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Three New Sailor Senshi. SM/SW. New post 10/5/2008
RK_Striker_JK_5
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Date Posted:
4/30/06 4:19pm
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Three New Sailor Senshi. SM/SW. New post 10/5/2008
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All right. This is my 10,000 post-go me.
My first fic on these boards is, of course, the original Three New Sailor Senshi. This is a rewrite of the original. Better following of the grammatical rules and the rules of the Sailor Moon universe. Posts will be longer and some content altered, leading up to new story arcs down the road.
And at the beginning of each story arc, for those wondering what the heck the first part is, will be an opening sequence similar to those shown at the beginning of most anime shows.
If you want PMs, please tell me.
Current PM list!!!!
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Fanart!
My friends Autumn and Jaded_Girl have drawn some absolutely lovely pieces of fanart for me. As they come in, I'll post a link to them.
Minako and Mara arguing about music for Anakin and Hotaru's wedding
Sannah assuming the mantle of Sailor Pluto
Mirax Terrik, Sarji Pellaeon and Shada Du'kal; Sailor Senshi!
Tenel Ka as Sailor Dathomir
Tenel Ka and Makoto dueling
Mara and her daughter Lyria dueling
The first Sailor Jedi
The Inner Senshi in Jedi outfits
Kyp and Makoto in the Kitchen
John Gallandro and Lyria Skywalker at the prom
John Gallandro, Lyria Skywalker and Isaac Ten'ou.
Desperately Seeking Bespin part one
Desperately Seeking Bespin part two
Desperately Seeking Bespin part three
Spin-offs!
Right to Remain Silent
Darkness Shared
Keeping You in Mind
Sailor Moon was created by Naoko Takeuchi. Star Wars by George Lucas. I own nothing but the OCs.
*Deep breath*
Here we go-again!
*****
Part One: Three New Sailor Senshi
*Opening twenty-eight seconds focus on the YJK. The scene expands to include the Sailor Senshi and Tuxedo Mask*
GOMEN NE sunao ja nakute (I'm sorry I'm not candid.)
*Jaina and Usagi are seen meeting face to face while Lusa and Haruka run in the background*
Yume no naka nara ieru (I can say it if in my dreams.)
*The camera focuses on their race and sweeps to Raynar and Michiru cheering them on, then sweeps up the cliff to Tenel Ka and Makoto 'sparring'*
Shikou kairo wa SHO-TO sunzen (My thoughts are about to short circuit.)
*Pluto is seen tangling with Zekk and Tahiri, then she turns and goes into the time gate*
Ima sugu aitai yo (I want to see you right now!)
Nakitaku naru you na moonlight (I'm just about to cry – moonlight)
*Cut to Tahiri, Tenel Ka and Jaina standing with their transformation wands, the camera sweeps to them*
Denwa mo dekinai midnight (I can't call you, either – midnight)
*Then pulls away, revealing them in their Sailor Fukus with ignited lightsabers*
Datte junjou doushiyou (But I have a simple heart, so what can I do?)
*They turn and see Jaedite in the background with orange eyes and Sith lightning dancing around his fingertips*
HA-TO wa mangekyou (My heart is a kaleidoscope.)
*Corellia is seen firing off her Corellia Starburst*
Tsuki no hikari ni michibikare (With the light of the moon to guide us,)
*A sandstorm sweeps in, revealing Tatooine*
Nandomo meguriau (We’ll be brought together by fate many times over.)
*Flames erupt from the side, revealing Dathomir*
Seiza no matataki kazoe (Counting the twinklings of the constellations)
*All land in front of the Rock Dragon*
Uranau koi no yukue (is how I foretell love's whereabouts.)
*The YJK follow, then the Sailor Senshi land*
Onaji kuni ni umareta no (Born on the same earth)
MIRAKURU ROMANSU (Miracle romance)
Chapter One: Which Way?
Nobody knows who-or what-discovered hyperspace. Only through that otherworldly dimension was faster-than-light travel possible, and it was very dangerous. One misstep would plunge you into the abyss-or worse.
Jaina Solo, however, wouldn't have it any other way. She was the daughter of Han Solo, after all. One of the galaxy's biggest risk-takers. Sometimes the thrill was the only thing that reminded her she was alive.
Besides which, she was a Jedi. A little trip through an alternate form of reality was nothing to her. She could feel where the instabilities were, and how much she could push the ships she piloted. Her favorite ship to pilot was the
Rock Dragon.
