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skywalkerlover00 Registered: May '05	Date Posted: 2/25/06 2:02pm Subject: RE: Replaced (AU, J/J, Cem,) Post-TSW; Jaina has to deal with being replaced Update Feb. 23rd - Date Edited: 2/27/06 7:34pm (1 edits total) Edited By: VaderLVR64
	Comments like this are not allowed. -----signature----- "With Anakin's death I lost a brother, but the Jedi lost something i can't define. My feelings tell me its something important, something we lost a long time ago."Jaina Solo, DJ Lover of Rent, J/J, and my boyfriend Jason. Wielder of the Lollipop of Doom
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Lola64 Registered: Mar '05	Date Posted: 2/26/06 10:39am Subject: RE: Replaced (AU, J/J, Cem,) Post-TSW; Jaina has to deal with being replaced Update Feb. 23rd
	How come I go away and the stories I like become posting frenzies? How am I ever going to catch up? Well, I've decided today's the day and here I am, still loving this story. I just have to say that I'm quite surprised that Jaina was left alone in the room, unmonitored. If the room was monitored, someone would have seen Joiner Jaina try to kill the real one. Or did they and that will come out later? I like Cem's undercover. It's very believable that he'd be sent to do that. And he's such a Fel for wanting to protect her. I just hope he doesn't get too protective, if you know what I mean. I can't wait to see what Han wants now... I've no trips planned until May so I'll be ready to read updates as soon as you put them out. Great story Kiss. Keep up the great work. Lola runs off to catch up on Warped -----signature----- Kyp/Nurse Lola: the new ship I stalk people. It's a Lola thing. Senator & Dozen 11 of the KDFC
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Kissa Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 2/27/06 5:08am Subject: RE: Replaced (AU, J/J, Cem,) Post-TSW; Jaina has to deal with being replaced Update Feb. 23rd - Date Edited: 3/1/06 4:59am (1 edits total) Edited By: Kissa
	Lola I just have to say that I'm quite surprised that Jaina was left alone in the room, unmonitored. If the room was monitored, someone would have seen Joiner Jaina try to kill the real one. Or did they and that will come out later? It's those darn trusting Jedi. Luke's getting soft in his old age. I like Cem's undercover. It's very believable that he'd be sent to do that. And he's such a Fel for wanting to protect her. I just hope he doesn't get too protective, if you know what I mean. He's trying to convince me to let him have Jaina, but I shall not be swayed. (Or maybe I'll do an alternate ending . . .) I can't wait to see what Han wants now... Han and Kyp. They both want to talk. Great story Kiss. Keep up the great work. Lola runs off to catch up on Warped Glad you're enjoying. Hope you have fun with Warped. ChissGoddes Ohhh me likey. ^_^ I just happened to stumble in here and boy, am I glad I did. I love your story! It's fresh and angsty, with a helluva lot of potential. Can you add me to the PM list (if there is one)? Thanks. I'll add you to the PM list ASAP. (Although I'm having a bit of computer trouble today . . .) Peagis Wow what a great and sad chapter at the same time. Though I think that from that last Han is starting to question who's who, and I think Kyp might be swayed to the truth as well. Cem is starting to be an interesting character too! ::Cem cheers:: He's really happy when he starts winning possible fans. I'm happy when you leave lovely comments. -----signature----- Padawn to NYCitygurl I'm more Word Processor than human; Twisted by plot bunnies and feedback cravings! Replica: Sequel to Replaced: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/24053902/p3
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Kissa Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 2/27/06 5:13am Subject: RE: Replaced (AU, J/J, Cem,) Post-TSW; Jaina has to deal with being replaced Update Feb. 23rd
