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Flowerlady Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 4/23/06 11:10am Subject: Love's Sweet Promise-K/J,J/S,J/Tk,Z/D, Valin, OCs-- AUTHOR'S NOTE--4/4/08 - Date Edited: 4/4/08 9:00am (44 edits total) Edited By: Flowerlady
	Okay, folks here is the prologue to the long awaited sequel to Always Have, Always Will... Hope you all enjoy.... ___________________________________________ Title: Love’s Sweet Promise Author: Flowerlady Timeframe: Legacy era Characters: K/J, J/S, J/TK, Z/D, Valin, Bunches of OC’s Genre: AU, Romance, Angst, Drama Disclaimer: I own nothing. Summary: Just over 25 years after the end of the Swarm War the children of Kyp and Jaina, Valin and Tahiri, Zekk and Danni, Jacen and Tenel Ka, and Jag and Shawnkyr find themselves exploring the possibilities of finding love while trying to stop a new threat to the GFFA. This is sequel: The Links are as follows for the other works that lend to the dynamics that are presented in this piece. However, one does not need to read these to understand Love’s Sweet Promise: Always Have, Always Will To Love Thy Friend The Strength to Go On A/N: For everyone to understand Love’s Sweet Promise, some things need to be explained. This is an AU of what could happen during or just after the Legacy Series. Which means there is no Dark Jacen in this. This came about because he married Tenel Ka just after the Swarm War and not only raised Allana but had another child, a son. Jaina and Kyp married nearly a year after a mission that almost killed Kyp. They have four children. Zekk, who at the beginning of AHAW is living with Jaina following their return from the Unknown Regions, marries Danni Quee following Jaina’s break up with him to go to Kyp and they have a son. Also, important to know is that Valin Horn and Tahiri Veila married during AHAW and have a son and a daughter. However, during a failed mission a year before the opening of this story, Tahiri is killed by a pirate group. Finally, Jag Fel was rewarded following the Killik war and made a Fleet Admiral of the CEDF and married his life long friend Shawnkyr Nuruodo and they have a son and a daughter. Character List: listed in families with ages at time of story opening. The Durron Family: Kyp Durron (age 67), Jedi Master Jaina Solo-Durron (age 54), Jedi Master Zeth Durron (age 24), Jedi Knight Anakah Durron (age 24), Jedi Knight Meri Leia Durron (age 22), Jedi Knight Liam Han Durron (age 19), Jedi Apprentice to Ben Skywalker The Nuruodo-Fel Family: Jagged Fel (age 55), Admiral, Supreme Commander CEDF Shawnk’yr’nuruodo-Fel (age 53), General CEDF Cle’ve’nuruodo-Fel (age 25), Fleet Captain CEDF Charith Nuruodo-Fel (age 23), Commander CFDF, liaison to GFFA Mif’lori’noruodo-Fel (wife to Cleven) (age 25), Commander CEDF The Horn Family: Valin Horn (age 50), Jedi Master Tahiri Veila Horn (deceased) Terrik Horn (age 24), Jedi Knight Cassie Horn (age 22), Jedi Knight The Royal Family of Hapes: Tenel Ka Chume D’jo (age 53), Former Queen Mother Hapes Jacen Solo-D’jo (age 54), Prince Consort Allana Chume D’jo (age 27), Queen Mother Hapes Bail Solo D’jo (age 25), Jedi Knight, Prince of Hapes Rodtic Le’Dole D’jo (age 32) Prince Consort to Allana The Quee Family: Zekk Quee (age 56), Jedi Master Danni Quee (age 59), Magister of Zonoma Sekot Marko Quee (age 25), Jedi Knight The Tainer Family: Doran Tainer (age 51), Jedi Master Jysella Horn-Tainer (age 45), Jedi Master, Administrator Jedi Academy Hope Tainer (age 15), Jedi Apprentice to Valin Horn The Skywalker/Solo Family: Ben Skywalker (age 36), Jedi Master Julith Farlander-Skywalker (age 37), Jedi Master Luke Skywalker (age 81), Grand Master of the Jedi Mara Jade Skywalker (age 80), Jedi Master, retired Leia Organa Solo (age 81), Jedi Master, retired The Barrett Family: Pader Barrett (age 47), Admiral, GFFA Third Fleet Commander Syal Antilles-Barrett (age 46), Chief-of-State GFFA Padmé Barrett, Queen Violetta (age 20), Queen of Naboo, niece of Pader Lina Doglan, (age 42), Dealer of Antiquities, one-time mistress of Pader Beth Doglan, (age 12), daughter of Lina and Pader The Darklighter Family: Gavin Darklighter, (age 72), Supreme Commander of GFFA Jayme Darklighter, (age 52), GA Ambassador to Chiss Ascendancy, married to Wynessa Fel Gabe Darklighter, (age 40), Colonel, Rogue Squadron Commander ~~Love’s Sweet Promise~~ ~>X<~ ~Prologue~ Zaria (Chiss Space) (62 ABY) The Galaxy was at peace. And it had been for nearly thirty years, since the end of the Swarm War. The Chiss, the Imperial Remnant, the Hapans, even the Hutts to some extent, all belonged to the Galactic Federation of Free Alliances. It was the first time in the modern history of the galaxy that such unity was found. However, there was a blemish on the peacefulness of the Galaxy, a blemish that didn’t seem to be going away and that seemed bent on bringing an end to the unity. As the wedding guests settled in their seats for the history making ceremony, there were many whispers as to what was being done about the pirates that had been terrorizing the Trade Routes and hyperlanes for the past five years. The pirates, which had been linked to the murder of a prominent Jedi Master and several of the bride’s Intelligence Branch colleagues, seemed to be unstoppable in their slave and spice running. Although, that wasn’t the only thing that concerned the military and government officials who gathered on the temperate Chiss planet of Zaria for the wedding of Cle’ve’nuruodo-Fel to Mif’lori’noruodo, it was the increasing military build up that the pirates were gathering. Dro’godda was becoming strong and many wondered if they could be stopped and what would be wrought by the attempt. And they wondered just who the heroes that stopped them could possibly be. However, as the bride and groom came together before the golden robed Chiss magistrate, neither of them were concerned about the pirates they had been chasing for the past two years. They didn’t even think about Dro’godda as the catalysis that brought them together. All they thought about was one thing—their love and the sweet gifts it promises to all who truly find it. ~~~ “I, Cle’ve’nuruodo-Fel, take you, Mif’lori’nuruodo as my wife.” “I, Mif’lori’nuruodo, take you, Cle’ve’nuruodo-Fel as my husband.” CEDF Supreme Commander, Admiral Jagged Fel sat beside his wife and listened to the soft words of the simple Chiss wedding vows that were spoken between his son and the daughter of one of Jag’s best generals and Fleet Admirals. She was an attractive Chiss woman of good family and was a member of the Chiss Intelligence Branch. Cleven was making a good match and even though he was half human, her parents had been the ones to contact Jag regarding the possible alliance. They knew the advantages of marrying into the Fel family. Besides, Cleven was proving to be more of a command genius than his father had at a similar age; for, at age twenty-five he was already a fleet captain for over two years. The family joke was that was what came about when Fel, Antilles and the genes that helped create Grand Admiral Thrawn mixed. Shawnkyr’s paternal grandfather had been one of Thrawn’s brothers. However, the good Chiss alliance was not what warmed the admiral’s heart. He was happy because his son and his bride were in love, as much as Jag had been, and still was, when he had married his mother, which for the Chiss wasn’t as important as the alliance itself. Jag reached over and found Shawnkyr’s hand and held it. She squeezed his hand and met his eyes. He could tell she was desperately trying to keep the tears he saw there from falling. He knew she would be abashed to ever give into the emotion he knew she was feeling. Cleven, after all, had been her first born and the closest to her of their two children. That he was the most Chiss of the two was what Jag’s brother Cem always said. However, Jag realized the truth. She didn’t quite want to let him go yet. He also knew that that thought bothered her pragmatic Chiss mind because to her those thoughts were irrational. But then again, most Chiss hadn’t confronted the hardships they had to raise their family. Besides the underlying prejudice they had always encountered, out of five pregnancies she only had two go to term. The first one was lost to the stress of trying to hide their relationship, the other two to genetic incompatibility. Jag squeezed her hand back and smiled his slight smile that most people who did not know him would have missed, letting her know he felt the same way. He didn’t like getting old either. However, he often teased Shawnkyr that his humanity wore off on her as much as her Chissness did on him. A few moments later the