It nominally belonged to her friend Tenel Ka, but since she wasn't the best pilot, it fell to Jaina to fly the sleek Hapan starship. This particular time was quite special. She and a group of her closest friends were returning from a vacation on Coruscant. Now they were returning to Yavin IV in order to learn how to become Jedi Knights, the protectors of the galaxy.
By her side was Lowbacca, an adolescent Wookiee. The two worked in sync, checking for course corrections, bleeding off excess static discharge and a dozen other tasks. It almost didn't leave her enough time to glance out the window, but she was able to spot an area of turbulence set against the reddish haze of hyperspace. A small tingle ran up her spine, as the black vortex grew closer. "I have a bad feeling about that," she said as she began steering the ship away from it.
After a few minutes, Jaina was ready to breathe a sigh of relief as The
Rock Dragon
passed by that little instability. Then the comm system crackled to life. "Ah, Jaina? We got a problem back here." It was Jacen; Jaina's twin brother. "I found this really cool rat-like thing near the engines. Unfortunately it looks-" His voice was drowned out by an explosion amidships.
Alarm Klaxons began blaring as emergency lights dimmed. Lowbacca growled out a series of curses as he struggled to stabilize the ship. [Not good,] he growled.
Jaina checked the status boards. "Our starboard engine just blew! We're losing power and our hyperdrive cutoff switch is inoperative." Jaina fought rising panic. Without the cutoff switch, the Rock Dragon could be stranded in hyperspace forever.
Lowbacca pointed out the window and barked. His translator droid M-TD activated. "Master Lowbacca indicates that we're caught in a gravitic funnel and are being pulled toward-are you sure?" The Wookiee nodded. "Oh, my! We are being pulled toward that instability! We'll be dashed to a million pieces!" The ship began spinning as it came closer.
Jaina dumped all remaining power into the shields and inertial damping. She could only hope it was enough…
*****
Tokyo, Japan. Downtown Jubaan District
She felt the impact, as sure as if the ship had hit her directly. After 10,000 years of existence, not much affected Meiou Setsuna. As the guardian of time for her universe, she had seen it all-literally. Atrocities, acts of compassion, genocide, the birth of new species…all had transpired in her lifetime.
All of those events, however, were a normal part of the timestream. A starship from an alternate universe crashing through a weak point in the space-time continuum was not part of the timestream! Setsuna knew she had to act quickly in order to determine the effects it would have on future events. She glanced the busy street she was on before stepping into a deserted alley. She gingerly sidestepped several mounds of trash as she made her way to the far end. Before her, a large ornate door appeared. It silently swung open, and the guardian of time stepped into the swirling mists.
A 'normal' person would only see the bright mist with beams of light before them.
Setsuna was no normal person. She instantly began perceiving the patterns. One trail, bright and strong, was the proper timeline. The coming darkness and the founding of Crystal Tokyo shone through. Setsuna looked down at another thread of time, darker and thinner than the last. That was what 'could' happen if the occupants of the starship were allowed to land. Death, tragedy and chaos awaited if they lived. It wasn't a certainty, but Setsuna didn't deal in certainties; she had to make the hard decisions on the fly. Sometimes it didn't work, but most of the time it did. She concentrated, and a small ornate rod appeared in her hand. Her scarlet eyes hardened as she spoke.
"Pluto Crystal Power, Make-up!"
*****
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RE: Three New Sailor Senshi. SM/SW. First post on 4/30/06
Nice! I like it. I like it alot. I really like the Japanese themes.
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RE: Three New Sailor Senshi. SM/SW. First post on 4/30/06
oh goodies, its finally making its way back!
I enjoyed the addition of the intro....think it's a nice touch
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Nevermind...
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RE: Three New Sailor Senshi. SM/SW. First post on 4/30/06
I'm very much enjoying this re-senshi. And I'm thrilled to be in at the beginning. My favorite aspect is how much Jacen and Jaina are in character, which is a tough thing to do.
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RE: Three New Sailor Senshi. SM/SW. First post on 4/30/06
*Blinks* I have readers for this... whoa. I didn't expect that, actually. *Dances*
Sil-Thank you. That was a part of the old version, but placed haphazardly about.
Kidan-I do, and you're added. Thank you!
SSM12-Okay...
Ish-Thank you! Do you want to be PMed?
