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Maggy Registered: Oct '04	Date Posted: 3/31/06 12:27pm Subject: The Latest Craze [A/T Bikini Challenge; AU] - Date Edited: 5/3 1:46pm (4 edits total) Edited By: Maggy
	Title: The Latest Craze Author: Maggy Timeframe: Characters: Anakin, Tahiri Genre: Challenge entrance Keywords: Bikini Challenge Summary: something about an itsy-bitsy-teeny-weeny-yellow-polka-dot-bikini [Whitey announced now nearly a month back the first Anakin 'n' Tahiri's Place challenge. The challenge was to incorporate this item into an original short story involving our favorite couple: an itsy-bitsy-teeny-weeny-yellow-polka-dot-bikini. Kudos to a lot of people First to Durell who was a great help with motivation and cheering; Rowan_Jade who took the time and beta read it; And Thrawn McEwok who spawned the idea to this here and smoothed the vig out The characters and events depicted in this fiction are fictitious. Any similarities to actual persons, living or dead are purely coincidental This is George Lucas world, I’m only playing with it for a while] The Latest Craze A gentle wind was blowing over the surface of the sea, dusting the dunes with the salt of the sea and the fine sand of the beach. The air was pungent – the rich flavour of the sea was more than just a smell, tantalisingly close to a taste on their tongues. Soft waves surged against the slanting shore, rising until they became foam and spray. The clear water brought stones and shells with it, only to take them away again moments later, as each wave flowed back into the sea. But the low rumble and murmur of the tide swept on up the beach, to where the young couple were lying, side by side. They were enjoying the peace of the day, and each other. It had been Anakin’s suggestion, taking a nap together under a beach umbrella after lunch. She had liked the idea – her stomach was full with too much food and fruit-juice, and lying down lazily had seemed just the thing. But Anakin – being Anakin – had fallen asleep almost immediately, leaving her lying awake beside him. Tahiri was restless. She was bored just lying around, just being lazy in the sun. After a moment’s thought, she glanced sideways at Anakin, then smirked to herself, and slapped him hard across the belly. A nice loud, painful smack. “Ouch!” he yelped, the muscles of his stomach trembling in pain. She ignored his complaints and grinned cheerfully at him, laughing silently. “Come on,” she said. “Time to go swimming, or we’ll be grilled, and nobody will recognize us this evening.” Without waiting for his response, she jumped onto her feet, and ran away down toward the shore. With a sigh, Anakin got up and hurried after his girlfriend. He caught up with her within moments – but by then she had already gone into the water, letting the tide wash over her bare feet. He waded in after her – the water around his shins was cool and refreshing, after the sharp-edged heat of the day. He glanced at her – and was greeted with a splash of water into his face, and a cheerful laugh. “Hey! What are you doing?” “Dummy, what do you think?” She splashed another scoop of salt water up into his face. He grabbed blindly after her – tackling her, but letting himself fall into the next wave, pulling her with him. The sea surged over them, gathering them both in its cool embrace. Tahiri struggled against his hold on her – thrashing helplessly as the water broke over her blonde head. Before she could free herself from his grip the wave let go of them, and they were rolling together in the surf. He let her slip free from his arms, and she whirled around, gasping for air, and glaring at him. “Dummy,” she scowled, and with that she tackled him back, sending them both under the next wave. Now it was his turn to struggle and fight for air – but he still found time to grab for Tahiri, only for her to wind herself out of his grip. She was ashore before he had regained his footing again, dancing in the wet sand, her feet and toes leaving deep little prints. Another wave crashed into him, and even before his head broke the surface, he heard her laughing. “You’ll regret that,” he threatened, gasping for air. “Will I, hero boy?” she asked, batting her eyes innocently at him, and wiggling her hips. “Yes, and no batting or wiggling or anything can help you, sweetheart.” “Well, I’m making you wet and angry – and I like you wet and angry. Very sexy.” “Sexy, huh?” “On second thoughts – no.” She laughed and stuck her tongue at him. Slowly, he waded out of the water toward her. “You changed your mind pretty fast.” With a bright grin, she backed off toward their beach umbrella, planted in the sloping sand. “Girls are allowed to change their minds.” “I know. It’s one of the things I like least about you, Herzchen.” Tahiri reached for her heart, pretending to be hurt. “It pains me to