Chiss magistrate announced them joined in the alliance of marriage, and after the traditional old Cheunh words were translated into Basic applause broke out from the 100 or so non-Chiss guests which was followed by more subdued acknowledgment from the Chiss guests of the assemblage of over 500. Jag and Shawnkyr joined the bride’s parents in the reception line and accepted the congratulations of their guests. As the line finally began to dwindle down some, he came face to face with his cousin, GFFA Chief-of-State Syal Antilles-Barrett, her husband GFFA Third Fleet Commander, Admiral Pader Barrett and his uncle and aunt Wedge and Iella Antilles. “Well, Jag, Shawnkyr, congratulations. It was a beautiful wedding,” Wedge said as he took his nephew’s hand. “Thank you for inviting us. I’ve always enjoyed Cleven’s stoic comments during his visits with us.” The old general looked at his great-nephew and smiled, “He was always trying to educate me on how great a command genius Thrawn was.” Cleven who was about a half dozen centimeters taller than his father stepped over and shook Wedge’s hand and smiled, making him look like a pale blue version of his father. “Now, Great-uncle, I could not very well talk about you, after all, you know how great you are.” Cleven had always been interested in the famous members of his family and tried very hard to learn from them. He and Wedge had been very close over the years, in fact, Jag always thought it ironic that his uncle was closer to Jag’s children then he was to Jag or his siblings. Wedge chuckled, “Leave it to a Chiss to put things into perspective.” As he took the delicate hand of Florin to shake it, he said to them both, “Congratulations to you both.” Then turning to the beautiful young woman who was standing beside her brother, he winked at her and said, “Well, Cherith, you’re next to get married, I suppose.” She laughed and said, “Oh, not for a while I think, Great-uncle.” Then she leaned forward and as she looked at Jag, smiled and whispered just loud enough for him to overhear, “Although, I do have quiet the number of admirers that Dad does not know about.” Jag smiled at the exchange. Cleven and Cherith were as much at ease with humans as they were with Chiss. He admired his children; they both had difficult childhoods that caused them to learn to rely on each other and their family, both the Chiss members as well as the human, but they were also strong and self-reliant. They had to learn how to be both Chiss and human and actually pulled it off. Although, Cleven was more reserved and more stoic than his sister, Cherith took after the human side of Jag too much. She sometimes let her emotions get the best of her along with her over abundant human pride. However, most of her Chiss comrades and superiors could overlook that because at age twenty-three she was the best pilot most of them ever seen not excluded her father and grandfather. As he looked at his son and daughter, he took in their physical appearance. They really seemed to be a mix of human and Chiss traits. Both of them had inherited their mother’s complexion, although they were both several shades paler than even the lightest of most Chiss. They both had black hair but it was not the blue-black that Shawnkyr’s was, it was fine and feathery like hers, but was more human in color, closer to Jag’s own. However, the most intriguing aspect was their eyes. They both had human eyes with dark blue-violet colored irises, which Soontir Fel insisted were the same color as his mother’s. Accepting well wishes from his cousin and her husband, he watched his children and couldn’t help the feeling of pride that swelled in his heart. ~~~ The formal Chiss reception was finally over and all the guests that were left were family, both human and Chiss. Cleven looked around and saw his new father-in-law and mother-in-law, his father, his uncle Cem and Admiral Pader Barrett in a conversation. No doubt about the latest pirate activity in the sectors between the Imperial Remnant, Chiss space, and the GA proper. He sighed; he had been patrolling those areas for the past two years and still couldn’t figure out where they were hiding. That definitely was not the conversation he wanted to join even if he wasn’t heading back to his wife. He located Florin who was speaking with his grandmother Merel and some other