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RE: Three New Sailor Senshi. SM/SW. First post on 4/30/06
Okay. So far Kidan and Ish have expressed interest in being PMed. So, therefore, I will Pm them when this updates... which will be now.
Here we go!
*****
Jaina's eyes slowly opened as the fog lifted from her brain. Her vision cleared to reveal a teenaged boy staring at her. "You're awake! Thank the Force!" he said. It was Jacen, her twin brother. He extended a hand and helped her to a standing position-only to cause her to almost faint again.
"Whoa! Are you trying to help or hinder me?"
Jacen shrugged. "Grumpy after waking up with signs of irritability. It's good to see you all right, sis."
Jaina sidestepped him and went for the controls. "Hah, hah. Have we contacted Coruscant yet? Mom and Dad are probably worried sick about us." She flipped a few switches and began trying to hail the capital planet, but there was only static on the comm frequencies.
She turned back to Jacen. "What's going on? It's working, so why isn't it receiving?"
She quickly sensed her brother's mood shift
ever
so slightly into panic. "To be perfectly frank, we don't know. The comm system's working, but it's not picking up anything. To top it all off, Tenel Ka says the galaxy feels 'different'. She couldn't elaborate any further, but after a while we all felt it."
Jaina
immediately
reached out with the Force, letting it flow beyond her to beyond. She felt the fabric of the universe, the ties that bound reality together. It was quickly apparent that the fabric of space-time was different. She gradually reached out farther, past this system. There was less life in this galaxy, and it was concentrated on the outer rim, not in the galactic core where it should be. "What's going on?" she said, barely above a whisper.
Jacen put his hand on her shoulder and drew her into a hug. "Don't worry. We'll find out together.”
Chapter Two: Blundering Towards Friendship
Jacen and Jaina quickly headed aft to the
Rock Dragon's
passenger quarters to meet with the rest of their friends. There were seven of them, not counting the twins. Lowbacca barked a greeting. The gangly, fur-covered Wookiee's translator translated. "Master Lowbacca greets you, Master Jacen and Mistress Jaina."
Tenel Ka, a Jedi trainee from two worlds-the frontier Dathomir and regal Hapes- walked towards her. "My friend Jaina, I am glad to see you alive and well." she said brusquely.
Jaina nodded. "So am I." She looked around at everyone, feeling their confusion. "Does anybody know where we are? When we are?" she asked rhetorically.
Off to the side, Zekk walked over and spoke up, his emerald eyes shining. "I believe I know what's going on, but you are not going to believe it" He looked around before speaking again, his words heavy with seriousness. "I believe we are in what is known as an alternate reality."
Everybody looked at each other in obvious confusion. It was a full minute before anybody spoke. "Ahem. Excuse me, but what is an 'alternate reality'?" It was Raynar, an Alderaanian Jedi with the sometimes-annoying habit of asking questions.
Zekk bit his lip as he gathered his thoughts. "Okay. This is…what if Master Skywalker never blew up the Death Star?" He suddenly scratched his forehead and thought about what to say next in explanation.
Fortunately for the young man, a voice from behind him spoke up. "Alternate realities are next to impossible to explain at best. It may not be wise to try, Zekk." This time it was Anakin Solo, Jacen and Jaina's younger brother. He resembled a young Luke Skywalker with his dirty-blonde hair and ice-blue eyes. "All we know is we're here, cut off from our loved ones. There's a city 2.3 kilometers to the northeast populated by humans. Some of us should go there for information while the rest stay behind for repairs." He looked around. "Any volunteers?"
After a few minutes it was decided. Zekk would go out, accompanied by Tahiri Veila, a younger Jedi Trainee. His Coruscant street smarts and her survival skills honed on Tatooine being the deciding factors. In retrospect, the two made a contrasting pair. Zekk was tall, serious-looking and was clad in a black jumpsuit with a vest over it. His emerald eyes constantly scanned the surrounding area for any threats. Tahiri was shorter and had a wide grin plastered on her face. She was clad in an orange jumpsuit with bare feet. Plus, she kept a constant stream of chatter going.
The
Rock Dragon
had crashed on the largest island of a chain, right near a large dormant volcano. The pair quickly made their way across the landscape, avoiding the small villages whenever possible. Despite his wariness, Zekk found the houses he passed fascinating. They appeared to be made of some sort of wood, and the symbols on them were intricately drawn on them. He wondered what they meant, but the language he heard from the indigenous population was unknown to him.
