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Kissa Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 2/13/06 9:05am Subject: RE: Warped (Vong rip the fabric of the galaxy, bringing people from the past into the future) (J / J - Date Edited: 2/13/06 9:08am (1 edits total) Edited By: Kissa
	SWpants66 “We have better things to do than baby sit a sulking Jedi.” haha, oh boy. Anakin's anger must have skyrocketed. Yeah. You’ll find that Jag and Anakin are not going to get along. A dark haired dark eyed woman lying on a duracrete floor. Padme, he thought. oh, I like that. Maybe they'll be able to save Jaina then? oh please don't let her die! Jaina won’t die, but they don’t get to rescue her either. This was a really good chapter. I really like this. I also like the confusion of Obi-Wan & Anakin as Jag tells them they're dead. Oh no, Jag, you got a couple psychos on your ship! hahaha Ahem. Obi-wan takes offensive at being called a psycho. I’m glad you like the confusion. And thanks for the PM! No, thank-you for reading. Skywalkerlover00 poor jag.. ahving to deal with Anakin Skywalker and Obi-Wan.... who seem to be a little psychotic.... good job though You haven’t seen ‘poor Jag’ yet. Wait until you meet his fiancé. goddess45 wow... really really cool. great idea! Glad you like it. Kidan A VERY good post. The confusion that both the Chiss and Ani an Kenobi feel is quite fun. Of course, I must wonder why they did not react when Shawnkry annouced that Anakin Skywalker has an alias as Darth Vader. After all, Darth is a Sith title. Then again, Obi's vision came at that opportune time to interrupt his thinking on the matter.... I didn’t think about that. But the vision did come, so I guess Obi-wan covered my butt for me. I’ll have to address this later. Anyways, good job Kissa. I would like to be on the PM list. Thanks! You’re on the PM list. Thanks for the support. -----signature----- Padawn to NYCitygurl I'm more Word Processor than human; Twisted by plot bunnies and feedback cravings! Replica: Sequel to Replaced: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/24053902/p3
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JediKnight-Obi-Wan Registered: Jan '00	Date Posted: 2/13/06 9:16am Subject: RE: Warped (Vong rip the fabric of the galaxy, bringing people from the past into the future) (J / J
	I really like the idea for this story. I usually don't step toe outside of The Saga, but I glance in here occasionally to see if anything will catch my eye. This one did, and that's saying something because I don't think I've read a story in here before. I wouldn't mind being put on your list to be alerted to updates. I'd like to see where you go with this. It's a great start. -----signature----- "The course of true love never did run smooth"---A Midsummer Night's Dream
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jaina_clan_solo Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 2/13/06 1:56pm Subject: RE: Warped (Vong rip the fabric of the galaxy, bringing people from the past into the future) (J / J
	Haha... sulking jedi... Jag's reactions to Ani and Obi was funny. Although his frustrations are completely rational considering the situation with the Yuuzhan Vong. was Obi-wan's vision about Padmé or Jaina? Thank you so much for the PM... I'm going to eagerly await the complications of the next post. jcs -----signature----- Proud Padawan of BigFatty! Leading Blade http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/25450817/p1 NEW! Moments in Time http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/25790697/p1/?2
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Kissa Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 2/14/06 5:22am Subject: RE: Warped (Vong rip the fabric of the galaxy, bringing people from the past into the future) (J / J
