Plummeting until the eventual crash. Some on rock, some on others that have fallen before; more still return to the place that bore them. This is the life of a solitary snowflake.

Unique but the same, each snowflake is destined for a monumental task. It falls, a white crystalline sculpture of rare beauty. Light reflects through it, from it, and around it, but often this magnificent display is lost among the reflection of the others, lost in an overload of colors that always blends into white.

Unseen, the snowflake falls until it can fall no more, no longer an exquisite artifact dancing in the currents but now a menace to its own kind. The flake piles on top of the others, its brethren condemned to the same fate. Eventually they are no longer flakes, only that thing called snow, and all sense of self is lost.

The debts for its life yet unpaid, the journey of the snowflake does not end there. No, its servitude to the cycle of creation has only just begun. One flake after another amasses, growing higher and higher, snow reaching for the skies. With each successive layer, the individual flake loses a little more. Slowly, the weight from above, the pressure to reach the top, strips away one crystalline branch, then another and another. Eventually all that is left is the central core of its existence. It is no longer a heavenly snowflake or even snow; it is merely part of the ice.

Still an obligation is owed. The force from above becomes so intense that even the seed of the flake’s life begins to compress and wither under the strain. The pressure is unimaginable, unquantifiable; yet it exists and is relentless. It compels a change once more, squeezing the last breath of air from the ice, stripping the purity of white, changing the basic composition.

Now the snowflake truly is no more, not snow or ice, simply part of a bigger reality. A power with so much mass and momentum it cannot be stopped. It is blue and behemoth; it is a glacier. So it comes to pass that something that was once breathtaking and beautiful transforms into an engine of nature, the tool by which time changes all things.

Slipping, sliding down slopes at incalculable speeds, eternally fast but unerringly slow, the glacier carves the rock. It defeats the rock. So the rock becomes changed, too. And at the point when the rock believes itself defeated, nature rights the course. The smothered snowflakes finally touch the earth, and find there warmth and life. This is where the glacier meets its end, at life’s first breath. Crumbling back into the river, fed back to the sea, to the place where it all started.

Here the snowflake waits, immersed in the cold darkness, to be born again. For at every end there is a beginning.

**********

TKL/dl

So I’ll let you chew on that for a week. The answers are all there, my dear friends.


Chapter One

 

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Darth_Lex 
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Date Posted: 1/5/06 8:38pm Subject: RE: Healing Hearts (The Force Evolution Series, Post-DW AU, J/J) - Date Edited: 1/5/06 9:19pm (2 edits total) Edited By: Darth_Lex
First reply! grin

So it begins... applause dancing applause

Great teaser. cool There's just so much there. It's going to take me hours to see if I can piece together all the clues. And even then I'll probably be way off. tongue wink

Interesting DP, too. thinking

Can love heal the very heart it has broken?

Love has no greater power than to heal a wounded heart.

Love echoes from the past, resounds as a legacy to the future, and ultimately heals the wounded hearts.

rose What powerful themes. Can't wait to see how they play out.

Here the snowflake waits, immersed in the cold darkness, to be born again. For at every end there is a beginning.
Amazing. grin The whole Prologue was marvelous. So lyrical and poignant. Great echo of Stover, too. wink This was my favorite part, though. Just for everything it represents. hugs

 

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Date Posted: 1/5/06 8:38pm Subject: RE: DO NOT POST - HH Thread under construction - Date Edited: 1/5/06 8:49pm (2 edits total) Edited By: BigFatty
2nd post

I could've beat Lex, but I thought I'd be nice.





Anyway:

Jagged Fel, deceased (male human from Corellia)

Where's the "lies" emoticon when you need it?




You have stunned me again, my dear. Even in a prologue that if I had read without knowing the context, I still would have thought it beautiful. I'll never look at snowflakes the same again.

I have my own theory in the works as to what that all means. But from the above, I'm sure you can guess it has a certian bias. Can't wait to read more and talk speculation and all of that.

 

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Date Posted: 1/5/06 8:39pm Subject: RE: Healing Hearts (The Force Evolution Series, Post-DW AU, J/J) - Date Edited: 1/6/06 11:20am (1 edits total) Edited By: WynssaStarflare
Great job! I love the imagery!

 

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Date Posted: 1/5/06 8:45pm Subject: RE: Healing Hearts (The Force Evolution Series, Post-DW AU, J/J)
Oh my goodness, it's here!

dancing dancing dancing dancing dancing

shock shock shock shock

hugs hugs hugs

applause applause

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*scampers back to actually read it*

 

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ChissGoddess 
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Date Posted: 1/5/06 8:48pm Subject: RE: Healing Hearts (The Force Evolution Series, Post-DW AU, J/J) - Date Edited: 1/5/06 9:00pm (1 edits total) Edited By: ChissGoddess
*claps* applause
*Dances*

dancing dancing dancing dancing dancing dancing dancing

So did I read that right...all the answers are held within that one post? grin I hope so. Because wow, that was such a moving post...I mean you have no idea. It was like EPIC... I was moved to an epiphany. *shivers* I got chills!