Tahiri was loving every minute of the journey! This place wasn't like her homeworld of Tatooine, no sir. Here it was green and lush with plant life, not brown and clogged with sand. She continually talked while she and Zekk walked. "This place is pretty cool. I wonder what that says. Is it even writing? I know Jawa and Tusken as well as basic, but those symbols seem weird to me. I wish-" She abruptly stopped talking when she sensed something…powerful ahead.
Zekk immediately sensed it as well. He motioned Tahiri to stop, and he unclipped a 35-centimeter rod from his belt. With the press of a button an orange blade sputtered to life, flashing to red several times before finally settling on orange. "Stay behind me," he said.
They had just exited the last village and were on a dirt country road. A strong wind came out of nowhere, and a woman appeared over the horizon. She was dark-skinned and was wearing a ridiculously short green skirt that showed a lot of leg. She also wore a sleeveless blouse with a black ribbon on front. Knee-length boots and gloves that came up to her elbows completed the almost ridiculous ensemble. Zekk almost dismissed her until he looked her in the eyes.
Those are the eyes of experience,
he thought.
She's seen death and Force knows what else.
The stranger raised her left hand, and a long metallic staff as tall as her appeared out of nowhere. "I am Sailor Pluto." She said, astonishing both Zekk and Tahiri.
"You speak basic?"
Pluto nodded. "Yes. I am the guardian of time and space. You do not belong here." She lifted the staff and pointed it at Zekk and Tahiri, whispering two words.
"Dead Scream."
A torrent of violet energy ripped through the air straight toward the Jedi, who were both moving before Pluto spoke. Tahiri leapt back almost five meters, augmenting her leg strength with the Force.
Zekk, meanwhile, had leaped at Pluto with his lightsaber swinging. Pluto immediately brought her staff up and deftly blocked the energy blade, parrying it down and almost slicing Zekk's leg off!" I do not wish to cause you pain in this," she said. "But you must die so the future isn't altered!"
Zekk swore under his breath as he swung.
Why isn't my blade cutting through that damned staff? And what the hell was that…'dead scream'?
His thoughts were interrupted when Pluto jumped back and raised her staff again. Before she could speak, Zekk knelt down and whipped out a small blaster from an ankle-holster. He squeezed off a half-dozen shots, hoping it would be enough.
Instead of moving, Pluto raised her staff above her head and shouted. "Dark Dome Close!" The top of the staff, a red orb, glowed as a translucent wall of energy encircled the guardian of time. All six bolts subsequently bounced off into the air, not even singing her swirling hair.
Zekk swore profusely and in multiple languages. He turned and saw Tahiri standing off to the side of the road. "Tahiri!" he yelled. "Get back and warn the others! I'll take out this Nightsister wanna-be!"
She hesitated. "I don't want to leave you!" She yelled as fear enveloped her.
Zekk's face grew beet-red in anger. "Listen to me you kriffin' barve! Get back to the fratzing Rock Dragon now or else Mini-Daala here's gonna catch them by surprise and kill them. Now go!"
Tahiri swallowed and turned around-only to see something she really wish she hadn't. "Uh, Zekk? We got problems!"
Nine figures approached from the opposite end of the road. Eight were female; wearing the same odd outfit Pluto was wearing. However, the colors of their skirts were different. In the back was a man in…formal wear? She saw that he had a tuxedo on with a white mask over his eyes. In his hand was a plant with red petals. The female in the lead had the most bizarre hairstyle Zekk had ever seen. Twin ponytails were tied in back and reached down to her ankles. They were knotted in thick, almost Death Star like balls at the base of her skull. She began talking rapid-fire in the unknown language, all the while gesturing oddly.
Tahiri simply stared, dumbstruck at the events. Then, an idea seized her. The young girl ran at the group, arms outstretched. She stopped halfway between Zekk and the group, dropped to her knees and shouted. "We surrender!" She closed her eyes and waited…
*****
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RE: Three New Sailor Senshi. SM/SW. New post on 5/7/06
I enjoyed this first skirmish of sorts and interesting that Pluto knows that they might alter things. She can certainly hold her own.
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great pacing, great fight, great characterizations.
Great job Striker!
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Put me on the PM list too Jon, so I can keep up with this! Thanks!