	Jedi-Knight-Obi-Wan I really like the idea for this story. I usually don't step toe outside of The Saga, but I glance in here occasionally to see if anything will catch my eye. This one did, and that's saying something because I don't think I've read a story in here before. I wouldn't mind being put on your list to be alerted to updates. I'd like to see where you go with this. It's a great start. Glad you’re enjoying the story. Consider yourself on the update list. Jedi_clan_solo Haha... sulking jedi... Jag's reactions to Ani and Obi was funny. Although his frustrations are completely rational considering the situation with the Yuuzhan Vong. I had a lot of fun writing that part. was Obi-wan's vision about Padmé or Jaina? It was Jaina. Thank you so much for the PM... I'm going to eagerly await the complications of the next post. The complications will be up on Thursday -----signature----- Padawn to NYCitygurl I'm more Word Processor than human; Twisted by plot bunnies and feedback cravings! Replica: Sequel to Replaced: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/24053902/p3
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Solo--Wan Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 2/14/06 6:50pm Subject: RE: Warped (Vong rip the fabric of the galaxy, bringing people from the past into the future) (J / J
	PM please! A great follow up too. I'm surprise Anakin didn't shoot the pilot who made fun of him... -----signature----- From a Certain point of view-http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/20799327/p13 Stranded!-http://boards.theforce.net/the_saga/b10476/23291001/p1/?0
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angel_gidget Registered: Apr '04	Date Posted: 2/15/06 10:29am Subject: RE: Warped (Vong rip the fabric of the galaxy, bringing people from the past into the future) (J / J
	Ahhh...the initial confusion of timetravel! I love how they get told exactly when they die. I can just picture them taking a moment to stew over it. Anakin thinking about how he will live four years longer than Obi-wan....Obi-wan upset that he and Anakin will not die together as he always figured...I love the potential angst and the utter, utter confusion! More! Soon! Please! -----signature----- Ben: She says you're a killer. Mara: We talked about that, Ben. Sometimes I have to kill. Many Jedi Masters do. Ben: Mom, what's cold blood? "No, I'm not going to eat his remains."--Jacen Solo, The Joiner King Stories and art in Bio
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Kissa Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 2/15/06 11:09am Subject: RE: Warped (Vong rip the fabric of the galaxy, bringing people from the past into the future) (J / J
	angel_gidget I love the potential angst and the utter, utter confusion! More! Soon! Please! I love the confusion and angst as well. Of course, the next chapter is so far my favorite. And since you asked so sweetly for more, I'll put it up tomorow morning. (After editing) Solo--wan PM please! I'll PM you as I update. I'm surprise Anakin didn't shoot the pilot who made fun of him... Don't be silly. Anakin uses a lightsaber. Have you ever heard of him shooting someone? ... ... ... And he's still holding retailitory action in mind. Things should get esp. interesting when he realizes that Jag is dating Jaina who happens to be his grandaughter . . . I'm alternately dreading and anticipating writing that particular scene. -----signature----- Padawn to NYCitygurl I'm more Word Processor than human; Twisted by plot bunnies and feedback cravings! Replica: Sequel to Replaced: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/24053902/p3
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skywalkerlover00 Registered: May '05	Date Posted: 2/15/06 2:51pm Subject: RE: Warped (Vong rip the fabric of the galaxy, bringing people from the past into the future) (J / J
	what's that supposed to mean? -----signature----- "With Anakin's death I lost a brother, but the Jedi lost something i can't define. My feelings tell me its something important, something we lost a long time ago."Jaina Solo, DJ Lover of Rent, J/J, and my boyfriend Jason. Wielder of the Lollipop of Doom
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sdhfs Registered: May '04	Date Posted: 2/15/06 5:44pm Subject: RE: Warped (Vong rip the fabric of the galaxy, bringing people from the past into the future) (J / J
	great post. -----signature----- http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/16229314/?30 Up is obidala at it's best love chooses you you don 't choose it. Death is but death why are you afraid of it ?