Anyways, I am sooooo looking forward tomorrow. Tomorrow shall prove itself a great day. I have my first solo flight tomorrow (wish me luck ^_^), Healing Hearts starts, AND new episodes of Battlestar Galactica. I honestly don't think I could wish for a nicer day. grin blush

and now hugs for TKL and DL. I've missed you guys. grin
hugs hugs hugs

Cya tomorrow!
-Lee Ann/ CG

 

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Date Posted: 1/5/06 8:53pm Subject: RE: Healing Hearts (The Force Evolution Series, Post-DW AU, J/J)
Yeah, I'm thinking that somewhere I missed a few posts or something... time and many other obligations tore me away from the boards and ultimately your stories, so I'm terribly behind. Didn't even know you killed off Jag, or did you? So I'm humbly begging pardon and wondering if there's any way to get copies of the previous two (even though I read the first- just a refresher read if you will) without the tedious chatter inbetween posts (not that it's not entertaining) that would be super wicked.

 

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Date Posted: 1/5/06 8:55pm Subject: RE: Healing Hearts (The Force Evolution Series, Post-DW AU, J/J) - Date Edited: 1/5/06 9:14pm (2 edits total) Edited By: jags_gurl
*shriek of joy*

Preface!

Hmm.... looks pretty thick in symbolism here...

Good thing I'm taking a good college English course that taught me how to interpret all that sneaky symbolism. So. Jag = snowflake . Jag = reborn...? Jag = ALIVE!

Here the snowflake waits, immersed in the cold darkness, to be born again. For at every end there is a beginning. Beautiful. I like thinking of Jag as a snowflake whose end is only the beginning ... of a long and happy life ...

But I liked how you threw in "deceased" as Jag's specification into the dramatis personae. And Synjon, as well? thinking One can only hope that that's not to clarify references to the lost Fel son, but rather to ... his rebirth, as well.

Hm. So I never saw the movie "Birth" but I just got hit by an idea. So Tahiri has a baby. And Jag's being reborn... but you wouldn't steal that twisted plotline from that movie... you're a much better author than that ...

Which means, in conclusion, I don't know anything and am speculating wildly due to sunburn recieved whie on De Nile. But, I do know that your prologue was an eyebrow-raiser. That's the veiled storyline of HH, eh? thinking thinking

Nice recap from the previous stories, too.

I just can't get over how HH is here! We've all waited so long! applause

hugs Welcome home, Commander - I'm absolutely dying for the rest of the story! (And yes, I know, patience = virtue tongue )

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*thoroughly thrilled*

*busts out the champagne and Lomin Ales*

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JediJainaSoloFel 
Registered: Jun '04
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Date Posted: 1/5/06 9:46pm Subject: RE: Healing Hearts (The Force Evolution Series, Post-DW AU, J/J) - Date Edited: 1/6/06 4:58pm (1 edits total) Edited By: JediJainaSoloFel
Sheesh. A girl logs off for a couple of hours and THEN you decide to post tongue

Back with a review later grin

Back Now!

Excellent Start!!!

I think it goes without saying that I'm SOOOOOOOO Excited about this story. The prologue was absolutely beautiful and thanks so much for the trailer grin

I was very intrigued by the Dramatis Personae. Not only the Jag thing (but you already know my views on that) but on the use of the term "Expatriate" when referring to Jaina and others.

I can't wait to see what you've got in store for us!

 

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Solo_and_Fel 
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Date Posted: 1/5/06 10:03pm Subject: RE: Healing Hearts (The Force Evolution Series, Post-DW AU, J/J)
Welcome back, Legacy series.

I found a typo in the dramatis personae. You see it says deceased after Jagged Fel. And we all know it should say 'presumed deceased' or 'deceased without physical remains indicating so' or 'deceased for legal purposes.' You know.

Looking forward to reading.

 

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Date Posted: 1/5/06 10:10pm Subject: RE: Healing Hearts (The Force Evolution Series, Post-DW AU, J/J) - Date Edited: 1/5/06 10:30pm (1 edits total) Edited By: Chimpo_the_Sith
* wakes up * A post... * falls down back to bed *

EDIT: I think I got an idea from the prologue but I won't bother with getting into philosophy about it. Why to spoiling the fun that will come? happy

 

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Date Posted: 1/5/06 11:15pm Subject: RE: Healing Hearts (The Force Evolution Series, Post-DW AU, J/J)
Annnticipaaaation!!! grin

Sweet start. peace

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