hear it.” “Yeah?” “That's great.” “You are something else….” In two fast steps she was nose to nose with Anakin and next thing he knew, he was flat on his back in the sand, with her on top of him. “I'm gonna to dig you in, hold still” “You what?!” “I’m going to make you into a sand sculpture.” “Tahiri… I think-” “Shhh, dummy. It's not going to hurt you.” “Um ... actually it does, I'm lying on a stone.” “Pain is your friend – don't be a baby.” “I'm-” “I'll be finished soon. Hold still.” Her hands were already shovelling scoops of sand onto his wet body, where it clung quickly to his skin. “That’s itching Tahiri,” he complained. “It’s not.” “You aren’t buried beneath sand,” he tried again. “I have been before. It doesn’t.” “I'll prove it to you,” he said – and with that, he pushed Tahiri over into the sand, and rolled on top of her – kissing her. She squirmed half-heartily, and slipped a little bit out from under him. “Now look what you’ve done, I need to-” “Talk less,” he suggested, and sealed her lips with his own again. Someone coughed. The couple looked up at the voice, blinking in bewilderment, to see a pale-furred Bothan standing over them. “Children, children,” he said, shaking his furry head. “What are you doing here? Disturbing the peace of this beautiful day with your laugher and snogging? And unsupervised, too. Where are you parents anyway?” Then glanced at each other, exchanging wry looks – not knowing what this furry thing meant to achieve with his rant. They had done nothing wrong – they hadn’t meant to bother anyone. They had come out here to get away from everyone. “Sir, we definitely didn’t snog,” Anakin answered, flicking his dark-blond hair out of his face, and staring at the newcomer. He knew this Bothan from somewhere, but he wasn’t sure where. The Bothan shrugged. “Aren’t you two a bit too young to be alone on a beach like this? Can you even afford the hotel? Where are your parents? You two are too young to be allowed to be on the beach alone.” “No, we’re not too young,” Anakin sighed. “And yes, we can afford the hotel. I don’t see why that’s your business anyway. We’re guests here, as you are – but unlike you, we know how to behave in polite company.” “Anakin,” Tahiri whispered, nudging him in his ribs. “You know how to behave, Jedi brat?” the Bothan asked. “I don’t think so.” “Sir, you are insulting our heritage. If something is bothering you go to the hotel management. I’m pretty sure they will listen to your problems.” “How dare you speak in that way to me? You can be sure your uncle will hear from me about his undisciplined pupils. And I will make sure that it will be announced in the next Senate meeting.” Anakins eyes widened slightly, recognizing the Bothan now. It was strange to see him in a loud shirt and shorts, standing on a beach rather than in the Senate or on some HoloNet broadcast. Borsk Fey’lya, Chief of State of the New Republic. “As if the galaxy doesn't have other troubles,” Tahiri sighed “Be quiet, child,” Fey’lya snapped. “Nobody asked your opinion.” Without another glance, the Bothan turned away, and walked over their towels – leaving them covered with sand. “Chief Fey’lya!” Anakin yelled after him but his call echoed over the sand, steadfastly ignored by the Bothan. Tahiri could feel the Force surge through her lover, anger and frustration overriding logic and control. She reached for him, embraced him and soothed his rage. He reached back, letting her brush into his mind like a cool breeze. The young woman saw him aim a last hard glare at the Bothan’s back – and then his expression relaxed. “Thanks, Tahiri,” he breathed. She grinned, and grabbed his hand, and pulled him back down on the sand. “Come on, hero-boy,” she whispered. “He’s just bored and can’t find a better fight to pick. We can turn you into a sandcastle again….” Her voice lowered to a whisper. “Or we just can-” “I know.” Anakin’s lips pressed against hers before she could say another word. They tasted of the sea and the sand, and the sweet aftertaste of fruit-juice. ~ - ~ Anakin and Tahiri were sitting together at the Bambarqua bar, sipping on a shared MonCalOrange. Two nearby tables were crowded with people playing scwamble, loud screaming and cheering marking the progress of the game – but this didn't bother the two lovebirds one bit. They only had eyes for each other. Time passed and they didn't even know it. Suddenly, the tone of the cheering changed. Excited whistling began, and loud laughter from the females. “What's going on?” Anakin asked, with a mischievous glint in his eyes. “Are they cheering for us?” Tahiri sat up a bit, looking past his broad shoulder. She opened her mouth to speak, but only a gurgling noise came out - though when Anakin glanced at her in concern, he saw that her green eyes were glittering with amusement. “No, no,” she said eventually. “I