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Corellian_Cutie Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 2/15/06 7:35pm Subject: RE: Warped (Vong rip the fabric of the galaxy, bringing people from the past into the future) (J / J
	i hooked. can u add me to your pm list? i can't wait to see the reactions when everyone figures out who's who. -----signature----- "Don't show me your cover, just turn to your best chapter and read from it." Meet my pet piggy, Mr. Porky http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/23468184/p1 Destiny's Retribution J/J Golf+tournaments+too much focus=Competitive Insanity
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skywalkerlover00 Registered: May '05	Date Posted: 2/15/06 7:52pm Subject: RE: Warped (Vong rip the fabric of the galaxy, bringing people from the past into the future) (J / J
	pm list for me too. -----signature----- "With Anakin's death I lost a brother, but the Jedi lost something i can't define. My feelings tell me its something important, something we lost a long time ago."Jaina Solo, DJ Lover of Rent, J/J, and my boyfriend Jason. Wielder of the Lollipop of Doom
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Kissa Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 2/16/06 4:44am Subject: RE: Warped (J/J, A/P) Update Feb. 15 (J/J) Vong rip fabric of universe
	skywalkerlover00 pm list for me too. You're on it. [iwhat's that supposed to mean?[/i] Err.. it's early. What are you asking? sdhfs Thanks for reading. Corellian_Cutie i hooked. can u add me to your pm list? i can't wait to see the reactions when everyone figures out who's who. I've added you to my PM list. I have a feeling you'll enjoy this next chapter a lot. -----signature----- Padawn to NYCitygurl I'm more Word Processor than human; Twisted by plot bunnies and feedback cravings! Replica: Sequel to Replaced: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/24053902/p3
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Kissa Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 2/16/06 4:48am Subject: RE: Warped (Vong rip the fabric of the galaxy, bringing people from the past into the future) (J / J
	Chapter Two, Saved Naboo, swamps Leia was really starting to hate her vacation on Naboo. It was bad enough that the galaxy was being ravaged by the Yuuzhan Vong. It did not need a crazy clone army and several thousand battle droids helping tear it up. And on a more personal note, she did not need to be shot up in the crossfire. “Padme!” a loud, obnoxious voice declared. Leia stopped running, turning to face a smiling amphibious creature with big ears and twin eye-stocks atop its head. “What are you?” She shook her head. “I mean, ‘Who are you?’” “Mesa Jar Jar Binks,” the creature said. “Yousa forgetting who I be?” It leaned foreword, disappointment evident in its posture. “We’re kind of in a tough situation here,” Han said. “Either help or get lost.” “Mesa can help.” Han shot the alien a grumpy look. “No,” he said firmly to Leia. “Leave it – whatever it is.” Leia ignored him. “Your help will be greatly appreciated.” Han groaned. Jar Jar seemed pleased. “Rights this way,” he said, clapping his hands delightedly. ** Naboo, underbelly His adversary was on the defensive. Now was not the time to regroup; now was the time to press the advantage. Qui-gon Jinn dropped to his knees, closing his eyes in a brief effort to rejuvenate himself before moving forward into a final confrontation with the Sith Lord. He was worn and battered from the earlier fighting, but that was unimportant at the moment. He had no doubt that he would be able to press his advantage and finish the battle. Maybe that was arrogance. As the electron walls separating him from the Sith started to snap back, Qui-gon smoothly got to his feet, igniting his emerald lightsaber in one deft movement. What his brown eyes saw shocked him more than anything since he had discovered Anakin Skywalker on Tatoonie. The Sith Lord was battling with a brunette Jedi female, his double-bladed weapon whirling skillfully. Qui-gon, confused, threw a glance over his shoulder, searching for the familiar presence of his padawan and not finding it. Quickly he drew his attention back to the Sith, realizing that he was about to win the conflict with the young woman. Without hesitation, he moved forward and swung his blade in a quick motion toward the Sith’s back. Darth Maul, himself, was somewhat confused about the situation. (He had been fighting two male Jedi and then they had vanished and the girl had stepped from behind the electron wall.) In his mind, this was all Jedi sorcery. Somehow they were deceiving him. He felt confident that he could easily destroy the girl and the old man; however, the younger Jedi was no where to be found. More than that, he hadn’t sensed the girl until she was nearly upon him. He had no way of knowing if there were other Jedi lurking around, and he couldn’t afford to be killed now. His master didn’t have room for his failure in his grand scheme. He backed away from both of the Jedi, hating himself for being forced to retreat. He reached out with the Force, searching for a glimmer of the younger Jedi. To his surprise, he felt instead his master. Now completely confused, he turned