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Imperial-Hippy Registered: Feb '06	Date Posted: 3/13/06 10:09am Subject: RE: Warped (J/J, A/P) Update March 13 Vong rip fabric of universe (past and EU char.)
	Yea thats how i thought of it too. I also think that the old jedi's rules were wekking them and leading many to the dark side. I think becouse Luke incoriges love and emotion (but not to let it controll them) this makes them more intune with the force. It ocured to me that the old Jedi were argoent becouse they were seperated from real life. This lead many (ie Anakin) to think they were better. I dont belive they could protect people, when they were so diffrent from then, the people dont understand them. Luke's Jedi are more like real people. Also love can lead people away from the dark side. Not just lead people to the dark side. Yoda is wiser, but i think his belives are flawed -----signature----- "The only path to emortality is in the hearts of thoes who you love."
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Corellian_Cutie Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 3/13/06 10:31am Subject: RE: Warped (J/J, A/P) Update March 13 Vong rip fabric of universe (past and EU char.)
	duh duh duh daaaaa.....you just keep twisting this plot for all it will give you huh Kissa? great posty Kissa! -----signature----- "Don't show me your cover, just turn to your best chapter and read from it." Meet my pet piggy, Mr. Porky http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/23468184/p1 Destiny's Retribution J/J Golf+tournaments+too much focus=Competitive Insanity
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Solo--Wan Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 3/13/06 11:31am Subject: RE: Warped (J/J, A/P) Update March 13 Vong rip fabric of universe (past and EU char.)
	Keep it up, you're doing great! Oh, and I always imagined that the original Jedi were stronger...but it's your story, and you're doing woderfully. -----signature----- From a Certain point of view-http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/20799327/p13 Stranded!-http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/23291001/p1/?0
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Kissa Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 3/15/06 5:00am Subject: RE: Warped (J/J, A/P) Update March 13 Vong rip fabric of universe (past and EU char.)
	Solo--wan Keep it up, you're doing great! Oh, and I always imagined that the original Jedi were stronger...but it's your story, and you're doing woderfully. Thank-you. But on a side note, I'd like to point out that their are members of the orginal Jedi that are stronger than the new Jedi. (Qui-gon, Obi-wan, and Mace spring to mind.) If it came to a fight between the OJO and the NJO, I think it would depend greatly on who was fighting who. Corellian_Cutie duh duh duh daaaaa.....you just keep twisting this plot for all it will give you huh Kissa? Of course. It's more fun that way. Imperial-hippy [i It ocured to me that the old Jedi were argoent becouse they were seperated from real life. This lead many (ie Anakin) to think they were better. I dont belive they could protect people, when they were so diffrent from then, the people dont understand them. Luke's Jedi are more like real people.[/i] Either that or Anakin thought he was better because he was the 'Chosen One'. That's a lot of expectations to be put on one Jedi's shoulders, and I think that's where he got his swelled head from. He was special, and expected everyone to notice. Or something like that. -----signature----- Padawn to NYCitygurl I'm more Word Processor than human; Twisted by plot bunnies and feedback cravings! Replica: Sequel to Replaced: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/24053902/p3
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Spike2002 Title: Former FF-UK RSA and Arena Manager Registered: Feb '02	Date Posted: 3/15/06 8:35am Subject: RE: Warped (J/J, A/P) Update March 13 Vong rip fabric of universe (past and EU char.)
	Nice update Kissa. It's true what Tahiri said about the melodramatic Jedi. Lucas really knows how to make them overemphasize their lines -----signature----- "It may be that our role on this planet is not to worship God, but to create him." - Arthur C. Clarke I agree with halibut Master to Louis_Skywalker Proud Recipient of the Golden Elegos™
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Kissa Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 3/16/06 5:06am Subject: RE: Warped (J/J, A/P) Update March 16 Vong rip fabric of universe (past and EU char.)