don't think it's us.” “You sure?” “Yeah.” "What is it then?” “You’d better look for yourself!” Anakin turned around, looking over his shoulder. “Hah.” “That's all you have to say?” “What did you expect?” “Well…. You don't see Borsk Fay'lya walkdancing down the beach every day.” “Probably not,” he grinned. “Lucky for the rest of the Galaxy that it’ll be all over the Holonet by lunchtime.” “What do you mean?” “There, look – the Ewok with the sunglasses and the camera droid. He has to be holopress, don’t you think.” Tahiri spotted the brown ball of fur some meters away, almost jumping with excitement about what he was recording. Then the furry thing noticed that he was being watched and a bright, big-toothed grin appeared on his face. For a second he lifted his shades and winked at them. Realization lit up Tahiri's face. “What have you done?” “Me? Nothing.” “Sure, and Tatooine is the new Mon Cal.” “Don't be silly. What could I have done?” “Dummy, why is Fey'lya wearing an itsy-bitsy-teeny-weeny-yellow-polka-dot-bikini and a Pompadour furwave?” “Dunno? Perhaps he woke up and thought he needed a new style?” “Anakin, can't you be serious for a moment?” “I am. I don't see how you can connect an insane Bothan's behaviour with me.” “So you can't tell me or do you not want to tell me?” “I can't tell you what I don't know.” “Perhaps from now on I don't know you, dummy.” “Tahiri-” “Ah, so you still know me at least.” She quirked her eyebrows at him. “That’s an improvement.” “Don't be that way.” “What way?” “Come on, you know-” “Yes I do know and you are lying.” “I am not. From a certain point of view.” “Don’t.” “Sorry,” he said quietly, leaning forward towards her - and stole a kiss. “You aren't allowed to kiss me now.” “No?” “No! I'm too angry with you to kiss you. What you have done is not allowed.” “What is not allowed?” “What you have done it was just wrong.” “Why?” “Anakin! You can't use the Force to suggest what the Chief of State will wear the next day.” “I'm sorry?” “No, you are not.” “I'm a bit sorry?” “You-” She had to laugh at that. “All okay now?” “Fey’lya’s image will be damaged for a while.” “As if it could get any worse….” “Probably not but it was still wrong.” “Are you done lecturing me then?” “Maybe?” “Consider it as the will of the Force.” “What?!” “It was the will of the Force, Herzchen, can we move on now?” “The will of the Force? But how?” “It spoke through me?” “Suuuuuure I believe you, dummy. Is there something even more stupid you have in mind?” “Right now? No.” Anakin nudged her in the Force, “All will be okay.” “And what will happen when he tells Luke?” “You remember, only the weak minded can be influenced in the Force. Do you really think Fey’lya is going to admit to being manipulated by a kid?” He folded his arms across his chest and looked at her, a lopsided grin gracing his lips. “You-” “Are a genius. I know.” She slapped playfully at his chest. “You know full well I wasn't going to say that.” “Not huh? Wanna go swimming?” “No, I'd rather make a sand sculpture – a sand-dummy. Shaped like a handsome young Jedi, but sand for a brain. Do you think you could help me?” “No, not again, please Tahiri, Herzchen. Stars, no….” “It’s the will of the Force, Anakin – just like you were so nice to Borsk.” “Does this mean you want me to lie down on sun-baked stones, sea-urchins and dry seaweed again?” A mischievous grin appeared on her soft lips, and his eyes widened in alarm. “Careful you don’t give me any ideas you regret.” “I am trying to give you some other ideas!” “Are you, hero boy? And what do you have in mind?” “Mhhhh...,” he mumbled vaguely. “Mhhh? Doesn't say much” “Mhhh... something more private would be nice.” “For what?” “You could give me a massage.” “And what do you think of a partner massage from professionals?” “Sounds even better!” “Then lets go.” They hoped from their chairs and glanced a last time down the beach. Fey’lya was now encircled by holo cameras, forced to give interviews about his daring new fashion style. In the front row was the brown Ewok with the shades. The others seemed to have a certain respect of him and kept a bit more distance. “It seems as though that Ewok’s taking the lead in the press-pack.” “Yeah, looks like that way.” “The galaxy is going insane." “Yeah dummy, get moving, I wanna get my massage.” “Yes Ma'am.” Side by side, arms wrapped around each other, they walked back into their hotel. ~ - ~ The doorbell of their shared apartment rang. “Herzchen, I’ll get it,” the young man announced from the living room “Thanks, dummy,” his girlfriend came from the kitchen. Anakin hurried to the entrance and opened the door - and he had to look down to actually see their guest, “Hello Wollknäuel, glad that you came. Come in, come in.” “Yub yub,” the little furball said, and wuzzled in. “How have you been?” The guest shrugged vaguely with his arms “Yub” “Sounds great. Tahiri will have finished dinner soon, so sit down and feel at home.” The Ewok dropped down on the couch, his feet wiggling in anticipation. Moments later Tahiri came out of the kitchen, carrying the food with her. “Hello Wollknäuel. I wonder how Anakin was able to talk you into all this…” As answer, she got a big, bright grin. “No cameras today, I hope.” “Yub?” Tahiri laughed, and served the plates out. “Help yourself, Wollknäuel.” “Teeha,” and his paws reached for the wichtel balls. With evident satisfaction, the little thing popped the first bite into his mouth, while Anakin helped himself also, and shovelled wichtel balls and vegetables onto his plate. “And what’s the gossip saying? Any news about Borsk’s latest fashion taste?” “Chak. Grenchicit.” He reached for his shoulder-bag and took out a holo disc. “What’s that?” Tahiri asked interested. Wollknäuel just pushed the disc into her hands “Que a coatee-cha.” “Who have you caught?” Anakin had taken the disc over and pushed it into the player. The Ewok just wiggled his legs. With a click the projector started, clothing the room in a blue shimmer. Images from Luke Skywalker with Mara and little Ben appeared. The Jedi Master had followed Fey’lyas example of fashion taste. His wife had a silly grin on her face when she looked in his direction. The next sets showed several other well known celebrities. “How ... how ... how ... how did you-,” Tahiri whispered. The furry being just grinned and put a finger on his lips. “Your secret?” she shrugged. “Those are awesome catches,” Anakin said. “I can’t believe who followed Fey’lyas lead.” Tahiri looked at him, but he was evidently fascinated by the pictures. The evening passed far too fast and soon the little furball had to say goodbye to his new friends. The young couple cleaned up the dishes and the table, and went straight to bed. Tahiri snuggled herself on Anakin's firm chest and whispered: “Would you have done this to Borsk last year if you would have known what sort of a craze you would cause?” He planted a kiss on the top of her head and said: “What makes you think I didn’t know?” - Fin Review? Anyone? ~ Mags ~ -----signature----- The Revenant - http://boards.theforce.net/a/b10477/28313064 - co authored with Jedi Ant "Maggy rawks " - YodaKenbi
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Kidan Title: TFN EU Staff Registered: Jul '03	Date Posted: 3/31/06 12:45pm Subject: RE: The Latest Craze [A/T Bikini Challenge; AU]
	ROFL!!!! That was great. Especially the last line... Good job Maggy! -----signature----- You sadistic Yank!! - McEwok No Krakana - http://nokrakana.wrighton.org Believe in the Constitution? Ron Paul '08
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brodiew Registered: Oct '05	Date Posted: 3/31/06 2:45pm Subject: RE: The Latest Craze [A/T Bikini Challenge; AU] - Date Edited: 3/31/06 3:05pm (1 edits total) Edited By: brodiew
	this is very interesting, Maggy. It started out as nice playful romp at the beach and turned into an episode of Fashion Trends. I liked the playful use of "the Will of the Force". I must admit that I've seen the term dummy used for Anakin in other fics? I think there is a profic root there, but I"m not sure I like it. There is no doubt that you have a handle on the characters. They both sparkle here. My favorite part of the story was their private time at the beach before they were so rudely interrupted by everyone's favorite horse's... you get the idea. Good stuff, Maggy. I also wanted to compliment you on the wonderful setting of the scene at the opeing. Peaceful and tropical. Great description! Btw: I am just to assume that Tahiri is wearing that paticular bikini? -----signature----- Drabble Babble the Third: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/29083113/p1/?23
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Alishu06 Registered: Mar '05	Date Posted: 3/31/06 3:40pm Subject: RE: The Latest Craze [A/T Bikini Challenge; AU]
	That was great! -----signature----- Always Remeber that they fought and are fighting for your FREEDOM Master to Handmaiden_Azul and SKYWALKER024
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miranda82 Registered: Mar '04	Date Posted: 3/31/06 4:11pm Subject: RE: The Latest Craze [A/T Bikini Challenge; AU]
	Good Job! -----signature----- "If at first you don't succeed, destroy all evidence that you tried." "Two rules in life are deny everything, and now I have no idea what you're talking about." Fleeing the Darkness http://boards.theforce.net/The_Saga/b10476/16367849/
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Durell Registered: Aug '05	Date Posted: 4/1/06 3:54am Subject: RE: The Latest Craze [A/T Bikini Challenge; AU]
	hey, hey good work, there, Maggy! Good switching from Comedy to serious topic and back. And well who wouldn't want to see Fey'Lya in this?