and outright fled. Jaina slumped, eyes closing for a moment as her life was spared thanks to the help from the long haired elderly Jedi. “Thank-you,” she said breathlessly. She racked her hand through her sweat dampened hair and got to her feet shakily. “You should be more careful,” Qui-gon advised. He glanced after the Sith and started after him at a brisk run. The defense of Naboo possibly rested upon his and Obi-wan’s ability to contain the Dark Lord. And, for all he knew, the entire galaxy could rest upon the same goal. Jaina followed him, realizing that she was without a lightsaber, but unable to simply stand by. Naboo, Theed Palace Queen Padme Naberie Amidala was going to take her palace back even if it was the last thing that she ever did. The Trade Federation’s blockade was hurting her people and while the Senate debated, they were dying. That, she could not allow to happen anymore. Dressed in a burgundy outfit, her hair pulled back in a much less elaborate style that usual, she headed toward the thrown chamber and Nute Gunray. For her, the transformation from one time and place to another was as simple as stepping through a door. Except instead of finding the Viceroy of the Trade Federation, she found an old man wearing a black cowl. His face was wrinkled and scared, his eyes glinting with malice. He was smiling manically, and blasting the floor in front of him with lightning. Abruptly he stopped and swooped forward in a surprising display of agility for someone so old. Compulsively he stomped the floor where his lightning had hit. And then he looked up, locking eyes with the young queen. Emperor Palpatine was shocked to see her. He closed his mouth and composed himself. With his impressive array of Force powers, he reached outward, searching for the presence of both Luke Skywalker and his father, Darth Vader. He sensed Luke lightyears away, a stronger and more centered individual than the one he had been killing moments ago. The anger and fear were all but gone and replaced with a calmness that was almost complete. He didn’t sense Vader as he knew him at all, but rather, somewhere equally far away, he sensed the turmoiled youth he had swayed to the Dark Side. Clearly, something had happened. “Who are you?” Padme demanded. She raised her silver blaster pistol, but hesitated. There was something almost familiar about the old man. Palpatine, for his part, took a few minutes before he recognized her. “Ah . . . Padme Amidala,” he said softly. “Without you I could never have achieved as much as I did,” he reminisced. “What are you talking about?” Padme demanded, lowering her weapon. “You were the one who set in motion my appointment to Supreme Chancellor. You were the one who the Jedi protected when the Grand Army of the Republic was found.” He smiled ironically. “You were the one who left that idiot Gungan in change so he could vote me emergency powers.” Padme frowned. She had initiated a vote of no-confidence in Chancellor Valorum; however, the rest of it was rather confusing. “Senator Palpatine?” she inquired. He continued as if she hadn’t spoken. “And it was his love for you . . . that eventually turned him loose from the Jedi and into the teaching of anger.” Padme started backing toward the door. There was something about this man that she didn’t like. He raised his hand. “I’m so sorry, my dear,” he said insincerely. “But I believe that I have need of you in the not so distant future.” Two red cloaked honor guards stepped forward, each seizing one of her arms. Palapatine made his way to a holonet port and flicked it on. Within moments he was immersed in a brief review of the galaxy since the fall of the Empire. Jar Jar brought them to Theed, which proved to be somewhat of a mistake. There was absolute confusion in the streets as both Imperial stormtroopers and Republic clone troopers battled it out between themselves and the battle droids. Their speeder was shot down, and Han, Leia, and Jar Jar quickly abandoned the vehicle. “Wonderful,” Han said sarcastically. “This is been some of the best help I’ve ever received.” He glowered darkly at Jar Jar in a non-verbal addition to his sarcasm. “Not now, Han,” Leia said softly. “We need to get to safety.” “Mesa know where we can go!” Jar Jar proclaimed. He caught Leia’s hand and dragged her into a narrow alleyway. “Mesa remember this from when the Trade Federation’s army wasa trying to take over the city.” Han followed with a snarl. “Listen rubber-brain –“ he said pointing a finger roughly at Jar Jar.” “Mesa my brain is’n made of rubber,” Jar Jar said. “It’s being made of . . .” Leia gently pushed Han’s finger down. “Relax,” she commanded. “Everything is going to be –“ “Freeze, you’re under arrest for disturbing the peace of the great Galactic Empire,” a white helmeted stormtrooper declared. He pointed his blaster rifle at them and pulled the trigger, not waiting for them to comply. Leia reacted immediately. She would never be considered the ‘best’ of Jedi, but she did know how to wield her lightsaber. With a snap-hiss, the golden beam ignited and she deflected the beam away. Han, who had responded just as quick, put a smoking hole in the chest plate of the stormtrooper. “Wow-we! Yusa guys are bombad!” Han pointed his blaster at Jar