	Chapter seven “About?” Cem asked easily, fielding the question for Jaina. He started down the steps, turning at the bottom to look up at Han, who looked slightly disheveled from running. Behind the ex-smuggler, Kyp stood, looking more composed. “I want your side of the story. I’ll be the judge on whether I’ll believe you or not.” “What he said,” Han murmured gruffly. He crossed his arms, trying to keep a scowl on his face and failing. There was something to be said about people who looked exactly like a member of your family . . . especially when they were walking away with a look of hurt and rejection weighing down their steps. Jaina hesitated, looking back and forth between Han and Kyp. “I haven’t heard the complete story either,” Cem announced. “And you believe her?” Han asked incredulously. “Who are you anyway?” “Cem Flare,” the blond said with a smirk. “Jedi-in-training.” The last part sounded extremely sarcastic. Jaina fond herself giving him a curious look. For someone training to be a Jedi, he didn’t sound like he had a great opinion of the Order. “Where did you come from exactly?” Han asked. “Corellia, but now is neither the time nor the place to be talking about me,” Cem said. He patted Jaina’s arm. “Why don’t we take this conversation indoors.” Seemingly snapping out of her reverie into the nature of Cem, Jaina nodded. “Sure. I suppose I could repeat what happened again.” Kyp bowed his head slightly. “Thank-you.” ** “And then I woke up here on Ossus,” Jaina said, concluding her story. She stared unflinchingly at Kyp, almost daring him to say something negative about it. Instead he looked at her with an uncharacteristic look of deep thought. “I see,” he murmured. He rubbed one hand across his mouth. “I’d like to confirm a few details about your story.” “You can confirm something like that?” Han asked. He shook his head in answer to his own question. “Kid, there is no way to verify –“ “Trust me, Han, there are ways to check up everything.” He looked evenly at Jaina. “The question is whether our alleged Miss Solo is willing to go along with the plan.” Jaina had mixed feelings about Kyp at the moment, but nonetheless, she responded instantly. “I’m willing.” “The proof will be conclusive,” Kyp warned. “If it doesn’t turn out in your favor, you must drop this charade.” Now she hesitated. “How exactly will this proof be acquired?” Cem asked. “With Cighal’s help, of course,” Kyp said smoothly. He ignored Cem, keeping his eyes on Jaina. “So what do you say?” Jaina wasn’t sure there were any medical tests in the universe that could prove her point now. Because of that, she was conflicted. She wanted the opportunity to possibly prove she was actually who she said she was. But at the same time, she didn’t want to ‘give up’ on her claim to her own name and heritage. “She can’t agree to your terms,” Cem said, once again fielding her question. Kyp gave him an exasperated look. “Flare, what are you doing here again? This really isn’t a matter for three month trainees to be debating.” “Jaina left out the assassination attempt,” Cem said flatly. “I promised to protect her. I am doing what I said I would do.” “What assassination attempt?” Kyp asked. “Yeah, what assassination attempt?” Han echoed. “She tried to kill me earlier today.” “Who?” Kyp asked. “Khay Don. The Yuuzhan Vong imposter.” “How?” Han asked. “With my lightsaber,” Jaina said, a bit coolly. “And she failed?” Kyp inquired. “I ran.” “She ended up on the Skrotch field,” Cem added, “And Joiner-Jaina had to cut her attack short.” Han and Kyp exchanged a dark look. “Really?” Kyp asked softly. He stood up, pushing the chair he had been sitting on backward. “She did,” Jaina confirmed. “I already spoke to Uncle Luke about it. He feels confident that she would never try to –“ Kyp laughed. “Master Skywalker is an idealist.” His eyes glittered. “And Jaina . . . well, I suppose she did learn something from me after all.” Han exploded. “You can’t actually buy into that story. Jaina would never –“ Jaina stood up from her own chair, cutting the argument off. “Let’s go see Cighal.” ** The Mon Calamari Jedi healer, with permission, called both Khay Don and Zekk to her facilities. “I’ll need to run a side-by-side comparison for both of you,” she explained. Both Jaina and Khay Don bowed their heads and murmured a polite ‘of course’. Then, they shot each other a dark look. Cighal either missed it, or more likely, ignored it. “We’ll start with a complete examination of both of you.” “At the same time?” Cem asked. “Individually and then we’ll conclude together,” Cighal said. She looked back and forth between the two, her large eyes staring unblinkingly. “Which one of you would like to begin?” Khay Don stepped forward immediately. “I will.” She looked at Zekk. “Zekk is accompanying me into the examining room.” As Cighal led the two of them away, Jaina took a seat and prepared to wait. Cem sat beside her, picking up a holo-magazine and scrolling through the pages. Kyp also took a seat, although his was across the room. Han opted to just leave. He exchanged a few muted words with Kyp and then strolled out the door. It took two hours for the examination to be finished. When it was, Cighal stepped into the room. “Right this