Chiss who were related to Florin. He frowned, he had only let her alone two minutes to get them drinks and now he would have to face his grandmother. He had actually wondered if she would even come to his wedding, but not to attend would have been bad politically; after all, Jag Fel was the Supreme Commander. He never cared much for the seemingly cold Chiss scientist who was his mother’s mother. She disliked his father if for no other reason then because Jag was human and she barely tolerated Cleven and his sister. However, as he watched Florin, he realized she was enjoying the conversation, so he decided to move in the opposite direction and ran into his sister, spilling some of the wine he carried onto her gown. “Cleven!” Cherith seethed quietly in Cheunh and glared at her older brother. “Can you be anymore clumsy? You ruined my dress.” She brushed at the red liquid stain on the full skirt of her pale yellow shimmersilk gown. He looked at her and apologetically said, “I am sorry, Cherith. I did not see you behind me.” Then he smiled and held out the glass he slopped the wine from, “You look like you could use this more now than Florin. Take it.” She let her delicate features soften and took the glass. Cleven had to admit besides his wife, his sister had to be one of the most beautiful women he had ever seen. He watched as she lifted the glass to her lips and sipped the fine Chiss wine. She was dressed in a pale yellow gown with sapphire blue accents, which now, thanks to his carelessness, also sported a bright red splash on the front of the skirt. Her black hair was piled high in an elaborate array his aunt Wyn had somehow accomplished. He could admire his little sister’s beauty, who looked like a pale blue, black-haired version of their ex-holostar grandmother, but he also knew not to let her looks lull him into thinking she was weak. She could, after all, out fly him in a heart beat, or just cut him in two with her sharp tongue. Before, she had the chance to use her wit on him he snickered and said, “Just what were you doing behind me anyway?” “I was coming to tell you my news.” Suddenly, she forgot all about the dress. “Come, let’s go out to the balcony.” She then turned and he could do nothing but follow. He looked longingly at his wife who seemed still content in her conversation then he turned and followed his sister out of the reception hall of the resort where his wedding had been held. They made their way to the balcony that overlooked the beautiful valley lake that was completely surrounded by tall forested volcanic mountains. The resort was at the base of Mount Glorious and as children their parents had brought them here for holidays to climb the beautiful mountain. They both knew the mountain held something special for their parents but neither one of them ever knew what. So, they were not surprised when their father a few years ago decided to have a summer home built on the mountain. It had been a reward for defeating the Moorlanians without more than 100 Chiss causalities. After a moment of taking in the beauty of the out doors and listening to the wonderful song of the birds, Cleven asked, “Are you not going to tell me?” She smiled and said, “Admiral Barrett and Father has just notified me that I have been chosen to be the new liaison to the GFFA and while there I will be given co-command of Rogue Squadron with Gabe Darklighter.” Cleven stared at his sister. Then he said, “That is wonderful, Little Sister. I wish you well.” Then he smiled, “I hope Gabe realizes you will out fly everyone in the GFFA?” Now it was her turn to stare, Cleven was not one to give praise. “I am sure that he will soon find out,” she smiled. “There will also be a Jedi assigned to the squadron. Great-uncle Wedge said that he was one of the best pilots the GFFA has.” Her smile grew as she added, “I am anxious to beat that Jedi.” Cleven sobered some and asked, “What are you and a Jedi to do with the Rogues and the Fifth Fleet?” She only let her smile turn triumphant, “Do what you and yours haven’t been able to. Catch those pirates on the GFFA border.” Cleven let the remark go past him and said instead, “Who is the Jedi?” Over the years they had the chance to meet some of the younger Jedi. Mainly the Durrons and Horns but he also knew the Prince of Hapes was a Jedi Knight and considered a better than