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Replaced (AU, J/J, Cem,) Post-DN; Jaina has to deal with being replaced *COMPLETE May 19*
Wraiths_Ghost
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May '06
Date Posted:
5/24/06 11:37am
Subject:
RE: Replaced (AU, J/J, Cem,) Post-DN; Jaina has to deal with being replaced *COMPLETE May 19*
I absolutely love this story. It was so real and completely Star Wars. Please PM me for the sequel!
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A Perfect Proposal:
http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/23970233/p1/?0
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Lola64
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Mar '05
Date Posted:
5/24/06 8:55pm
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RE: Replaced (AU, J/J, Cem,) Post-DN; Jaina has to deal with being replaced *COMPLETE May 19*
I'm so sad that it's over.
What a wonderful ending though.
But Jag cut her off, stepping close to her and drawing her into his arms. Then he tilted her chin up and kissed her. His mouth was hot against hers, his lips silken. She wrapped her arms around his back, kissing him passionately.
Then he pulled back, dropping to the ground so suddenly that Jaina screamed for fear that something bad was happening again. He winched, looking up at her. “Change your name,” he said from one knee.
Ok. This is a swooning moment. I love those kinds of moments.
Yay for Jag and Yay for Jaina for finally saying "YES"
Jaina was silent. “I only hope that he’s over me by then.”
Oh he will be Jaina, for two reasons. One, because the galaxy is not all about you. He may have fallen for you, but only because he got too close for another reason. And two, because when he goes back to Ossus our little Tahiri will be there. And by the time you get back they will have their own little romance story cooking. Right Kissa?
Again, I truly loved this story. You did a fantastic job keeping me rooting for the good guys and disliking the bad guys.
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I stalk people. It's a Lola thing.
Been gone and is now back. Did you miss me?
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AvaVisarra
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Feb '06
Date Posted:
5/26/06 12:23am
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RE: Replaced (AU, J/J, Cem,) Post-DN; Jaina has to deal with being replaced *COMPLETE May 19*
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oh my burning stars.. i just found and finished this story after a serious marathon read and i have to say it is by far one of the best i have read. simply outstanding. you had me on the edge of my seat the entire time; crying, laughing, shaking my fist at the monitor, and cursing people. such an inventive and unique story. im more of a kyp and jaina fan but the way you wrote jag and jaina makes me question myself. it was breathtaking.
to have endured six years of Vong torture only to come back and find out all you know and love has been stolen from you, i couldn't even begin to imagine how that must have felt for Jaina. then to think the one person who kept you going all those years could be dead...poor thing. wow.. there so much to address, so many aspects of this story that i just adored. When jacen finally believed her and confided in her, that was so touching. and Cem, poor Cem. He wanted so much to hate her and he ended up loving her, and not being able to really love her because she was in love with someone else and that someone else was his blood. oye, poor guy.
This story was absolutely intense and i just want you to know that you have an insane talent for writing that you definitely need to pursue! If you start another FF please, i beg you! - let me know, give me a PM because after reading this i know anything you write after will be astral. I absolutely adored this story
you're amazing!
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Kissa
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Date Posted:
5/27/06 9:24am
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RE: Replaced (AU, J/J, Cem,) Post-DN; Jaina has to deal with being replaced *COMPLETE May 19*
Peagis
ah a happy ending i loved it Kissa now i'll go wait for more of Warped and Blue jay!
Thanks. Glad you liked the ending.
Miranda82
Aw...that's the last post... , but at least there's a sequel! Yayness.
It had to end eventually.
Anyways I really loved this fic! Plus it has a happy ending - can't get any better than that.
Me
Happy endings.
Waits for the sequel...
Thanks for all you support.
ccp
Excellent ending. I'm going to have to celebrate. It is Friday after all.
This was excellent. (That seems to be the only explitive I can come up with for this)
Excellent is one of my favorite words. Thanks for reading and saying such kind things about my writing.
G__Anakin
Good Story
Thanks for all the PMs
You’re welcome.
Can you PM me when the sequel Starts
Yes. I’d love too.
princess_melissa
It's over! "I hope to see you all in the Sequel" Sequel? Sign me up for a PM. I can't wait
You’re signed up.
I thought that was a lovely ending. I didn't know exactally what Jag was up to but I had an idea. Poor Cem. I hope he really does get over jaina [mumbles]even if he should've been with her instead of Jag[/mumbles]
I know you don’t really mean that . . . oh wait, maybe you do
I'd like you to know, this is the best birthday present I've gotten all day (even though you didn't even know let alone mean it to be one) by ending this so beautifully and the kind words you said about me at the end.
Happy belated B-day. Hope it was great.