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RE: Three New Sailor Senshi. SM/SW. New post on 5/7/06
Ish-Thanks. Pluto was one of the more powerful Senshi, and it's her job to keep track of the timeline.
Kidan-Thanks! I was always told my action was great.
Noelie-Added. And thanks for reading!
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This is what I miss for not keeping up with the Fan fic area for too long....
Anyways, exellent rewrite, mind tossing me on the PM list too? Not just for the updates, but in case ya want another preson to bounce ideas off of too.
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Volg-Thank you. This rewrite's been coming for a long time. And if you've got ideas, go ahead and shoot them my way. And added, too.
Remember, if you have any questions, please do not hesitate to ask me. I will attempt to explain to the best of my abilities.
Here we go!
*****
Ten minutes earlier in downtown Tokyo
Tsuskino Usagi was having a perfectly marvelous day. She was fairly certain she had done her taxes correctly earlier today, and now she was enjoying a hot fudge sundae with her boyfriend and soulmate Chiba Mamoru.
In short, a crisis was absolutely fated to happen.
As she finished off the sundae, a small device started beeping in the bag lying at her side. She reached over and, after rummaging for three minutes, pulled out her communicator. She opened it up and spoke. "Yes?"
Pluto's image appeared. "Sailor Senshi! A pair of new enemies has appeared just outside of Tokyo. I will attempt to hold them off, please hurry!" The communicator's screen then went dark.
Usagi groaned, sat up and glanced over at Mamoru. "We have Senshi business," she said, gaze drifting down to her half-finished sundae. "And I wanted a cheeseburger too!" She sniffed as she fought off the tears.
Mamoru sighed as he paid the waitress and half-dragged Usagi out of there. "I'll get you a cheeseburger when we get back, okay?”
At that her eyes lit up with happiness. "Oh, Mamoru! You're the best!" She hugged him so tightly they nearly stumbled into traffic!
Mamoru quickly regained control, narrowly avoiding oncoming traffic and guiding his girlfriend into his car. "Do you have a fix on the positions of the other Senshi?" he asked.
Usagi opened her communicator back up and pressed a button. "Yes. Pluto's about half a kilometer outside of town. The rest are gathering at Rei's Temple." She looked out the window. "Oh, we're here!"
Mamoru and Usagi quickly got out and entered an ancient Shinto Temple. Hino Rei AKA Sailor Mars lived there. They went past the wooden gate and began climbing the 100 steps up to the main building.
Finally, they reached the top and were greeted by a young woman in the traditional red and white robes of a Shinto Priest-or in this case, priestess. "It's about time you got here, odango-head. We were wondering when you'd show up."
Usagi’s eyes narrowed and she glared daggers at her. "Oh, be quiet Rei. Besides, we're not the only ones not here. Minako and Makoto aren't here either."
Rei sighed in frustration as they entered her bedroom. "That's because they're getting us food. Now come on!" She grabbed one of Usagi's ponytails and pulled, forcing her into the building. An embarrassed-looking Mamoru followed behind.
Inside sat four young ladies around an ankle-high table. They were Mizuno Ami, Ten'ou Haruka, Kaiou Michiru and Tomoe Hotaru.
Haruka, a tall amazon of a woman, got up and walked over to Usagi. "Usagi, what are we waiting for? Setsuna needs us to fight these new enemies." She ran her hand through her short, almost crew-cut length blond hair in impatience.
Usagi nodded. "Yes, I understand. We'll transform and teleport over to Setsuna when Makoto and Minako arrive." Just then a rather tall brunette and a blond walked in. The brunette was carrying a tray filled with snacks-something that Usagi immediately smelled. "But we shouldn't go fight on an empty stomach."
Haruka felt a sudden gust of wind, and Usagi was gone. She looked around and saw her at the table stuffing her face with food. Ami, Haruka and Hotaru were doing their best to shield themselves from the flying food, but to no avail.
Rei quickly grabbed her by the ear and pulled her away while the brunette- Kino Makoto to be exact- smiled. "I'm glad you liked that. I made more for after."
Ami sighed in worry. "I hope Usagi'll leave some for us."
At that, Usagi stood straight up and shouted. "All right, let's go!" She thrust her arm into the air, scattering crumbs about the carpet.
Ami, Michiru and Hotaru all got up and shouted. "Hai!" They then raised their right hands, and an ornate rod similar to Sailor Pluto's appeared. All eight shouted a phrase, similar but different.
"Moon Eternal Makeup!"