average pilot. Cherith raised a delicate eyebrow and said, “I believe it is none other than Zeth Durron.” Then with an almost predatory smile she added, “I would very much like to out fly him as you put it. I could never stand his over abundance of Jedi arrogance.” He taken aback, he just stared at his sister and wondered who was going to win that battle. Because from what he could remember of the eldest son of Kyp and Jaina Durron, Zeth Durron was as hard headed as his sister. ~~~ Naboo It had been nearly two weeks since their wedding and Cleven and Florin were enjoying the wedding gift of the honeymoon to Naboo the Antilles/ Barrett families gave to them. Syal Antilles’ husband was from Naboo which since the Yuuzahn Vong war had become quite the vacation spot. Its warm climate and beautiful cities and natural attractions made it a getaway for many. They were making their way along the sandy beach of the lake their lakehouse resort was situated. They had gone to the main house for dinner and now were headed back to the small cabin they occupied. Once outside and out of sight of the many beings who were vacationing at the resort, Cleven reached over and took Florin’s hand. She smiled up at him and moved slightly closer to her husband. Cleven watched as the light from Naboo’s two moons played in her long hair. Finally, he stopped and stepped before her pulling her into his arms. He looked down into her red eyes and she smiled at him. “Can you not wait until we are safely in our cabin, husband?” “No,” he smiled slightly and moved closer to her, “I have wanted to kiss you all evening.” She didn’t have a chance to respond as his lips possessed hers. She willing let him deepen the kiss and moaned softly as her arms surrounded his waist. As they moved away from each other, Cleven heard the sound of foot steps behind him. Florin must have heard them too and quickly stepped away from her husband. The last thing a Chiss wanted was to be caught in such an intimate moment. “Well, I didn’t think you Chiss were much for the touchy feely stuff,” said a gruff voice which held a heavy Outer Rim accent. “But then you are only half Chiss, Captain Fel.” The voice moved from the shadows and carried a blaster held level at them. “And you, Commander Mif’lori’nuruodo, have spent most of your career rubbing elbows with Tuskr Kre’lar.” Cleven stiffened and assessed the black clad human before him, even his face was covered with a black shield. “Who are you and what do you want?” he commanded his own voice accented and clipped. He moved closer and looked up at Cleven, “I really don’t think you are in a position to ask questions, Captain Fel.” He waved his hand and suddenly Cleven and Florin were being held from behind. Cleven looked behind him but it was Florin who identified the beings first. “Defels.” She struggled against the shadow being’s strong hold on her, “Let me go.” The Defel holding her only held tighter, leaned in and in a raspy, whispery voice replied, “I don’t think so, Commander. You are too valuable to uz.” “Let’s get out of here. The boss will be very interested in these two, I think. We will need to thank the Chief-of-State for providing us such a wonderful bargaining chip.” He laughed in Cleven’s face, his breath putrid, “I’m sure she wouldn’t want her Chiss cousin’s wrath because his very promising son and new wife were captured during a honeymoon that she gifted.” Then he stepped away and with a hard tone. “Step away wraiths, they aren’t going anywhere.” Before either of them had a chance to let their military training kick in as they were being released, the human blasted them with stun bolts and the world went dark. ____________________________ Well, tell me what you think...The first couple of chapters may seem a little disjointed as we meet all the characters of this epic... Next chapter we see what is happening on Hapes. And meet the very handsom Prince Bail... Remember if you recieved a PM for this to let me know if you wish to continue... Also, if you want PM's of updates let me know... Thanks all for reading... Edit (8/29/06): cleaned up some loose ends and added to character listing... FL -----signature----- Master to DanaeMariSkywalker, JediMasterArmada and PHGS_Weyr All WIP's on hiatus.... website: http://www.authorswe.webs.com/ Thank you to all that believe in me...Love ya!