	Chapter ten, Alone Divine Fist, Jagged’s cabin Jaina Solo leaned over him, her eyes dark with lust. “Hi flyboy,” she whispered, voice sultry and seductive. With one hand she started unzipping the front of her flight suit, the zipper zinging softly in the quiet. Jag blinked slowly. “Jaina . . .” “Sssh,” she whispered, placing one callused finger against his mouth. Slowly she moved her mouth down, placing her lips against his softly. “I love you,” she whispered against his mouth. He shuddered. “Jaya,” he breathed. He reached his arms up, sliding one up her back and the other down. With a tenderness he never expected to feel, he drew her body closer to him, relishing the feel of her against him. “Jaggie-poo,” she cooed. He frowned. “What?” “You’re so strong and forceful.” The seductive tones in her voice turned sugary sweet and he blinked. The image of Jaina leaning over him slowly faded out, replaced by a vivid splash of pink and blond. Tiffany. He felt all heat leave his body and he tightened his lips in displeasure. “What are you doing in my cabin, Tiffany?” he asked harshly. He pushed her off of him, standing up and grabbing a tee shirt which he quickly pulled over his head. “Getting to know you intimately,” she cooed sweetly. She rolled over, propping herself up on her elbows. “Do you like my lingerie?” Jag glanced back at her, noting the pink halter top and string bikini bottom. He thought his dream Jaina’s worn jumpsuit had been more attractive. He looked over Tiffany’s smooth peace colored skin and thought grimly that he preferred the work roughed skin of the Jedi pilot. Tiffany was smiling at him. “You like it.” He grunted a response and stood up. “I’m going to check our coordinates.” Without another word he slipped from the room. Divine Fist, Obi-wan and Anakin’s cabin Anakin lay awake in the darkness thinking about Padme. With all of his missions along the outer rim, it had been ages since he had last seen her – at least seven months! And now there was a chance that she was dead. It made his stomach clench in fear. He curled his hands into fists and gritted his teeth, trying to let go of his fears or at the very least hide them. The last thing he needed tonight was a lecture from Obi-wan on anger and fear. He turned over in his bunk, lowering his head to his chest and staring forcefully at the wall. If she’s dead . . . the thought trailed off, and images of his vision pulsed through his head. Obi-wan hadn’t mentioned what kind of danger she was in and he was worried that it might be the same as what he had been seeing. If only I were stronger . . . I could protect her better, he thought. Abruptly he heard Obi-wan stirring in his sleep. Great. Just great. Now I’ve woken up the Great Lecturer, he thought. He closed his eyes, bracing himself for the inevitable consultation on his feelings. “Hi, Obi-wan,” he heard Wyn’s soft voice. “I was wondering if we could talk.” It’s the middle of the fragging sleep-cycle. Of course you can’t talk! Anakin thought grumpily. Obi-wan said, “What’s bothering you?” He heard the Jedi Master’s mattress creak slightly as the older man sat up. Then he heard the soft patter of Wyn’s feet against the metal floor. “I’m kind of worried about . . .” her voice trailed off and she laughed quietly. “I’m worried about the mission. We’re the only ones alive, you know.” “Alive?” Obi-wan asked. “Jagged and me, we’re the last of the Fel children. If we die, Mom will have lost all her children.” What a horrible loss, Anakin thought grumpily. Quietly he shifted his blankets, pulling them over his head. Cry about it somewhere else; we’re trying to sleep. Well, actually he was trying to brood, but saying sleep was good enough. “There are risks in every course life may take you on,” Obi-wan said. “Yeah, but this one is riskier than most.” “Risky? I hardly see it as particularly risky to fly to Coruscant. As a matter of fact, this mission – as you call it – seems rather simple.” Wyn sat beside Obi-wan on the bed. “You really don’t know, do you?” “Know what?” “About Coruscant. It’s not safe anymore. The Vong have captured the planet. They . . .” her voice trailed off and she sighed, leaning against Obi-wan’s shoulder. “It’s going to be really dangerous getting to the surface, and once we’re there, it’ll be equally dangerous to complete our mission and get off the planet.” Obi-wan took a deep breath. “Aristocra Frombi didn’t mention that detail.” Wyn sighed heavily. “That’s because he wanted the aid of a couple of Jedi on this mission.” She closed her eyes, still leaning against the Jedi master and took a deep breath. Slowly she wrapped her arms around him, burying her face in his shoulder. “You smell nice.” “Uhmm… Thank-you, I think.” Anakin rolled over in his bunk and cast a look at his master, waiting for him to send the blond piece of a Fel out of the room. Instead he watched as his master patted her awkwardly on the back. For several minutes there was silence. Then Obi-wan reinitiated the conversation. “So tell me what happened to Coruscant.” Anakin growled and sat up, startling Wyn. She grabbed Obi-wan tightly with one hand while the other dropped to her charric blaster. “Frag!” she cursed, recognizing the moving, growling blankets at Anakin. “Don’t scar me like that.” He slid his feet out of the bed. “Don’t presume to tell me what to do.” “Anakin,” Obi-wan said warningly. “Be nice.” Anakin pulled a tunic over his