I'm sure I'll see more of you around (since I'm following like half your stories ) bravo on the job well done all through this!
Thanks. I appreciate all your support.
Flowerlady
That was absolutely wonderful, Kissa...
Thanks.
I loved the prison proposal...Jag can be a sweetheart...
He’s adorable.
And the last scene with Cem ...I feel so sorry for him...Wait! if he goes back to Ossus, I know...he and Tahiri or maybe Danni (of course she would be several years older than him, but hey, who cares) could help him get over Jaina. I know something even better...Kyp can have Danni and Cem, Tahiri...
Well,
Lola
suggested Tahiri, and that’s what I’m going to try. We’ll see how it turns out . . .
I loved this story and you did a bang up job...
Thank-you so much.
BTW if you do the sequel, I'd love a PM...
I’d love to send you a PM.
Anastasia_Fel
Hmmm, and to think, I thought it would last forever?
The memory of it can last forever. Hows about that?
But maybe that was just wishful thinking
Thanks for thinking it.
Awesome job Kissa, this is certainly a story to be proud of, cant wait for the sequel, I expect something just as good, if not better from you
Thanks.
oldj
A beautiful ending, Kissa, for all of us who are "happy ending" lovers!! Thank you!
I love happy endings too.
You really do write emotions well. That's my strongest impression of your work here. I could sense Jaina's anxiety about Jag, that his well-being was her overwhelming priority. You write Jaina and Jag very well. Your Jaina has the same strength, courage, determination, ferocity and suppressed personal feelings written in profic. Your Jag is similarly well-crafted in keeping with his canon profile. Combined with your lovely, clear writing, these elements created a very rich picture in this reader's mind. Well done!
Thanks so much.
I also enjoyed your characterization of Cem. His situation was painful, yet you gave us the strong sense that Cem was definitely a stiff-upper-lip Fel!
Yes. He is.
I could go on, but let me just say that these comments apply to the rest of your characters as well. Your plot has been really interesting and different. I loved the entire package!
Now I’m blushing.
Please, please put my name down to receive a PM for the sequel!! I wouldn't miss it!
I will.
DarthJaded
I really loved this story it had such an interesting plot to it and I can`t wait for the sequel. Sorry I hadn`t replied earlier. Please put me on your PM list.
Don’t worry about not replying earlier. I’m just happy to know that you’ve been reading and enjoyed the story.
I’ll PM you when the sequel starts.
Handmaiden_Azul
First off on my hands and knees I beg you for a sequel, so start soon and PM me!
Okay. I’d love too.
Sad, but beautiful! I mean how can you expect us to just let Cem go like that and not to mention losing all the sweet moments between Jag and Jaina!Also the ending was wonderful, simply wonderful! Oh, the kisses and he proposed! *Has girly moment and melts over proposal* Oh and forgive me Jaina but i just have to give Jagged a kiss *kisses Jag on the mouth and smiles, satisfied* Excellent job, Kissa!
Thanks a million.
Jaina_clan_solo
Well I just finished my marathon read of this story Kissa (I didn't want to read it until after I finished reading TSW).
I pity your eyes.
Anyway it was a beautiful story. The emotions of your characters were so vivid and real, I felt Jaina's anguish at her rejection by her family... and her joy when Jag believed her.
Thanks.
The battles, the evil cliffies (which are much easier to bear when reading the chapters one after another ), and the happy ending all fit so well together.
Again. Thanks. Hopefully you didn’t get bored while reading . . . the cliffhangers are supposed to keep that to a minimum.
Please PM me when you start the sequel... I can't wait to see how this story continues!
I’d love to PM you.
crackjacks
sequel...did I hear sequel? Sign me up for a PM for that!
Yep.
You heard right. I’ll PM you for the sequel.
...that was AMAZING!...I know I haven't posted much, but I've been activly reading...sooooooo.....SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YYYYYEEEEEESSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I’m glad your so enthusiastic. And thanks for reading.
Again amazing...purely amazing!
Thanks.
See you with the sequel!...I'm saying that too much....
Bah. You can’t say it enough. It reminds me to get writing ASAP.
padawanlost
Thank you!
Well gosh. You’re welcome.
This is one of the best stories I've read in a long time. I can't wait to see everyone again soon. Please sign me up when it happens.
Thank-you so much for your nice compliments. I’ve signed you up for next time.
I just hope the Chiss are tactful enough to not give Jaina a blue hand.
Well, they might be. . .
Spike2002
*is reviewing while sober*
Oooooh! Progress.
It's so nice to see a happy ending, Kissa. But poor Cem. I guess he'll just have to make do with the beer I'd buy him
Yes. Poor Cem. Good thing you’re buying him a beer.