way, please.” Jaina stood up, giving Cem a bit of a nervous smile. “I hate examinations,” she murmured wryly. He lifted his eyebrows. “You’ll live. I’ll wait here for you.” Kyp cleared his throat. “I’ll be accompanying her into her examination.” Once again, Cighal didn’t object. Together they walked into the room to begin the process of finding any differences between the two ‘Jainas’ The first step was a physical examination. For this part, Cighal thankfully made Kyp face the wall. Jaina stripped out of her borrowed Jedi robes, suddenly feeling self-conscious about her physical appearance. There was something about Vong captivity for extended periods of time that induced scaring. Small and large scars in various stages of healing adorned her still undernourished, pale body. “You’re underweight,” Cighal murmured as she motioned for Jaina to step onto a scale. She placed her webbed hands on her patient’s ribs, feeling her with the Force. “And four of your ribs are cracked.” Jaina almost laughed. She had been feeling a mild discomfort in her chest, but had put it off as a reaction to stress and rejection. Of course, it was rather sobering to realize that she had cracked ribs and hadn’t even known. Cighal made a note of her weight, and then ran a few scanners over her body. When she was done taking notes on the physical appearance of her patient, she allowed Jaina to dress in a simple dressing gown and ran several more tests. “Are you going to run a brain scan?” Kyp asked at one point. Cighal nodded her smooth head. “Yes. And a retina scan.” At the end of the examination, Cighal called Khay Don in, and had everyone sit around a table. “I’ll be the only one talking,” she started. “That’s –“ Khay Don began. “The way it will be,” the Mon Calamari said firmly. She stared at the imposter Jaina until the woman hung her head. “When I am through, Master Durron may ask any questions that he may have. And then, you may add whatever else you feel is necessary.” After everyone had agreed – grudgingly or not – to her demands, the Mon Calamari began. “Physically, the appearance is not the same. Jaina has more muscle mass –“ Kyp raised his hand. “Which one is Jaina?” he asked, apparently forgetting that he had promised his silence. Cighal’s mouth opened and closed several times. “That is a good question.” “You can call me Jaya,” Jaina said quickly. “For now only.” Her eyes flashed dangerously at the Vong in the last bit. “Right, so like I said, Jaina is physically in better shape. Jaya on the other hand has multiple scars – as would be the case if she had indeed spent six years in Vong captivity.” However, their physiology is remarkably similar. They have the same retina scan, the same blood type, the same skin texture . . .” She paused, inclining her head toward Kyp in acknowledgment of his question. “So what you’re saying is that they’re physically more similar than even twins?” “Or maybe a more accurate comparison would be clones,” Khay Don spoke up. “The Vong clearly cloned me –“ Cighal held up a hand for silence. “The brain scan showed a difference.” Jaina’s heart slowed. This was it. If there was a difference, there was a chance that she could prove she was who she was. She leaned forward and saw Khay Don doing the same thing. Cighal sighed, glancing back at her datapad. The seconds stretched on in silence. “Well, what are you waiting for?” Khay Don asked, echoing the words in Jaina’s mind. “There are two things. One, both women are showing the effects of the mind meld from Mykrr.” “What effects?” Jaina asked. “The prolonged exposure to the mind meld at Mykrr has proven to have left an unchangeable alteration of the strike team’s brain scan,” Kyp said. He leaned back thoughtfully. “That means that they were both part of the Myrkrr Strike Team, doesn’t it?” “Either that or the results were duplicated when Jaya and Jaina both came into existence,” Cighal said, spreading her hands to the side. “What’s the other thing?” Zekk asked. “The other thing is both irrelevant and decisive,” Cighal said. “It can’t be both,” Jaina said softly. Something about Cighal’s tone whispered that neither would be in her favor. “The changes caused by the Kiliks pheromones are not present in Jaya’s mind. However, they are linked with Zekk in such a way that there is no way that Jaina could be pretending to be Jaina Solo.” “So you’re saying that Zekk really does share all of her memories?” Kyp asked. “Then tell me about the assassination attempt.” Zekk nodded his head, a brief twitch to his cheek the only uncontrolled motion. “This imposter,” he said, inclining his