head, fastening his belt and lightsaber around his hips. Still glaring at Wyn he pulled his cloak on. “I am playing ‘nice’. You should see me play ‘bad’.” His mind flashed to the Blood Carver he had slain on Zonoma Sekot and then to the Tusken village he had destroyed. Locking eyes with Wyn, smiled darkly. “I am playing nice.” Wyn gave a casual toss of her head. “Sure you are.” Silence descended again, but rather than wait for Obi-wan to break it, this time Anakin headed for the door. “I’m going to check our coordinates.” Divine Fist, cockpit He got to the cockpit only to find Anakin Skywalker sitting broodingly in the pilot’s chair. Rather than return to his room and avoid an undesirable conversation, Jagged Fel took a seat by the navigator station and scanned the course coordinates. Everything was just like he had set it. He swiveled the chair around and leaned back, drawing a datapad from an overhead compartment. Switching it on, he pushed in the encryption key, unlocking the files. They were nothing important. At least not really. Just some sim vids. In silence he watched the play-by-play of his first sim battle against Jaina Solo. He watched the way she moved her x-wing, paying special attention to maneuvers he’d come to know as signature moves from her. Then abruptly the datapad sailed from his fingers and landed lightly in Anakin’s hand. “Go away,” the Jedi said. “I came here to be alone.” “As did I,” Jag responded. Anakin leaned forward, raising his eyebrows slightly. “I arrived first.” “And I respected that,” Jag responded. “I left you alone.” “No, you stayed.” Jag shook his head. “Yes, but I left you alone.” “Alone means without anyone else around,” Anakin said. He refrained from calling the pilot ignorant again. Obi-wan’s words about being careful with labels was starting to make sense, and the last time they had spoken he’d gotten his words turned around far to easily. “People go to bars alone,” Jag reasoned. “So?” “Bars are full of people. It is possible to be alone in a crowd.” It was happening again. Jagged Fel was turning what he said against him. Anakin leaned back, turning his attention to the datapad. “This you?” he asked, watching the battle play out. He was just thinking that the pilot was pretty good when the small, digital image exploded. “No. I’m the one that fired the torpedoes,” Jag said. He refrained from demanding that the Jedi give him his datapad back. He had a feeling that would only get him a condescending look. “The other pilot was good.” Jagged nodded once. “Yes, she is.” Anakin cast a last look at the datapad and then tossed it back to Jag. “You have a cabin to yourself, right?” “That’s correct.” “So go be alone there.” “I have unwanted company,” Jag answered. “You’re girlfriend?” Anakin asked. “What makes you say that?” “You’ve got pink lipstick all over your mouth,” Anakin said, hiding a smirk now. Jag raised one hand to his mouth, wiping his lips lightly and then staring at the pink stain on his fingers. “Cute,” he murmured darkly. “Oh I don’t know,” Anakin said. “I don’t think pink is quite your color. Maybe a burgundy or a red would be more appropriate.” “I’ll remember that,” Jag said. “Tell her you prefer a hot red,” Anakin suggested. “I prefer no lipstick,” Jag said stiffly. An image of Jaina sprang to his mind, her lips a glossy dark pink, her silken dress curving around her. Hapes . . . His expression softened and he suppressed a sigh. “Thinking about her now?” Anakin asked. Jag reoriented on the Jedi. “You have no idea.” He shook his head slightly and tapped a key on his datapad. “But that path isn’t available.” He stared at the holo of him and Jaina for a long moment and then switched it off. “It’s pointless to pursue that which you cannot have.” Anakin stood up. “I didn’t take you for a quitter, Fel,” he said. Jag stood up. “I’m a realist. Why try for something that you can’t have?” In the background he heard Tiffany calling for him. “Good night, Jedi Skywalker. Enjoy your time alone.” -----signature----- Padawn to NYCitygurl I'm more Word Processor than human; Twisted by plot bunnies and feedback cravings! Replica: Sequel to Replaced: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/24053902/p3
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Kidan Title: TFN EU Staff Registered: Jul '03	Date Posted: 3/16/06 6:19am Subject: RE: Warped (J/J, A/P) Update March 16 Vong rip fabric of universe (past and EU char.)
	hehe... Tiffany makes me laugh. So totally clueless... Good job Kissa! -----signature----- You sadistic Yank!! - McEwok http://www.TheExpandedUniverse.com Don't blame me, I voted for Ron Paul
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Spike2002 Title: Former FF-UK RSA and Arena Manager Registered: Feb '02	Date Posted: 3/16/06 7:46am Subject: RE: Warped (J/J, A/P) Update March 16 Vong rip fabric of universe (past and EU char.)
	Well, Tiffany scares the hell out of me. She's like an overgrown child stalker. And Wyn isn't much better, cosying up to Obi-Wan. Nice work -----signature----- "It may be that our role on this planet is not to worship God, but to create him." - Arthur C. Clarke I agree with halibut Master to Louis_Skywalker Proud Recipient of the Golden Elegos™
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DARTH_MU Registered: Feb '05	Date Posted: 3/16/06 7:50am Subject: RE: Warped (J/J, A/P) Update March 16 Vong rip fabric of universe (past and EU char.)