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Maggy Registered: Oct '04	Date Posted: 4/1/06 9:21am Subject: RE: The Latest Craze [A/T Bikini Challenge; AU]
	Kidan: ROFL!!!! That was great. Especially the last line... thank you, I think the last line implies it somehow that Anakin had a vision about this all or so Good job Maggy! thanks again brodiew: this is very interesting, Maggy. It started out as nice playful romp at the beach and turned into an episode of Fashion Trends. I blame it on the stuff I have seen recently on TV I liked the playful use of "the Will of the Force". I must admit that I've seen the term dummy used for Anakin in other fics? I think there is a profic root there, but I"m not sure I like it. yeah it’s from profic and also in fanfic. There is no doubt that you have a handle on the characters. They both sparkle here. thank you It was my first try to write both of them My favorite part of the story was their private time at the beach before they were so rudely interrupted by everyone's favorite horse's... you get the idea. I was tempted to not interrupt them but Borsk had to appear somehow Good stuff, Maggy. I also wanted to compliment you on the wonderful setting of the scene at the opening. Peaceful and tropical. Great description! thanks I wanna go there for holiday in summer Btw: I am just to assume that Tahiri is wearing that paticular bikini? I let it open what Tahiri is wearing Most definitely Borsk and Luke is wearing it Thank you for reading and such a kind review Alishu06: That was great! Glad you liked it miranda82: Good Job! thank you Rell: hey, hey hi hi good work, there, Maggy! Good switching from Comedy to serious topic and back. thank you And well who wouldn't want to see Fey'Lya in this? um … I remember someone showing me a puke face when I told her the first time Thanks for reading, dear ~ Mags ~ -----signature----- The Revenant - http://boards.theforce.net/a/b10477/28313064 - co authored with Jedi Ant "Maggy rawks " - YodaKenbi
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Whitey Registered: Jan '03	Date Posted: 4/1/06 9:46am Subject: RE: The Latest Craze [A/T Bikini Challenge; AU]
	ROFLMAO!!! Priceless! What does Herzchen mean, anyway? BTW, thanks for getting my name and gender correct. I believe that's the third time in a year that someone's called me Whitney. -----signature----- "I really didn't rub against his bicep? I mean, it had an elbow."
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Maggy Registered: Oct '04	Date Posted: 4/1/06 10:01am Subject: RE: The Latest Craze [A/T Bikini Challenge; AU]
	Whitey posted: ROFLMAO!!! Priceless! What does Herzchen mean, anyway? BTW, thanks for getting my name and gender correct. I believe that's the third time in a year that someone's called me Whitney. I'm sorry can you forgive me? please? Herzchen means something like "little heart" or "sweatheart" Glad you like it ~ Mags ~ -----signature----- The Revenant - http://boards.theforce.net/a/b10477/28313064 - co authored with Jedi Ant "Maggy rawks " - YodaKenbi
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Whitey Registered: Jan '03	Date Posted: 4/1/06 6:35pm Subject: RE: The Latest Craze [A/T Bikini Challenge; AU]
	I'll forgive you... if you give me something in return. -----signature----- "I really didn't rub against his bicep? I mean, it had an elbow."