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ruinevil Registered: Nov '05	Date Posted: 4/23/06 12:04pm Subject: RE: Love's Sweet Promise-Sequel to AHAW, K/J, J/S, J/Tk, Valin, OCs--romance/drama - Date Edited: 4/24/06 12:09pm (2 edits total) Edited By: ruinevil
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Chilla Registered: Jul '05	Date Posted: 4/23/06 12:13pm Subject: RE: Love's Sweet Promise-Sequel to AHAW, K/J, J/S, J/Tk, Valin, OCs--romance/drama
	Wow, how did you come up with all this names? But it sounds great so far, I'm very eager to find out what has happened to them. Please add me to your Pm list! -----signature----- master to Cem_Fel and proud J/K shipper e-daughter to AzureAngel2 and DarthUncle and e-sis to Darth_Gangrenous e-mother to RevaDurron and her e-husband Darth_DSpice http://yun-harla.tripod.com http://freewebs.com/signedbygod
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Alishu06 Registered: Mar '05	Date Posted: 4/23/06 12:15pm Subject: RE: Love's Sweet Promise-Sequel to AHAW, K/J, J/S, J/Tk, Valin, OCs--romance/drama
	YAY! Another wonderful story by Flowerlady! Thank you so much for the pm, and yes please keep sending them! I can't wait to read more -----signature----- Is going to Disney World Master to Handmaiden_Azul and SKYWALKER024
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Flowerlady Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 4/23/06 12:33pm Subject: RE: Love's Sweet Promise-Sequel to AHAW, K/J, J/S, J/Tk, Valin, OCs--romance/drama
	ruinevil posted: Why is Jaina a year younger than Jacen? Thanks for reading...Sorry about that...They are both 54 and TK is 53...I edited it..Thanks for pointing it out... Chilla posted: Wow, how did you come up with all this names? But it sounds great so far, I'm very eager to find out what has happened to them. Please add me to your Pm list! Oh, I've been thinking up this story for about 6 months now...And the names were not that hard...The Chiss names are fun to come up with. And the rest if you look are family names... Thanks for reading and I will put you on my PM list... Alishu06 posted: YAY! Another wonderful story by Flowerlady! Thank you so much for the pm, and yes please keep sending them! I can't wait to read more Thanks so much for reading....and yes I'll keep you on the list... FL -----signature----- Master to DanaeMariSkywalker, JediMasterArmada and PHGS_Weyr All WIP's on hiatus.... website: http://www.authorswe.webs.com/ Thank you to all that believe in me...Love ya!
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BurntTheMacaroni Registered: May '05	Date Posted: 4/23/06 12:48pm Subject: RE: Love's Sweet Promise-Sequel to AHAW, K/J, J/S, J/Tk, Valin, OCs--romance/drama
	bwahaha i LOVE this! Omg.. keep Pming me.. i love it. Sadly i am addicted to FL's writing -----signature----- How many Corellians does it take to change a glowpanel? ... None! If the room's dark, you cant see us cheating at sabacc! Yub Yub Commander
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Flowerlady Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 4/23/06 1:12pm Subject: RE: Love's Sweet Promise-Sequel to AHAW, K/J, J/S, J/Tk, Valin, OCs--romance/drama
	BurntTheMacaroni posted: bwahaha i LOVE this! Omg.. keep Pming me.. i love it. Sadly i am addicted to FL's writing Thanks for reading... And I'm glad you like it... And addicted to my madness that I call writing... Of course, I'll keep PMing you... I can't wait to introduce you to Terrik...HEHEHE FL -----signature----- Master to DanaeMariSkywalker, JediMasterArmada and PHGS_Weyr All WIP's on hiatus.... website: http://www.authorswe.webs.com/ Thank you to all that believe in me...Love ya!