"Mercury Crystal Power Makeup!"
"Mars Crystal Power Makeup!"
"Jupiter Crystal Power Makeup!"
"Venus Crystal Power Makeup!"
"Neptune Crystal Power Makeup!"
"Uranus Crystal Power Makeup!"
"Saturn Crystal Power Makeup!"
Each girl was immediately bathed in a bright light. When it faded, they were no longer mere high school students; they were now the Sailor Senshi, guardians of love and justice. Usagi AKA Sailor Moon took Sailor Mars' hand. "It's time to teleport." She said, all trace of her fun side gone. The eight Senshi and Mamoru-who had changed to his alter-ego Tuxedo Mask-joined hands. They closed their eyes as an otherworldly light enveloped them…
When Ami opened her eyes, they were now on a country road outside of Tokyo. As Sailor Mercury, the blue-haired genius tugged at her earring, causing a deep blue visor to slide over her eyes and a small laptop computer to appear in her hands. She began scanning the road ahead with the sensors embedded in the visor, looking for any signs of the enemy. After a short while she shouted. "Sailor Moon! Pluto is fighting with two people just ahead. They're both very powerful."
Sailor Uranus AKA Haruka unsheathed a jewel-encrusted sword from her side. "Let's just kill them now!" she snarled.
Sailor Mars shook her head and held out her arm. "No. This doesn't feel right. I don't feel anything evil with those two. It almost feels like they're lost." The raven-haired Senshi stared straight-ahead and concentrated, tapping into what some people call the 'sixth sense'. She could feel when something was going to happen, what people were feeling. It always scared her and thrilled her simultaneously.
After a minute, her shoulders finally slumped in defeat. "I can't determine what they're intentions are."
Sailor Moon half-smiled. "That's okay." she said, patting her best friend on the shoulder. She then clenched her other fist in determination. "Let's go!" The eight Senshi and Tuxedo Mask broke out into a dead run. quickly reaching Pluto and the two enemies.
One was a man dressed in black firing energy bolts at Pluto. The other appeared to be a small girl in an orange jumpsuit. Even weirder was the fact that she wore no shoes. The Champion of love and justice paid those facts no mind as she affected a pre-battle pose and began her speech.
"Hey, you! You can't disturb the peaceful villages here! These people work hard and have a right to live how they please. I can't forgive you for that." She raised her left arm in front of her body and pointed at the two people with her right. "In the name of the Moon, I'll punish you!"
The small girl suddenly ran at them. Sailor Uranus readied her sword, while a blue light began glowing from Mercury's hands. What happened next surprised and shocked everybody. Instead of mutating into some demon, she simply stopped, knelt down, threw both arms in the air and shouted in English! Sailor Moon, Sailor Jupiter, Mars and Saturn immediately turned to Mercury, Uranus, Neptune AKA Michiru and Venus AKA Minako, all asking the same thing. "What did she say?"
Tuxedo Mask, as usual forgotten until now, spoke up. "I believe she said 'We surrender'." He stepped forward and calmly walked toward the girl. "Can you tell them your name?"
The man in black ran incredibly fast and was at her side in a moment. He was also brandishing some sort of energy sword. "Don't tell them anything, Tahiri!"
The girl-apparently named Tahiri-stepped forward. "My name is Tahiri, and this is Zekk. Who are you? And where are we? And why do you look so ridiculous? And why did that lady shoot at us? What's a 'Dead Scream'?"
The normally stoic Mask was taken aback by the stream of questions from the girl. He looked back at Sailor Moon, who was waiting a translation. "They appear to be lost!" He shouted.
Sailor Moon stepped forward. "Mamo-chan, will you please translate?" He nodded as Sailor Moon continued speaking. "We apologize for the attack. Right Pluto?"
The elder Senshi could only nod, having been taken aback by the sudden turn of events.
Was I wrong? Usagi can be naïve, but her judgment is almost always sound in matters such as this.
She looked away, not sure what to do. A rare occurrence for her.
Tuxedo Mask quickly translated Sailor Moon's speech. Tahiri apparently believed them, but Zekk wasn't. He gripped his sword tighter and glared daggers at the entire group. "I want to believe you. "He said through clenched teeth. "But right now I have a hard time believing you after that nutjob back there nearly killed us." He glanced down, as if having a conversation with himself, and then did something nobody expected. He fiddled with his the handle for his sword, and the blade retracted back! He clipped it to his belt and held his hands out to the side.