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Maggy Registered: Oct '04	Date Posted: 4/3/06 6:22am Subject: RE: The Latest Craze [A/T Bikini Challenge; AU]
	yay he forgives me you not really want that ~ Mags ~ -----signature----- The Revenant - http://boards.theforce.net/a/b10477/28313064 - co authored with Jedi Ant "Maggy rawks " - YodaKenbi
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thesporkbewithyou Registered: Feb '05	Date Posted: 4/3/06 2:17pm Subject: RE: The Latest Craze [A/T Bikini Challenge; AU]
	Marvelous Mags! I think this is my favorite one yet. More to come later tonght! -----signature----- Loyal servant ... er ... Padawan of HyperionRising. E-sis/mutual adoptee/ter of Maggy for a happy almost 3 years
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FelsGoddess Registered: Sep '04	Date Posted: 4/3/06 8:06pm Subject: RE: The Latest Craze [A/T Bikini Challenge; AU]
	That's great! -----signature----- Knighted by Tahi
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Barefoot_XO Registered: Oct '04	Date Posted: 4/4/06 12:41pm Subject: RE: The Latest Craze [A/T Bikini Challenge; AU]
	Well written stuff, Fappy mein... The only question I have is whether Luke followed Fey'lya voluntarily, or Mara had to force him into it... Jasper -----signature----- Coiner of the term, Kypocrite... The Shoeless Sith Tahiri and Jag: Tag, You're It!!!
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YodaKenobi Title: TFN EU Staff Registered: May '03	Date Posted: 4/4/06 3:02pm Subject: RE: The Latest Craze [A/T Bikini Challenge; AU] - Date Edited: 4/4/06 3:04pm (1 edits total) Edited By: YodaKenobi
	A gentle wind was blowing over the surface of the sea, dusting the dunes with the salt of the sea and the fine sand of the beach. The air was pungent – the rich flavour of the sea was more than just a smell, tantalisingly close to a taste on their tongues. Soft waves surged against the slanting shore, rising until they became foam and spray. The clear water brought stones and shells with it, only to take them away again moments later, as each wave flowed back into the sea. But the low rumble and murmur of the tide swept on up the beach, to where the young couple were lying, side by side. Loved the descriptions, Mags Beautifully done. “Well, I’m making you wet and angry – and I like you wet and angry. Very sexy.” In two fast steps she was nose to nose with Anakin and next thing he knew, he was flat on his back in the sand, with her on top of him. Nice Anakins eyes widened slightly, recognizing the Bothan now. It was strange to see him in a loud shirt and shorts, standing on a beach rather than in the Senate or on some HoloNet broadcast. Borsk Fey’lya, Chief of State of the New Republic. “Dummy, why is Fey'lya wearing an itsy-bitsy-teeny-weeny-yellow-polka-dot-bikini and a Pompadour furwave?” “You-” “Are a genius. I know.” With a click the projector started, clothing the room in a blue shimmer. Images from Luke Skywalker with Mara and little Ben appeared. The Jedi Master had followed Fey’lyas example of fashion taste. His wife had a silly grin on her face when she looked in his direction. No way! Sorry I didn't get here sooner, Maggy That was great! Very funny and I nice twist. I really didn't expect to see Borsk in a bikini for this challenge You seem to be writing him a lot lately Anakin and Tahiri were really cute. Some very sweet scenes with them, especially the beginning Lots of laughs I can't believe Luke was copying Fey'lya Nice work -----signature----- FADA Therapist The Lands of the Dead: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28522077/p1/ Blood Trail: http://boards.theforce.net/beyond_the_saga/b10477/28636429/p1 "We're Jedi, not assassins."— Anakin Solo
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Maggy Registered: Oct '04	Date Posted: 4/5/06 8:42am Subject: RE: The Latest Craze [A/T Bikini Challenge; AU]
	Sporky: Marvelous Mags! I think this is my favorite one yet. thanks, glad you like it soo much More to come later tonght! waits till later tonight Fels: That's great! thanks Jasper: Well written stuff, Fappy mein... thanks, Meisterchen The only question I have is whether Luke followed Fey'lya voluntarily, or Mara had to force him into it... what did Anakin say about weak minded persons? Yobs: Loved the descriptions, Mags Beautifully done. thank you, glad you liked them “ ” Nice yub yub “ ” glad you think it’s funny No way! sure way “ ” so you like it after all Sorry I didn't get here sooner, Maggy you are here now That was great! Very funny and I nice twist. happy that you think so I really didn't expect to see Borsk in a bikini for this challenge blame McE You seem to be writing him a lot lately just two times Anakin and Tahiri were really cute. Some very sweet scenes with them, especially the beginning yeah they are cute, I’m sorry that Borsk had to interrupt Lots of laughs it worked I can't believe Luke was copying Fey'lya not only he Nice work thank you ~ Mags ~ -----signature----- The Revenant - http://boards.theforce.net/a/b10477/28313064 - co authored with Jedi Ant "Maggy rawks " - YodaKenbi
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