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BurntTheMacaroni Registered: May '05	Date Posted: 4/23/06 1:32pm Subject: RE: Love's Sweet Promise-Sequel to AHAW, K/J, J/S, J/Tk, Valin, OCs--romance/drama
	oh im looking forward to this.... ::rubs hands together:: -----signature----- How many Corellians does it take to change a glowpanel? ... None! If the room's dark, you cant see us cheating at sabacc! Yub Yub Commander
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SWpants666 Registered: Oct '04	Date Posted: 4/23/06 3:07pm Subject: RE: Love's Sweet Promise-Sequel to AHAW, K/J, J/S, J/Tk, Valin, OCs--romance/drama
	1. I really like how you're basing it even further than the YJK generation. 2. I like how Zekk took Danni's last name. YAY NOW HE HAS A LAST NAME! They also inherited the human tendency to have body hair, although not as much and of a softer, finer texture. lucky..... “I believe it is Zeth Durron.” Hmmm...I realized that name is close to Zekk's. hahaha. You going to put the two of them together? Because that would be so hilarious!! “Defels.” The hell? What are they? great beginning. I can't wait to see where all of this is going. Could you put me on the PM list? -----signature----- ~MTFBWY~ **Holder of the Straw of Disaster** All I want is to be in the light
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PRINCESSCAMBRIA Registered: Jan '06	Date Posted: 4/23/06 4:23pm Subject: RE: Love's Sweet Promise-Sequel to AHAW, K/J, J/S, J/Tk, Valin, OCs--romance/drama
	Oh wow...this sure made my day Great start to the sequel I love all the different families. I'm excited to see who ends up with who Please add me to your pm list -----signature----- "My specialty? Why flyboys of course!" "Beautiful Temptress of Pilots" - adaml83 Caffeine Crazed Rebel Leader of the XWFC Proud Member of Kyp Lovers Anonymous and Kyp Clone Society
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JediFalcon Registered: Feb '02	Date Posted: 4/23/06 4:35pm Subject: RE: Love's Sweet Promise-Sequel to AHAW, K/J, J/S, J/Tk, Valin, OCs--romance/drama
	can't wait for more -----signature----- Rogue Three in FFC Rogue Wing, Ward rm #306 Council Member of the Lightside Master to Stridarious Crimson makes my heart go Master of BYS AHBY The Impeccably Patient Drugged-Out Lunatic of the Skies I wonder whats my purpose in life
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BurntTheMacaroni Registered: May '05	Date Posted: 4/23/06 5:00pm Subject: RE: Love's Sweet Promise-Sequel to AHAW, K/J, J/S, J/Tk, Valin, OCs--romance/drama
	SWpants666 posted: “I believe it is Zeth Durron.” Hmmm...I realized that name is close to Zekk's. hahaha. You going to put the two of them together? Because that would be so hilarious!! Zeth was Kyp's brother's name It's like an unofficial rule of Kyp and Jaina writers. Somehow, Zeth has to be incorperated into one of their children's names -----signature----- How many Corellians does it take to change a glowpanel? ... None! If the room's dark, you cant see us cheating at sabacc! Yub Yub Commander
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Inara Registered: Aug '05	Date Posted: 4/23/06 5:18pm Subject: RE: Love's Sweet Promise-Sequel to AHAW, K/J, J/S, J/Tk, Valin, OCs--romance/drama
	Great intro! I loved the look into the Fel family future - but you know that Nice family set-up - loved Zekk taking Danni's name, it was too cute Also, I can't wait to see how everyone is going to interact -----signature----- "The Sun Crusher was originally conceived as a humane alternative to Kyle Katarn." http://www.thedarknest.com Dark!Horny!Jacen 1 6177 86515
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iamobiwan1970 Registered: Aug '05	Date Posted: 4/23/06 7:19pm Subject: RE: Love's Sweet Promise-Sequel to AHAW, K/J, J/S, J/Tk, Valin, OCs--romance/drama
	I like it! I know I said at the end of AHAW that it would be cool to have the chiss/human connection. It's interacial love in a SW universe! Very Cool! I love all the character names you have created. I look forward to their intros and such. I liked the wedding and the passing the torch to the next generation...too bad LOTF won't get that right. You KNOW Han and Leia are still going to be saving everyone even thought there are over 300 capable Jedi knights and masters for the job. Speaking of Han, did he become one with the Force? didn't see his name on the list. I look forward to finding out about the Defels (sp. hope ok) Thanks! -----signature----- Whatever tomorrow brings, I'll be there, with open arms and open eyes.