head toward Jaina, “Threatened Jaina.” He took Khay Don’s hand. “She drew her lightsaber in defense.” Jaina’s mouth opened and closed. He was lying. She could see it in his eyes. He did share all the memories with Khay Don, that much was obvious. And he wasn’t going to tell anyone. With their mind-meld, he was the only one who could actually say that Khay Don was not Jaina Solo. And he was choosing not to. She didn’t understand why. They had been friends once, hadn’t they? Was this his way of getting back at her for pushing away from him at Hapes? I love her his words from earlier flashed through her head. Did he mean he loved Khay Don? “So that’s that,” Kyp said, interrupting her thoughts. He stood up. “Shall we keep calling you Jaya?” “No,” Khay Don said. “That’s my nickname. I won’t let her have it. Ben is calling her Jay, as is my brother. She can go by that name.” Jaina stood up. “I’m going to talk to Cem,” she said softly. Numb, she made her way to the door and into the sitting room, only to find the blond gone. “Where’s . . .? she began, eyes lingering on a few scattered holo-disks. “He left,” Khay Don said softly. “I doubt he’ll ever come back.” She hit the door open button and strolled into the hallway, Zekk at her side. -----signature----- Padawn to NYCitygurl I'm more Word Processor than human; Twisted by plot bunnies and feedback cravings! Replica: Sequel to Replaced: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/24053902/p3
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Chilla Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 2/27/06 7:06am Subject: RE: Replaced (AU, J/J, Cem,) Post-TSW; Jaina has to deal with being replaced Update Feb. 23rd
	Poor Jaina! Hope someone will believe her soon, before our Vongyjaina can try to kill her again. -----signature----- master to Cem_Fel and proud J/K shipper e-daughter to AzureAngel2 and DarthUncle and e-sis to Darth_Gangrenous e-mother to RevaDurron and her e-husband Darth_DSpice http://yun-harla.tripod.com http://freewebs.com/signedbygod
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Peagis Registered: Apr '05	Date Posted: 2/27/06 11:01am Subject: RE: Replaced (AU, J/J, Cem,) Post-TSW; Jaina has to deal with being replaced Update Feb. 27rd
	Oh man where did Cem go? He can't leave Jaina all alone like that! And I take it that Zek loves the Jaina Imposter and that's why he isnt telling the truth! -----signature----- "life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away." - George Carlin
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princess_melissa Registered: Mar '05	Date Posted: 2/27/06 11:27am Subject: RE: Replaced (AU, J/J, Cem,) Post-TSW; Jaina has to deal with being replaced Update Feb. 27rd
	New Reader Alret! I love this! It's so cool. I think I like your explination for DN trilogy better. That's not the real Jaina. My thoughts on your characters: Jaina (the real one): Cam: Zekk: Khay Don: Excelent job so far. I'm really really looking foward to more. -----signature----- Knighted by Zonoma Twich's Twisted Sisters! My FanArt - Updated 12/14 http://boards.theforce.net/message.asp?topic=21750870 My Drabbles - http://boards.theforce.net/Message.aspx?topic=24379801&brd=10477&start=24379808 Twins Suns 5
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Kidan Title: TFN EU Staff Registered: Jul '03	Date Posted: 2/27/06 12:10pm Subject: RE: Replaced (AU, J/J, Cem,) Post-TSW; Jaina has to deal with being replaced Update Feb. 27rd
	This is a great story. Very good job Kissa. Can't wait for more! -----signature----- You sadistic Yank!! - McEwok No Krakana - http://nokrakana.wrighton.org Believe in the Constitution? Ron Paul '08
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Corellian_Cutie Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 2/27/06 4:56pm Subject: RE: Replaced (AU, J/J, Cem,) Post-TSW; Jaina has to deal with being replaced Update Feb. 27rd
	poor jaina! i'll sed a tear for her. can't wait for more kissa! -----signature----- "Don't show me your cover, just turn to your best chapter and read from it." Meet my pet piggy, Mr. Porky http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/23468184/p1 Destiny's Retribution J/J Golf+tournaments+too much focus=Competitive Insanity
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oldjedinurse Registered: Oct '03	Date Posted: 2/27/06 5:42pm Subject: RE: Replaced (AU, J/J, Cem,) Post-TSW; Jaina has to deal with being replaced Update Feb. 27rd
	Very intriguing developments. I'm wondering if, and how, a difference will be proven. Excellent fic, Kissa! oldj -----signature----- "I don't want to live in a world where I have to eat sugar-free sugar cookies." Ikkaku, Hosaka, Kawabata