Great story, on the whole
Why thanks.
jasa
sigh. perfect ending
EDIT: please PM me for the sequel too!
Thanks. I’ll sign you up.
PRINCESSCAMBRIA
It's been a pleasure reading this story. I just wish I could have been here from the start, so sign me up for the sequel**I'll bring the chips and salsa**
I
chips and salsa. I had best hurry up with the sequel so I can get some.
Thanks for reading. Hopefully the next one will be to your liking.
i_wish_I_was_jaina
kissa i was a lurker in you're story now that it's done i have to say that it was one of the best jaina jag stories that i have evar read(or achually compleated reading ) so when you start you're sequel to this will you please pm me???
Thanks for reading. (and letting me know that you were lurking [face_happy].
I’ll gladly PM you when the sequel goes up.[face_happy]
Chilla
Aww, Kissa! That was great!
Thanks.
After I read the epilogue, my gaze fell on your sig with "Fel Babies"... Sequel?
Not quite . . .
If yes, please please Pm me!
I’ll send you the PM all the same though.
MirandaFair
And...just like that, it's over.
::sigh:: And it was so much fun to write.
Kissa, I've really enjoyed reading this story. I feel like you've captured so much of the SW spirit. Action, adventure, suspense, emotionally charged battle scenes. I'm definitely going to miss your updates. But I'm grateful we all can be looking forward to a sequel. The ending ties up everything nicely, gave me a hopeful sigh and feeling. (Instead of the "oh no" sigh of a sad ending). Still - there's room to go on and continue. Count me in when you get the next installment started.
I would love to count you in. Thanks for all the nice things you said.
Congratulations on finishing!
Thanks. This is the second story I’ve ever felt I finished properly so it creates a good feeling of accomplishment.
Cem Fel
This was so great, I love the ending, it's so cute. I like happy endings.
I'm only sorry for Cem I hope he will find someone else and I would be glad, if you put me on your list, to PM me, when you start your sequel.
I
Happy endings.
I’ll PM you when the sequel starts.
PS. . . Cem should find someone in the sequel . . .
obi-isa
Hi i just found this story! It's AWESOME!!! I'm usually more of a K/J fan but this was GREAT!!! Please PM me for the sequel! Good job on a well written story.
Thanks for reading in spite of the ‘unusual’ pairing.
I’ll PM you for the sequel.
Wraiths_Ghost
I absolutely love this story. It was so real and completely Star Wars. Please PM me for the sequel!
Thanks for reading.[face_happy] I’ll PM you for the sequel.
Lola
I'm so sad that it's over.
It couldn’t last forever . . .
What a wonderful ending though.
Why thank-you.[face_happy]
Ok. This is a swooning moment. I love those kinds of moments.
Me too.
Yay for Jag and Yay for Jaina for finally saying "YES"
It took a while, but it happened . . .
Oh he will be Jaina, for two reasons. One, because the galaxy is not all about you. He may have fallen for you, but only because he got too close for another reason.
True . . .
And two, because when he goes back to Ossus our little Tahiri will be there. And by the time you get back they will have their own little romance story cooking. Right Kissa?
Tahiri is on Ossus? No . . . guess again. There’s a reason she was absent throughout
Replaced
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Again, I truly loved this story. You did a fantastic job keeping me rooting for the good guys and disliking the bad guys.
Thanks
Lola
AvaVisarra
oh my burning stars.. i just found and finished this story after a serious marathon read and i have to say it is by far one of the best i have read. simply outstanding. you had me on the edge of my seat the entire time; crying, laughing, shaking my fist at the monitor, and cursing people. such an inventive and unique story. im more of a kyp and jaina fan but the way you wrote jag and jaina makes me question myself. it was breathtaking.
Wow. Thanks for reading. I’m glad I was able to entertain you.
to have endured six years of Vong torture only to come back and find out all you know and love has been stolen from you, i couldn't even begin to imagine how that must have felt for Jaina. then to think the one person who kept you going all those years could be dead...poor thing. wow.. there so much to address, so many aspects of this story that i just adored. When jacen finally believed her and confided in her, that was so touching. and Cem, poor Cem. He wanted so much to hate her and he ended up loving her, and not being able to really love her because she was in love with someone else and that someone else was his blood. oye, poor guy.
Yes, poor Cem.
This story was absolutely intense and i just want you to know that you have an insane talent for writing that you definitely need to pursue!
I plan to. Both in FF and true fiction (crosses fingers and hopes to someday write pro-fic Star Wars)
If you start another FF please, i beg you! - let me know, give me a PM because after reading this i know anything you write after will be astral. I absolutely adored this story you're amazing!