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Flowerlady Registered: Dec '05	Date Posted: 4/24/06 5:18am Subject: RE: Love's Sweet Promise-Sequel to AHAW, K/J, J/S, J/Tk, Valin, OCs--romance/drama
	BurntTheMacaroni oh im looking forward to this.... ::rubs hands together::[/quote] I just know you are.... SWpants666 1. I really like how you're basing it even further than the YJK generation. Thanks...I wanted to look at what the future could hold for everyone... 2. I like how Zekk took Danni's last name. YAY NOW HE HAS A LAST NAME! Yes, now he has a last name...Although, I'm not the first to do this...I think JainaDurron was the first in one of her fics... Besides, if Padme's brother-in-law took the Naberrie (sp?) name why not...since Zekk doesn't have one... They also inherited the human tendency to have body hair, although not as much and of a softer, finer texture. lucky..... Yeah, I know... “I believe it is Zeth Durron.” Hmmm...I realized that name is close to Zekk's. hahaha. You going to put the two of them together? Because that would be so hilarious!! Zeth was the name of Kyp's brother And you will just have to wait and see.... “Defels.” The hell? What are they? I have a link below if it works...They were created by Zahn I think in his Hand of Thrawn books... great beginning. I can't wait to see where all of this is going. Could you put me on the PM list? Thanks...I hope you like it and trust me it will get interesting.... Yep, I'll put you on the list... PRINCESSCAMBRIA Oh wow...this sure made my day Great start to the sequel I love all the different families. I'm excited to see who ends up with who Please add me to your pm list Thanks...Yes, I think it will be quite interesting... Yep, I'll add you... thanks for reading.... JediFalcon can't wait for more More soon...Thanks for reading... BurntTheMacaroni It's like an unofficial rule of Kyp and Jaina writers. Somehow, Zeth has to be incorperated into one of their children's names Yeah, it does seem to be the unofficial rule doesn't it... Inara Great intro! Thanks for reading... I loved the look into the Fel family future - but you know that I enjoyed writing the kids...I'm sure they could have been a hand full at times...Especially, Cherith Nice family set-up - loved Zekk taking Danni's name, it was too cute Yeah, I figured he deserved one... Also, I can't wait to see how everyone is going to interact Oh, I think you will like it.... iamobiwan1970 I like it! Thanks... I know I said at the end of AHAW that it would be cool to have the chiss/human connection. It's interacial love in a SW universe! Very Cool! Yes, it is... I love all the character names you have created. I look forward to their intros and such. I liked the wedding and the passing the torch to the next generation...too bad LOTF won't get that right. You KNOW Han and Leia are still going to be saving everyone even thought there are over 300 capable Jedi knights and masters for the job. Oh, I know what you mean...I won't go into it too much here but in a few chapters we will see another passing of the tourch...Which will be really cool I think... Speaking of Han, did he become one with the Force? didn't see his name on the list. I guess he was probably with enough Jedi in his life that he probably did... but sadly, Han died about 6 years before this story opens...that was when Leia retired... I look forward to finding out about the Defels (sp. hope ok) There is a link at the end. Others also had questions... They are a species I think Zahn created... Thanks! You are welcome... Hopefully this will help anyone with questions about my Wraiths...Otherwise known as Defels...Here is a link to learn more. Hope that helps... FL -----signature----- Master to DanaeMariSkywalker, JediMasterArmada and PHGS_Weyr All WIP's on hiatus.... website: http://www.authorswe.webs.com/ Thank you to all that believe in me...Love ya!
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BurntTheMacaroni Registered: May '05	Date Posted: 4/24/06 10:34am Subject: RE: Love's Sweet Promise-Sequel to AHAW, K/J, J/S, J/Tk, Valin, OCs--romance/drama
	another little funfact involving Defels, Wraith Squadron was named after them. It was said that the Squad was like "dark things that come in the night for you", so Tyria Sarkin(the soon to be Mrs. Tainer at the time) pitched the idea and boom. Wraith Squadron had their name ok im done with boring you all with x-wing pilot trivia. I re-read this.. again... and i cant get enough of it! Darn it FL you have me anxiously waiting one now TWOOOOOOOO fics -----signature----- How many Corellians does it take to change a glowpanel? ... None! If the room's dark, you cant see us cheating at sabacc! Yub Yub Commander
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