Jar. “Ssh!” he commanded, but it was too late. The commotion from the lightsaber drew the immediate attention of several clone troopers. “General,” one of them with yellow markings around his eye piece said. “There are both Separatist droids and an army calling themselves Imperials battling for supremacy on Naboo. We have been unable to establish contact with the Republic. Am I to take it that you’ve been sent to preserve the peace?” Leia blinked. She was thrown off-balance, but years of diplomacy had thought her the importance of not letting stuff like that show. Still, any response in this situation could be interpreted incorrectly. “Protect the citizens,” she ordered. “Yes General.” He saluted and quickly started barking orders into his com-link. “What’s going on here?” Han muttered darkly. “Mesa knows where yousa could finds out!” Jar Jar proclaimed. “It’s thisaway!” he whirled in a complete circle and led them into Theed Palace. Down the wide, vacant corridors they traveled. Finally he stopped by a set of double doors. “This’n be the throne room.” He flung open the door before Leia could stop him. She sensed darkness coming from the room. And knew, without a doubt who was beyond that door. She hadn’t felt him since he’d touched her youngest son while he was still in her womb . . . She had thought he was dead. Maybe it was another clone. “Come in,” Emperor Palpatine beckoned from the throne. Two red armored honor guards stepped into the hall, leveling force pikes at them. Han swallowed hard. There was no way that they were just going to submit without a fight. Leia was thinking along the same lines. Her hand strayed toward her lightsaber even as Han’s was slipping toward his blaster. Jar Jar didn’t plan on surrendering either. He had a better idea. “Mesa gettin’ outta here!” he proclaimed. And in his haste to escape, he collided with Leia, slamming her into the floor hard. Instantly, a force-pike was pressed to her throat and another was pressed to Jar Jar. “One wrong move and the woman and creature die,” came a cold, nearly mechanical voice from behind the red helmet. ** Naboo, royal palace, hanger bay Darth Maul nearly didn’t make it in time. He was heading toward his master’s presence, which was moving. He arrived in the hanger bay in time to see his master, draped in his dark cowl, walking up the ramp of a Nubian ship. “Master!” he cried, falling to his knees. “There is something wrong.” Palpatine whirled, locking eyes with his first apprentice. “Arise Darth Maul, come quickly,” he commanded. The black and red skinned Sith shot to his feet as commanded and rushed to his master’s side. Palpatine, concerned about the lack of order in the city, had decided that it would be best to leave. Besides, he had discovered a fully operational battle station with the aide of the Force. He had already contacted Tarkin and notified him of the impending arrival of his master. Tucked aboard the ship, he had his prisoners: the smuggler Solo, the hidden Skywalker twin, and the queen of Naboo. He’d left Jar Jar behind. The Gungan was useless. He allowed Darth Maul to board the ship and indicated that he should fly them away from the planet. Outside the ship, Qui-gon and Jaina burst into the hanger bay, in hot pursuit of Darth Maul. Jaina blanched at the hideous presence she felt aboard the ship. Then she realized that her mother was on that ship with him, as was her father. Both of her hands flew to her mouth at the same time. Qui-gon was concerned too. He could sense the Sith presence on the ship, and that of the young queen of Naboo. “We’re too late,” he told Jaina. Jaina blinked. “No . . .” she said. “We have to pursue them.” She turned and raced out of the room, heading straight for the public docking bays and her X-wing. She got as far as the streets. And then the chaos slowed her down. -----signature----- Padawn to NYCitygurl I'm more Word Processor than human; Twisted by plot bunnies and feedback cravings! Replica: Sequel to Replaced: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/24053902/p3
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Corellian_Cutie Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 2/16/06 5:56am Subject: RE: Warped (J/J, A/P) Update Feb. 15 (J/J) Vong rip fabric of universe (past and EU char.)
	i am so throughly confused...great post though... -----signature----- "Don't show me your cover, just turn to your best chapter and read from it." Meet my pet piggy, Mr. Porky http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/23468184/p1 Destiny's Retribution J/J Golf+tournaments+too much focus=Competitive Insanity
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Kissa Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 2/16/06 6:00am Subject: RE: Warped (J/J, A/P) Update Feb. 15 (J/J) Vong rip fabric of universe (past and EU char.)
	Corellian_Cutie posted: i am so throughly confused...great post though... What are you confused about? Maybe I can help straighten things out in your mind. -----signature----- Padawn to NYCitygurl I'm more Word Processor than human; Twisted by plot bunnies and feedback cravings! Replica: Sequel to Replaced: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/24053902/p3
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