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Lola64 Registered: Mar '05	Date Posted: 2/27/06 7:11pm Subject: RE: Replaced (AU, J/J, Cem,) Post-TSW; Jaina has to deal with being replaced Update Feb. 27rd
	Zekk does know. He's gotta know as well that his Jaina is the imposter but is keeping his trap shut because it's the only way he can keep a part of Jaina to himself. He's going to be the one to break. And I hope Cem does the breaking. Great update. I can't wait for more. -----signature----- Kyp/Nurse Lola: the new ship I stalk people. It's a Lola thing. Senator & Dozen 11 of the KDFC
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Kissa Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 2/28/06 5:17am Subject: RE: Replaced (AU, J/J, Cem,) Post-TSW; Jaina has to deal with being replaced Update Feb. 27th
	Chilla Poor Jaina! Hope someone will believe her soon, before our Vongyjaina can try to kill her again. ::laughs:: Vonyjaina. I like that. Peagis Oh man where did Cem go? He can't leave Jaina all alone like that! Jaina was in with Cighal and Kyp for about an hour . . . The holopads were scattered . . . And I take it that Zek loves the Jaina Imposter and that's why he isnt telling the truth! Pretty much. Princess_Melissa New Reader Alret! Welcome. I love this! It's so cool. I think I like your explination for DN trilogy better. That's not the real Jaina. Thank-you. I’m rather fond of this explanation too. Excelent job so far. I'm really really looking foward to more. I update every Monday and Thursday. Kidan This is a great story. Very good job Kissa. Can't wait for more! Thank-you. Corellian_Cutie poor jaina! i'll sed a tear for her. can't wait for more kissa! ::hands a tissue:: oldjedinurse Very intriguing developments. I'm wondering if, and how, a difference will be proven. A difference will be proven, but I won’t say how yet. Lola64 Zekk does know. He's gotta know as well that his Jaina is the imposter but is keeping his trap shut because it's the only way he can keep a part of Jaina to himself. Very perceptive. [/i]He's going to be the one to break. And I hope Cem does the breaking. [/i] You’ll see how this turns out. -----signature----- Padawn to NYCitygurl I'm more Word Processor than human; Twisted by plot bunnies and feedback cravings! Replica: Sequel to Replaced: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/24053902/p3
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DARTH_MU Registered: Feb '05	Date Posted: 2/28/06 7:14am Subject: RE: Replaced (AU, J/J, Cem,) Post-TSW; Jaina has to deal with being replaced Update Feb. 27rd
	Please don't kill off Khay Don and Zekk. They deserve to live happily ever after together. Please! Pretty Please! P.S. Imposters are people too! -----signature----- In Nelani's myriad futures he could dimly glimpse good and kind acts, love, perhaps family and children. Kidan's Apprentice EOV I: Despair (Link Lost) Gone, Gone, and never called me author! Lightsaber123's sock. Crewman aboard the goodship Beneha
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Kissa Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 2/28/06 7:33am Subject: RE: Replaced (AU, J/J, Cem,) Post-TSW; Jaina has to deal with being replaced Update Feb. 27rd
	DARTH_MU posted: Please don't kill off Khay Don and Zekk. They deserve to live happily ever after together. Please! Pretty Please! P.S. Imposters are people too! Yes, imposters are people to. You'll see what happens with Jaina, Khay Don, Zekk, Cem, and, eventually, Jagged. -----signature----- Padawn to NYCitygurl I'm more Word Processor than human; Twisted by plot bunnies and feedback cravings! Replica: Sequel to Replaced: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/24053902/p3
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Corellian_Cutie Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 2/28/06 10:41am Subject: RE: Replaced (AU, J/J, Cem,) Post-TSW; Jaina has to deal with being replaced Update Feb. 27rd
	khay don + zekk (not living happily ever after) jaina + jag (happily ever after) all would be good! i swear my heart dropped when jaina wasn't able to prove who she was. please bring Cem back! -----signature----- "Don't show me your cover, just turn to your best chapter and read from it." Meet my pet piggy, Mr. Porky http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/23468184/p1 Destiny's Retribution J/J Golf+tournaments+too much focus=Competitive Insanity
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