Sailor Moon smiled. She concentrated, and a light shined over her body. To Zekk and Tahiri's amazement, her clothes melted into strands of energy and retracted back into a broach on her chest! After a second a schoolgirl's uniform appeared. She pointed to herself and said. "Usagi."
*****
Jaina and Tenel Ka watched as Zekk, Tahiri and almost a dozen human females came marching up to the
Rock Dragon
. Jaina's eyes narrowed as she directed a version of her mother’s Glare of Death upon her boyfriend. "So, would you mind explaining who those ladies are?"
Zekk chuckled nervously and said. "What? No, no, no!" He stepped back and motioned for Usagi to step forward. "Jaina Solo, I'd like you to meet Tsuskino Usagi." As the two shook hands, Zekk continued. "You both have something in common. Both of you are royalty of destroyed planets."
Jaina gasped. "You're from Alderaan?"
Usagi‘s mouth opened slightly as the improvised translation device built by Ami kicked in, allowing her to understand the strange young woman before her. "No. I'm the reincarnation of lunar royalty." She looked up at the sky and pointed at the moon. It was just past noon, so the crater-scarred orb was just barely visible. "Ten thousand years ago, my mother ruled over the Solar System." She motioned to everyone else. "All of us were royalty of our own respective planets, but they were all destroyed by a being known as Metallia."
Tenel Ka's eyebrows shot up. "Ah, aha. And I assume your mother was Force sensitive?"
Usagi smiled. "Yes, she was very sensitive and kind."
Jaina let a snort of laughter escape her mouth. She turned away to cover it, but the brown-haired lady suddenly found herself confronted by an angry brunette. "Don't laugh at Usagi!" Makoto said, grabbing Jaina by the wrist.
In a flash, Makoto's hands were knocked away by a well-placed chop from Tenel Ka. "Do not touch her," Tenel Ka said, her eyes burning with a cold fire.
Makoto quickly went into a defensive stance, but Usagi quickly jumped in front. "No, don't fight! There's no reason to! Zekk explained everything to us!" Makoto and Tenel Ka separated after a moment, but the two continued to stare daggers at each other.
Jaina turned away-almost bumping heads with Ami. "Oh, I'm sorry!" the blue-haired genius said. She stepped back and bowed. "My name is Mizuno Ami, but you may call me Ami."
Jaina nodded. "Well, it's nice to meet you. But you don't have to be so formal." She looked around at the rest. "So, you're the reincarnation of ancient royalty?"
The crowd of young women parted, allowing Setsuna to walk up to Jaina and Ami. "Yes. Like you Jedi, we have powers of our own." Her scarlet eyes half-closed for a second, and an ornate rod appeared. She held it high and shouted. "Pluto Crystal Power Makeup!"
A bright flash of light momentarily blinded Jaina and Tenel Ka. When it faded, a strange lady stood in place of Setsuna. Tenel Ka reached out with her senses and probed the lady. "It's the same person!" she said, surprise evident.
Sailor Pluto nodded and motioned to her friends. "Each of us can transform into a very powerful warrior known as a Sailor Senshi." A bright flash of light engulfed her, reverting her back to Meiou Setsuna. The guardian of time looked over Jaina's head and saw a large furry biped, a young centaur and three young men running at them. “Friends of yours?”
Jaina turned her head and saw Jacen, Lowie, Anakin, Raynar and Lusa. "Well, looks like the gang's all here." She quipped.
*****
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RE: Three New Sailor Senshi. SM/SW. New post on 5/14/06
"Well, looks like the gang's all here."
Truer words haven't been spoken Jaina.
Thanks for adding me to the list too. Heh, Poor Usagi, every time she tries to have a peaceful moment with her Mamo-chan, something comes up. Be random MOTD, A big baddie or just a random event like this... I hope Jaina takes notes for when she gets her powers and she wants some time alone with Zekk.
Also, will the Vong under go a new fate in this re-write? while Watching Unicron eat them was interesting. It'll be more fun if they let little miss death star in a skirt*And the other Outers* take them, and may I make a sugesstion for when we get to Sailor Jedi R.. can the theme song for it be the Sailor Star Song?
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Hehe, I had a neighbour named Makoto. She was a fiesty little thing too!
Well I am definately getting to know characters I have never encountered before, and it is a great story Jon!
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