Thanks. I’ll PM you.
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I'm more Word Processor than human;
Twisted by plot bunnies and feedback cravings!
Replica: Sequel to Replaced:
http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/24053902/p3
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Kissa
Registered:
Jan '06
Date Posted:
5/27/06 9:29am
Subject:
RE: Replaced (AU, J/J, Cem,) Post-DN; Jaina has to deal with being replaced *COMPLETE May 19*
Okay. Here's just some general info about the sequel.
It's going to be called
Replica
and will be told from Tahiri's POV. Cem will be the main presence from
Replced
although both Jaina and Jag will be in it.
The genre will be Angsty / Adventure.
The PM list for the start of the story is just that - a PM for the start of the story. Your name on this list doesn't mean I'll harrass you with PM's from here until eternity.
This is the list that I have so far.
Kidan
G__Anakin
Princess_melissa
Flowerlady
Oldjedinurse
DarthJaded
Handmaiden_Azul
Jaina_clan_solo
Crackjacks
Padawanlost
Jasa
PRINCESSCAMBRIA
I_wish_I_was_jaina
Chilla
MirandaFair
Obi-isa
Wraiths_Ghost
AvaVisarra
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Twisted by plot bunnies and feedback cravings!
Replica: Sequel to Replaced:
http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/24053902/p3
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darkladypurplepencil
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Date Posted:
5/27/06 9:39am
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add me to the PM list please!
DL Purple Pencil
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smell of the grease paint, roar of the crowd.
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Kissa
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Date Posted:
5/27/06 9:46am
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Okay. I added you.
Kidan
G__Anakin
Princess_melissa
Flowerlady
Oldjedinurse
DarthJaded
Handmaiden_Azul
Jaina_clan_solo
Crackjacks
Padawanlost
Jasa
PRINCESSCAMBRIA
I_wish_I_was_jaina
Chilla
MirandaFair
Obi-isa
Wraiths_Ghost
AvaVisarra
darkladypurplepencil
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Twisted by plot bunnies and feedback cravings!
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AvaVisarra
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Date Posted:
5/28/06 12:14am
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sequel
when can we expect the first post??? Force let it be soon
and thank you for putting me on the PM list
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SpiritofEowyn
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Date Posted:
5/30/06 4:42pm
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You deserve happiness, Jaya. I’ll give you everything I have. Take care of Allana . . . and kiss Tenel Ka for me.
Jacen, some things do not translate! Sheesh.
So I just did a marathon read of this,(6 hours) and have decided that I should have read it a long time ago. I thought it was about a Chiss girl and Jag hooking up and Jaina being sad about that, boy if I had ever known..
@_@. WOW. For a while I thought Cem was jag in disquise or something.
As you might suspect my favorite part was the jacen not being evil and the twin moments. (big surprize :P)
Jag!
I have yet to regret ever reading any of your fics. I always come out 'rethinking my life' and going 'awww', and 'oooh angst!' and beyond this, I think you're brillant.
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Jaina_Solo_16
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Date Posted:
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I'd like a Pm about the sequel too, if you don't mind. I can't wait to read it. When do you expect it to be up?
JS16
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Kissa
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Date Posted:
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AvaVisarra
sequel when can we expect the first post??? Force let it be soon
and thank you for putting me on the PM list
You're welcome.
SpiritOfEowyn
Jacen, some things do not translate! Sheesh.
I thought it translated rather well.
So I just did a marathon read of this,(6 hours) and have decided that I should have read it a long time ago. I thought it was about a Chiss girl and Jag hooking up and Jaina being sad about that, boy if I had ever known..
I don't think I could write Jag and a Chiss girl. It'd make me sad.
@_@. WOW. For a while I thought Cem was jag in disquise or something.
Nope. Just Cem.
As you might suspect my favorite part was the jacen not being evil and the twin moments. (big surprize :P)
Actually I thought about you when I was writing those moments.
Jag!
Yes.
I have yet to regret ever reading any of your fics. I always come out 'rethinking my life' and going 'awww', and 'oooh angst!' and beyond this, I think you're brillant.
Thanks so much.
Jaina_Solo_16
I'd like a Pm about the sequel too, if you don't mind. I can't wait to read it. When do you expect it to be up?
Actually . . . it's up now. I'll PM you the link.
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I'm more Word Processor than human;
Twisted by plot bunnies and feedback cravings!
Replica: Sequel to Replaced:
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BottledUpInside
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Date Posted:
7/3/06 1:31pm
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Wow, this was an incredably creative, and well written story! I still can't get my mind around everything that happened, if you are writing a sequel, pm me?
~Jen~
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