	Mu to Tiffany ala Panic Room: "Who is this?" Tiffany: "I'm Raoul. Uh I mean Tiffany." Kissa: "Tiffany has experience. Tiffany knows." Tiffany draws out a lipstick and applies it generously on her lips (It is pink) Mu: "Who ARE you?" Tiffany: "I'm Raa-- uh Tiffany." -----signature----- In Nelani's myriad futures he could dimly glimpse good and kind acts, love, perhaps family and children. Oaths of the Sith coming Nov 2009 Gaius Kidanus Auctor Muianus BENRIINAQUEAPERPETUO
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Kissa Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 3/16/06 7:57am Subject: RE: Warped (J/J, A/P) Update March 16 Vong rip fabric of universe (past and EU char.)
	Darth MU Mu to Tiffany ala Panic Room: "Who is this?" Tiffany: "I'm Raoul. Uh I mean Tiffany." Kissa: "Tiffany has experience. Tiffany knows." Tiffany draws out a lipstick and applies it generously on her lips (It is pink) Mu: "Who ARE you?" Tiffany: "I'm Raa-- uh Tiffany." Spike2002 Well, Tiffany scares the hell out of me. She's like an overgrown child stalker. You think? And Wyn isn't much better, cosying up to Obi-Wan. Wyn's just strange. Nice work Thanks. Kidan hehe... Tiffany makes me laugh. So totally clueless... Good job Kissa! Thanks. Glad you like her. -----signature----- Padawn to NYCitygurl I'm more Word Processor than human; Twisted by plot bunnies and feedback cravings! Replica: Sequel to Replaced: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/24053902/p3
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SWpants666 Registered: Oct '04	Date Posted: 3/16/06 9:23am Subject: RE: Warped (J/J, A/P) Update March 16 Vong rip fabric of universe (past and EU char.)
	shivers Tiffany creeps the hell out of me I hope Jag eventually tells her & it gets through her thick skull that he's not interested! I enjoyed the bickering between Anakin & Jag. Still glaring at Wyn he pulled his cloak on. “I am playing ‘nice’. You should see me play ‘bad’.” His mind flashed to the Blood Carver he had slain on Zonoma Sekot and then to the Tusken village he had destroyed. Locking eyes with Wyn, smiled darkly. “I am playing nice.” That's just kind of frightening. But just a bit great job! -----signature----- ~MTFBWY~ **Holder of the Straw of Disaster** All I want is to be in the light
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Corellian_Cutie Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 3/16/06 10:44am Subject: RE: Warped (J/J, A/P) Update March 16 Vong rip fabric of universe (past and EU char.)
	“It’s pointless to pursue that which you cannot have.” Anakin stood up. “I didn’t take you for a quitter, Fel,” he said. i love that. =] jag....idot! you want her...she wants you...its all good. and her grandfather's pushing you toward her (sorta)...take it!!!! -----signature----- "Don't show me your cover, just turn to your best chapter and read from it." Meet my pet piggy, Mr. Porky http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/23468184/p1 Destiny's Retribution J/J Golf+tournaments+too much focus=Competitive Insanity
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-Darksaber- Registered: Mar '05	Date Posted: 3/16/06 1:30pm Subject: RE: Warped (J/J, A/P) Update March 16 Vong rip fabric of universe (past and EU char.)
	delurks looks around, grinning, and places a note on the table which states that the author is doing well with this relurks -DS -----signature----- I literally do not know who I am. It's all untested. Am I funny? Am I sarcastic? Sexy? Right old misery? Life and soul? Right-handed? Left-handed? A gambler? A fighter? A coward? A traitor? A nervous wreck? Judging by the evidence, I've certainly got
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jaina_clan_solo Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 3/16/06 5:01pm Subject: RE: Warped (J/J, A/P) Update March 16 Vong rip fabric of universe (past and EU char.)
	I am really looking forward to when Jaina gets the chance to take out Tiffany, and prove who is the better woman for Jag. the discussion between Jag and Anakin about the definition of being alone that was great! Obi-Wan are going to be quite shocked to see the state of Coruscaunt, although I think that the other's are going to be extremely surprised by the appearance of the Jedi Temple! Another wonderful update! jcs -----signature----- Proud Padawan of BigFatty! Leading Blade http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/25450817/p1 NEW! Moments in Time http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/25790697/p1/?2
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Solo--Wan Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 3/17/06 11:46am Subject: RE: Warped (J/J, A/P) Update March 16 Vong rip fabric of universe (past and EU char.)
	I loved the Jag-Anakin conversation there...finally, Anakin not acting like an idiot! Excellent work. -----signature----- From a Certain point of view-http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/20799327/p13 Stranded!-http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/23291001/p1/?0
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